Obssessed about you,(AR FF) 9th prt updtd.

Hi guys,

I am a newbie,have been reading fanfics for quite some time now and amazed by ur writing skills.u all r gifted writers,wish the creatives of these serials were as creative as u all:)then all serials would have remained super interesting even if they went on and on:)

Well,i just have a rough concept in mind after reading all these fanfics but i dont think am prepared as yet to write it as beautifully as it shuould be,so am just giving u a concept if anyone finds it interesting and can write a fanfic on it.

Its about AR,our fav couple:)

Its something like riddhima is a very simple and shy girl who loves armaan to death but could never muster up the courage to let him know as she knows she is not his kinda girl,they r family friends.though armaan talks nicely to her he never thought of her as more than a formal friend.

Riddhima's parents are looking for a groom but her heart is all with armaan,so finally before saying yes to her parents,she decides to talk to armaan on the insistence of her best friend muskaan,so that she does not regret all her life that she did not even give her love one chance...she does talk to him but he laughs out saying arrogantly that she is not his kinda girl.she gets hurt and finally agrees to get engaged to a boy her parents have chosen for her,abhi who happens to be armaan's best friend.

After getting engaged,seeing abhi and riddhima together,he starts feeling wierd...he wud feel jealous seeing them together and finally gets obssessed abt riddhima and wants her back.

So this is the plot guys,if u can convert it into a story:)

INDEX

PART 1 PAGE 1
PART 2 PAGE 2.
PART 3 PAGE 3
PART 4 PAGE 4
PART 5 PAGE 5
PART 6 PAGE 7.
PART 7 PAGE 8.
PART 8 PAGE 9.
PART 9 PART 11
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Hey,
Nice concept dear.. :)
Wud love to read this fic...

Eagerly waiting for it... :D



Luv
Shatakshi 😊

Here goes the first part.


part 1

A very beautiful girl in white churidaar gazing outside the window of her room, staring out at the hustle bustle in the road but the chaos she feels in her heart is much more than she sees outside. She is in a fix as she can not decide what to do. She goes near her bhagwanji, her only companion she can share everything with without any hesitations.

"Bhagwan ji,aap aisa kyun karte hain???Jo mere liye bana hi nahi, usse hi mere dil mein basa diya?? ab main kya karun?"

She shared a special bond with her bhagwanji and was pouring her heart out to him when padma came calling for her,

"riddhu beta,kahan ho tum?"

"abhi aayi mumma"

"phir kya socha beta?abhi ke parents ko jawab dena hai humme aaj kal mein"

She got confused. She does not know what to say.She just cant see herself with anyone else other than armaan who owns her heart but is unknown of her feelings. How can she say she loves someone immensely when she is not even sure if he feels the same for her.Infact it would not be wrong to say that she is day dreaming as he is soooo outgoing,vocal,adventrous and a super flirt guy whereas she a very reserved,shy,simply and docile kinda girl. She herself feels wierd why does she feel that way for a man who has never even looked at her with any interest. She is sure he considers her as one of those behenji types but she does not know how to convince her heart that they r not meant to be.

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Hey guys,do le me know how do u find it?if any of you want to continue,i will be more than happy:)so all great writers r welcome.i know its a very a very short part but i typed out whatever came in my mind with this concept,have to rush now.plz do comment:)

wow just awesome. i so loved it man. plzzzzz continue soon and add me to ur pm list.

hey friends,thanks to all of u who took time to read my fanfic and for appreciating it.but its very difficult for me to pm u all as am new here and access net from my mobile.so plz keep checking,i will update soon.

heyy dear
nice concept
n part
loved it
cont soon
n pm me if possible
thx
dhruvika

amazing concept
gr8 start
plz counti...
add me in ur PM list
update soon
waiting 4 ur next update.

hey friends,i said its open for all,so if u really liked the concept plz volunteer to continue.

part 2

She was lost in her thoughts,not knowing what to say to her mom,padma.

"hey ridz,kaisi hai yaar?"

Muskaan entered her room and she took a sigh of relief.

"hello aunty,kaisi hain aap?"

"main theek hun beta,tum dono gappen ladao,main tum dono ke liye garma garm pakode aur chai bhijwati hun"

"oh aunty,u r too sweet"

and padma went away.

"thanks muskaan,tu bilkul theek samay pe aa gayi"

"woh to theek hai,par tere chehre pe yeh barah kyun baje hue hain?"

"maa papa ne mere liye ladka dekh rakha hai,main bhi mil chuki hun us se,abhi naam hai uska,papa ke dost ka beta hai and he is just perfect par tu to jaanti hai na ki......"

Ridhima turned away and again went to her window.

Muskaan went near her and put her hand over her shoulder.

"i know,teri mushkil kya hai.tu us idiot,stupid,donkey armaan ko pasand karti hai"

She giggled while riddhima turned around and glared at her.

"ok baba,i know tu us donk....eeeehhhh...i mean armaan ke baare mein kuch nahi sun sakti,par yaar jab tu usse jaanti hai ki woh itna bada flirt hai,uske liye yeh pyar wyar koi maayne nahi rakhta to phir tu usse kyun chahti hai????"


"yahi to mujhe bhi nahi samajh aata muski,i know he is a flirt.par phir naa jaane kyun main jab bhi usse dekhti hun,ek ajeeb si kashish mehsoos hoti hai jo mujhe aaj tak kisi ke liye meshoos nahi hui.usse dekh kar lagta hai ki jaise bhagwanji ne usse mere liye hi banaya hai aur khud ko aaine mein dekhti hun to lagta hai i belong to him and ONLY him.main nahi jaanti ki is rishte ka kya anjaam hai,nahi jaanti ki armaan jaisa ladka mujh jaisi ladki ke liye kabhi aisa feel kar sakta hai yaan nahi,par itna zarur lagta hai ki main sari umr uske bina to jee sakti hun,par kisi aur ke saath nahi"

"oh ridzy,i dont bel this.maine kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki tujh jaisi jhenpu ladki ko kabhi pyar bhi ho sakta hai aur hua bhi to kis donk.....sorry...sorry i mean hua bhi to us flirt se jisse teri feelings ki shayad hi kabhi kadr ho"

"ab main kya karun muskaan,mere uppar pressure aa raha hai aur main kisi bhi haal mein apne papa ko sharminda hote nahi dekh sakti,par main kya karun,kuch to bata"

"hmmmm.....tu armaan ko phone laga"

"WHAT??????"

"suna nahi tune,tu abhi ke abhi armaan ko phone karegi"

She said handing her mobile.

"par muski...main...main...i mean main kaise..."

"main.... main... kya kar rahi hai,come on,itna pyar karti hai usse aur ek phone karne se bhi haath kaamp rahe hain tere?"

"par...par...woh....main...kya kahungi main usse?"

"tu aaj usse barista mein milne bulayegi"

"WHAT????NO WAY"

"yes sweetheart,ab tu phone mila rahi hai yaan main hi bula lun usse??"


To be continued...


Pls drop ur comments...if any of u want to continued,u r welcome.yippi,with this one,i become a groupie:)