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Posted: 15 years ago
Note:
hey guyz ZoaH here!
I know u all been waiting for this FF to update, but Im really very sorry to say that I will not be continuing this FF anymore, as I am absolute loaded with college work.
I will post the last part now!
I TAKE NO CREDIT FOR THAT PART AS IT IS WRITTEN BY RAKHI DI AKA PRITHVISANYO1. Thanks a zillion Di for the update!
Its not very convincing end, tho jhoote, chappals, eggs, you can throw anything on me lol!
Im really very sorry, but its unfair keeping you all waiting, when I know I will not be able to continuing this one!
Hope you can understand! I will continue destiny made them together and Pyaar ki nishaniyaan soon!
Love ZoaH
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Posted: 15 years ago
Please read the note above before reading the update!
thank you!
Last Part!
Prithvi:-Nehi, sanyo ,and shouts loud mein usko nehi chorunga, koi bhi tumha touch karna toh dur ki baat , dekhna bhi nehi 'but soon he realize what he said and stops. But sanyo looks at him without blinking her eyes and those eye are full teary and fill with love and respect and care.

Then both lost in to each other eyes.

Then, someone coughs there, and both broke from there eye lock.Arjun said aap dono aapni dreamland se bahar aagaye toh hum kahi ghumne jaye.

Both feels embarrassed, but prithvi said chup kar aur chal iha se.

Suddenly Arjun phone rang and he said oh no , mujhe maya ke pass jana hain aur mein iha tum dono ke chakkar mein phas gaya.

Prithvi:-Matlab kaya hain tumhara?

Arjun:-kuch nehi, u guys carry on and winks at prithvi.

Prithvi shakes his head and said pagal hain kuch bhi bolte rehete hain.

Sanyo just nodded her head but still her face flushed.

Prithvi and sanyo just walking and there hands touch with each othere silently and everytime prithvi touches sanyo's hand , she feels goosebump.Suddenly she trip in her duppatta and fall in her back but just in time two strong arms catch her.

Out of fearness sanyo close her eyes and when she feels someone caught her and save her from falling,she open her eyes and found a chocolate pair of eyes looks at her big black eyes.His strong arms encircled in her wiaste and she feels shiver but also feels so pure.

Then, prithvi said:-Kaya hua?Kaya dekh rehe ho?

Sanyo's thought break from her thoughts and said kuch nehi.

Prithvi ne sanyo ko thik se stand kia aur kaha kaya mere sath aaj raat ko dinner jana chahogi.

Sanyo couldn't help to blush and said slowly nodded her head in positive direction.

Then, Sanyo said kaya tum mujhe choroge'.

Suddenly, Prithvi close his mouth in her ears and chorne ke liye nehi pakra.

Sanyo is now fully red and look at him with a blushed looks at prithvi then said sab dekh rehe hain hume.

Arjun:-Hey bhagwan iye hum kaya dekh rehe hain iye dono ko toh ekela chorna nehi chaiye jab dekho tab.

Hearing this prithvi ne sanyo ko chor dia and she tremble but again prithvi caught her hand and said iye phir se aagaya.

Out of embarrassment sanyo is running from there.She sit in the hotel garden.

She said to herself calm down sanyo.and try to normal her face color but all is vains.

Prithvi come there and sit besides her and look at her but couldn't catch her face expression.He thinks may be she is angry with him.He feels little guilty and said in low voice sorry sanyo.If ,I'm hurt u then,I'm sorry for my behaviour.

Sanyo looks at him and said sorry ?

Prithvi:-Yes, I'm sorry.I don't meant to hurt u .It's just.I'm really very sorry.

Sanyo looks at his eyes and looks the truth .

Sanyo cups his face in her hands and said u d on't sorry.believe me.U r not hurting me and U'll never , ever hurt me.I know u.

Then both huggs each other.
They live happily ever after!

Thanks a ton for your support guyz
really appreciated!
Love ya all!
Thanks a ton Rakhi Di, for helping me out in every way, will never forget that!
Love ZoaH
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey zoah plz dont end this ff i loved this too much plz na huni well this part was too good😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Please read the note above before reading the update!
thank you!
Last Part!
Prithvi:-Nehi, sanyo ,and shouts loud mein usko nehi chorunga, koi bhi tumha touch karna toh dur ki baat , dekhna bhi nehi 'but soon he realize what he said and stops. But sanyo looks at him without blinking her eyes and those eye are full teary and fill with love and respect and care.

Then both lost in to each other eyes.

Then, someone coughs there, and both broke from there eye lock.Arjun said aap dono aapni dreamland se bahar aagaye toh hum kahi ghumne jaye.

Both feels embarrassed, but prithvi said chup kar aur chal iha se.

Suddenly Arjun phone rang and he said oh no , mujhe maya ke pass jana hain aur mein iha tum dono ke chakkar mein phas gaya.

Prithvi:-Matlab kaya hain tumhara?

Arjun:-kuch nehi, u guys carry on and winks at prithvi.

Prithvi shakes his head and said pagal hain kuch bhi bolte rehete hain.

Sanyo just nodded her head but still her face flushed.

Prithvi and sanyo just walking and there hands touch with each othere silently and everytime prithvi touches sanyo's hand , she feels goosebump.Suddenly she trip in her duppatta and fall in her back but just in time two strong arms catch her.

Out of fearness sanyo close her eyes and when she feels someone caught her and save her from falling,she open her eyes and found a chocolate pair of eyes looks at her big black eyes.His strong arms encircled in her wiaste and she feels shiver but also feels so pure.

Then, prithvi said:-Kaya hua?Kaya dekh rehe ho?

Sanyo's thought break from her thoughts and said kuch nehi.

Prithvi ne sanyo ko thik se stand kia aur kaha kaya mere sath aaj raat ko dinner jana chahogi.

Sanyo couldn't help to blush and said slowly nodded her head in positive direction.

Then, Sanyo said kaya tum mujhe choroge'.

Suddenly, Prithvi close his mouth in her ears and chorne ke liye nehi pakra.

Sanyo is now fully red and look at him with a blushed looks at prithvi then said sab dekh rehe hain hume.

Arjun:-Hey bhagwan iye hum kaya dekh rehe hain iye dono ko toh ekela chorna nehi chaiye jab dekho tab.

Hearing this prithvi ne sanyo ko chor dia and she tremble but again prithvi caught her hand and said iye phir se aagaya.

Out of embarrassment sanyo is running from there.She sit in the hotel garden.

She said to herself calm down sanyo.and try to normal her face color but all is vains.

Prithvi come there and sit besides her and look at her but couldn't catch her face expression.He thinks may be she is angry with him.He feels little guilty and said in low voice sorry sanyo.If ,I'm hurt u then,I'm sorry for my behaviour.

Sanyo looks at him and said sorry ?

Prithvi:-Yes, I'm sorry.I don't meant to hurt u .It's just.I'm really very sorry.

Sanyo looks at his eyes and looks the truth .

Sanyo cups his face in her hands and said u d on't sorry.believe me.U r not hurting me and U'll never , ever hurt me.I know u.

Then both huggs each other.
They live happily ever after!

Thanks a ton for your support guyz
really appreciated!
Love ya all!
Thanks a ton Rakhi Di, for helping me out in every way, will never forget that!
Love ZoaH

omg ... am not saying anything this ff was one of my favourites...and i did not wanna see it end like this
thanks rakhi di for helping our zoah
thanks alot for the update
it was well written, awesome and great....enjoyed reading the update......
its was wonderful
thanks zoah and rakhi di
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Note:

hey guyz ZoaH here!
I know u all been waiting for this FF to update, but Im really very sorry to say that I will not be continuing this FF anymore, as I am absolute loaded with college work.
I will post the last part now!
I TAKE NO CREDIT FOR THAT PART AS IT IS WRITTEN BY RAKHI DI AKA PRITHVISANYO1. Thanks a zillion Di for the update!
Its not very convincing end, tho jhoote, chappals, eggs, you can throw anything on me lol!
Im really very sorry, but its unfair keeping you all waiting, when I know I will not be able to continuing this one!
Hope you can understand! I will continue destiny made them together and Pyaar ki nishaniyaan soon!
Love ZoaH

its okay zoah
we understand...jus focus on your college work...
jus wanna say all your hardwork is appreciated....
and fikar math karo...i have sent ma mate to buy an egg tray for u
tumhari dulay aur pitay hum sab mil kar ache se kare ge lolzzz
anyways looking forwards to read ur other updates for ur other ff
Edited by letsrockshona - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey zoah plz donot end it its my fav ff continue it when u can i understand ur problem but plz huni its a request from me 😊do consider it
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guy
Im really sorry but really cnt mange 5 ffs at a time
tough job with college work load
I wont be continuing it!
sorry :-((
ZoaH
x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
its okay zoah...hum samjhte sakte hai
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc part sweety
i understand ..u hav 2 do lotz of work..
relax.........................and...........yaah..its nt fair 2 end dis ff..............bt..ur work is also imp...
hmm...
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
Its lovely zoah dear!😳😃😉👏 ⭐️

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