FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4

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Mahi

@Thumari_Mahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Ooo pooja rubbed that onn the wrong side 😕 Cant wait for the next update ... promo sounds enthralling lol .... geet ka shart? 😆 cant wait! btw loved this update muski 😃

-Mahi

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

ye lo!!!! devar ko pata hai ke uski bhabhi kaun hai............maan maharaj ko toh 4 saal lage yeh janane ko ki uski biwi kaun hai!!!! 😆 waise nyc update muskan di!!!! liked ranbir's character veryy much...........seems lyk lakshman of Ramayan!!!!!.............but wats the precap???? y is maan angry????

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

Awesome update
loved it
love the pics
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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ameena_sneha

@ameena_sneha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

hey muskan you have not pm me dear .....please pm me in your next post.

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Maria

@JRia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

hi di

nice way to progress the story

just awesome the way ranbir adores his babhi

the way maan tells geet abt bein hungry.

fantastic so far👏👏👏👏

but what's geet ka sharth

is it something to do wid ranbir-smriti marriage??????????

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Anupama

@beforesunrise

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

hey musky this was so nice update 😊 ...i'm still wondering evrythng is gng so smooth sowat can be the twist

thnk you so much musky 🤗

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

awwwwwwwwwwww loved da update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

cant wait to read da nxt part

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lovelycutietedy

@lovelycutietedy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

wow di !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was wonderfull as alwazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Muskan

@muskanp

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+ 8

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

she follows maan...he goes to the study & picks up a file..starts working on it
geet waits for few mins..maan looks at her...she looked confused..
not sure if he came for lunch or some file...it was already 2.30pm
maan while on phone told geet he was very hungry & this call does'nt seem to end
any sooner..making faces..

part 98

they walked to the kitchen...geet served the food in their plates..
maan stared at her ..asking why 2 different plates..
she smiled & kept aside the other plate...she kept feeding him..
maan fed her..while on the call...maan bites slowly her finger & starts
sucking it..geet tries pull away..maan holds her back..& pretends not to
make noice..as he is on an impt call...she looks into his eyes..telling him
to leave..he refused to..she pleeded..he smiled..
their eye conversation broke..when geets phone rang..
she rushed out...pulling her hand away..
geet - hi pooja..I will call u back..(she was panting)
pooja - tu kar kya rahi hain..& why are u panting like this
geet - kuch nahi..I will call u ..
pooja - r u sure ur not doing any thing!!(pooja asked naughtyly)
geet - bye....

geet straightens herself & walks into the kitchen..maan was not there..
geet - dehku..teehk se khana bhi nahi khaya..challoo kheer de aathi hoon
she looks for him in the study..
geet - aap ne khana teehk se nahi khaya..yeh to kha li jiya..
maan - tum nahi khilaoo ghi..
geet - ji..

geets phone rings again...
geet - hi (maan pulls her into his lap)
smrithi - we are looking at jewelry now ..tu kab aa rahi hain
geet - main woh..(maan is tracing his face on her neck..collar bone & moving further down)

smithi - geet geet
geet - I will call ...her voice weekens & cuts the call

maan she moans..love u he wispers..
they passionately kiss each other & geets phone rings again...
maan cuts the call & continues to kiss her....phone rings again
maan snaps back...yeh lo..tum phel lay baath kar loo phir..kiss karenghe..
geet turns her face & throws her phone in anger..on the table

the call gets answered in speaker mode
smrithi - yaar geet u said u can't come for lunch..(maan closes his eyes..oH no!!)
but shopping u promised we all are waiting for u...how long will u take..
geet cuts the call & walks out..maan follows her..stops her by streching his hand in front
she turns & tries to walk away..
maan - tum mera intzaar kar rahi thi
geet noded her head & looked away
maan - but i did'nt say I will be coming phir bhi..
geet looked at him...which meant ..then wat are u doing here
maan - tum mera liya lunch ke liya bhi nahi gayai..
geet turned away
maan - aur maine ..sorry..(bows his head) please ..tum mujh se rooto muth na
she walks away
maan holds his ears
geet looked at him..ek shart pe..mujhe wo ..meri ..wo..she looks at his lips(she shies)
maan passionatly kissed her..again & again...
maan - sach much tumhare gussa pe bhi pyaar aatha hain..
tum aise shart rakhoghi to main aur tumhe gussa dilaaonga
geet - kyun(hugging him)
maan - taakhi main tumhe aise manvoo..
geet - umm!!(baby cry)
maan(kisses her head) - u should have carried on with the lunch
she pulls back - aap ko mera saath lunch nahi karne ka bhana chahiya?
maan - mera matlab yeh nahi tha
geet - phir kya matlab tha maan?
maan - I mean they are ur friends..u may not get this time with them every day
geet - do I get this time with u every day Maan?
he kept quite..
geet - u work like 16-18hrs a day..I am not complaining..
but yah..agar aap lunch ke liya time nikal pathe hoo mujhe aacha lagtha hain
even if I get this time with u every day..I still would want to be with u every
single meal....(maan cups her face & wipes her tears)
maan - i will try to spend more time with u
geet - rehna do...
maan - nahi geet I will definitly try
geet - aap ne keh diya mujhe aacha laaga..
maan - geeeet..why don't u trust me..(turns her towards himself)
geet - phir aap aise baathe kyun karthe ho?
maan - kaise baathe?
geet - maan ..it took me 3 whole months just to read about ur whole empire..(she looks into his eyes)
maan - wat..???(he smiled with a suprise in his eyes)
geet - just reading about ur work takes that long then ..I could barely be able comprehend the
volume of ur work in words..
maan - wat do I tell u geet...u really know every thing about me ...
intna pyaar kyu karthi ho mujhe se
geet - kya karon I have to compensate the one place where u lack right..??
maan - u still feel that I lack..
she did'nt reply..her silence killed him hundred times inside..he knew it will take some time
for geet to sink & realize his feelings..

geets phone rings again...
maan - kanha mile ne wala ho tum loog?
geet - gurgaon mall..
maan - tell them u will be there in 45 mins..I will drop u..
geet - mujhe nahi jana..

maan - sorry kaha na mane..please..
geet cuts the call - khaha na muje nahi jana
maan - do phone mujhe do..(he snatches the phone from her)..I will speak to them

geet - no ..u will not call them? (she stares spitting fire from her eyes)
maan - ok..(takes a long breath)I am not calling..U call them & tell we will be there in 45mins

geet calls smriti
smriti - yaar geet..tu phone kyu cut kar rahi hain
geet - nahi sorry. yaar..main bathroom main thi(maan smiles)
smriti - are u coming or not?(maan telling 45 mins in action)
geet - we will be there in 45mins
smriti - we?
geet - I mean I will be there in 45mins..
smriti - ok ..see u then bye..

maan challo get ready fast..I will finish my mailes

precap
maan getting angry yet again..& geet getting her way out

next part 99 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33574740

PS editied part 93 with pics...https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33449304

thanxs for all ur messages & posts..hope u like this update..please do reply

love

muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago