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Posted: 14 years ago
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hello guys here is the next part of the ff enjoy reading.....i know i m late in updating but next part i will definitely update soon....promise.....


Chapter 4 _______________________"Helpless Onu"

....................tears pricked down his eyes as he saw smoke rising from

the other cars engine.His legs had gone numb...his pupil

expanded...nd his hands couldnot move.He sat like a silent figure

with his tears falling down his eyes in heavy measures but

unvoluntarily asfor the time being he failed to feel ny type of emotion

rise in him.His face began to turn red as he realized the

situation.....his lips trembled nd with alot of force he brought himself

together.He pushed open the door of his car nd ran to the other

car.He went up to the passenger seats window nd saw a silent figure

tht rested its head on the seats cushion.Its eyes were

closed............Onu was shocked after seeing this......it was an

unconscious Taani.he tried to open the door but to no avail as the

door didnot budge.He knocked at the door....but again to no

avail......he tried to push openn the door with his shoulder but again

failed.He pushed his shoulder this time with so gr8 force tht his

shoulder ached.He placed his hand upon to shoulder nd pressed it

to ease down the pain he was feeling.....he closed his eyes nd

prayed to kaali maa to give him courage to bear this pain nd to stay

determined.He touched the window with his hand..nd then let go.He

realized tht she was not the only one in the car there was someone

else too in the car .......tht someone who he really loved.He ran to the

driver seats window nd peered into the car.This silent figure rested

his head onto the steering wheel as the incident had caused his

head to bump into the steering wheel......it was robindo.Onu put his

hands on the window nd called out slowly,"Robi...." but no avail.

As he didnot move.....he tried to open his side of the door but to no

avail as the door had jammed.He tried for another two minutes...but

by then he was out of breath.He came out of that side nd stood in the

middle of the road.He searched his kurta to be able to find his

mobile.He felt his mobile in his pocket.nd therefore hastily took it

out.The shivering of his hands...caused the mobile to fell from his

hand onto the ground.The mobile's pieces scatterd on the road.Onu

bent to pick them up nd tried to fix the battery back again nd switch it

on.....but again he failed.Frustration was now taking a toll on him nd

therefore he shouted in this isolated place............his cry was loud nd

was made so tht kaali maa could here his cry..........so tht she could

send help for her helpless creature....Onu was now broken..his

heart ached nd he fell upon to the ground.He brushed his hair
back.nd brought it near to his face......he cupped his hand onto his mouth.......

Background:
Kiya bebasi hai ye...kiya majbooriyan.........
hum paas hain phir bhi kitni hai dooriyan
......jism tu jaan main..............teri pehchan main.mar ke bhi na mite
ye hai kesa barham.............la la la la la.....hmmmmmmmmmmmmmhmmmmmmmmm

as Onu remembered wht had actually happened......

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"Dada hat jaaeee.Onu hat jaao.....",shouted robi nd taani to onu.But

onu didnot react...he wanted things to happen fast but he was unware

tht god had other plans......Robindo on seeing the approaching truck

had pulled over his car in front of onu's car nd the truck thus enabling

his car to skid nd collide into the trees.
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Meanwhile Ganguly house:

"Dekhiye Shekhar babu.humain shama kijiye ga......hum aur der

intezar nahin karsakte hain......"said mantriji taking excuse nd leaving

the hall.Shekhar lowered his eyes in shame nd stared at neelu who

nodded her head to indicat to shekhar to keep waiting just like

evryone else was doing.
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Accident site:

Taani was now gaining conscious.Her lips moveed nd her hand

made movement.She slowly opened her eyes nd within a sec

realized the situation.She looked at robindo nd tried to shako him but

he remained silent....fear gripped taani.nd she peered out of the

windoe to see a broken onu sitting in the middle of the road.She

knocked at the window nd said,"Onu............" but very slowly...as she


had only little strength left.Wheras on the other hand onu felt the wind

pass his face.he felt sumthing was different abt this breeze...he felt

sumeone calling out to him he turnee back to see taani.......nd a smile

rose on his face.........

Background:

Tere liye..........haan tere liye...................

A smile rose on his face nd with both his hands he forced himself to

stand as he brushed out the dirt on his kurta.......they stared at

eachother...until onu bagan to run to taani.He reached the window put

his hand on it nd shouted,"taaniiiiiiii......main tujhe kuch nahi hone

dunga...kuch nahi........."he glanced quickly at robi nd then bach again

at taani.He felt the fear in her eyes..the same fear tht he was

facing............for robi....Onu turned back nd examined the place

fully.....he looked everywhere to be abvle to find sumthing tht could

help him.....

Background:

Deewana sach......ye kehta hai.............
sab main ek deewana rehta hai....
Rooh se rooh ke darmiyan............


Onu looked everywhere until he got an idea....he ran to his car with

double hope bcoz nw he was not alone he had taani with him......he

opened his car nd the car's boot.......

Background:
Ishq ke hain hazaroon jahan....
ya khuda......ya khuda.......mujh ko de de agar ek jahaan....
.
.
Onu bent over the boot nd searched inside for wht he was looking

for.............until he gripped it..........the hockey stick.He took it out nd

gripped it tightly in his hand.....he kissed it nd then turned around to

show it to the anxiously waiting taani in the other car...her eyes

gleamed with tears after seeing this nd she sniled along with

onu......after all hw could they hav forgotten this stick.....the stick had

become pale over the years but the memories were still fresh in

onu's nd taani's heart.

Onu shouted,"taaniiiiii..main araha hoon...main araha hoon."asa he

ascended towards the car hurriedly.......

Background:

To maang loon tere liye .............haan tere liye .................. tere liye
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This is it folks for this part....will upload the next part by tuesday.......hope u guys liked it..plz feel free to comment,advice or point out mistakes.i would be eagerly waiting for ur replies...thnx alot with loads of love nabigha!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
nice update and continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u write very well.... and por robi and taani...😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very gud nabigha.

excellent usage of d background score👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter__________________________________________________5

MEMORIES

.............ONU ASCENDED TO THE CAR HURRIEDLY ......REMEBERING WHAT HAD HAPPENED 8 YEARS AGO.SOMETHING THAT STILL KEPT THE MEMORY OF THE HOCKEY STICK ALIVE............
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"Onu...sun motu.....dekh rukjaa.....Onu .....nahi karna....dekh agar tu mujhe cycle nahi chalane dega na to main neelu maa se kehe doon gi....aur phir wo tujhe khub dant giin. Ae motu dekh na......dekh main Laboni maa ko kehe doon g....phir wo tujhe teri favourite mithaya nahin dengi.......'saundesh......chamcham.......rashgula'",nd with this mould welled up into the mouth of the person who had accomponied her......"Soch le......"'said taani,kowing very well tht at the name of mithai he would definitely give up nything.Onu let go of the bicycle...nd shouted," Theek hai ja...taani,mujhe shauq nahi hai teri madad karne ka....wo to Neelu ma nekaha tha iss liye.....meri baat to sunti hi kahan hai wo......"."haan haan aur mujhe bhi shauk nahi hai 99 kgs teri koi mada lene ka wo to Laboni maa....ne kaha tha.........nahi nahi sorry teri maa......meri maa to Neelu maa hain!!!!!",finished taani."To theek hai na ja chala cycle....ek to aati nahi hai....uper se....nahi nahi to chala lekin phir mujhe bolti hui na aana....",commented Onu leaving her alone on her task...Taani began to cycle as Onu turned his back towards the house.he had walked only a few steps when he heard a loud noise.....nd then the noise of the wheels of the cycle moving!!!!the bicycle had crashed into an electric pole....causing it to loose balance nd fall..."Onu....",gave taani a teary cry.....Onu's eyes filleed with tears........his heart ached and he turned back to see taani on the ground.Onu ran up to her.....and helped her stand.
Background: Tere Liye...Haan Tere liye.......
"Taani...tu bhi na.Main tujhe kehta tha na...tu nahi seekh pai gi!!!Lekin tu meri baat sunti kaha hai....ab hogayi satisfaction......Taani tu aisa kyun karti hai.....lag..." "onu...began taani",but was interuppted by Onu."Nahi...koi onu nahi...i mean Taani yeh bhi koi tareeka hota hai kya....maa theek kehti hai...." "onu...."began taani once again but was again interupted by onu,"Pata hai taani terea problem kya hai....tu buhat zidi hai....",said onu crossly."Aur tera....teri moti akal..."said Taani...atlast...nd then burst out giggling. "Lagi mujhe hai...aur ro tu raha hai.......Onu mujhe kuch nahi hua hai...tu to aise react kar raha hai jese ke Meenu mam ko lag gayi ho....duffer",said Taani in between laughs!!!!!Onu stared at her and looked at her disapprovingly....she had hurt him....she thought.Taani stopped laughing nd looked down in embarrassment that is when onu on looking at her expressions began to laugh...Taani looked up nd thought tht her motu will never change...nd her gentle smile then turned into laughter as she too joined it.

Background: Sau sitam utha ke bhi jo ek khushi milay
dil agar jala ke bhi jo dil lagi milay....
to maang loon tere liye........tere liye..........


Taani's smile soon disappeared as she looked at the bicycle which had badly broken.She looked at onu in tears and onu understood her dilemma.This cycle was given be Bimlendu to taani on her recent birthday........he had arranged for this bi-cycle with the money he had saved for his shop's paint.Taani didnot want to disappoint or hurt her father."Oye taani tu jyun dar rahi hai....Main hoon na....jab Onu is here no need to fear",said onu trying to chear her up"Onu ye to robi ka dialogue hai na...????/" asked taani.nd onu smiled,nodded his head nd said yes!!!!!!!!
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The rain was drooling upon them heavily as they made their way to a local mechanic shop in the neighbourhood.But they had to move on nd reach their before the mechanic shop closed.The boy was not alone...he had the heavy bike to carry along as he walked......while his company the girl was scared nd not sure of this plan either....nd a boy of little age....who was playing in the rain..He was actually enjoying the rain....to onu's nd taani's utmost irritation."Robi for God sake....kya tu ye karna band karega......warna yahi road pe itna maaron ga....itna maaron ga....ke baarish ka maza kabhi nahi le paega....."said onu giving robi...a final warning."Kya dada...aap hamesha mujhe marne ki batein karte hain....."said robi casually.Kya onu....tu kyun nikal raha hai robi pe ghussa....mujhe to tere plan bekar lag raha hai...."said taani. onu stared at her nd robi giggled......silently...onu gave a stern to robi who on realizing the danger stopped himself from laughing nd made a sober face.Atlast tehy reached their destination...... "Arey subash kya kar raha hai.....jaldi sshop band karna....uper se ye baarish....."said the shop owner to his clerk as he waited impatiebtly to go home.....with the present he had bought........... a hockey stick....for his son....after all it was his birthday!!!!!! The trio neared him."Dada......hamain ye cycle theek karani hai..."began Onu."Nahin nahin...abhi nahi hosakta hai....kal ana...."said the man hastily!!!"Dada please..please na hum bari door se aaye hain aur ye cycle aaj hi repair karwana buhat zaroori hai...",requested taani."Ae bacha log ye konsa naya drama hai...baarish buhat horahi hai...jao jao...jaldi ja.Apne ghar jao...."the man shouted at Taani.Taani got scared and backed few steps... Onu got angry.he looked at the man....he wanted to kill him...kill him for shouting on taani.He saw her back away...he hold her by her hand...she looked at him...he looked at her.there was something in his eyes and she knew she...she could feel his conifident in her.She looked up...at the man...and so did Onu.The feeling was different...onu's touch aroused a sensation in her.She pressed his hand tightly.Onu looked at her...the man left them alone and went inside the shop to help his clerk shut it."Dada...Taani uss aadmi ne acha nahi kya...ab wo dekhe..."said Robi not happy with the way he had behaved.he looked around him and saw that a hockey stick lay unattended at a corner.He bent and picked it up.Onu taani glared at him...they knew what was he thinking.Robi shouted at the man..."Dada aap hamari madad nahi karte to theek hai lekin....hum aise hi nahin jaae gain...hum aap ki ye hockey stick le kar jaaegain.."said robi as he prepared himself for running."Robi,Taani bhaag..."shouted Onu as they three started running...The man and his clerk followed behind....

Background: janmoon ka pyar tere liye
khushiyan hazaar....tere liye
janat tu maang tere liye.....
ye jaan nisar tere liye......

Soon the two man were out of sight of the three."Ruko ruko....Robi...Taani...ruk jaao...main thak gaya hoon.."complained Onu panting for breath."Haan ruk ja Robi main bhi thak gayi hoon....."said Taani.Silence prevailed for a few seconds.....they looked soberly at one another.Until they burst out laughing.They had forgotten all their worries.Robi lifted the hockey stick in air...and gave it to onu...Onu kissed it and very proudly raised it in high air.He was proud on having it,"Ye le motu...zindagi main kabhi koi award miley ya na miley....ye stick award to tera hua...."Onu became angry...and he made a big face and stopped laughing.Soon Taani also stopped laughing as she thought of the cycle......but just like the two she also knew that when they three are together they can face anything.She again joined Robi...as they both laughed on Onu..

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End of flashback

plz comment...i'm waiting impatiently...........😍

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww .....that was awesome yaar......wonderful job.....👍🏼👏👏
Plz keep writing......totally loved it......😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsum 1 ...vry nice...dis part was vry emotional

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