Coffee house ends

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gunjan Sinha{Panchi}:She is a sweet,soft,mature independant lady who runs a Coffeee house.She is an orphan who achieved everything on her own.

Manav Garewal{Shabbir}:He is a serious moneyminded successful business man.


Devyani{Aashka}:A school teacher who is frustrated about her unromantic married life.She is sad about not having children.

Druv SachdevChetan}:A doctor who is always busy with his work.He is Devyani's husband.

Chandni Kapoor{Manasi}:She is fun loving girl who works in a call centre.She believes in love.

Aditya Gujral{Vikas}:He is a fun loving,smart boy who works in the call centre with Chandni


Part 1:
All the three girls meet at Coffee house.

Devyani goes to Gunjan's coffee house.Her face is gloomy.She has not worn earrings.Her hair strands fall on her face.She looks very simple and sweet.
Gunjan notices her face expression.She can't avoid seeing her.She goes near her.
G:Hi..i'm Gunjan.I'm the owner of this Coffee house.
D:Hi..nice to meet you.I'm Devyani.I have heard a lot about you.But first time i'm talking to you personally.
G:You seem to be very upset.Anything serious?
Devyani is silent.She feels bad when Gunjan found her inner tormoil.
G:Don't be hesitant to share your worries with me.Think that i'm your good friend.
Devyani smiles:I don't have a friend.First time someone asked me whether something is desturbing me.Not even my husband asks me this question.
G:Now i got the reason behind your gloomy look.You had a fight with your husband.Right?
D:No.Bursting out is better.We can share our feelings with each other.But that is not there in our life.No fights at all.
G:You both don't fight with each other.That's a good thing.
D:Not always.We don't fight because we have no time for each other.We are that busy with our work.Even if i find time he can't find time for me.He is a busy Doctor.He has time only for his patients.Not for his own wife.
G:What is your husband's name?
D:Druv Sachdev.
Gunjan is surprised:Dr.Druv Sachdev?
D:Ya.
G:Who does'nt know him.He is such a nice doctor.Everyone adores him.You should be happy for your husband.He is busy because he spends time with his patients.
D:I'm happy about that.But any wife will become upset if the husband has no time for her.
Gunjan pities her.
D:I'm alone.God did'nt give us a baby also.
Her eyes become wet.
G:Don't be upset Devyani.There will be a good time for you also.Have coffee.
Gunjan looks at the waiter:Bring a coffee.
They order more.
Gunjan also joins Devyani in eating.
Suddenly they hear a voice.
"Can i also join you guys?"
They look at that person.She is a bubbly girl.
She:Hi..i'm Chandni..
G:Sure..you can join us.
C:Thankyou so much.I love eating.But what to do?It's not seen in my body.I'm thin.
They three giggle.
A sweet friendship develops between them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx Jass 4 another FF🤗🤗

Jst Luved dis FF wen u wrote it 4 Dhasti n Gurmeet n wanted to request u to write it 4 ShaChi too after u finish dat FF😳 😃 😃
😃But u did it b4 I requested it Thanx 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗.




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2
Gunjan,Devyani and Chandni chat and enjoy in the coffee house.
C:This coffee house has become our meeting place.
G:Ya..
D:How fast we became friends.We share happiness and sorrows with each other.
G:I feel nice.I was always alone in my life.Now i feel i have some people who care for me.
C:Our friendship will always remain the same.
They smile.
A car reaches.
C:Adi has come.
A cool guy comes out of the car with a smile.
A:Hi honey.
He runs towards Chandni.They both stand close to each other.
Adi looks at Gunjan and Devyani:So they are your new friends.Nice to meet you all.By the way..i'm Adi.
G:No need of any introduction.Chandni always talks about you.
A:Really?
Adi winks at Chandni.Chandni blushes.
A:Chandni always talks about Gunjan and Devyani.Anyways...today is my birthday.
G:Really?Chandni did'nt tell us.
C:I thought of giving a surprise.The surprise is that Adi wants to invite you both for tonight's birthday party.
A:Yes,not only you both.Devyani's husband Dr.Druv is also invited for the party.
Gunjan and Devyani smile.
A:You both will come.Right?
G:We will come for the party.
D:Yes,it's our pleasure.
A:Don't forget.Black is the dress code.Be dressed in black.

Druv comes back home.
Dev:Druv..good thing that you came back home.I told you about Chandni.
D:Chandni?Who is she?
Dev:You forgot her so fast.Oh!My new friend whom i met at the Coffee house.
D:Oh!What happened to her?
Dev:Her fiancee Adi has invited us for his birthday party.
D:That's nice.But i'm sorry.I can't accompany you.
Dev:Why?Why are you not showing interest in me?
D:Nothing like that Devyani.There is an operation.I have to leave now itself.
Dev:Then why did you come back home?You could have stayed in the hospital itself.
D:I came to freshen up.That's all.
Druv goes inside the bathroom to freshen up.
Devyani wears a black saree and silver ornaments.Druv comes out dressed in his suit.
D:Ok bye Devyani.I'm leaving.
Dev:Ok.
Druv steps out of the room.He turns back.
D:Have a nice time.
Devyani tries to smile.
Druv goes.
She thinks:He could have atleast tried to give me a compliment.After all i dressed well.

Party...
Adi is cool in his black outfit.Chandni looks stylish in her black frock.Gunjan has worn a black frock which has blue work on it.Her blue earrings look amazing on her.Devyani comes.
D:I'm sorry..i'm late.
Adi:tHat's fine.Where is Dr.Druv?
D:Sorry..he could'nt come.
A:That's not fair.Anyways enjoy the party.
Adi cuts the cake and puts the piece into Chandni's mouth.Chandni puts a piece into Adi's mouth.Then she puts the cream all over his face.Everyone laughs.

'Hey what's with you baby
I never never never never never felt this way before
Hey come a little closer
Baby, baby baby wanna steal your heart away

Are gore gore mukhde, chand ke tukde
Kaali kaali zulfein, neeli neeli aankhen
Are gore gore mukhde (be my love), chand ke tukde (be my love)
Kaali kaali zulfein (be my love), neeli neeli aankhen (be my love)
Khwaab dikhaade raah bhula de, hosh uda de sab ke
Chain mita de, tan sulga de, mann mein de masti ghol
Rock and roll soniye, dole yeh man tere liye
Rock and roll my darling, my heart dances for you
Rock and roll soniye, kabhi tu bhi toh mere sang dol
Rock and roll my darling, why don't you dance with me too..'{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.

The song is getting louder and louder.All are dancing.
Devyani imagines dancing with Druv.
"Can i dance with you?"
Somebody asks Gunjan.She looks at him.He is a serious handsome young man.
"Me..Manav Garewel",he says.
Gunjan smiles sweetly.He also smiles.He holds her hand and leads her to the dance floor.
The song which is heard in the background:
'Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale..'{Kites}.
Gunjan and Manav are lost in each other while dancing.The lyrics of the song were expressing their feelings.
Suddenly the electricity goes.When it comes back,Gunjan does'nt find Manav there.She is out of mood.

That night Gunjan thinks about Manav without sleeping.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx Hun 🤗🤗🤗

As I m luving d Drashti n Gurmeet version of dis FF so I m gonna chk d Rajhiv Ammna FF too 😳

Luved dis part 😃

Felt bad 4
Devyani n Druv .
But Chandni n Adi r soo cute luved der part 😃 atleast sumbody's relationship is going smoothly 😳

Atlast ShaChi met 😳😳.

Plzz cont soon n Thanx 4 PM 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice ff jasmine

pls continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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No readers.So i'm stopping this ff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks jasmine di for such a wonderful update
but i would have loved a michi ff rather than a shachi ff.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dont stop this ff....plz continue...its very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Devyani,Chandni and Gunjan are chatting and laughing at the Coffee house.Suddenly Gunjan's eyes fall on Manav who is sipping coffee and watching Gunjan.
She thinks:Manav is here...
She blushes when she realizes that Manav's eyes are fixed on her face..
She goes to him leaving Devyani and Chandni in wonder.
G:Manav...you were here?I did'nt know that.
Manav thinks:You never know my presense even when i'm with you.
Manav smiles simply.
G:What a pleasant surprise!How did you vanish so fast yesterday?
Manav says in his mind:I wanted to be with you for more time.But i doubted whether you will like it.But now your eyes say that you crave for my presense.I hope so.
Manav gets up:Ok..Gunjan..i'm going.
G:Ok bye.
Manav goes.Gunjan does'nt move till he vanishes completely.
She goes back to her friends.
D:That is the business man Manav.Right?
G:Yes.
D:Saw him at yesterday's party.Why did you go to him?
Gunjan smiles simply.
D:Yesterday i was shocked to see you dancing with him when he asked you to dance with him.Today he came here.You went and spoke to him.Is it love?
Gunjan becomes shy.
D:Gunjan..be careful.We can't trust these rich business men.For them girls are a time pass.
Gunjan's joy fades from her face.
C:Manav Gareweal?No way.Adi knows him.He is a nice guy.
Gunjan smiles.
D:But love exits only in the beginning.After some time the sweetness of love disappears.Earlier I and Druv used to crave to be with each other.We used to find time to roam about.But now..Druv is always busy in his hospital.When he gets free time i'm stuck up in the school.Now there is no romance in our life.Life becomes boring fast in our busy life.So don't think this excitement will last forever.I don't believe in love.
C:I don't think so.I believe in love.I know Adi since our college days.Our romance has'nt gone sour.Still we have candle light dinners and a walk on the beach.But Gunjan..i forgot to tell you one thing about Manav.I heard that he is a divorcee.
G:He divorced only once?
C:Ya.Why did you ask like that?Teasing me?
G:No never.I know that he divorced his first wife.Did'nt he remarry?
C:No.He is single.He did'nt marry after his divorce.
Gunjan's face becomes gloomy.
C:What happened Gunjan?Suddenly you went to some other world.
D:Still thinking of Manav?
G:Yes.
D:After knowing that Manav is a divorcee also you are thinking of him?
G:Yes.I can never stop thinking of him.Because i can't forget him.
Chandni grins:Gunjan is out of control.Deeply in love with Manav..
D:What rubbish!Gunjan..you don't know anything about Manav.You don't know how his character is..why he divorced his wife..then how can you fall in love?
G:I'm not falling in love now.I fell in love with him long ago.
Chandni and Devyani are wondered.
D:What?You have seen him before Adi's birthday party?
G:Yes.Our first meeting took place long ago.And i know why he divorced his wife.
D:How?
D:Because his wife was none other than me.
Devyani and Chandni are shocked.
They:What?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Jasmine for another beautiful ff.
Plz cont soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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