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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update !!!!!! keep it up.........
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 10

This part is dedicated to Maria!

Recap: everyone going for trip, playing antakshari! Rajveer and Naina's entry!
it was Prithvi's turn to sing a song from the letter, D!
he sings this song:
Dil Ne Kaha Chupke Se
Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Kyon Naye Lag Rahe Hain Ye Dharti Gagan
Maina Poochha To Boli Ye Pagli Pawan
Pyaar Hua Chupke Se
Ye Kya Hua Chupke Se

Sanyo blushes sooooooooooo much, that her cheecks turns red! this was noticed by Arjun! and as always hamare ajun koi mauka nahin chadenge!

Arjun: ahm ahm, prithvi aur gana! woh bhi itna romantic! kya baat hai?
Prithvi: (embarressed) 😳 : woh bas aise hi! can i not sing?
Arjun: of course u can, lekin isse pehle hum itne khushnasseb nahin the ki hum tumhara romantic gana sune! (turning to sanyo) thanks to u, ki aap hamare leiye bahut lucky ho!
everyone cracks up with this!
Sanyo all red, trying hard to hide her blush!
Maya: ok guyz, lets play something else, how about everyone sharing their secrets with us?
everyone cheers up with this and says, YEP!
Maya: ok so, lets start with Arjun!
Arjun: mein? mein hi kyun? chand kyun nahin? 🤢
Chand: mein kyun?
Maya: yep arjun tum, kyun koi secret hai jo tum mujhe nahin batana chahte? 😡
Arjun: 😲 nahin maya, aisi koi baat nahin hai!
Maya: theek hai to phir batao! tumhara secret?
Arjun: mera secter hai ki............... (long pause)
Maya: ab suspence mat create karo? jaldi batao!
Maya was curious to know the secret, but when finally arjun says it she has tears in her eyes!
Arjun: wait, batata hoon! mera secret hai ki im incomplete without Maya! (looking at Maya) meine tumse kabhi apni dil ki baat khulke nahin kahi, lekin mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon! i cannot live without u! (tears rolls down his cheecks)
tears flowing down maya's eyes! she is crying! she suddenly goes the Arjun, who is sitting in the opposite seat and hugs him! Ajun hugs her back!
after a while they both broke up from the hug!
Maya( wiping her tears): ok guyz, sorry bit emotional! carry on with the game! ok now its Naina ma'am 's turn!
Naina looks shock and says, " no guyz, u carry on! plz!"
Pratha: na maam, come on! ok hum aap ko koi secret nahin puchenge lekin aapko hamare ek sawal ka jawab dena hoga?
Naina: (confused) kaisa sawal? (give in) theek hai! pucho!
Pratha: kya aapki love marriage thi ya arrange?
Naina blushes at this and turns red! Rajveer looks at her and says, " it was love marriage!"
everyone says, "wow, thats sooooooooooooooo romantic!"then rajveer and naina tells everyone about their love story!
Finally everyone arrives in delhi!
(NEXT BIT IS NOT WRITTEN BY ME! ITS WRITTEN BY MY LOVELY Rakhi Di, the entire credit goes to her!! thank u di!)

Prithvi sanyo aur saare dost delhi puch gaye, all are very happy and all are happily going to the hotel.Hotel Sunshine!

Uske baad at lunch time everyone taking their lunch .But sanyo pouche nehi aur oh aayi nehi dekh ke, prithvi is tensed and after some time he goes from there for searching of sanyo and Arjun teases him kaya abhi se uske peche peche jar eh ho.Maya glance at him angrily.Prithvi do not give any attaintion to Arjun and goes from there.

Where in from of the lobby some bad guys teases sanyo and prithvi sees this and goes there and found there Vikram also.He ssaid leave her alone

right now.

Vikram:-Lo tumhara body guard aagaya.

Sanyo is very scared and tears flowing from her eyes.she looks at prithvi with help and hope.Seeing this ,Then,Prithvi without saying a word give a punch to vikram and vikram falls on the ground and blood flowing from his mouth.then his all friends attacks prithvi and sanyo screams at fear.

Here Pundir,Sanjam,chand, Arjun ,veer and dharam hears sanyo .They all runs there and sees the situation which is worse cause every friends of Vikram and attack prithvi .He defends well and attacks also.But ,when vikram picks a rod and attacks prithvi from behind but Pundir holds it and others attacks vikrams friends also.But, prithvi receives a cut on his arms and blood flowing from there slowly and sanyo notice this.Then, hotel guards come and take vikrma and his friends with them.Then, sanyo comes and helds prithvi's arms and said it's bleeding prithvi.bahut dard ho raha hain.

Prithvi loks at her lovingly and then sees tears flowing from her eyes and he take this drop of tear and said iske liye jada dard ho raha hain.

Sanyo looks at his eyes and lost their.Prithvi friends see this and move from there but Arjun doesn't move.

Then he slowly move from there and said hume idea,

Pundir tells everything to all the girls but stops when he heard Arjun .He stops and glances at him angrily .But Arjun tells every body dekho ek nehi do idea hain, agar koi sanyo ko kuch kahe toh prithvi is getting angry and agar koi lerke sanyo ke dosti kare toh prithvi is feeling jealous.

Sanjam:-Oh kaise, pehele wala toh samajh aaya.Lekin, iye doosri wale idea?

All boys looks confuse,then Arjun tells what he heard some time beforePrithvi ke hath mein sanyo ne aapna dupatta se bandh dia.Phir sanyo ne kaha vikram ne uska hath pakrke misbehave karna chaha.

Hearing this prithvi is getting angry and close his fist tightly and said uska himmat kaise hua hain, tumhe touch karne ki, main uska hath break karunga.

Sanyo:-Pls prithvi stop.

Prithvi:-Nehi, sanyo ,and shouts loud mein usko nehi chorunga, koi bhi tumha touch karna toh dur ki baat , dekhna bhi nehi 'but soon he realize what he said and stops. But sanyo looks at him without blinking her eyes and those eye are full teary and fill with love and respect and care.

Then both lost in to each other eyes.

so guyz, this was the update!
A big thank u to rakhi di for helping me out!
plz plz plz comment guyz!
love Zoah



Thanks for the lovely update zoah dear! ⭐️

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti



Thanks for the lovely update zoah dear! ⭐️

ue welcome di! thanks for liking it!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

im really sorry for the late update!
here is the Part 5! enjoy!
Dhram goes to the book section where sia is looking for some books on drama and play! Dharma keeps a distance from her and stops a little far from the book section and keeps on staring at her! She looks at him once and truns ver to the other side! Fially she gets the book she wanted,so she starts moving towards the counter! But before she could reach there she trips over carpet and dharma cathches her in his arms! They share a little eyelock for a few seconds! Suddenly sia brokes the eyelock and says, thanks!

Dharam: my pleasure!

Sia: if im not wrong u r in second year right?

Dharam: yes, hum ek hi class mein hai (smiled)

Sia: (surprisely) then how come we never met before then?

Dharma: (with instant answer) aap ne kabhi mujhe notice hi nahin kiya!

Sia: oh, by the way thanks for ur help warna I would ahve landed up in hospital by now!

Dharam: its ok! By the way im dharam!

Sia: hi (extending hands to shake) im sia!

Dharam: (shaking hands) I know!

Sia: pleasure to meet u! bye

Dharam: pleasures all mine! Bye tc

Sia goes to the counter to issue book and dharam (all exicted and jumping) to himself, wow! Finally I talked to her, we became friends! He startes walking towards the canteen! He is all excited and happy!

In canteen:

Seeing dharam coming,

Chand: aa gaye romeo 2009! Where were u?

Dharam: (blushing and his cheecks going all red) woh''.. mein , mein woh (prithvi cuts him in the middle)

Prithvi: dharam ye kya bakri ki tarah mein mein kar rahe ho? Aacha batao, baat huyi?

Dharam: ha prithvi, baat huyi! We became friend! We shake hands! Im soooooooooooo happy! (says all this in one breath)

Sanjam: chalo, ek aur aashiq badnaam hone ke liye tayaar ho gaya! (teacing dharam)

Samar: sanjam usko ched mat warna sia aa jayegi!

Sanjam and samar runs before dharam could catch them!

Sanyo was enjoying all this and had a big broad smile on her face! Prithvi notices this and starts staring at her! He loves the innocence on her face! He didn't know y but her smile makes prithvi smile too! He didn't that this is love but yes he didn't wanted to loose her at any cost!

Suddenly the bell rings! Everyone headed towards their classes! Everyone were together except samar, sanjam and vaishali. They were in same year but different class, Samar, vaishali and samjam reaches the class!

Vaishali enters the class and settles down on her seat, which is next to sanjam!

Samar's eyes were looking for someone! He looks everywhere but couldnot see anything! sanjam knew wt he is looking for!

Sanjam: dnt worry, woh aati hi hogi!

Samar: pata nahin yaar! Itni der toh kabhi nahin karti!

Then only a beautiful lady enters the class! She is wearing pink full sleeve top and black jeans, which is looking the absolutely stunning on her! She black shoes just perfect match to her clothes! She looks simple yet beautiful! She is holding couple of books and starts walking towards her seat! Samar could not take his eyes of her! She looks more beautiful with the big broad smile on her face! Yes she is pratha, prithvi's younger sister and samar's love lady! They both love each other but has not confessed yet! It is very obvious on their face that they love each other! She comes to samar and sits next to him! Samar is still lost in her beauty!

Samar to himself, y does she looks more beautiful each time I see her? (smiles)

Pratha: (with a smile) hi samar!

Samar: (with the same smile) hi pratha! Aaj late kyon ho gayi?

Pratha: who actually mein library books retund karne ke liye gayi thi, aur waha mujhe payal mil gayi! So baation me kab time pass ho gaya pata hi nahin chala! Sorry!

Samar: its ok!

The professor enters the classroom and everyone settled down! Sanajm takes a seat next to vaishali! vaishali kind of likes him but no one knows about it! She hasnot even told sanyo about it! She knows sanjam and her are good friends! She does not want o lose friendship for the sake of love that too one sided! Sanjam enjoys vaishali's company!

Finally the professor starts the lesson! (sorry guyz dnt knw much about Indian colleges, so making this up by watching films and dramas!)

Professor: good morning students! We are going to start new project! its based on indian history!To find out about Indian history, the college will be arranging for a trip to delhi! It has many historic places! But the condition is that whoever wants to go on the trip, they have to do a assignment based on a same concept Indian history!

Im sure u all will love this as im going to mix two classes together!

after the research we are arranging a play based on history but about that i will tell u later! so now crack with ur assignments!

In the other class:

Everyone enters the clas including prithvi, sanyo, chand, kamini (changed name, karnataki to kamini), dharam, sia, arjun, maya, pundir and payal! ! sanyo sits next to prithvi as there is no other seat empty! Sanyo is not really into books, whereas prithvi loves his books!

chand sits next to kamini and keeps staring at her as usual! She is looking really preety in red salwaar kammez! She suits that colour and its chand's favourite colour too! He couldn't takes his eyes off her!

Arjun and maya enters the class hlding each other's hands as they are guna get engaged soon! They are happy! They both sits down and shares an eyelock!

Dharam comes and sits on his regular seat! Tabhi sia waha aati hai! Seeing an empty seat, she asks

Sia: hi if u dnt mind can I sit here as no one is sitting here! (she asks nicely)

Dhara to himself (neki aur puch puch) to sia: of course! Tum yahan baith sakti ho!

Sia: thanks

Pundir sits down on the seat behind prithvi and payal comes and sits next to him! He hates sitting with girls but cuz of the professor he had to sit with payal!

Pundir: tumhe koi aur jagah nahin milti baithene ki liye? Hamesha yaha baithti ho! (showing anger)

Payal: oye mister mujhe bhi koi shaukh nahin hai yahan baithene ka! Woh to use khadush professor ne bola na isliye yahan baithna pada! Warna tumhare saath baithne toh door mujhe toh tumhe dekhna bhi pasand nahin hai!

Pundir: (with the same anger) mein bhi isileye tumhe jel raha hoon! Warna tumhare jaisi baddimaag ladki ke saath baithne ka mujhe bhi koi shaukh nahin! Got that?

Both turns their back to each other!

Arjun enjoying this fight and says to prithvi: phir se shuru ho gaya inka!

Prithvi: haan! Hamesha ladte hai, koi aur kaam nahin hai inko!

Pundir gives angry look to prithvi and arjun! They both got quiet!

The professor enters the class! he wishes everyone good morning!

Professor: good morning! I hope after holiday u r back to studies! So todays we are going start a new project! It is mainly based on Indian history! Im really soru that u all will enjoy this project as we going to mix two classes! Everyone cheered!

Professor: silent! I havenot finished yet( in a angry tone)! To find out about Indian history, the collefe will be arranging for a trip to delhi! It has many historic places! But the condition is that whoever wants to go on the trip, they have to do a assignment based on a same concept Indian history!

we are also going to arrange a play based on the history! but for onw just get on with ur assignment!

professor leaves and everyone gets excited hearing about trip!

prithvi was really happy cuz Indian history is his favourite subject! He looks at sanyo! She is bit tensed cuz she does not know much about Indian history, but she wants to go on the trip!

Prithvi: kya huwa sanyo? Y u looking tensed?

Sanyo: (in a slow tone) mujhe Indian history ke bare mein jyada nahin pata and I want to go on the trip!

prithvi smiles at this and says: dnt worry mein tumhari help karunga! sanyo: thanks, tum kitne sweet ho by god!
i hop u liked my update! plz do comment! they mean a lot to me!
thanks
love Zoah!


wow sorry for the late comment
wow such a beautiful update capturing superb moments...sounds fun and very exciting
as always a lovely and a fascinating update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey all, im really sorry for the late update! i was really busy!

Part 6
recap: proffesor tells everyone about the new project! prtha enters the story! prithvi tells that he will help her in completing the project!
the bell rings: proffesor leaves the class and then students too leaves!
Arjun: chalo prithvi, canteen chalte hai! 😛
Prithvi: nahin yaar, woh sanyo ko, i mean sanyogita ko assignment mein kuch help chahiye! isliye mein library ja raha hoon! 😳
Arjun: oh oh, to tere liye hamare paas waqt bhi nahin hai! 😆
prithvi: are nahin yaar! aise koi baat nahin hai!
Arjun: just joking chill pill! see ya around!
Arjun leaves with the rest of the gang!
Sanyo (feels guilty about cuz of her prithvi couldnt go with his friends): sorry prithvi, woh meri wajah se.......
(cutting her in between)
Prithvi: its ok, dnt be sorry! woh log mazak kar rahe the! (conselling her)
Sanyo: ok, chale!
Prithvi: ha chalo!
they both heads of towards the library! then only he remembers Veer, and stops in the middle of the way)
Sanyo: (looking at him) kya huwa? ruk kyun gaye?
Prithvi: woh Veer abhi tak college nahin aaya? i hope he is fine! i will ring him and find out!
Prithvi dials his number while sanyo sits on the banch nearby!
tring tring (veer picks the phone)
Veer: hello
Prithvi: hey veer its me prithvi! kahan ho tum?
Veer: are sorry woh , bhaiya ke kuch kaam ke liye rahe gaya tha!
prithvi: oh ok! par tumhe ek call kar dena chahiya na! 😡
veer: woh sorry prithvi, mein bhul gaya! 😭
prithvi: its ok! chal phir milte hai kal! bye
Veer bye
they both puts the phone down!
Sanyo (worryingly) kya huwa? kya kaha veer ne?
Prithvi: woh kuch nahin, bas kuch kaam then use! nways, chale!

Sanyo nobbes her head in positive and start walking along with prithvi!
in canteen:
Arjun, maya, chand, kamini, Pundir are sitting in canteen and chatting about prithvi and sanyo:
Arjun: guyz im telling u ki, prithvi is in love! 😊
Maya: how can u be so sure? woh dono aaj hi toh mile hai? (confused)
Sanjam comes and interuputes in between!
Sanjam: hey wonders, kya chal raha hai? i guess prithvi and sanyo ki love story! 😆
Arjun: tumhe kaise pata? 😲 (shocked)
Sanjam: well, mera take ye hai ki, aaj sabah se aap logo ke pass ko aur topic hi nahin hai! right?
Maya: correct
Sanjam: toh, do u guyz think ki ye love at first sight wala mamla hai?
Chand: ya i think so!
Sanjam: lekin guyz the probz is ke how r we guna find out?
Kamini: idea, as the proffesor said we are going on a trip to delhi right?
Chand: absolutely correct kamini! 😊 tum kabhi galat kaise ho sakti ho? 😆
Arjun: chand, stop it! carry on kamini bhabhi 😆 😆
everyone gigles and kamini blushes! 😳 😳
Kamini: kya arjun tum bhi? theek hai ab suno!
she tells them the paln but we dnt here it! (wait for it guyz)! everyones excited!
All: ab aayeja asli maza!
scene moves to library! (prithvi is busy teching her history while sanyo busy looking at him!)
Sanyo to herself (ye kitna handsome hai, bilkul mere rajkumar ki tarah,! meri kitni help ki usne) coming to her senses (oye sanyo tu mye kya soch rahi hai)
thats it guyz for today! i will update next part tomorow!
hope u like it! plz do comment/critisize!
love Zoah


wow zoah getting very exciting...prc sach mein kitna sweet hai...jab dekho ..he is always helping
wonderful update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 7

recap: wonders get to know about prithvi and sanyo and they make make plan for hte trip! here in the library prithvi teaching her history but sanyo too busy staring at him!
story ahead:
Sanyo still lost in prithvi's thoughts!
suddenly Prithvi looks at her and see her smiling in thoughts and snaps his fingers in order to bring back to the earth!
Prithvi: kaha kho gayi?
Sanyo: (coming back to senses) woh kuch nahin! bas m... ein
(cutting her in between)
Prithvi: its ok! shall we go to canteen?
Sanyo: ya sure! thanks for the help!
Prithvi: anytime
Sanyo smiles at this and both leave towards canteen!
Sanyo(while walking): ek baat puchu?
Prithvi: pucho!
Sanyo: tum itne chup kyun rahte ho by god? bilkul Khamoshi ke Naa patekar ki tarah! (lolz)
Prithvi: what?
Sanyo: what kya? tum bone ke liye paise lete ho?
Prithvi: nahin bas, mujhe jyada bolna accha nahin lagta!
Sanyo: accha hai! mujhe tumhari bolti bandh nahin karni padegi! lolz
Prithvi: ya (lolz)
they reaches canteen and see everyone waiting for them! they take sits with them , then sanyo realises that Vaishali is missing from there! she asks Sanjam.
Sanyo: are sanjam, tumne vaishali ko kahin dekha? woh tumhare class mein hi thi na?
Sanjam: yes shayad woh pratha se baat kar rahi hogi!
Sanyo: who is she?
Prithvi: she is younger sister! she is in same class as vaishali!
Sanyo: ok!
they all talks about their lives and what they want to do in future! sanyo got along with all of them very well! she never felt that this is her first day at college!
in the class:
everyone left the class except Pratha and Vaishali! Pratha comes to Vaishali and asks y is she worried?
Pratha (with concern) wts up? koi problem hai?
Vaishali: nop! koi problem nahin hai!
Pratha: mein janti hoo kya problme hai? u love him dnt u?
Vaishali (shocked): what? love who?
Pratha: come on yaar! mein janti hoo tu sanjam se pyar kati hai, toh phir y dnt u tell him?
Vaishali: nahin! sapna tutne se toh accha hai ki adhure sapne mein hi jiya jaye! (wiping her tears)
Pratha: dnt worry! tumhara sapna nahin tutega!
Vaishali: thanks! lets go to canteen! mujhe tumhe apni best friend se milana hai!
Pratha: ok come on!
they both goes to the canteen and see everyone busy chatting with everyone!
Prithvi sees her!
prithvi: hey sis, wts up?
Pratha: nofin bhai!
Prithvi: aaj tu bahut jaldi aa gayi college?
Pratha: woh bas kuch books return karni thi isliye!
tabhi, she sees a new face in the gang!
vaishali (coming closer to sanyo): pratha meet sanyo! my best friend! and (turnnig to sanyo) sanyo ye hai Prahta! my friend and Prithvi's younger sister!
Pratha: hi sanyo! (extending her hand ot shake)
Sanyo (shaking hands) hi Pratha, pleasure to meet!
Pratha: same here!
pratha and vaishali joins the rest of them! then, kamini and sanjam comes to both of them and take them to a side!
kamini: pratha and vaishali, can u both plz come here for 2 mins?
Pratha and vaishali going on a side and sanjam follows them behind!
Pratha: kya kuwa kamini!
Kamini tell both of them about prithvi and sanyo and both shocked to hear this! they also tells them the plan they guna be carried out on the trip! both agrees with it!
hey guyz hope u liked it!
plz do comment/critisize!
love Zoah


zoah u r mindblowing....such a mind blowing update...am speechless....u know in one update u make me very happy, as i enjoy reading ur awesome update
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Posted: 15 years ago
zoah it was pleasure reding ur ff updates...they were awesome and wonderful...please update the next part ...ab aur intezaar nahi hota
thank u for ur great updates
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona


wow sorry for the late comment
wow such a beautiful update capturing superb moments...sounds fun and very exciting
as always a lovely and a fascinating update

thanks for liking it!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona


wow zoah getting very exciting...prc sach mein kitna sweet hai...jab dekho ..he is always helping
wonderful update

thanks for appreciating! yes prc is really sweet!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona


zoah u r mindblowing....such a mind blowing update...am speechless....u know in one update u make me very happy, as i enjoy reading ur awesome update

awww, thats really swwet of u shona di, thanks a ton for appreciating my writing! glad that i atleast make u smile!

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