Journey of Love FF update page 3

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PROMO 1

You see a pretty little girl running away from a handsome little boy in fields covered with flowers and fresh green grass. Once and a while you see the girl turn around and stick her tongue out at the boy, and then the camera zooms onto the dashing smile of the boy. The camera points to the sky now, and all of a sudden the sky starts to turn black with gray clouds giving off hard rain. You see the girl stop and look around for the boy but he is nowhere in sight. The rain drenches the girl and out of fear she faints and you see her body sprawled on the wet grass.&amp;nbsp; The camera keeps zooming towards her eyes and then everything goes pitch black and you hear a scream.

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NOTE: T😕...( NO ONE IN MY STOry is a real&amp;nbsp; plz don't mind

CHARACTER ANALYSIS

Anas- He is not a superstar yet but he goes to Soul Music academy and he is already done with his first year there. He has his mom(Sunila) dad(Narendra) and an older brother(Shobit)....Rich like in KYPH

Shobit-Works at his dad's company and is in love with Mishty but no one knows this.

Sunila-stay at home mom

Altaf-He and his son organize concerts...

Rizwana- Bose-Also loves Karthik but they both dont know they love each other....typical indian type...(not related to Irfani in this) has no siblings and no one knows hse loves Shobit

Rupa-Single mom and loves her daughter mishty a lot

Irfan-Lives in the U.S has no parents but growing up he lived with his Aunt and Uncle...He is a fashion Designer

Sheetal-heart broken girl wants to go to Mumbai&amp;nbsp;to join Soul music acadmy....

NOTE:MORE CHARACTER WILL COME LATER ON AND YOU WILL LEARN MORE ABOUT THESE CHARACTER AS THE STORY GOES ON!!!!

hope you guys enjoy the promos and character analysis i will try and start the story tommorow it all depends how much hw i have...

hope you guys like it and pllzzzz doo tell me what you guys think and i would like both good and bad comments that way i know where i can improve!!!

ENJOY!!!

Edited by rumela711926 - 15 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 15 years ago

Wow rumi wonderful promos and characters. khub bhalo suru korechis.
Continue soon dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice dear do continue i will keep checking it 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

wah rumela narendra jha ko tum ne Anas ka paap bana diya 😉 😆 😆

oh my God 😉 😆

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
Wow rumi wonderful promos and characters. khub bhalo suru korechis.
Continue soon dear.

dhonnobaad will start soon
thanku so much😳

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Originally posted by: maria_awan
nice dear do continue i will keep checking it 😉

thankuuu soooooooooo much😉

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Originally posted by: urooj101
wah rumela narendra jha ko tum ne Anas ka paap bana diya 😉 😆 😆

oh my God 😉 😆

papa ho ya beta ki faraak panda hai they both look da same papa ho ya beta its d same just like saas bahu drama kyon kiska papa hai kyon kiska beta kisi ko pata neahi chalega lolzzzz😆😆😆😆😆

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Originally posted by: rumela711926
papa ho ya beta ki faraak panda hai they both look da same papa ho ya beta its d same just like saas bahu drama kyon kiska papa hai kyon kiska beta kisi ko pata neahi chalega lolzzzz😆😆😆😆😆

haan haan rumi tum toh sab kuch kar doh 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

wow rumi v. nice ff...well presented characters...go ahead and write a lovely ff

good luck huni

post the next part

thanks

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1st Part

You see the sun rising up above of the clouds in Nainital, and when the sun is fully shining in the air you see it shining through the window of a very rich 3 story house. When the camera goes through the window and into the room you see the outline of a crumpled figure on the bed that keeps tossing and turning. After a little while the figure turns around you see it is none othere then Sheetal!

She turned over in bed, ignoring the sun's call to wake up. Not to be ignored, it shone into a mirror standing on the right side of Sheetal's room, reflecting a bright glare onto her sleepy eyes. "Okay, I'm awake," she said groggily, sitting up. Satisfied with her acknowledgement of the new day, the sun dispersed it's reflection, leaving Sheetal to rub her stunned eyes. Though she wanted to move the mirror, the glare served as a useful alarm clock.

There was a knock on the door making Sheetal returns from her thoughts.

(Maid=M) (Sheetal=S)
M=Sheetal dear your dad says to get up and get dressed quickly because you have to go to the airport...you dont want to miss your flight to the U.S....
S=Sh*t thats today?
M=yes it is...now hurry up your dad is getting angry!!!
Sheetal quickly scrambled out of bed and ran into the bathroom.....after a while you see her come out of the bathroom wearing faded blue jeans and a baby pink top that says love me in red letters...

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Next you see the gates of a house known as the Rashid Mansion. You go through the gates and then the fancy front door.The camera takes you up a flight of stairs and then the door right opposite of the stairs open and you see a the figure of a guy sleeping. It takes you to the face of the guy and it our dear Anas is sleeping with a cute smile on his face!!

(Sunila=S)(Angad=A)

S-Anas beta wake up it is 10:00 and you have to go to the airport...
A-(no response for a while then comes a..hmmmm)
S-Anas your flight is in 2 hours hurry up and get ready!!! You have to go to the U.S for Irfan's wedding....
A-(Anas shoots out of bed and runs to the bathroom) sry mom i totally forgot i will be down in 10 minutes...
S-okay beta hurry up...

You see anas come out of the bathroom looking really hot in blue jeans and white vest that is half open....he was about to go downstairs but he comes back in his room open a box and takes out a picture of a little boy and a girl posing...tears well up in his eyes but he quickly wipes them and goes downstairs.....

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Sheetal is shown in a taxi and then she is dropped off at the airport she gives the guy some money and checks in....Right when Sheetal checks in you are taken outside the sirport where a red beauty comes up and Anas comes out...he too checks in and then goes and gets something to eat...By the time he comes back from eating everyone is in a line about to board the plane he too gets in line and he behind Sheetal ...they both board their plane and Sheetal's seat is right in front of Anas's seat....
As the plane is about to board Sheetal gets nervous and hold on to her seat handle tight but when the plane gets in the air she relaxes..Anas the whole time is just listening to music...as Sheetal looks out the window her thoughts drift back to 13 years ago (Sheetal is 18 and Anas is 20 now)......

You see winds blowing at record high miles, trash hurling around in the air, roofs of houses being ripped off, and some small animals are in the air too....Soon you see water starting to pile up and an older and little sister fighting like cats and dogs....

(Older sister-O) (younger sister-Y)

O-why are you so worried nothing will happen to mom and dad?
Y-How do you know? and why do you care anyway all you care for is your happiness. Mom and Dad dont see what you are rly like you act all nicey nice in front of them but you are an animal to me. You treat me like garbage you dont care what happens to me for all you care i could die and you woudlnt look twice. You are the worst older sister ever. You...(you never heard what else she said because a whole bunch of rubble and grabege and water came their way so the sound was drowned out....)
O-Just shut-up Sheetal i dont need to hear anything from you (and she gives Sheetal a push and Sheetal falls in to the water..she floats along with the current and when the older sister realized what she did she was like uh-oh....

(DO NOT FORGET Sheetal IS 5 AT THIS TIME AND HER OLDER SISTER IS 15)
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Sunila=S Narendra=N Shobit=Sh Little Angad=A

(ANAS IS 7 AND SHOBIT 10)

S- kids come one lets go here we will be safe over here until the flood passes by...
A-but Sheetal she was home alone!!!
N-Anas she has her older sister with her....
A-her older sister doesnt care for her we have to get her!!!
N-we cant we cant risk our lives now come on!!
Sh-come one anas dont worry Sheetal will be alright...
A-NO!! we have to find her i cant let anything happen to i dont know what i would do if something bad happens to her...
S-Dont worry she will be fine!!!
(and at this point the camera goes black and you see the picture of little Sheetal in the hospital unconcious with her older sister teary eyed looking at her....At that moment the doctor comes in and says i am sorry she will not live their is nothing we can do we cant get a heart transplant in time she will not make it....
O sister- (to herself) she was right i was a horrible sister i only thought of myself i never thought of her!!! and she runs out of the room crying...

(FYI: Sheetal's parents were killed in the flood and all the rubble caused Sheetal to have heart problems....Anas and family survived but Anas has been paranoid about Sheetal and now he and family are out to find them)

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Anas and family go to the missing family place and they look at the bodies and are shocked to she Hina and Aditi dead!! Anas gets tears in his eyes and prays that nothing happened to Sheetal...

OKAY THAT IS IT FOR NOW I HAVE A BUNCH OF HOMEWORK WAITING FOR ME!!!

PREVIEW:FIND OUT HOW SHEETAL LIVED AND WHERE SHE WENT BECUASE HER PARENTS ARE DEAD!!!!

pllzzz tell me what you guys think!!!

Edited by rumela711926 - 15 years ago

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