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di...I have to leave in 5-10 min😭
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-truly magical-
part 167

His power failed, ego crashed making his love seem fake as his words with no motives. no one was there to listen, hear no more. She seemed to have closed the tunnel no light, no sound only pain she was now numb to it all. Every thing around seem to fade.

It kills me to see you this way,

Where are those old days???

where there way joy and festivity around,

No place for cries or any such sound...

all i knew was your sweet voice,...the musical laughter...
All around happiness and love after.....
But, today as i stand here asking where...
its my guilt which gives me the answer....
Its burnt in the fire of my anger....
Drowned in the pain i made you suffer....
Oh dear God,with all my heart and soul I pray....
Burn me to death but take her pain away....
This is not what she had wishes for...
All the happiness is what she is made for....
Give me pain, burn me in hell.....
All I ask is make her well!!!
Poem by Swati


His heart couldn't take the pain anymore. He was trying hard to not lose himself completely, eventually he lost it when the dr came out with a dipped head fearing to give the verdict. She is not responding. We have given all the medication to ease her pain but she seems really weak. Please inform ur relatives.

Maan lifted the bench next to him & threw it away. Raj rushed immediately trying to calm him down. He was going insane he was not able to take the pain that split his mere existence. She took him with her, now he found himself in hell away from her. He was living his worst nightmare, he thought he doesn't know himself anymore, he didn't know wat life meant anymore, he didn't know wat breathing meant, he didn't know wat was left in his life, he was lost in the darkness that surrounded his thoughts locking himself in eternal loneliness. Life had past by he didn't understand, yet she was still holding his hand, his confusion & tears had never left him, he kept thinking why did she go where did she go, though she always lingered in in his thoughts, haunted his dreams & held in his memories. But she was always there.. always there somewhere but now..even that somewhere seemed to fade out, he didn't even know how to cry anymore.

He knew his anger was unreasonable, was invincible, was uncontrollable, but wat hurt the most was it turned everything irreversible. In anger he always surrendered, to the pressure he was under. In anger, he had lost ungraciously every thing that was his, meant only for him. Still now he was mad at self, losing every sense of his. He was now angry at self ..& now turning wild. He couldn't make sense with his act anymore. He pushed raj away who was trying to calm him down. He was wrong, his mere existence was wrong he had no right to be alive. Why did she love him.. why is she leaving him now.. she can't leave him, his eyes was blood red when he walked into the ICU. He once looked at her & then the beeping machines which made no sense, it just indicated she was sinking. He could feel whole air around cold & dieing. He couldn't see her like this, her heart rate pulsing slowly low low...lower..until ..finally..he fell on his knees at the foot of the bed. He may just kill himself he banged his head helplessly. Dr & raj dragged him out.

mk, Rano, papaji raji, Daadi ma, anni, Arjun, dev, NT every one was there. Every one went & saw Geet one by one. Mk didn't seem to know the exact situation. Rano placed a teary peck on geet's forehead. Papaji tried to be strong not to cry, he couldn't he finally did break down. Prem came in with prince, mukti & mehk. He hugged raj. Daadi didn't even dare to see geet, guilt ate into her. She probably wanted to fall at her feet & plead her forgiveness. Anni actually did that too. Every one told Maan to pay her last visit. He couldn't. Their words seemed to hit the walls & die flat. He seemed dead already. Raj .. prem pleaded Maan ek bar usse millo.
Arjun - seems like her soul seeks u ..let it rest in peace. Let her misery end
Maan clinched his fist, probably thats why he didn't want to be there to let her go..to let his soul depart him...

Maansi went into the ICU ..saw mama & then saw every one crying she got scared & looked for Maan, who was hiding himself..his heart was on full flames that burned bright yet the arms are so very empty, his ache burned within. the darkened room thought may protect him from the glare of bright burning blaze that surrounded him, he crawled-in his feet & hands with every moment that passed the door, he feared ...feared..his soul... may just leave him.. alone and though there is no protection from the emptiness..pain ..burn within him. His life spanned before him.. her jumping in front of the car..their every moment then.. their marriage, their passion.. his thought was distracted when mk softly wiped his tears with her angelic touch. She blinked her eyes innocently few times. He looked at her fearing thousand questions, wat will he tell her, how will explain to her wat happened to her mama.

He took away her mama from her. First he took away his daddy & now her mama. Sadness, fear misery enfold his heart. But she was his angel.. given to him by his angel how will she cause him pain.. she could never give him pain. Mk softly laced her fingers in his & lead him out of the dark corner where he tried to hide himself. As they walked pass the corridor where every one looked at him with tears welling down their eyes. He couldn't face any one he stuck his eyes on the angels foot who carefully made their way to the ICU. As they walked in, his heart fell low.. & loud. He could clearly hear every beat of hers as it hit on his heart. there is no light of hope, no smile, no embrace shielding him, there is no one who could understand his pain. no one to save him from gripping hands of fear.

He felt cold and dizzy, his head was again spinning in the past of their togetherness. His betrayal to every word.. how it stings ..he stood their lost in silent blood red rages, holding back the pain from pouring. Fearing to lose his every thing in front of his own eyes. She ..gone forever ..never back again ..the blackness found him.

Mk pulled him down. He sat on his knees close to her head next to mk. She placed a soft peck on Geets cheek then looked at Maan to do the same thing. He whipped with tears flooding down, he followed her lacing his fingers with geets cold lifeless ones. No reaction .. nothing.. pulse rate still dropping. His eyes looked at her face.. her beautiful face, her innocent face.. a face that always only knew to love him unconditionally. Some beep, some odd sounds dr rushed in to steady her as her heart beat seem to flow really low. Rano came in to save mk from witnessing it.

Drs told Maan to leave his grip around her fingers only deepened. He inched closer to her, crying; the past again spinning from their passion to their acceptance, him getting angry.. nahi karon ga ..kabhi nahi ..I will never get angry at u .. he cried
A weak shaking voice main ne aise kab kaha..then faded ...again weakly.. bus mujhe khud se dor nahi karna main jee nahi pavongi..with her breath falling dead ..pulse dipping...drs immediately tried to fix the oxygen mask on her
jaan his voice was shaky..jaan.. he feared jaan..he softly shook her hand I love u jaan he cried' I love u a lot...he kissed her madly jaan please jaan.. I really love u.. she blinked .. trying hard to hear those words again... those words.. she would live thousand times just to hear them from him.... pulse raising.. she said something.. her mouth went dry.. umm he inched closer.. looking at her face which seemed to get the red color from no where.. she repeated.. with her dry mouth.. phir se kaho na .. very weakly she pleaded he hugged her ..I love u .. jaan. ..i love u a lot.. her face was flushed.. they wondered where did the blood come from. How the hell the heart pumped all that now.. well that was the magical effect of him on her. Which he himself didn't know.. all that he had to do to get her alive was say those words.. he probably would have kept on saying them without taking single breath. he eventually did that. Kept saying.. with every kiss he placed on her. She seemed to shy & blush more.& more with every time he said it...making him cry like a baby how can she love him...so very much.


Precap
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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