FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4 - Page 11

Grandamour_0990 - thanxs dear
Sigma - thanxs dear glsd u liked the pics..check again have added few more
FIRESafiReFIRE - i guess ur clear that geet is 23 & maan is 30 in my FF
nilu710 - thanxs..glad u like the phone comvo
pickachu - working on it dear
sona - thanxs dear
febinyusuff - office.ummmm!!! still thinking on that part
hermoini - hi welcome to my ff..pm list updated dear
1kaarzoo - yah!! little torture to maan..but in sweet way
thanxs guys..thanxs for all the posts

LOVED IT!!!😃 Thanks!!!

hiiiiiiiii muski........😊😊😊

geet - I mean I will be there in 45mins..
smriti - ok ..see u then bye..

maan challo get ready fast..I will finish my mailes

part 99

maan finished his mails & waited for geet in the hall
maan sat on the sofa laying his arms along the sofa's carved back..
maan stared at geet as she walked down those steps..dressed in her casual
blue top & a jeans..it was funny maan would never have guessed she'd ever
have so much of a chest, but the cloth of her top clung to the ripe slopes
with uncomfortable accuracy... maan tried looking away..instead he kept staring
at her...he noticed how her gazed fluttered over him..he smiled naughty..
she shied..maan let the silence strech..wondering how much she could hold
back... his looks made her uncomfortable, she shifted to look down,
but maan didn't stop looking at her, at that smooth profile, the full lips
that had given and taken so much pleasure, the tendrils of hair on her shoulders.
he drank in the details with a thirst, the spell she had always cast over him
ever since he first saw her has not mellowed with closeness..has only increased...
geet clucthed her purse & slowly said..challen
maan - umm!!!(still lost in her ..pushed those curls behind)
geets heart was thuding in anticpation..geet straighten her self..
geet - challen ..
maan - kanha?
geet(his eyes was full of desire..geet could'nt meet them) - ji wo..
maan - u r looking beautifull & pressed a kiss on her lips
she blushed..

on there way to the mall
maan - wat are ur plans
geet - smriti wanted to select few jewelry & then select her wedding dress
maan - wat time do u want me to pick u up(they just reached the mall and parked the car)
geet - nahi main driver ko kah doonghi..
maan - tumhara driver hain na tumhare service main phir kyun kise aur ko bulaooghi
geet - nahi..woh..actually their eyes met for a long, long moment,
(maan moved closer..not able to resist the thirst any more..took her lips into his
kissed her like a teenager daring in a parking lot..after few lost moment..geet pulled out)
geet - yeh kya kar rahe ho?
maan - aapni biwi ko pyar kar raha hoon..
geet - ghar main kar na..abhi mujhe jane do
maan - umm!!(kisses her again)
geet very embaressed ..blushing gets out..maan comes out & pulls her hand
geet - maan ..parking area hain..
maan - kuch nahi kar raha hoon..tumahara purse denai aaya tha
aacha yeh lo mera card rakh lo...do u want any cash?
geet - nahi ..I am fine
maan - when do u want me to pick u?
geet - nahi..actually we are going to chandhini chowk from here
maan - no ways..(he snaps) tum chandini chowk nahi javoo ghi
geet - why?
maan - it is a crowded place..& it is not safe
geet - maan ..I am not going alone..we are 4 of us..
maan - geet no ways are u not going..there..now thats final
geet moves closer..playing with his shirt buttons..please jaane do na
maan(voice becomes softer) - geet please u r not going there..it is not safe..
she slips her hand around his waist..& caress his cheeks..I want to go..making a baby face
maan looking at her really concerned..

ranbhir - hi bro ..wat a pleasent suprise
maan - hi ranbhir
ranbhir - hi bhabhi..how are u feeling now?
geet - I am fine (straightens herself)
ranbhir - looks like bro is really taking care of u
maan looks away..geet pulls her hand away from his cheeks
rabhir - bro aap aur mall?
maan - I came to drop geet
ranbhir - not bad bhabhi..Mr.Maan Khurana ko aapna driver bana diya(geet shies & looks down)
maan - teri shaadi ke baad poochunga kya kya banaya tujhe?
ranbhir - abhi to philal shopping kara raha hoon
geet - aacha hain abhi se practise kar lo ...
maan looks at her..
ranbhir - I will catch u at the family dinner need to rush now..
geet - aacha main bhi chalti hoon..
maan pulls geet from her waist..tum chandni chowk nahi ja rahi..samjhi tum
call me when u are done..I will pick u from here..she looks down
she walks few steps away & shouts..main chandini chowk ja rahi hoon...
driver ko behjdena..& runs away..
maan - geet ..geeeeet...

precap
part 100 dhamaka the twist!!!!

1 more muskaan.... then u'll hit the CENTURY....

please, update the next one sooooon

i think that ur new twist will be that smirti will find out that the bhabhi that ranveer was talking about was geet. and that she is maan sigh khurana's wife and didn't tell them

i can't wait to read what willl be the expression will be


overall i totally love the updatttt
it was ROCKINGGGGGGGGGGGGG 👍🏼


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muskaaaaan.. your update in the morning is my bed cofee and at night is my good night kiss... so sweet yaaar.. At first I thought 'I would comment 99 and 100 together.. but you write each update in such a way taht we can't stop ourselevs from commenting 😃😃😃😃... regarding part 99do you want me to tell the same words again and again ????😉😉😉😉 Wonderful job once again !!!!!1

Btw, Geet jitni seedhi bahar dikhti hoo andar utne hi tedhe hai 😉😉😉 She very well knows how to convince Maan 😃😃😃😃.. btw, yaaar.. I know you might have penned down / or started 100'th part .. please don't make it a tragic one... Geet going to Chandini chowk .. I'm scared along with Maaan...

So when will you be udating 100'th one???

Oh my gosh!!! kya update tha yaar lovely...loved their parking and car romance😉😉😉...day by day maan is becoming very naughty😉

Congrats for 99 parts👏👏👏👏 waiting for the 100th part and twist...

Love you,
Vinithaa

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helllllllllooooooooooo muskiiiii...😛😛😛😛😛