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Posted: 14 years ago
hey its usual time of ur update.. when u r updating...
am sorry if am bothering u.. but cant stand.. plzzzzzzzz......😃
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Yay Cant wait!!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for the "UPDATE" status ;-p
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Posted: 14 years ago
YAY!! waiting..!!😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 56

prem comes out - kya huwa?
armaan - bahut gussa main hain & said he will deal with it
prem - why will he? I mean he never involves in all this isse achnak kya hogaya?
armman - pata nahi, he sounded worried

armaan calls rano
rano - kuch pata chala, woh to bahut gussa ho rahen hain
armaan - aunty raj is personally dealing with it
rano - raj aa raha hain
armaan - hain
rano - kuch serious hain kya
armaan - nahi nothing to worry
rano - lekin main unhe kya bollon
armaan - college camp bol dijiye
rano - teehk hain main sambalti hoon lekin only untill tonight
kal subha tak uska phone nahi aaya to I will have to tell him every thing
rano maintained that geet is gone to a college camp

JUNGLE
geet kept her bag down & sat down.
maan - challo we don't have time
geet - main taak gayee aap ko manathe manathe
maan - aise kuch nahi challo
geet pulls him closer, he snaps his hand & lifts the bags - aab challo
she nodes for a no
maan gives a strin look
she gets up, he turns to leave. he walks few steps & realizes she was not
following. he looked around
gajab kaa hain din socho jaraa, ye diwaanaapan dekho jaraa
maan traced the voice & saw up..she was sittig on trees branch & singing
with her legs dancing to & fro..he was wild, uttro..she continued
tum ho akele, hum bhee akele, majaa aa rahaa hain kasam se
he rolled his eyes with a smile but still gave a stirn look back to her
moving close ..now standing right below her...
she held on to the branch with her legs twisted & hand holding it & her
body hanging close to him below the branch...
dekh lo hum ko kareeb se, aaj hum mile hain naseeb se
maan dropped the luggage down worried looking at her position
she released her hand & legs & fell in his arms
ye pal fir kahaa aaur ye manjil fir kahaa
maan held her, she encirlced her hand around him
he smiled, she rested her head on his neck.
he turned around holding her in mid air
kyaa kahoo meraa jo haal hai, raat din tumhaaraa khayaal hai
she got down & kissed his cheeks, he held her from her hair & pulled her away
fir bhee jaana-ye-jaan, main kahaa aaur tum kahaa
she held her hair in slight pain with her hand - abhi bi gussa ho
maan lifted the bags & started to walk away
she came infront & blocked his way. he looked away & started to
walk on the other side. she held him from his head tiptoed & placed
a sudden kiss on his lips closing her eyes tight.
maan droped the luggage at once & held his hand away, not sure to hold her
to kiss her back ? her lips felt so soft & tender on his, it was so sudden he
could not do much. but she stood their not moving just holding her lips
on his & her fingers holding his head in place. his eyes was wide open
looking at her she looked so scared & turning pink tears rolled down her
closed eyes. he had a hidden smile on her innosence. he slowly stepped back
did'nt want to hurt her by sudden moment. she bend her down & but did'nt
let him go away held his hair firmly.
maan - let go geet
she noded for a NO looking down
he tried jerking out of her grip. she griped his hair harder hurting him. he

immediately held her hair & pulled it back. she looked at him lovingly without
reluctance he moved close to her, she put up a brave face, he knew that she was
shit scared of his intentions her knees felt weakened, he fanned the side of
her ear moving down to her neck line further to her shoulder, her grip on
his hair softened he turned her neck to the other side in a jerk & fanned it
very softly moving softly to the hollow of her neck she arched back feeling
the heat of his breath running all the way down..& she lost her balance
backward, they fell on the grass below which was wet but felt warm because
of their warmth. maan landed on top of her. she hurt her head, she narrowed
her eye brows in slight pain
maan checked her head & slowly rubbed it
he looked at her face which still had a the scars on the head & very slightly
still bleeding & sides of lips which had turned blue now. he caressed them in concern.
with his thumb. she moved one hand to caress his cheeks he pinned it down & she
laced it with his she brought the other hand infront to caress his other cheek
he pinned that down as well, she passionately laced that hand as well
feeling his dominance arosing her.
he teasingly showered kisses on her neck she felt tickled & moved her
legs & turned her head left to right & smiled - choda mujhe gud gudi ho rahi hain

aperture view followed her...with a plus sign in between..every time she moved
it moved with her. then the aperture view moved to back of maans head

he pressed her on the grass harder she arched back..
maan naughtly keeping her eyes capative - what if I rape u now
geet shied..turning pink that if she could further.. he was suprised that she shied
and wispered aap ko mujhe rape karne ki kya zarorat hain

precap
geet learns The Maan Singh Khurana

NEXT PART 57

Thanks guys for all ur love & support...hope u like this update as well
Please please do comment
Love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww! atlast Geet is open about her feelings now.
GEET WILL LEARN ABOUT MSK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow very cute update....

at last she will know Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update..!!!
Geet will know about MSK..!!
Wonder hows she going to react??
cant wait for the next part..!!!
please cont.soon..!!!
Edited by kooliio - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it..
OMG kiss!!😳
hehe..Awesome update
OMg finally we are here..
Have been waiting a lot for the truth
Cant wait to see geet's reaction
Update soon muskii
Cant wait1

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Posted: 14 years ago
OO i am curious about that idiot raz.

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