FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi dear friends this is the new thread of my FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet


this is the link to first page..first thread
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/1441542/ff-pyar-ka-ehsaas-maan-and-geet-part-48-pg190


this is the link to first page..second thread
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1457091/ff-pyar-ka-ehsaas-maan-and-geet-thread-2

this is the link to first page ..third thread

thanxs for all ur support & love..please do cooment & let me know if it is getting too long..
they kissed eachother & pulled back..maan looked into her eyes took the lips into his..
she could taste the choclate cake..she smiled..her tongue played along for a while
tasting each other...in passion
part 96
maan rested his head on her forehead & caught his breath..that burned her cheeks & face
he got up pressing a kiss on her forehead..he helped her to sit up & her duptta fell off
maan helped her with & kissed passionately just above bulged portions one after the other
his touch was making her want more & more..she arched her back...maan gave in more
geet pushed her head back & held his head closing into her ..
geet - maan ...
maan - umm..(he hugged her)
geet - challen..
maan - umm..jana hain kya
geet - challo na..
maan unwillingly gets up & makes a baby face at geet..
she smiles & looks away..setting her duppata...
maan starts the car ..they drive back...they got stuck while entering delhi in the traffic
maan noticed geet was getting restless & tired..she streched herself couple of times..
also pulled down the seat..her back seemed to hurt..
geet called home & instructed the maid to prepare dinner
they reached home at around 10..geet draged herself to the room..
& droped flat on the bed...maan went to the room...
maan - geet khana ka loo
geet - mujhe nahi khana..
maan - aacha change to kar lo..
geet - nahi..& her voice faded..
maan went into the washroom..lit some candles & made a bubble bath
he came out in a towel..& slowly begin to undress her..
she rolled around the bed..while he did that..she had a weak smile..still not resisting
maan smiled..he opened her plats..lifted her & took her to the bath tub..
geet - kya kar rahe ho..(hugged him)
he opened the door with his legs & slipped her inside the bath..
she cuddled up & selpt in the warm water..side ways..
maan removed his towel & stepped in..gave her a small massage in her back & neck
she turned & realized where she was...mid of beautifully romanticly brightened yet dim ..lit with candles..moist with stream & pleasent aroma..soothig the senses
warm bubble water..and head resting on maans arms..& he had his head bend backward
one hand supporting her & other streched on the rim
on the rim & his eyes were closed..her legs were in between his
she got up & kissed his chin..he smiled with his eyes closed..she hid her face in his
chest..love u sleeping beauty he said..they sat their for little longer
maan got out & wipped himself & got a warm towel to wrap her up..geet went to change
the room was filled with his colgen smell..she filled in her self lost in his every touch
maan dressed & went to the kitchen..geet wore her night dress & was drying her hair
maan walked in with a bowl of soup of her & for him..she looked at him from the mirror
he was in his black tracks & vest..wet exoctic look..& caring drenching through every
act of his..she could'nt take her eyes off him...maan kept the tray next to the bed..
came close to geet..took the towel from her & wipped her hair..his touch was magical
& soothing..his finger tips..rubbing behind her ears & around her head ..running between
her hair... geet closed her eyes..& gave in helplessly..
maan - hogaya..challo soup pee loo
geet opened her droophy eyes..& looked at him..(like she was too sleepy to even sit)
maan - thooda sa pee loo..please..
she sat on the bed & maan fed her ..she had few spoons & cuddled into his lap
geet - aur nahi peena..
maan took a napkin & wipped her lips..she weakly smiled..asking for a kiss
he softly pressed a kiss on her lips..she chuckled in comfartably...he finsihed his soup
& caught with his mails..while geet was rolling in his lap...(he was reminded of the
lift night..& smiled..)
next day maan got up..looking for geet...he rubbed around the spread ..could'nt find her
he got ready for the gym..& when he entered the gym he saw geet was on the treadmil..
she was dressed in her pink tracks..hair tied up..& sleevless hugging t-shirt..sweating
looked she was on it for few mins...she started to speed up & gradually..
maan - geet..geet..geet slow down
she did'nt respond...
maan - went infront of her...geeeeeet...he shouted..
geet pulled out her ear plugs..& stoped abruptly..panting..ji..ji
maan calmed himself
geet - ji..u need some thing? (she looked concerned)
maan - geet slow down.. ur not allowed any rigours excerise for 3 months..
he sets the speed..& says..ise main walk kar loo..
geet - ji..& smiled..& continued put her ear plugs on..
maan was working out..practicing his boxing on the punch pad..she could'nt workout any more
maan noticed her getting restless..& enjoyed her plight..
he blessed her sight by removing his vest after practicing for a while..
she avoided looking at him & geet concentrate..warna treadmill se gir jayaghi(mumers to herself)
took a long breath & continued..rather tried walking..she tripped & stopped the tread mill
maan rushed to her...
maan - tum teehk hoo
her eyes where closed..she slowly opened to meet the sight of his sweaty abs..
maan - tum teehk hoo..geeet
she was still looking at his bare broad body..& feeding in his muscline smell..
maan smiled & hugged her ..& she passionatly snaked her hands on his bare back..
maan - geet tum aise karo ghi to..phir main work out kaise karonga
geet snaps back & runs away feeling shy..
maan - geet ..suno to..(iska main kya karoon)
geet wat r u doing..woh kya sochengai...tujh main sharam varm hain bhi yah nahi(mumers)
geet got ready & checked with the breakfast & his juice...
maan joined her on the breakfast table..he was on a call..
geet served him...& sat next to him..after the call he was busy texting..
geet picked the plate & fed him...he smiled & continued his work...
he went into the study to check for a file..geet walked behind him with the plate
maan sipped his coffee & wipped his mouth with her dupatta...rushed out still on a call
geet went to the kitchen & washed her hand..
maan - geet geeet..(maan walked in)
geet - kuch bhol gaya the kya?
maan - umm!!! kissed her & wispered u looked hot in the gym..& rushed out again..
geet stood turning pink.....
precap
smriti planning lunch
next part 97 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/33545440
ok my 100th part will come with another major twist..it is just a warning..!!!
thanxs a lot for all the posts & replies..please keep replying ...
love
muskan
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beforesunrise thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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first of all congo for new thread ..............party 🥳


nd yei yehi i'm the first second time yepiiiiiiiiii bhanagra time

OMG !!!!!!! musky this was so romantic 😳 superb 👍🏼
u r breaking all records of ur super romantic updates agn n agn ........

i was blushing lyk all this is happening with me ((i wish i was at geet's place :( )
my mom asked "tell me why r u smiling ?".....

this was so lovely maan is so caring he given her massage ufffff cant stop dreaming 😍

love so much musky 🤗 a big big hug for you

smriti planning lunch nd geet has nt told yet to her frnd that she is married to maan is twist is realted to that ? ...........

oh no wat twist musky nd its warning is nythng wrng gng to be happened ??? will i can only wait for ur next aweusm update 🤔

this was so best update 👏




Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Di

First of all



Keep Rockingggggggg............................

⭐️👏
👍🏼🥳⭐️👏👍🏼🥳⭐️👏👍🏼🥳⭐️👏👍🏼🥳

now update was awesome,fantastic n sooooooooooooooooooo romantic
w8ng for twist..........hope it's gonna be +ve for Maaneet
pls cont soon
thnx for pm

Luv
Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Brilliant update dear.... Hubby, wifey going very romantic...
Congrats on the opening of fourth thread....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow Muskaan, congrats on the 4th thread.Loved the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...DI 4TH THREAD...Congrats!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wonderful update....so cute....please update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oops ........u see wats the effect of ur so romantic update i 4got that i have reserved first commenter place .........lol
Edited by anu_luv_maan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi this time i read as soon as u pmed me. im so happy. waitin eagerly 4 the twist u planned. im just wonderin wt it colud b. hope its +vewhich will increase geet' s happiness. Pls 4give me if i'm wrong. im very poor in imagination.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aaawwwwwww
this is sooo sweet umm
romantic update sis
congo fr new thread
lekha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AWESOME UPDATE SWEETY 👏👏👏👏 anyways loved the way maan takes care of her in this part...waiting for the twist and congrats on your new thread👏👏👏👏
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