KaHaNi MeRi TuMhArI! Note&Last part Pg 36!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi all! im attempting writing ff for thr first time in my life! i know im nothing compare to all the others! plz give me ur feedback if i should continue or not!
Index:
Intro: Pg 1
Part 1: Pg 3
Part 2: Pg 5
Promo: Pg 8
Part 3: Pg 10
Promo: Pg 14
Part 4: Pg 15
Part 5: Pg 19
Part 6: Pg 21
Part 7: Pg 23
Promo: Pg 26
Part 8: Pg 29
Part 9: Pg 29
Part 10: Pg 32
Part 11: Pg 36

here is the character intro:
the story is about college life, friends, love, romance!

prithvi: he is in college second year! he is sensible, mature, studious, intelligent, handsome! he loves his books!

sanyo: she is new at college, first year! she is bubbly, talkative, full of liveliness! she is loves SRK! her all tym fav movie is DDLJ! like every other girl even she dreams about her prince charming, who will come on white horse and take her away in world of love and romance! she calls the prince "raj"!

vaishali: she is sanyo's best friend!

arjun: prithvi's friend and funniest perosn in the circle

pundir: prithvi's friend and angry young man! he never get along with girls!

chand: prithvi's friend! he is very cute and sweet person! he is secrectly in love with his mystrey girl (she will enter the story later on)

samar: samar is love with prithvi's younger sister pratha but scared to confess it!

veer: veer is brave and smart boy! he is very simple and clear!

dharam: dharam is veer's best friend! they became friends when dharam saved veer from an accident!

samjam: samjam isa big time flirt! he loves flirting! but he is clear about what he is doing and what he will do in future!

their circle called 8 wonders!

the 8 wonders are the main limelight of the college! every girl wants to be with them!

i have also included payal (pundir's love interest), sia dharam's love interest), shera (veer' love interest), maya (arjun's finance), karanakiti (sorry guyz dnt knw her name chand's interest)

the bad guyz is none other than vikram! he is known as vicky! he is the son of the college principal! he thinks he is tooooooooooooooooooo cool! he loves bullying others!


guyz i know its not good, but plz tell me if i continue or not!
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thanks
love Zoah


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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow zoah dear............I really liked ur intro👏👏...........n thanks 4 including dharam n veer also.........its based on modern life so i m sure all will love it..........just waiting 4 ur story to start..........go ahead buddy👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rumela711926

wow v. nice plz conti 👏



thank u rumi!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

wow zoah dear............I really liked ur intro👏👏...........n thanks 4 including dharam n veer also.........its based on modern life so i m sure all will love it..........just waiting 4 ur story to start..........go ahead buddy👏👏



thanks a lot kalyani!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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most welcome😃
and the added one r too good👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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rumi wt is the name of chand's love interest? is it karnakati?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

rumi wt is the name of chand's love interest? is it karnakati?

its karnataki dear😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan


its karnataki dear😆😆



thanks kalyani!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow, very good character intro sweety.Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow sweeto..clg life..interesting jaan..do continue

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