Taray Liyay(part 5-updated,pg2)

TARAY LIYAY
AN Eternal Love Story

GUYS!here goes the ff...i hope u guys like it...plz feel free to comment,advice and specially point of mistakes if any coz it truly elps to right better!!!!!!!!!I'll only continue further if u guys will like it!!!!!!!!!


Characters:
1.Laboni Bannerjee
2.Tapursh Bannerjee
3.Taani Bannerejee
4.Shekhar Ganguly
5.Neelanja Shekhar Ganguly
6.Ritesh Basu
7.Ananya Ritesh Basu
8.Thaku Maa
9.Anurag Ganguly
10.Robindo Ganguly
11.Mauli
12.Subodh
13.AM<PM
Note:Other characters would be introduced as per requuirement for the story!!!!!!



CHAPTER TITLE PG.NO
PART 1___Happiness or Sadness hard to decide_____ 1.
PART 2___Kon Samjhae Onu Ko__________________1.
PART 3____Accident____________________________1.
PART 4____Helpless Onu_________________________2.
PART 5______Memories___________________________2.




ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!



PART 1.
Happiness OR Sadness Hard To Decide


The whole hall fell into silence when with slow but determined steps Taani descended down the stairs,she looked at her mother who with tearful eyes gave her the permission by simply nodding her head.The silence broke out into an uproar of claps as the whole crowd and guests cheered for the bride!
A weak but a genuine smile rose on the faces of Neelu, Thaku Maa and Shekhar.Neelu made her way to Taani but stopped in mid-way to look at an irritated Ananya,"Ananya beta ..."said neelu indicating her to join the ladies.Ananya did as she was told not as she wished.Ananya,neelu and the other ladies took Taani to the chairs and made her sit there.
Neelu goes up to a happy Thaku Maa and shekhar,
"Dekha,main kehti thi na. Jab tak meri Taani hai na meray Onu ke saath kuch ghalat ho hi nahi sakta hai." "Neelu! main ne kabhi socha hi nahin tha ke apne sab se ache dost Beemal ki beti pe lagaye hue ilzaamoon pe mujhe pachtava hoga...lekin aaj najaane kyun...andar hi andar mujha ye baat khai jaa rahi hai Kehte hain insaanoon ko parakhna har kisi ke bas ki baat nahi hoti aur issi main main chuuk gaya Neelu.Main chuuk gaya...Neelu kya ab bhi Baudi aur Taani mujhe maaf kardaingein?
"Ji ye sab to Kaali Maa ki krippa hai!!!!!ussi ne to meray onu aur taani ke rishta ko aik aur maukah diya hai.Aur jahaan tak di ka sawaal hai to woh to sambhal jaaengiin!"
Neelu turns over to see a sad Laboni standing alone in a corner nd so goes to her."Di ...main..." but befor she could continue ny further a trembling hand of Laboni rose in mid-air to indicate to Neelu to stop."Neelu kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahin hai.Main sab samajh gayi hoon aur sach kahoon to main ne apnr mann ko bhi samjha liya hai.Acha chal ab rona bhi band kar warna ye Savita baudi aur uss kee saheliyaan bewaja ki baatein banaye giin."said laboni to cheer up neelu.Neelu couldnot resist nd gave a smile.
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"Chi...yakeen hi n ahin ho raha ke meri saari mehnat pe paani phir gaya.Ritesshhh ye kya ho raha hai tu aisa nahin hone desakta...lekin tu kar bhi kya karsakta hai...najaane kyun ye maa beti ki jodii iss ghar ka aur mera peecha kyun nahi chortiii"thought Ritesh to himself until a hand on his shoulder made him turn around to look at the person."Ritesh kya soch rahe ho?Onu ke baare main.mujhe to samajh main hi nahi aata ke kyun maa baba iss taani ki assliyat ko dekh nahin paa rahe hain.pata nahin iss taani aur iss ki maa ne kya jadu kya hai..."began an angry ananya when Rites interuppted her in mid-way."Bas bhi karo ab ananya.ab bas bhi karo aakhit taani onu ki bhi to pasand...". "Pasand nahi hai wo Onu ki wo maa ki pasand hai aur ab to lagta hai baba ki bhi..",ananya walked away after saying this and Riteh slowly turned back to seea happy laboni nd a sad taani greeting all the guests as they came forward to give their presents nd see the bride!!!!

PART 2
Aakhir KON Samjhae Onu Ko


"Subodh .Mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai.Aakhir Taani Nupur ki jagah.Onu ki sagai to Nupur ke saath...."began Mauli when a silent figure came at the doorsteps,"Hone wali tji lekin ab nahin...." was only wat neelu could say.She walked up to Mauli,Subodh Am and Pm nd with trembling voice narrated the whole incident.neelu broke down by the end nd feel upon the bed.Mauli with tearful eyes sat beside neelu nd with a shaking hand comforted neelu,"Aunty aap pareshaan nahin hoon sab theek ho jayeega.""Haan haan aunty hum sab hain na Onu aur Taani ke saath."said subodh nd am pm nodded to his remarks uniformly."Tum sab to ho lekin Onu.........wo to kisi ki nahin sunega."
"Neeluuuuuu!!neeluuuuu!!"came the voice of shekhar frm downstairs.Neelu stood up nd wiped her tears."chal bacho neechay chalo sab humari rah dekh rahe hoongain."everybody followed behind neelu with a heavy heart but an hapiness nd gratitude towards Kaali Maa as they knew this is wat taani wanted afterall onu and taani r made for eachother..
'nEELU KAHAAN REHAGAYI THI TUM? jaao jaao jaldi ja kar onu ko lekar aao Mantri ji jane ki baat kar rahe hain!!" said Shekhar hastily."Main nahin jaao giin.Meri himmat nahin ho rahi hai kya kya kahoon gi main uss se main ek maa hoon aur ek maa kesay apne betay ko...nahin main nahin bata sakti onu ko..."said a crying neelu"Kya kehna hai aap ko mujh se maa",said a shattered onu standing on the doors.His eyes were filled with pain nd his face was expressionless.Neelu ran up to her son nd affectionately touched her son's face,"kuch nahin onu...pehle tu zara ander to aa,"she said while holding his head but onu shrugged her hand off.neelu had no option but to lower her head down nd point out in the direction of the seated tani.Onu's eyes slowly followed the pointed finger..................he was shocked to see taani."Nahin.... maa... nahin .....taani nahin ......maa .........nahin"said a depressed onu backing off.He nod his head in disapproval nd ran outside."onu ruuk jaa beta mari baat to sun ruuk jaa onu ruuk jaa!!!!!!'cried out neelu but to no avail.
neelu burst into tears nd went up to taani.She excuse taani frm the crowd nd took her by her hand upstairs.Everybody fell into confusion after seeing this nd thus shekhar,ananya,laboni nd ritesh followed them upstairs."Maa kya hua.....aap theek to hain na.Aap mujhe itne saare logoon ke beech se aise khech ke kyun laayi hain."taani onu....", "kya hua onu ko maa.." "taani onu chal gaya.wo buhat dukhi tha taani uss ka chehra aise ho gaya tha taani jaise meray bache main koi ehsaas hi nahin bacha ho!mujhe dar hai ke kahin wo apne aap ko koi nuksaan to nahin..." "nahin maa main onu ko kuch nahin hone doongi apni taani pe bharosa rakhiyeee...bharosa rakhiye maa."said taani while she made her way to run downstairs.laboni got hold of taani's hand but taani nodded her head to say no not this time maa not this time.Laboni lety go off her hand as taani ran outside the room. neelu and laboni broke into tears .laboni came up to the crying neelu nd said "sabar rakh neelu sab theek ho jayeega.Kaal maa hai na wo onu ko kuch nahin hone deegi."
Meanwhile,onu who had left the house headed towards his car bumped into a person who had been absent all along this incident'who was unaware of the tension, ................he had bumped into robindo ."Arrey dada! aap yahaan bahar.Oh kahin mujhe dhoondte to nahin...i m so so so sorry dada wo mujhe subhash ne bahar milne bulaya tha!sorry dada maaf kardo na kahin main ne arshivad vadhi to miss nahin kardi..."said robindo looking at his dada.But no response frm onu's side made the little chap to fall into tension."kya hua dada aap theek to hain na...is everything fine dada???"Onu affectionately placed his hand on robindo's hair nd said,"andar jaa robindo!",but robindo ddidnt move he wanted an answer."jaa na robi andar jaa,"sain onu pushing him away.Onu left robindo behind,sat in his car nd drove away in high speed.
Robindo ran inside just in time to see a running taani."taani.......... taani kyau hua?....tum ro kyun rahi ho batao mujhe....' "robindo....wo onu....." "Kya hua dada ko wo to abhi abhi meray saamne gari main beth kar gaye the...." "kya onu gari main.Robindo tum chalo meray saath." "lekin kahan taani" "chalo robindo hum,are paas wakt nahin hai"said taani holding his hand nd taking him away to the car."jaldi chalo onu ke eeche challo". "lekin taani kya hua hai tum mujhe batao gi". "haan!haan! batao gi lekin abhi nahi raaste main."both robindo nd taani sat in the car nd drove fastly to catch the long gone onu's car.

PART 3

Accident
"kya nupur ne.....uss ki himmat bhi kese hui onu da ke saath yeh sab karne ki..............agar onu da ko kuch hogaya na to main usse choroonga nahin.",said an angry robindo.Robindo's heart ached after saying this.He was angry at nupur for hurting his dada."Nahin robindo hum onu ko kuch nahin hone deengain.'
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"kya!! maa yeh tum kya kehe rahi ho?"asked a confused tapursh who had just arrived in the party nd had just got to know the whole story."haan tapursh yahi sach hai.lekin tujhe meri kassam to kuch nahin karega.tujhe meri kassam." "lekin....maa.....taani......." "taani ki khushi onu main hai aur hum donon yeh baat achi tarajh jaante bhi hain aur samajhte bhi.Iss liye humain bhi isse apnana hoga!!chal ab neechay chal sab rah dekh rahe hoongain."said laboni wiping her tears.Downstairs a worried neelu nd shekhar kept on staring at the door."maa tum ghabrao mat....onu sahi salamat wapis aajayega!!!!!!!!',said ananya calming down her tensed mother.
"kaka!"...called somebody to shekhar,..........shekhar turned back to see the person who had addressed him by this name......it was tapursh.tapursh in a very humble way bend down to touch shekhar's feet."nahin nahin beta........betoon ki jagah to yaha baap ke seenay pe hoti hai........"said shekhar making tapursh stand nd then hugging him.both the families felt the wall of differences vanish as both the men hugged eachother.they had forgiven one another nd were now looking forward in life........Ritesh couldnot take it ny longer nd therefore clenched his fist ananya too wasn't happy after seeing this.hw can she ever forget wat had happened 8 yrs before....hew had she lost her baby hw had tht family insulted nd accused ritesh for the sin he had never committed,thought ananya.They all then turned to look at the door waiting for the trio to return back home.
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"robindo tum lagao na apne dada ko phone.....mera phone to wo utha nahin raha hai!!!!!!!!!!!said an irritated taani when for the 25th time onu had disconnected her phone."wo to mera bhi phone nahin utha rahe hain",said robindo. "aray ye gari to onu da ki hai na?:,he said closely observing the car infront. "haan ye gari to onu ki hai!",said a revealed taani. the car infront of them drove in a zigzag way it wqaas doddging senselessly every car tht came in its way."ye dad ko kya hogaya hai wo aise gari kyun chal rahe hain?"
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Inside onu's car:
Onu couldnot control his evolving anger towards nupur.He had never imagined tht she would leave him afterall she had sworn to be greatly inlove with him when they were courting.Every moment he had spent with nupur came as flashbacks to him.Every thought of her's was making him mad.Until he bagan remembering hw hurting it would hav been for taani when he had rejected her.he had broken the heart of such a lovely person who was greatly in love with him.His phone began to ring.......it waas taani........he picked up the phone."Onu! Onu! main taani bol rahi hoon onu ruk jaao onu main tumhare peeche hi hoon onu.Kyun apne aap ko dukh de rahe ho?kya tum sun rahe ho onu?????????????",said a worried taani.robindo heard anxiously to their conversation.onu in a very trembling voice said,"Taani mujhe maaf kardo main tumhara gunhagaar hoo....@nd with tht onu turned his car into a dark lane.the lane was empty with no soul just few trees at the roads side.robindo followed close behind."taani main buhat bura hoon..." "nahin onu tum to ......"'but before she could continue she saw infront of onu's car sumthing tht horrified her.Her eyeballs widened as she tried to find words to speak but wat came out was a scream on the phone'"onu..................apne saamne dekho." anurag raised up his head to see an overspeeding truck heading his way the driver was drunk.Onu didnot know wat to do he stoppeed the car in mid-way.The phone fell down frm his hand....he could however lstn the voices frm the phone.both robindo nd taani were shouting."dadaaaa hat jaae raste se.........onu hat jaaaaaaaaaooooo' but to no avail as onu didnot react.The headlights shown onto his face................. he closed his eyes....... hoping for the end to cum soon.
the truck hit the car forcing it to loose its control nd skid towards one of the trees.the car collided with the tree.The spectre in the other car could not imagine wat had just happened within a second just in front of him as tears pricked down his eyes..

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Love this ff. This is called sensible track. At least u showed why Robi was outside, he came to know about Nupur.

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