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Posted: 14 years ago
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Swayam's fingers move toward Soniya's face.
Soniya:What are you doing?
She moves back.
Sw:What happened?I'm your fiance.Very soon we are getting married.
S:But i don't like this.
He becomes angry:Why?Why is this change in the attitude?Oh!After seeing Manav again you changed your mind.You are dreaming about your golden days with Manav?So you don't need me.
S:Stop this nonsense.Control your tongue.
Sw:You called Manav here.Right?Otherwise how Manav landed up here?
S:If there was any bad intention Manav would'nt have come here with his wife.So stop it and get out.
Sw:What?
He gets angry and pushes her down.Then he pulls her towards him.She pushes him and runs out.
She knocks at Manav's door.
M:Who is knocking the door now?
"Manav!"Soniya calls him loudly.
M:Soniya?
Manav opens the door.Gunjan stands behind him.
They are shocked to see Soniya who is scared and sweaty.
M:Soniya!
S:Manav..please save me.Swayam...he tried to...
Swayam reaches there.
Sw:So you reached your destination..Manav's room.Are you not ashamed to romance my fiancee infront of your wife?
Gunjan becomes dull.Manav loses his control and slaps Swayam.All are shocked.It leads to a physical fight.Manav wins.
M:Get lost and don't play with a girl's dignity.
S:I did a big mistake by detting engaged to you by breaking up with Manav.God punished me for that.I'm breaking up with you.I hate you.
All are shocked.
Swayam stares at them and goes away.
S:Thank you so much Manav for saving me from that monster and sorry for everything.I broke your heart.
Manav smiles.
S:Gunjan..you are lucky to get a husband like Manav.
G:No.You are lucky to have a loving man like Manav in your life.
Soniya looks at her with wonder.
S:What?
G:Now also Manav loves you.Our's is just a contract marriage.We have already signed the divorce papers.We pretended to be in love to make you understand how much you love manav now also.
Soniya can't believe it.
G:I came to see you to tell this.But you misunderstood me.
Manav looks at Gunjan with surprise:You went to meet Soniya?
G:Yes.
S:Oh!I'm so sorry Gunjan.
M:Now you tell me Soniya..do you love me?
Soniya blushes:Yes Manav..still i love you.The days i spent with you were the most memorable days in my life.
Manav is happy.
M:We have to thank Gunjan.She helped us a lot.
S:Thanks a lot Gunjan for helping us.
Gunjan smiles:It's my pleasure.
Gunjan thinks:I'm supposed to be happy about reuniting Manav and Soniya.But why i'm depressed?
Her mind sings:
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Jab Talak Jaan Hai Baki...{Maine Dil Tujhko Diya}.

Manav and Gunjan are in the room.
M:I will submit the divorce papers in the court.
Gunjan's heart is wounded.
M:I will find a nice guy for you.
G:No need.
M:Why?
G:I love someone.I can't marry anyone else when i'm deeply in love with him.
Manav is surprised:You fell in love soon?Who is he?
G:I'm sorry.Please don't ask his name.
M:Ok..but please invite me for your wedding.
She smiles slightly.She thinks:How can i tell Manav that the person i love is none other than him.
G:Can you do a favour for me?
M:Yes..sure..
G:Can you get me a job?
M:Sure.But that's not enough.I will you a some money.Start a small business.
G:Business?No..i can't.
M:You can..i can't simply leave you.

Present...
Gunjan tells Chandni and Devyani:Manav helped me a lot.That's how i became successful in my small business.
Chandni:i can't believe this.So sad.
Devyani:He used you for his victory.He dumped you.
G:Please don't say like that.He is good hearted.If he had'nt helped me i would'nt have reached this level.
D:He must be repenting.That must be the reason why he is back.
C:Exactly.He must be loving you.After Soniya entered his life he must have realized that he started loving you.You should have confessed your love to him before leaving him.
Gunjan smiles.
G:I don't know what happened between Manav and Soniya.But i feel that God made him come back to me.I love him.I crave for his love.Now i feel that he loves me.I don't know.
C:Ok guys...today also Adi will come to pick me up to give you both a surprise.
Aditya comes.
C:Adi has come.
Aditya smiles:Hi buddies.There is a surprise for both of you.
He gives a card.
A:We decided to get married.
G:Really?Surprise!
Adi and Chandni blush.
A:Ok guys..see you.We are going to beach.
Gunjan and Devyani:Bye..
After Adi and Chandni goes,Dev:Let them enjoy in the beach.After marriage they get busy unknowingly and there won't be any time left for them to have romance.

Gunjan and Devyani dresses Chandni.Chandni looks very pretty in her red bridal attire.Gunjan's eyes search for Manav.Finally she sees him.They both smile at each other.When Adi ties mangalsuthra around Chandni's neck everyone showers flowers on them.Manav and Gunjan shower flowers on them smiling at each other.
Manav and Gunjan come together.His eyes are hooked to Gunjan.He observes her.Gunjan looks gorgeous in her grand orange saree and matching accessories.
M:As usual you are beautiful.No one can beat you in beauty.Anybody will go crazy if they see your beauty.
She smiles.

Devyani's mother is very sick.She takes her to the hospital.The doctor is not available.
Devyani bursts out:The doctors are appointed for patients.Where is the doctor?Having fun with their partners?
A nurse comes:You are lucky.Dr.Druv has come back after the operation.He can look after your mother.He is a magician.Your mother will be normal soon.
Devyani is relieved.
Druv comes and is shocked to see them:Mummiji..?
Dev:Druv..please save my mom.She is very weak due to high BP.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
rocking 4 updates...
very nice n interesting..😊

divya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
awesome update jasmine cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Again an interesting update 👏👏
Luved it 😳
I feel so sorry 4 Gunjan poor soul must be going through hell 😭 😭😭.
So now dat Manav n Soniya r 2gether hope Manav will realize Gunjan's importance in his lyf 😳😳.

Aww Adi n Chandini r got married 😃.
Beautiful Part hun
Plzzz continue soon

😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Awesome update jasmine
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Part 9
Devyani's mother becomes alright.
Devyani is relieved:Thanks a lot Druv.If you had'nt come on time i don't know what would have happened to my mom.
Druv:Now you understood that doctors have to be there in the hospital.Otherwise patients can't be saved.
D:Yes,i understand that now.I used to get angry when you go to the hospital always.But now i understand everything.I'm prowd of you Druv.I will never be a nagging wife.You must save lives.I'm happy for you.
Druv smiles.

Druv is driving the car.He is thinking of Devyani's words:Why are you not showing interest in me?
He says in his mind:I love you a lot Devyani.But because of my busy schedule i could'nt express my love for you.

Devyani enters the house after coming back from school.
She is surprised to see the decoration.
Druv comes with a smile:Happy Navratri.
Dev:Happy Navratri.How are you here?
D:Luckily today i got some free time.I thought i will give you a surprise.How is it?
Dev:Very sweet.
Druv holds her arms:I'm sorry Devyani.I could'nt spare time for you.
Dev:Don't say like that.It's for a good thing no?You had time for poor patients.That's a great thing.I have no complaint.Even i could'nt spare time for you.
D:But trust me.Even though i was busy my love for you never changed.Still i love you like before.
Devyani can't express her happiness:This is more than enough for me.Hearing from you that you love me.I'm so lucky.Now i forgot that i have no child.Though i have no child i have you.I'm happy.I love you.I feel that our old romantic days have come back.It proves that after marriage also the depth of love does'nt get reduced among couples.
They look at each other eyes' deeply.
Their eyes sing romantically:
'Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Tere Naam
La La La
Tere Naam
La La La La
Tere Naam Hum Ne Kiya Hai Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Ho Jeevan Aapna Sara Sanam
Pyaar Bahut Karte Hai Tumse Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam
Ho Ishq Hai Tu Humara Sanam..
Tere Ishq Ne Saathiya Tera Haal Kya Kardiya
Gulshan Bhi To Ab Veerana Lagta Hai
Har Aapna Hum Ko Begana Lagta Hai
Hum Teri Yaadon Mein Khoye Rehte Hai
Log Hume Pagal Deewana Kehte Hai
Tere Bina Tere Bina
Tere Bina Naamumkin Hai Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam
Ho Zindagi Ka Guzara Sanam...'
{Tere naam}.

D:There is one more surprise.I have bought a dandiya costume for you.Let's play dandiya.
Devyani is surprised again.
Devyani wears the blue dandiya costume.
D:Wow!You look cute.
Dev:After a long time you are giving me a compliment.So it's precious.Thank you Druv.
D:Let's play dandiya.
They play dandiya.The sticks fall down.They dance without sticks also.

Manav rings up Gunjan:Hi Gunjan.i'm Manav.
She is excited:Hi...
M:Would you like to join me for a small picnic?
G:Sure.

Manav and Gunjan are on a drive.
G:Can i ask you something?
M:Ya.
G:Why did'nt you marry Soniya?
M:I could'nt marry her.
G:Why?Where is she now?
Manav stops the car:We have reached the destination.
They get out of the car.It is a beautiful green place.There is a pond near by.
G:Wow!Beautiful place.
M:I knew that you will like this place.
G:How?
M:I know your likings.
G:I don't think you know my likings completely.
He smiles and looks at her eyes deeply.
M:I did'nt know what you like before.But now i know what you like.I know what i like also.
Gunjan smiles happily.
They sit near the pond.Gunjan takes a flask and cups from the bag.
G:I brought hot soup.
She pours soup into the cups from the flask.
She gives one cup to Manav.He tastes it.
M:Your cooking style has'nt changed.Still it's good.Too good.
G:Thank you.Manav..you did'nt tell me what happened after i left.
Manav is silent.
G:You can't go away from me now.You can't hide it anymore.Why did'nt you marry Soniya?Why did you come back to me?I don't think this time you came to me to make soniya jealous.
M:You are right.I don't want to make anyone jealous.I came back to you for my happiness.Because you are my happiness.I realized it very late.
Gunjan's eyes shine due to the tears formed by Manav's confession of love.
They look at each other's eyes.
Their hearts sing:
'Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Hum To Chaahenge Tujhe
Jab Talak Jaan Hai Baki
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yaar Phir Imtihaan Kyon Zamane Ne Liya Hai
Pyar Humne Kiya Hai Pyar Tumne Kiya Hai
Yaar Phir Imtihaan Kyon Zamane Ne Liya Hai
Saath Hum Denge Tera
Saath Hum Denge Tera Tujhse Vaada Hai Baki..'{Maine Dil Tujhko Diya}.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
wow lovely update so finally both jodis got together waiting to see manav and gunjan prem kahani👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful update jasmine..
Awww...Manav and gunjan back together....
plz cont jasmine....want more of manav and gunjan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
So nice romantic parts r coming 😉😳😳😳.
Luved dis part 😃
So Manav came back to Gunjan n things betn Dhruv n Devyani r also luking nice 😛.
Plzz cont. soon n Thanx 4 d PM 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Flashback...
Manav comes back home.
M:Gunjan...a hot coffee..
Suddenly he remembers that Gunjan is not a part of the Garewal house anymore.
He turns back.He sees Rupali with a coffee.He takes it from her.
R:Gunjan bhabhi is not here bro.I think you forgot that.Only i'm here to make coffee for you.If you need Gunjan bhabhi's coffee you have to bring her back.
Manav tries to discourage her silly talk.
R:I could you be so hard hearted?
He stares at her.
R:How could you dump a sweet lady like her and go back to your ex-girlfriend?
M:You don't know anything.We were never a couple.Our's was just a contract marriage.
Rupali is shocked.He explains everything.
R:I can't believe this.
M:Believe me.
R:I trust you bro.For you the marriage was just a show off.But i don't think it was just a contract marriage for Gunjan bhabhi.I'm sure that bhabhi used to love you.
M:What rubbish!
R:No bro.I have seen her drinking coffee from your cup.You had'nt finished drinking coffee that day.If it is not love then what it is?
Manav is confused:Did she do that?
R:Yes.
He remembers Gunjan telling him that she is in love with someone.
M:No,it is your dream.Not reality.
R:No bro.It's true.
Manav does'nt listen to her.

Manav and Soniya are drinking in a night club.
S:Manav..earlier you used to get angry fast.But now you are not short tempered.You don't get angry like that.I have been noticing it since quite some time.Is it Gunjan's influence?Did she change you?
Manav thinks about Gunjan.He thinks how calm,soft and sweet she was.
He smiles.
S:Don't you miss her?
Manav asks himself in his mind:Do i miss Gunjan?But i have not forgotten her till now.
He lies:I don't miss her.
S:Does Gunjan miss you?
M:I don't know.I have no contact with her after she started business.
S:You helped her to start business.That's good.But it can't compensate her loss.
M:Loss?What loss?
S:She sacrificed her marriage to help you.In public she is a divorcee though there was no husband wife relationship between you both.Whatever you do for her,people will view her only from a different angle.For them she will be only a second hand.
It touches Manav's heart.
He asks softly:What are you saying Soniya?
S:It is the truth.I had a small argument with my dad.I told him that because of him i had to break up with you and get engaged to Swayam.My dad regrets doing that.He is happy that i'm free from Swayam.But at the same time he is sad that our reunion destroyed an innocent girl's life.I thought about it a lot.I feel guilty.Because of me Gunjan lost a married life.Right?When i think about it i am going crazy.
M:Don't be guilty.We have not destroyed Gunjan's life.She was never in love with me.Right?Then how can it be like that?
S:What if she was in love with you?
M:What?
S:I doubt whether she used to love you.
M:No way.I had a plan to get her married to a nice guy.But she refused to marry the person i choose.She told me that she loves some one else.
Soniya is shocked:What?Gunjan loves some one else?Who is he?
M:She did'nt reveal his name.
S:I don't think that is true.If so why did she marry you?
M:She must have fallen in love after our marriage.
S:After marriage?When did she get time for that?She was always stuck up to the Garewal house no?You did'nt ask her about it properly?
M:No.
S:Why Manav?You are so selfish.You used her for our happiness.But you did'nt bother about her happiness.We should have conducted their wedding if it was true.
Manav becomes dull.
S:I'm sorry.I overreacted.But Manav..i doubt whether the person she loves you is you.
Manav is shocked:What are you saying?
S:Maybe..
He thinks about Rupali telling him about Gunjan's love for him.
M:No..no...
S:Ok..leave it.

The song
'.....Ban jajeye is din ki mehmaan...mehmaan ban jajeye....
.............................Ban jajeye meri chaahat ka nagma...'{Silsiley}is going on.
Manav is dancing with Soniya.His mind is full of the moments he spent with Gunjan.He feels that he is dancing with Gunjan.He becomes happy without his own knowledge and dances happily with Soniya.Suddenly he realizes that it is not Gunjan who is dancing with him.He goes crazy.He goes and drinks a lot.
Soniya is shocked:What happened Manav?Why are you drinking so much?
M:Leave me alone.
He continues drinking.
He is really weak after drinking too much.
Soniya takes him to the Garewal house.She is helping him to walk.The Garewal members are shocked to see the sight.
Manav's mother Veena:What is this?What happened to my son?
S:Nothing serious.He drank too much.
V:When Gunjan was here,he was so happy.He never drank.He is guilty.That's why he is drinking like this now.
Soniya becomes upset with Veena's harsh words.
Soniya puts him in the bed as he is really drowsy.
Soniya turns back and steps forward.Manav holds her hand.She turns back and looks at him.
S:Manav!
Manav feels that it is Gunjan who is infront of him.
M:Gunjan...i'm sorry.
Soniya is shocked.

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