Originally posted by: nisisanjh
Hey dear...like always read it in one go... alagse time nikala only to read it.. while reading it, one question came to my mind was, have u taken it from real life? from where the idea came?
The story looks real..specially the end..if it was film or novel toh ek happy ending padhneko miljate.. real life is not soooo dramatic.. u kept that in mind and wrote something diffrnt frm bhoomi style though poetic lines r there and they r briliant as usual..
Everytime, smoking, drinking or having extra mrtal affair is not the reason for divorce..there r soooooooooo many othr things jiske sath adjust karna difficult hota hai...many internal problems r there..good that u showed those side.
Had a nice time reading it.. keep up d fab work..love u yaar..tc
Hi Sara dear,
SO good to see u here.. and ofcoruse ur comment. I love u thats what come to my midn to tell u first.. š.. Achaa abotu the story now.. tum bore to nahi huee na.. i know happy endings make u feel hopeful and fantasy is good atleast fiction mey to khushi dekha or else real mey we do have loads of share of gum in life.. but yes tried to make it reall as th eissue for divorce as u rightly pointd out is real and simple genuine ..so the divorce or sepreation the endings coudlnt be filmy ..it oculd take away the hcarm of the hcarcters i felt.. good ot see u gettign that point which i had felt.. der ur comments are special for me.. u takgin time out to write to me..makes me feel so specialll thank u dear...
hehe poetic lines.. u see na that sher shayari contest ka bohat asar huaa i guess i cant stop myself from having these lines in between.. coudltn resist addign them..glad na u all liked it..u found it briiliant.haha..ab itna bhi khaas nahi.but ya thoda thoda theek hai. not been modest.. but i guess terrifc type i havnt i felt..may be loads more ot coem out..with time from me.. hope so it does..
Sara i will work as u my friends r there.. i dont bother abt whwether i get even one reader..as i know any day i can pull u up and make u read and get to know how u feel.. i guess thats why i chill while posting.. i dont bother bat how many readers i have ..i love the fact that i have fantatic friends who add on as readers and that sums up my happiness.... surely have got more readers many wonderful comments.. and yes it sepcial each one... of them.. and so r u .. missed u ..and i love u dear.... hope u doign wel.. catch u soon.. till then..tc
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