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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jass Nice part 😃 😃
Although I knwd story but still finds it as interesting as I did wen I read it for d 1st time 😳
N Plzzz dnt stop dis ff here do cont.
wanting to read more n more.... 😳.

Thanx 4 d PM 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u for the pm dear it was awesome update pls try to cont this story its interesting👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank you jasmiine di fr the pm.
loved this part alot
so gunjan was manav's ex wife???
i am waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gunjan:Yes.I'm Manav's ex-wife.
Chandni:Are you joking?
G:No,it's not a joke.I'm serious.
Devyani:Why did you divorce him?Maybe like me you also must have got bored of the unromantic married life.You and Manav are busy with business.No time for each other.How can the marroage work?
G:We had a different reason to split.
D:What is that?
G:I was in Nainital orphanage.Orphans have no right to dream of marriage.Who will marry an orphan who does'nt know anything about her own birth?But Manav was willing to marry me.Our head mother was happy about that and she told me that i'mlucky to get a man like Manav in my life.I dreamt a lot about my life with Manav.

Flashback...
The head mother gives a red lehenga and ornaments to Gunjan.
She:Usually orphans get married in a simple manner.But Manav wants you to look grand on the wedding though the wedding is simple.So he requested me to hand over the wedding dress and ornaments to you.
Gunjan smiles.
She:You are lucky.That's why Manav chose you from the girls he saw here.
She blushes.

Gunjan wears the red lehenga and ornaments for the wedding.She feels secure and confident when Manav ties mangalsuthra around her neck.

Gunjan sits on the bed like a shy bride.When Manav enters the room,she craves to look at his face.But she is too shy for that.
Manav sits near her and looks at her face.She is nervous as well as happy.
He realizes that.
M:Don't be nervous Manav.It's me.Not a stranger.
Gunjan lifts her eyes slowly and looks at him.There is a sweet smile on her face.
G:Thank you for accepting me as your wife.If you had'nt married me,i would have lived the rest of my life as a spinster.
M:Why?
G:No one marries girls from orphanages.You are great.
M:I'm not great Gunjan.You are mistaking me.
G:You are very down to earth.
M:There is a reason for marrying you.
She looks at his face seriously.
M:I was in love with Soniya.
She is shocked.
G:Soniya?
M:My ex-girl friend.She deserted me when her parents found a richer guy for her when my business started falling.I managed to bring success again.My business is going well now.I want to take a sweet revenge on Soniya.I want to make her jealous.That's why i married.
Gunjan is shocked.
She thinks:The person i considered as my Pati Parameshwar does'nt love me.This marriage is only a drama to take revenge on his ex-girl friend.I'm such a big fool.A girl like me don't have the right to dream of marriage.Still i dreamt.That was my biggest mistake.
She feels that her head is spinning.
M:Please Gunjan..Please help me.You will help me.right?
She nodded her head.
M:I knew that you are sweet enough to help me.At the first sight itselfi understood that.That's why i chose you from all other girls in the orphanage.This is a contract marriage.Only for 5 months you have to stay with me.I have arranged the divorce papers.
He showed the divorce papers to her.
She thinks:Divorce before marriage?Marriage is a game?
M:You can sign now itself.We will give it to the court later..after i get what i aimed for.
He signs the paper.
M:I signed it.Now you sign.
She feels that Manav is pricking her heart.She tries her best not to cry before him.
She signs the divorce paper.Her fingers were shivering while signing.
M:Thanks a lot for understanding my condition.I promise that i will choose the best guy for you.
Gunjan is numb.His words fall on her deaf ears.

The next morning...
Gunjan brings coffee for Manav.Manav had just woken up from the bed.
G:Manav ji...Coffee..
He grins:Manavji?Call me Manav.I prefer that.
He takes the coffee and sits on the sofa.
M:You also sit Gunjan.
Gunjan sits near him.
He sips coffee.
M:Did you drink coffee?
G:No.
M:Why?
G:I don't feel like drinking tea.
M:Ok.
Suddenly he sees the clock.
M:Oh!Time goes so fast.I have to get ready for the meeting.
He keeps the tea on the table and runs to dress up.
G:You drink finish drinking coffee.It was bad?
M:Not at all.It was very nice.But i have no time.Sorry Gunjan.
He goes to the bathroom.
Gunjan looks at the coffee.She takes the cup and drinks coffee from it.
Manav's sister Rupali sees it and smiles:Gunjan bhabhi drinks coffee from Manav bhaiyya's cup.So romantic.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ut was nice
ok so it was a contract marriage
waiting anxiously to know more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
beautiful update jasmine..
Plz cont soo
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jass gr8 part 👏👏👏.
D FF is bcoming interesting wid each part 😃.
Felt bad 4 Gunjan 😭

Thanx 4 d PM 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
both the updates were awesome!!😊
felt bad for gunjan...😔
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nic part jass..loved it🤗
plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
Manav looks upset and he is thinking of something.Gunjan sees it and goes near him.
G:You look upset.What's the problem?
M:Nothing.
G:No,something is desturbing you.I see some kind of worry on your face.
M:Nobody understands what is going on in my mind.How did you understand it though i'm a stranger?
G:How can you be a stranger for me?You are my husband.
Manav looks at her deeply.
G:We may not be a real couple.But i can understand your feelings from your face expressions.
Manav is surprised:How?
Gunjan bends her face.
G:I don't know.Tell me what bothers you.You are angry with Soniya for ditching you.So you want to take revenge.But there is one more truth..ie you love Soniya now also.What you plan is not a revenge to break her heart.You are just doing thid drama to get her back.Right?
Manav looks at her with wonder.
G:Don't worry.You will get Soniya back.
Manav smiles.She also.
She thinks:I'm helping my own husband to get back to his ex-girlfriend.My fate!
She feels pain in her heart.
M:You are so nice Gunjan.Will you be my friend?
He extends his arm.She holds his arm slowly with a smile.He smiles.

Gunjan wears a red silk saree.Manav enters the room after coming back from the office.He is stunned to see her beauty.He can't take his eyes off her.
Gunjan notices it and becomes nervous and shy.She hides her shyness.
G:Why are you staring at me like this?
M:Nothing like that.You look very beautiful..stunning....
G:Thank you.You please get ready fast for the puja.
M:Puja?I don't believe in it.No God heard my prayers.God separated me from Soniya.
G:Don't say like that.God does everything with a good intention.Everything happens for good.After separated from Soniya you realized how much you love her.She will also realize it.Maybe for that God did that.
M:I don't know.But i can't be philosophical like you.
They both laugh.

Manav and Gunjan attend the puja.
Gunjan prays:God!Please help me to get everything which Manav wants.He believes that his dream will be fulfilled through me.Please help me to help him to get Soniya back.

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