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maneetian80

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Muskan,

You are amazing writer. Mostly I am a silent reader 😳 but your FF made me comment. Please update soon and keep up the good work.

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Posted: 14 years ago

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O come on dear . Be fast .
Need to do my math homework .

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Posted: 14 years ago

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ppl be patient yaar..muskan said she is typing the last paragraph... thoda patience.....

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: deniac
ppl be patient yaar..muskan said she is typing the last paragraph... thoda patience.....

1/2 an hr since last para

getting impatient😕

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: deniac
ppl be patient yaar..muskan said she is typing the last paragraph... thoda patience.....

TRYING DEAR ,
BUT WHAT TO DO WE ALL ARE HUNGRY FOR MUSKI's UPDATE .

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PLEASE HAVE TISSUES

don't kill me... please hit like button & comment

i shall update at the earliest

-truly magical-

part 166

Geet desperately tried to be conscious. She refused to take the medicines that dr tried to give her to ease her pain & give her sleep. She didn't wat to roll off into deep sleep that would cause her to lose her disguise. Her eyes may get more diluted & the lenses she wore could be misplaced. Wat if by mistake she blurted Maan.. no no she couldn't let that happen.
Dr - this will reduce ur pain
Geet - agar main neind main mar gayen tho....nahi nahi mujhe yeh nahi khana
she pretended to be scared. Given a chance she may do her victory dance but the situation & the medical condition she was in she couldn't do much. Dr didn't want to kill her mentally. He believed patient's mental condition meant more to recovery than the physical condition.

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After carefully studying the place. Raj suggested to just attack them direct when they least expect.
Maan thought for a while - nahi usse Geet ki jaan ko katra ho sakta hain
they thought for a while when they noticed an ambulance heading towards the farmhouse..may be to transport davis body they thought.
Maan - set the whole place ablaze
raj could see the fire in his eyes as he spoke & nodded as he understood wat he meant.
They both slipped under the ambulance as it stopped near the gate for few secs before the guards came to open it.

The ambulance entered the portico. The whole atmosphere was in grief. No one spoke a word. Davis body was placed in the middle of the hall. Viraat sat next to it with his head dipped in sorrow. His one hand resting on his cheek & occasionally running behind his hair. The urge to strangle someone was so strong in him. His boss, his godfather was killed & all of his men had gone blind to let it happen .

Maan & raj rolled out from underneath ambulance. They went near the vehicles that were parked outside. There were fleets of cars. They merged with the drivers & slipped behind the farm house.

Maan - I will look for Geet, the moment I find her, u set the explosion.
They connected with a wireless device in their ears.
Raj quickly sneaked into the kitchen. He turned the knobs of the gas cylinder. He spilled the kerosine all over to get the extra impact. Mean while Maan watched a man seemed like dr coming out from a room in the first floor. He assumed that could be where Geet was. He made his way to the room through the window. His eyes was terrified with the sight it meet to...she was pale, her legs were shaky. she continuously rolled over holding her stomach in server pain, she was still vomiting. He ran to her & patted her back, instantly she hugged him. Hugged him tight in pain, her vision was blurred but yah she never needed vision to know it was Maan.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vmNGZ3M4u1s[/YOUTUBE]

U shouldn't have come here she said it in her shaky & terrified voice. a look of pain momentarily revealed itself upon her face. He realized she had diverted her gaze to hide the tears forming in her big, dark eyes. The tears he had not seen .. had been hiding.. concealed. Please Maan, get out of here, Geet pleaded emotionally. He bend close to her & kissed her hard on the mouth. She smiled through the kiss as his kiss said it all.. his claim.. his signature chup bilkul chup. His one hand went around her waist the other under the knees. He lifted her & carried near the window. He whispered in the mic to signaling raj.

Unexpected one of the men just walked in to check on her. Maan rested her near the window behind the curtain & stepped behind the door. The moment the guy came in Maan hit the back of the man's head with the back of his gun. The man fell unconscious instantly. Maan made him lie on the bed. He went to Geet & removed her t-shirt. He was surprised to see the blush forming on her cheeks even though she was totally pale almost dieing, but standing in front of him just in her sports bra & tracks burned her cheeks still. He hugged her .. falling again & again for her. How ever tough she was to the outer world in front of him she was nave, delicate just simple her...his Geet!! only his. He hates himself yet again wondering how could he hurt her, how was his ego so big to fail to see wat she is to him wondering at how she could have been so nave still. Wonders how she could have stayed nave for so long. Tears couldn't be enough to express his pain.

He removed his shirt & slipped it on her. He made the man wear her shirt. He spilled kerosine all over his body..then followed a series of blasts sound from the kitchen. It was bit late, they were supposed to be in the ambulance already. But the guy messed it all up, but was like blessing in disguise. As the fir began to spread around he set the room ablaze. Maan & Geet got off from the window.

There was a sudden panic in the main hall hearing the sudden series of blasts. Initial instinct was that it was some one attacking them. But soon they realized it is an accident in the kitchen & the explosion seemed to intensify due to the excess liquid petroleum they had along with the ammunition. Every one rushed out every where to save their life. Maan made is way inside ambulance with her. He opened the seat.. which was more like a box. He made her cuddle up inside. He passed her oxygen cylinder. U will be fine.. he kissed her forehead ..now I know she smiled with all the strength she could why did she trust him so blindly he thought. Don't leave me... he cried.. I never did she said sadly. He knew she never, she couldn't, he was the one who pushed themselves away. He didn't want to let go her hand but he had to as the men where soon approaching the ambulance. Raj pulled him down & they rolled back under the ambulance. Now the only hope was the ambulance should be soon moved out from here. They knew it will be, but how soon was not sure. The endless wait began. They couldn't have made an escape, it will come in their eye one leading to other & other leading to something else.

Viraat ordered the men to move davis body to the ambulance as the fire was not seeming to get under control. He didn't want his body to be disrespected in any way. That was the best thing happened to them since morning. Davis body was placed in the ambulance with all care & due respect. Maan & raj where holding their breath. Just hoping a smooth escape. They had already called Guatum he should have been their any minute. The ambulance made its way out the police surrounded the place followed with fire brigade.

The ambulance reached the cremation ground. Maan & raj waited for them to move away from the ambulance. So they did. Maan immediately went in & checked on her. She was pale. Not breathing, no pulse, he rubbed her hand, in panic .. his heart went cold seeing her lifeless. He wanted to scream he couldn't he called out for raj trying not be loud. He didn't want death to be their completeness. His love melt into memory and pain into her every minute of life..no he couldn't let that happen.
Raj - revive her now he ordered harsly
Maan tilted her head back by placing his hand on her forehead and lifting her chin with the first two fingers of his other hand. He closely saw her, tried to listen & feel for air coming out of her mouth by bending his own ear down to her mouth. He took a deep breath, pinched her nose closed with his hand that is holding the forehead, sealed his lips around the her mouth and gave her several deep breaths. He couldn't pause in between each one to inhale shortly, he didn't want to breath since she was not. He didn't want to be alive anymore. He didn't want his pulse, his heart beat the blood in his veins nothing meant of any significance when she had nun.

Mean while raj got another car. They rushed her to the hospital. She was not responding to anything. Dr rushed her to the operation theater. He stood there with stabs in his heart growing weary with crimson tears of fear. Wat a lie his life was all those 7 odd yrs, how could he crush, hurt innocent beauty his only desire for his selfish and greed for pride & anger. How did these mean ripping flesh words made way into their hearts that knew only of love leaving every thing now empty, never to mend. His power failed, ego crashed making his love seem fake as his words with no motives. no one was there to listen, hear no more. She seemed to have closed the tunnel no light, no sound only pain she was now numb to it all.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RynBgZLofs8[/YOUTUBE]

Precap
Maan going mad..insane

-PREV PART 165-

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Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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vivacious_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#337

ok Muski...... after such a wait u gave a short update..... nice update....finally geet was moved from there...but yaar aise hanging mat rakho...even ur precap is quite upsetting......

Edited by deniac - 14 years ago