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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sun_423
bhoomi i'am back with my comments on the third part of your fanfic.. well you know one thing i hate people like virat who feel that women can't achieve anything by themselves.. he is so full of himself.. he wants to make swarna realize his importance & in a way wants to show her the pain of loneliness... but you know what i think it will be virat who is going to receive amount of pain.. & if you ask me he does need a jhatka to prove that what he has been doing is wrong.. coming to swarna i'am happy that she has finally decided to take a stand for herself.. it is right on her part.. because may be a women on herself can never take a stand so easily but a women who has the responsibility of her kids can surely be a strong pillar of support for her kids.. & coming to virat well i just hope he realizes his mistake soon.. i just wish that it is not too late for him to realize his mistake... anyway please see to it that virat receives his share of jhatka & i want swarna to be the one who gives him the jhatka.. i want swarna to make him realize that more than financial support a person needs love & care too... anyway good going..👍🏼 do continue soon... waiting for the next part eagerly.. & dear you need not thank me.. it's my pleasure that i could help you..😊

Hi Surya dear,

Good to see ur comments dear.. hmm so u hate him ..ya some male just have ego and when they r angry their ego is at its best... Yup he is financially good and somewhere he doestn consider Swarna that powerful and strogn and so is assumign she wilcry adn emotionally ask him forgivenss... Yup he shoudl be getting his share hope he does..or else Swarna should forgie him without that.. or just divorcce him.. yup she is decising but what we dont knwo.. and will she be happy knwoign that alll...

Swarna can be a strong pillar for her kids but she has to be strogn forherself too... who will give her that emotional sterngth she is a lot dependant on him and his love.. which never come true..

Yup lets see what Swarna will do after that.. and what Virat will feel..any guilt or not.. may be they rnt meant ot be together... dotn know this is a short story hope u like the way evrythign utrns on... its just an attmept hope u like it ..till the end dear.. thanks for all these appreication for me and my work.. it lifts my spirit for sure..

lvu u

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
Heyyy bhoomi
Just read all the three parts of ur ss
And it was really really good
U showed it amazingly how much a women has to suffer and compromise being a wife, mother, and a daughter in law
It's really amazing
Plzzz continue soon
N plzzz add me to ur pm list

Hi seema So u read all the parts uptil now whichi have posted.. U liked it makes me plesantly happy and glad... hope u liek ti til the end..i hope so... Yup women at large have to do all the adjustmnts and still they r blamed that they havnt done all..they could do more...

ya will be continuign soon... i will pm u the next time.. a bit lazy with pm thing u see...

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: golu_1677
Just read the 2nd n 3rd parts. How can Virat do this?? He shld hv talked to swarna at least once before he takes the decision. Also i dont understand the in laws they shld try and get both o them together rather than separating them. This is too much.

continue soon

Hi golu dear,

Good to know u read hte next few parts as well.. Virat is fond close and feels Swarna hasnt been a good in terms of carign for his other family members ... he would feel he had enough and she is just wantign ot be with them for sake of kids thats why he gave up the custody of kids... ya family r really weird and such familes exist so much.. in the times they shoudl sit together they dont and when there is no need to they discuss thigns and brign reift.. hope Swarna n her decision makes her life less messy..

bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 15 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi DI!

Hi Nidha dear...

How R U!

I am doign fine dear and with u here its gogin great...

I wish u r gud
....

I wish and hope the same with u ...

woah diits really a nice one

hats of to u i think its best oneits rocking oneplz continue it soonand thanks for the pm

U liked it... u read it and u came here to comment... can i ask more than this.. dear hope u liek the story til the end.. it is a short sotry hope u enjoy reading my ff .. all ur love makes me feel too good.. hehehur icosn to mereko hasaa rahey hai.. thanks dear..tc..

"Shona ko miss kiya toah,
Dil ki dhadkan miss ho gai,
Hum to kuch dene ke kaabil nehi hai,
Dene waala hazaar khushiyaa de aapko.
Hum sirf Dua karta hai ki zindagi har khushi de apko..."

"SBS ka Shona ka ghar jana
Shona ka shao pao se milna
Bada yaad ata hai.....
SBS pe Barish mein Shona ka ,ghar jana,
Shona ka woh rain dance karna,
Bada Yaad ata hai...."

Nidha

luv u too sweety..tc

have a great day..

Bhoomi

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#25

thank god u updated!

i was waiting very eagerly for it!

i am the first one to comment on the fourth part........

actually i was re- reading it.........

thank god i saw the update on refreshing........

chalo virat ne apne bache ke liye hi sahi par atleast 1.00pm mana to.......

virat ki soch kitni zyada egoistic hai.........

he is tooo egoistic......

use lagta hai ki swarna is liye uske paas aayegi!

man and his ego.......

thank god swarna is strong........

she reacted in the best way.........

woh kyun roye????

aur woh bhi us silly insaan ke liye?????

aur i like her spirit...

wow!

she asked for a job........

but not in virat's office.........

achanak se itni bold kaise ho gayi?????

what did he heard??????

yeh kya suspense hai????

ab jaldi update kijiyega plz.....

now keep thinkng mahak what did swarna said to him.......

hey bhagwaan!

yeh to suspense hai......

but i will wait........

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 15 years ago

#26

bhomi this is an awesome part i loved the way swarna showed confidence acc to me women are strong enough to handle situations and i really waitin to know wat swarna told virat. as far as virat is concerned he is a total mcp who cares only abt his parents and sisters and not abt his wife awesome poems dear loved them as usal here is a jappi 4 u 4 this wonderful part 🤗

cont soon

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Heyyy bhoomi
That was a nice part
I really liked swarna's confidence
Her husband was expecting something else but she gave him a shock
I hate her husband he is really egoistic
Plzzzz continue soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#28

wow dear..that was a great part... i really like it... swarna was just awesome.. & now the guilt has started to conquer virat & i love it.. virat is seriously a chauvinist & i really hate such kind of people.. for a matter of fact in my life i have come across such people & from time to time they have got a piece of my mind... according to me women in no sense are less stronger than a man... as it is said may be men are physically be very strong, but when it comes to where it matters the most, the emotional part, the things related to your heart... at those instances women are 100 times more stronger than men.. & now this is the exact thing which is happening in swarna & virat's case.. virat thinks he is the sole bread winner of the family, & he feels that only he can provide his family with money & financial luxuries, it is just his male ego which is speaking.. on the other hand swarna emerged to be strong when it mattered the most... what ever she told virat was with full of confidence that even virat could not understand.. & i'am glad that even virat is feeling the numb pain... i liked swarna's idea that now she & virat will talk about what went wrong.. & i'am sure now when they talk about it, virat will see that swarna was no where at fault, it was his mistake & his families interference all along which has created distance between the two of them.. virat thinks that swarna will plead him or emotionally blackmail him & now the twist in the tale is swarna gave him such a shock that it is virat who is going to be emotionally engulfed with his guilt.... i like swarna very much in the part.. she gave virat one after the other shocks.. & hmmm.. so finally she told virat something which left virat thinking/wondering... may be swarna might have told him that after their divorce he can't meet the kids.. or she may have told him that after their divorce she does not want to take their kids responsibility... i think this would have come as a shocker to virat.. because when he can't handle & manage his own life without swarna how will he manage the kids.. this is just my guess.. anyway i'am liking the way the fanfic is moving forward... keep it up.... 👏
continue soon.. waiting for the next part eagerly..😊

Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Gud to c the fourth part also. I'm very happy abt the way Swarna stood up for herself. But Virat really disappointed me a lot.....at first I had thought may be he was not completely wrong in prioritizing his sisters as he has been wid them since his childhood.....but now.....he is being disrespectful to Swarna as an individual.....I didnt like the way he took Swarna to be weak n may be he also wanted her to plead in front of him......that was really pathetic. So basically I luved wat Swarna told Virat n am w8ing to read the next parts. Gud work Bhoomi. Always luv u for such wonderful stories wid such beautiful concepts.

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 15 years ago

#30

Hey bhoomi..
i just read this one.another social issue -great one..ya great banner!!
I have seen many cases where due to petty misunderstandings the couple have broken n it effects them n also their children...
virat though loved his wife n children have been too much interested in his sisters,their children n family n this effected his relation with swarna..its not good to be good but too much of anything is probably not good..especially the investment thing..
i liked swarnas character she was a soft spoken before but now after prabhas words she found a new self and stood for her self..and i really wish her to get ger right!!!she had gone through so much n still facing a lot..
loved all the poems u wrote..n they suited really well..
liked to read more...do PM me if possible!!
good wishes..
sri:-)

P.S:Have read some of u r stories,will comment on them soon..

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