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Posted: 15 years ago
mind blowing creativity 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: urooj101

mind blowing creativity 😃

thank u huni!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Wonderful update sweety.It's brilliant update dear.Arjun and maya are emotional.

Thanks dear .But, mein kuch nehi kia,It's just a small help.
Wait for next part.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
its superb dear prithvi comes to rescue his sweet heart😳😳😳lovely moments thanks 4 it
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

thats really sweet of u! lekin im so not good as u guyz! u r just simply mind blowing writer! im just trying my best to improve with every update!

how sweet sweeti but i think the same 4 my self and loved ur and rest of the updates of our friends😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 10

This part is dedicated to Maria!

Recap: everyone going for trip, playing antakshari! Rajveer and Naina's entry!
it was Prithvi's turn to sing a song from the letter, D!
he sings this song:
Dil Ne Kaha Chupke Se
Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hain Ye Dharti Gagan
Maina Poochha To Boli Ye Pagli Pawan
Pyaar Hua Chupke Se
Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Sanyo blushes sooooooooooo much, that her cheecks turns red! this was noticed by Arjun! and as always hamare ajun koi mauka nahin chadenge!

Arjun: ahm ahm, prithvi aur gana! woh bhi itna romantic! kya baat hai?
Prithvi: (embarressed) 😳 : woh bas aise hi! can i not sing?
Arjun: of course u can, lekin isse pehle hum itne khushnasseb nahin the ki hum tumhara romantic gana sune! (turning to sanyo) thanks to u, ki aap hamare leiye bahut lucky ho!
everyone cracks up with this!
Sanyo all red, trying hard to hide her blush!
Maya: ok guyz, lets play something else, how about everyone sharing their secrets with us?
everyone cheers up with this and says, YEP!
Maya: ok so, lets start with Arjun!
Arjun: mein? mein hi kyun? chand kyun nahin? 🤢
Chand: mein kyun?
Maya: yep arjun tum, kyun koi secret hai jo tum mujhe nahin batana chahte? 😡
Arjun: 😲 nahin maya, aisi koi baat nahin hai!
Maya: theek hai to phir batao! tumhara secret?
Arjun: mera secter hai ki............... (long pause)
Maya: ab suspence mat create karo? jaldi batao!
Maya was curious to know the secret, but when finally arjun says it she has tears in her eyes!
Arjun: wait, batata hoon! mera secret hai ki im incomplete without Maya! (looking at Maya) meine tumse kabhi apni dil ki baat khulke nahin kahi, lekin mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon! i cannot live without u! (tears rolls down his cheecks)
tears flowing down maya's eyes! she is crying! she suddenly goes the Arjun, who is sitting in the opposite seat and hugs him! Ajun hugs her back!
after a while they both broke up from the hug!
Maya( wiping her tears): ok guyz, sorry bit emotional! carry on with the game! ok now its Naina ma'am 's turn!
Naina looks shock and says, " no guyz, u carry on! plz!"
Pratha: na maam, come on! ok hum aap ko koi secret nahin puchenge lekin aapko hamare ek sawal ka jawab dena hoga?
Naina: (confused) kaisa sawal? (give in) theek hai! pucho!
Pratha: kya aapki love marriage thi ya arrange?
Naina blushes at this and turns red! Rajveer looks at her and says, " it was love marriage!"
everyone says, "wow, thats sooooooooooooooo romantic!"then rajveer and naina tells everyone about their love story!
Finally everyone arrives in delhi!
(NEXT BIT IS NOT WRITTEN BY ME! ITS WRITTEN BY MY LOVELY Rakhi Di, the entire credit goes to her!! thank u di!)

Prithvi sanyo aur saare dost delhi puch gaye, all are very happy and all are happily going to the hotel.Hotel something (Tum naam de dena)

Uske baad at lunch time everyone taking their lunch .But sanyo pouche nehi aur oh aayi nehi dekh ke, prithvi is tensed and after some time he goes from there for searching of sanyo and Arjun teases him kaya abhi se uske peche peche jar eh ho.Maya glance at him angrily.Prithvi do not give any attaintion to Arjun and goes from there.

Where in from of the lobby some bad guys teases sanyo and prithvi sees this and goes there and found there Vikram also.He ssaid leave her alone

right now.

Vikram:-Lo tumhara body guard aagaya.

Sanyo is very scared and tears flowing from her eyes.she looks at prithvi with help and hope.Seeing this ,Then,Prithvi without saying a word give a punch to vikram and vikram falls on the ground and blood flowing from his mouth.then his all friends attacks prithvi and sanyo screams at fear.

Here Pundir,Sanjam,chand, Arjun ,veer and dharam hears sanyo .They all runs there and sees the situation which is worse cause every friends of Vikram and attack prithvi .He defends well and attacks also.But ,when vikram picks a rod and attacks prithvi from behind but Pundir holds it and others attacks vikrams friends also.But, prithvi receives a cut on his arms and blood flowing from there slowly and sanyo notice this.Then, hotel guards come and take vikrma and his friends with them.Then, sanyo comes and helds prithvi's arms and said it's bleeding prithvi.bahut dard ho raha hain.

Prithvi loks at her lovingly and then sees tears flowing from her eyes and he take this drop of tear and said iske liye jada dard ho raha hain.

Sanyo looks at his eyes and lost their.Prithvi friends see this and move from there but Arjun doesn't move.

Then he slowly move from there and said hume idea,

Pundir tells everything to all the girls but stops when he heard Arjun .He stops and glances at him angrily .But Arjun tells every body dekho ek nehi do idea hain, agar koi sanyo ko kuch kahe toh prithvi is getting angry and agar koi lerke sanyo ke dosti kare toh prithvi is feeling jealous.

Sanjam:-Oh kaise, pehele wala toh samajh aaya.Lekin, iye doosri wale idea?

All boys looks confuse,then Arjun tells what he heard some time beforePrithvi ke hath mein sanyo ne aapna dupatta se bandh dia.Phir sanyo ne kaha vikram ne uska hath pakrke misbehave karna chaha.

Hearing this prithvi is getting angry and close his fist tightly and said uska himmat kaise hua hain, tumhe touch karne ki, main uska hath break karunga.

Sanyo:-Pls prithvi stop.

Prithvi:-Nehi, sanyo ,and shouts loud mein usko nehi chorunga, koi bhi tumha touch karna toh dur ki baat , dekhna bhi nehi 'but soon he realize what he said and stops. But sanyo looks at him without blinking her eyes and those eye are full teary and fill with love and respect and care.

Then both lost in to each other eyes.

so guyz, this was the update!
A big thank u to rakhi di for helping me out!
plz plz plz comment guyz!
love Zoah

thanks so much dedicating this part to me huni 😊

Edited by maria_awan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

how sweet sweeti but i think the same 4 my self and loved ur and rest of the updates of our friends😉

me too dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

its superb dear prithvi comes to rescue his sweet heart😳😳😳lovely moments thanks 4 it

thanks for loving this part! the trip part was rakhi di's idea and she worte it!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks so much dedicating this part to me huni 😊

ur most welcome and sorry i could not update when u pm me, i checked my pm a bit late!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

ur most welcome and sorry i could not update when u pm me, i checked my pm a bit late!

its ok dear no problem 😉now smile

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