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Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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-truly magical-
part 165
viraat - if she had the poison then why she is not dead? He spat in anger.
Dr - she might still die, her heart beat is too fast & too weak. Looks like she didn't consume as much of the poison as Davis did.
Viraat - do u still think it is food poisoning?
Dr - I said it seemed like food poisoning. But there are differences. The speed at which it took him down. He was not feeling ill when he came back last evening & he died just 6 hour later. Cyanide nahi ho sakta.. it kills in minutes. Usse fit hota hain. Lekin Davis ko fits bhi nahi huwa.
Viraat - koi aur tareeka hain jise se we can find out wat it was.
Dr. - it need not be food poisoning at all. It could be some harmful exposure. Then we all are exposed now.
Viraat - then why is the driver still alive
dr - yaar I am just trying different options here, I am not sure
viraat held his collar & looked at the dr in fury.
Dr - relax viraat, davis was ur boss but my very close friend, so I am more concerned here to know the truth. If u don't mind we could examine his kidney & liver & compare it with hers.. kya naam hain iska
viraat - Shweeta Kapoor
dr - Shweeta Kapoor umm I remember her
viraat - how do u know her?
dr - davis mentioned it. Since the time he had met her in the party he was going crazy over her, I think he loved her.
Viraat - & u know how long his love usually lasts. He said it rather sarcastically.

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Raj couldn't even imagine his gudiya with little baby. She herself was a baby.. how she managed it all alone he cried .. hugging Maan.. how did she!!!
Maan shuddered with his plea. How did she manage all alone!!! the question lingered in his mind.. 9 days since they met after 7 odd years, each day have been so eventful. It took so much to take care of little angel, she was a handful even with him being around. How did she manage it all alone. He was so doomed in his remorse that he didn't even think about it. Oh !!! Geet was scared of babies.. he closed his eyes remembering how she & prem stood like small kids watching prince when he was born. Probably Geet was already pregnant then. He remembered every moment with her expect that he didn't think she actually bear their baby. he remembered how she said she didn't want babies, she only wanted to be with him.. yet again he ruined her dream & she lived only his dream.. lived only for him.. if she wanted she could have aborted the baby... she didn't .. he knew it was for him.. because it was their love.

My heart is shattered, shattered by the pain that I bestowed upon you
The horrendously painful 7 years of life I put you through
Are nothing compared to the pain and longing I went through..
My pain is a mere drop into the vastness of ocean created by your tears
My life is of no meaning because I forgot the meaning of being a human
You were my life, my love, the beat in my heart and the breath of my soul

Yet, I choose to be ignorant, arrogant, egoistic and heartless
You gave me your all, and I nothing in return
You lived my dream, for me, for us for MK
And I lived under the illusion of my anger, my ego


Today, when I know the harsh truth and the reality
I feel helpless, incapable and incompetent
Now that I want you near me, destiny is only giving me what I deserve
Because you have gone far, far away from me
I am scared, scared of losing you forever


I know that I do not deserve you or your love
Because I am as heartless as a lifeless stone
But I am scared, scared for our daughter
First she grew up without her dada
And now I do not want her to grow up without her mama


Please, please God, bring my love, my life, my everything back in my life
Because I promise to do anything and everything for her
She is the blood that runs in my veins
And I cannot live without her
I will give my life and my soul for her and her only
She deserves all the happiness and love in this world
So please, bring her back to me so that I can start with a drop of happiness in her ocean of tears.

A poem by Rachana

maan snapped out of his misery when raj offered him coffee. He sipped it still thinking about her.. she was scared of babies he spoke softly.
Raj sarcastically added - she was scared of killing too
Maan remembered how Geet panicked when she had shot those terrorist.
Raj - but I guess love taught her lots of things which otherwise she would prefer to stay away from he taunted.
Maan couldn't say much..every word was true..however painful it was !! sadly that was the reality of her life... he ruined with his harsh words. Killed their togetherness..their baby was forced to lead a life craving for her father.. Geet wanted only to be in his arms..he couldn't even give her that, let alone a dream wedding, being a virgin in their SR.. nothing ..just nothing ..he gave her nothing..wondered why she still loved him. He felt she was like a doll made of gold compared to him being a toy of clay, she was an angel living in clouds compared to hard stone hearted self residing in rocks, she was nave like the monsoon rain that all wish for compared to him being the field cracks unwished by all, she was treated like princess on feather compared to throned self wonder why she still loved me.

Remorse....that is what is killikg him now....

how much she loves him and how.....
she hurt her, she waited for him....
he made her suffer, she cared for him...
she wound her by his words, shestill protected him....
He was so full of himself, she was living only for him....
He was in pain FOR HIMSELF, she was dying every moment--JUST FOR HIM.....
even when she comes back, does he deserve her?
can the pain of all those years really be blurred?
Can the damage done, ever be repaired?
Can the stabbed heart, ever be revived?
can he ever love her as she loved him?
Love can't be measured, neither can pain....
Can she be saved from drowning in her endless pain,
even as she makes him drown in the bottonless ea of her love.....
Oh God! he wants to die, but can't even say he deserves to die...
His life is no longer his...it only belongs to Geet and their princess!!!
POEM BY PRINCESS163

****

Viraat left the dr to do the test & went to deal with the owner of the restaurant. He went to down stairs to the cellar where his men were holding him. He was soaking in his blood with all the beatings he got from his men. The moment he saw viraat he ran & fell at his feet pleading - main ne kuch nahi kiya. Jo kuch bhi huwa mujhe uske baren main kuc nahi pata
viraat - jo bhi huwa hain tumhare resturant main kaane ke baat huwa hain
viraat thought fully paced to & fro - wat did he have for lunch
owner was shaking when he replied they had tandoori chicken, peshawari naan, shahi paaneer, kashmeri pullao, chicken curry, Macallan Fine & rare 1926 whiskey & she had a coffee.
Viraat - they shared their dinner?
Owner - most of it except the rice, she didn't have rice at all. But there was nothing in the food no other customer complained. Trust me please.
Viraat - Macallan Fine & rare 1926 whiskey???
owner - I got it exclusively for him, opened the new bottle for him, in front of him. She had a sip of it that too when davis sir insisted it was not of her taste.. , she stuck to her coffee.
Viraat thought for a while - is there any of the whiskey left
owner - no, sir finished it all.
Viraat - where is the empty bottle
owner - who tho bin kardiya hoga
viraat punches straight on his nose, he falls on his down. He orders his men to get the bottle. U will be my guest until all this is sorted. Owner nodes helplessly

****

raj got all the information that he could gather about davis & his gang. He couldn't have involved the defense resources. He only took their help to dig information & trace their moments. They traced david & viraat's phone number & found their location. Raj & Maan left immediately reached the location in maan's helicopter. From there they were on themselves.

They loaded themselves with weapons. Raj showed the map to Maan. They went around the location, it was outside the city limit in a farmhouse. The gates where guarded with weaponed men. The farm house was surrounded with huge wall & all the sides were wired. They studied near by places carefully. Nothing is left out, from bricks and different posts the mens held inside, this only build the anger up inside to almost boiling point, as they were all dangerous & the thought Geet some where in there was fearful not sure if she was poisoned too. Also, because of the time frame and the amount of activity needed to squeeze in, there's not much time devoted to plan. All of which, adds to the tension and makes it all that more intense. Because, if they made one mistake then it could be fetal. Unfortunately, any mistakes could mean someone's life. His, raj ..the worse..his life itself..geet!!

****

Viraats men found the whiskey bottle in the trash. They examined it thoroughly & discovered that it had synthetic poison. Very potent even a sip could be enough to kill the person.

Viraat went to geets room & looked at her top to bottom. She looked half dead - can u save her he asked the dr.
dr - I can't do anything. Even if she survives I am sure she will servilely damage her liver, kidneys & heart. she survives it is her luck.
Viraat looked at her pale face which was turning paler.


Precap
Geet critical
-PREV PART 164 NEXT PART 166-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

how will you justify saving her after all this?

will you make her sick for rest of her life?
will you make her lead a crippled life?
please Muskanp don't do anything stupid?
if you make her live, give some strong scientific reason
and don't make her lead a not perfect life
it is a fiction
make every thing right but with proper reasoning
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update.
poor geet .
hope she oaky.
do continue plz.
thx.
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Posted: 14 years ago
no dear muskiiiii..

please please don't let anything happen to geet...

please continue sooooon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome updatee... this is soooo sad... Poor Geeeet is going thru soo much for her love.. this tryly commendable on her part... :)

thanks muski!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

trult magical is turning into mystery always on toes what is going to happen . precap is scary .

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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my reserved space first post on pg 32
pls answer my questions
humble request
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet critical 😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

how will you justify saving her after all this?

will you make her sick for rest of her life?
will you make her lead a crippled life?
please Muskanp don't do anything stupid?
if you make her live, give some strong scientific reason
and don't make her lead a not perfect life
it is a fiction
make every thing right but with proper reasoning



i want the answers too muskan please clear these questions.....😭

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