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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
Thanx Jass 😃
Beautiful part dear 👏 👏.
So Manav took notice of his wife's beauty 😉😳😳.
Aww Gunjan is jst too sweet 😳 n I m feeling bad 4 her 😭.
Plzz Cont. soon
Thanx 4 d PM 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Beautiful update jasmine...
Plz cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Nice update jasmine
PLz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Manav sees Soniya in the shopping mall.Soniya feels difficult to face him.He goes near her with a smile.
M:Hi Soniya.How is your love life going?
Soniya realizes that Manav is trying to pull her.
S:Going well.I heard that you got married.Congratulations.
M:Thanks.Are you not coming home to meet my beautiful wife Gunjan?
Soniya is quiet.
M:Soniya!
S:I will come.
Soniya sees a cover in Manav's hand.
M:This is for my wife Gunjan.I came here to buy a dress for her.
Soniya remembers Manav making her happy with gifts.

Gunjan sees rain.she is excited.
G:Wow!So beautiful.
She goes out and stands in the rain.She smiles looking at the rain droplets falling on her.Then she sways her body.Manav comes watching this with a smile.He walks slowly towards her.She turns back fast without knowing that Manav is behind her.So her forehead hits his forehead.She is nervous.
Gunjan thinks:Oh my God!What did i do?Manav must be hurt.
G:Sorry Manav..I ..i did'nt know that...
Manav holds her hand.She is stunned.She looks at her face.He is staring at her eyes.
G:Manav!
He dances with her.She is surprised.For a moment she feels that her dream is coming true.
He murmers:Soniya has come with me.She is watching us.Let her watch our dance.
Gunjan becomes upset.She sees Soniya standing with an umbrella.
M:Let her see me romancing with you.
G:Hi Soniya.Come..
Soniya comes near them:I'm sorry.I think i desturbed both of you.
G:Nothing like that.Come inside.
They go inside the house.
G:I will bring hot coffee for you.It's cold.
S:No thanks.I have to go now.Tonight there is a business party.
M:Yes.I forgot to tell you that we have to go for the party tonight.For the party i bought a saree and ornaments for you.
He shows it to Gunjan.Soniya feels jealous to see him giving costly things to Gunjan.
M:How is it sweet heart?
G:It's very beautiful.
M:Then wear it and come.I want to see you in this now.
Gunjan goes to the dressing room.
S:Ok then i'm going.
M:Wait Soniya.See my wife's beauty.I'm so lucky to have a beautiful wife like Gunjan.Right?
Soniya feels jealous.
Soniya struggles hard to smile:Yes,you are lucky.
Gunjan comes.She has worn a white saree which has colourful dots on it.It's blue border is marvellous.Her silver ornaments match the saree very well.She looks so beautiful that Manav gets lost in her for a moment.
M:Beautiful...you are the most beautiful lady i have ever seen in my life.
Soniya envies Gunjan.
S:Ok,i'm going.I have to get ready for the party.I'm getting late.
M:Ok bye.
S:Bye.
Soniya leaves.
M:I did'nt have to lie this time to make Soniya jealous.I have not seen a beautiful lady like you.You are very pretty.
Gunjan blushes:Thank you.

Party...
Soniya comes along with her fiance Swayam.Soniya looks stylish in her black gown.
The song
'Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Main phir tum aao naa
'Bheegi Bheegi Raaton Main phir tum aao naa
Aisi Barasaato Main aao naa...'{Adnan Sami's music video}is going on in the background.
Seeing Soniya with Swayam,Manav stands very close to Gunjan.Then Gunjan sees Soniya and Swayam together.Swayam takes Soniya to the dance floor and they both dance together.Soniya looks at Manav.Manav gets irritated.
Manav leads Gunjan to the dance floor.They both dance.
Gunjan thinks:Though it's all a drama for Manav it's not a pretence for me.I love being with Manav.
Gunjan is deeply engrossed in the romantic dance with Manav.Manav and Soniya look at each other.They are jealous of each other's partner.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25

so manav romancing gunjan just to make soniya jealous..

gunjan .. poor soul its hard to help the one who u love to get back his love
awesome update
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
This is getting interesting....
Plz cont soon.
Thanks for beautiful update and pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
Lovely Part Jass 👏 👏
As I said earlier d story is getting interesting wid each part 😃.
So Manav was actually drooling over his wife 😉😳😳.
Hope he gets his mind straight soon
Feeling so bad 4 Gunjun 😭 😭 Poor girl must b going through hell only to bring back d lost luv to his husband back to him wen she herself is in luv wid Manav 😭

Plzz cont. soon
Thanx 4 d PM n 4 such a beautiful FF 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
pt 7
Manav runs to Gunjan:Gunjan,pack your luggages.We are going to Shimla now.
G:Shimla..?Now?
M:Yes.Soniya and Swayam are going to Shimla for two days.A business trip.We need to stay in the hotel they stay.Let Soniya see that i'm not alone.
Gunjan thinks:Even a tour is planned to make Soniya jealous.manav is always thinking of Soniya.

Manav and Gunjan stay in the hotel Soniya and Swayam stay.
Morning...
Gunjan is sleeping.Manav goes out.Soniya is also on her walk on their hotel compound.
Manav and Soniya bump into each other.Soniya is surprised.
Soniya is surprised:Manav!
M:Hi Soniya.
S:You are alone?
M:No,i came with my wife here.
Soniya's face becomes dull.
M:To have our honeymoon.
S:Honeymoon?So late?
M:Actually because of my busy schedule i did'nt get time to go for honeymoon.
S:Why did'nt you go abroad for honeymoon?
M:I wanted to go abroad.But Gunjan loves Shimla.She wants to spend time here.
S:Oh!Good.
Manav observes her cute face.Soniya understands that.
S:What happened Manav?
M:Are you coming with me for a walk?
Suddenly she sees Swayam watching them.
Soniya smiles:Have a nice time.Enjoy.Bye.
Soniya goes to Swayam.Manav becomes dull when she rushes to Swayam avoiding him.
Sw:How come Manav here?What were you discussing with Manav?
S:Manav and his wife have come here for honeymoon.He was just telling me that.
Sw:Honeymoon?So funny.His business is going well.A successful business man like Manav having honeymoon in Shimla?He is rich enough to go abroad.

Manav and Gunjan walk on the snow.Gunjan shivers.Manav removes his coat and gives it to her.
G:No thanks.You will feel cold.
M:Don't think about me.I'm used to this climate.I keep coming here for meetings and all.So it will not affect me.But you need it now.
Gunjan hesitates to take it.Manav makes her wear it with his hand.Gunjan's eyes roll at him.
Soniya sees it and gets jealous.Swayam comes to her:Honey..let's do skating.
S:Sure.
Swayam and Soniya skat on the snow.
When Soniya gets tired she sits on the snow.Swayam continues skating with full energy.Soniya watches many couples passing by with a smile.Manav sees Soniya sitting on the snow.He smiles.
He thinks:Soniya looks so cute.
He puts his arms around Gunjan's shoulders.Gunjan looks at him with surprise.
M:Soniya..
Gunjan sees Soniya.
Manav and Gunjan walk like a romantic couple.
Soniya sees them and becomes jealous.
Soniya thinks:Manav is my past.Swayam is my present.Then why i feel bad when i see him with Gunjan?
Manav whispers to Gunjan's ears:Soniya is jealous of you now.Look at her face.
Gunjan looks at Soniya.Soniya bends her face.
M:Seeing me whispering to your ears,she must have thought that i'm trying to be naughty with you.
He grins.

Gunjan in her room..
She thinks:Yes,Soniya is feeling bad when she sees me with Manav.She seems to be very upset.I have to tell her that there is no relation between me and Manav.
Gunjan knocks at Soniya's room.She opens the door.
S:Gunjan?Come inside.
Gunjan goes inside.
S:What's the matter Gunjan?
G:I came here to discuss an important matter with you.
Soniya looks at her curiously.
G:Are you happy with Swayam?
Soniya is shocked.
S:What are you asking?
G:I feel that you are not happy with him.
S:Nothing like that.I'm very happy with him.
G:Don't you feel bad when you see me with Manav?
Soniya is shocked.
She thinks:How did Gunjan understand it?
S:So this is your problem?You suspect whether i'm seeing Manav now also.You feel insecure.Right?
G:Soniya...what i want to tell you is...
Soniya becomes rough in her tone:Then please Mrs.Gunjan Manav Garewal..let me tell you that i'm very happy with Swayam and i don't regret breaking up with Manav.I'm not interested in your husband.So you please leave the room.
G:Soniya..
S:Please..
Gunjan leaves the room disappointed.
Gunjan thinks:soniya overeacted.She misunderstood me.The way she reacted proves that she is missing Manav very badly.She got angry as i found out her feelings for Manav.
Soniya thinks:I think i overreacted.I should not have talked like that to Gunjan.

Night..
Somebody knocks Soniya's door.She opens the door.That is Swayam.
S:Swayam!Why are you here now?It's almost midnight.
Sw:I missed you.
Swayam goes inside and locks the door.
Soniya is shocked.
S:Why did you lock the door?
He smiles in a naughty way and puts his arm on her shoulder.She is shocked.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
Once again an amazing part 👏 👏
Wid each passing part I m feeling more n more bad 4 Gunjan 😭 😭.
Soniya seems nice hope she understands Gunjan n put sum sense into Manav

Cont. Soon 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
beautiful update jasmine👍🏼
continue soon

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