#4 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai?????(AR)note:149

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KYA PYAR AISA BHI HO SAKTA HAI-SECOND JOURNEY CONTINUED...

4TH THREAD

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for your kind support.. without you kpabhsh might not've reach here... thanks

{ designed by neha..aka Neha_luvPRB}

thanks nehaa for designing these wonderful pics,really can't appreciate your work in words... these pics're outstanding, love you dear... and thanks once again...

{ credit goes to riddhi aka Ridds, thanks for this wonderful photo dear}

after one year...aarish/ardhaan looks somewhat like above

maine bahut try kiya hamare lil angel ki photo search karne ki but wo mujhe nahi mila kahi bhi, to ab aap idea le lijiye ki wo aisa hi golu-molu angel kind of hai, jiske cheeks par dim padte hai, eyes armaan jaisi, and nose riddhima jaisi, smile naughty+very true jo seedha dil tak jaati ho, aankhein jo sab kuch express karti ho aur jinse sirf pyar ki baarish hoti hai, ya jinme kuch shararat chal rahi ho,color fair but not proper white, a bit fare than armaan, cheeks par hamesha halki sa pinkish sa shade rehta ho, hamesha glowing face... ab aap khud visualize karo ki wo dikhne mai kaisa hoga, coz mujhe koi pic nahi mili jisse aap log bhi 1000 baar dekhen phir bhi mann na bhare, to khud assume kijiye image apne AArish/Ardhaan ki...

maine dono naam isliye rakhe coz kuch log aarish keh rahe the aur kuch ardhaan, mai confuse ho gayi aur confusion se bachne ka bas yehi tareeka mila😆, ab jisne jo bulana hai bullaate rahiye..😊, this's all about aarish/ardhaan...

List of songs that're used in ff till date with their movies/album names


~~Songs - Movies~~


* Hain meri saason mai mere piya- SAINIK
(wedding) (part-21)


* kitni hasrat hai (engagement) -
SAINIK
(part-14)

* piya lagi lagan (engagement) -DAAG-THE FIRE
(part-15)

* chahe jo tumhe pure dil se -
KAL HO NA HO (part-5)(paragraph of title song)


* aaiye aapka intejar tha (part-14) -
VIJAYPATH
(engagement welcum song)

* mera hi khoone jigar (part-15)
- RAM TERI GANGA MAILI
(engagement[sun sahiba sun])

* humrahi mere humrahi -
DO DILON KI DASTAAN

(part- 134)

* saiyan ji se chupke (godbharayi) -
BETA
(part-135[A])

* mai boli ki laana tu imli ka daana
- HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN
(godbharayi) (part-135[B])
(paragraph of didi tera devar deewana)

* sollah shingaar karke goddibharayi le -
FILHAAL
(godbharayi) (part-135[B])
(in original song instead of maami "naani"
and instead of taaya "chacha" is there)


* nahi ye ho nahi sakta -
BARSAT (sangeet ceremony)(part-17)

* chana ve chana (part-31)
- RAQEEB

(their first romantic night)

* tumhare siwa kuch na chahat karienge
- TUM BIN(part-43)

* jeeti hun tumhe dekh kar (part-61) -
AKHIYON KE JHAROKHON SE
(paragraph of tittle song)

* hai teri inayat tujhse mili hai
- JANNAT

(part-61) (paragraph of haan tu hai )

* do me a favor lets play holi
- WAQT
(holi special) (part-64)

* teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka (part-69)
- KOI AAP SA(paragraph of tere dil ka mere dil se)

* zindagi yun luta dun ek baar -
AASHIQ BANAYA AAPNE
(part-70)

* deewanepan ka nasha sari
- SANAM

(part-74) (paragraph of khuda
kare mohabbat mai ye)

* thoda sa pyar hua hai thoda
- MAINE DIL TUJHKO DIYA (part-83)
(I'd done little changes in paragraph)

* jee ye chahe bana ke aanchal
- MAINE PYAR KIYA

(part-86)(paragraph of dil deewana)

* meri duniya hai tujhme kahi
- VASTAV
(part-99)(1st marriage anniversary)

* kitne dur dur ho
- DIL TO PAGAL HAI
(part-99)(lines of ek duje ke vaaste)

* dheere dheere pyar ko
- PHOOL AUR KAANTE
(part-99)

* ek din ke liye ek pal ke liye
- AA AB LAUT CHALEN(part-99) (para of title song)

* mere pyar ki umar ho itni sanam
- WAARIS
(part-99)

* tu khuda hai mera
- SAAYA
(part-99)(song-ey meri jindagi)

* dil deewana na jaane kab
- DAAG-THE FIRE
(part-119)

* kuch bhi nahi tha
- SHADI KAR KE PHAS GAYA YAAR(part-123)

* yaara dildara ve - ZINDAGI KHOOBSURAT HAI

(part-152)

* mere rang mai rangne waali - MAINE PYAR KIYA (part-153)

* deewana hai ye mann -CHORI CHORI CHUPKE CHUPKE (part-158)

*aisa sama naa hota - ZAMEEN ASMAAN (part-161)



Songs - Albums

* preet li lat mujhe aisi laagi -TERI DEEWANIby Kailash Kher
(tere naam se jee lu) (part-15,17)

* tu meri jaan hai -
TU MERI JAAN HAI by Kailash Kher
(part-17)


(Ifanyone want me to post the download links of above songs, then tell me/pm me, i'll update that.)
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* either post points out of 10 for the part,

* either use words bad, good, very good and excellent..

bad: if you find that writing's very poor, didn't impress you at all, if you find part's useless

good: it means 50-50, neither too impressive nor too bad, atleast you didn't feel bore while reading

very good: quiet impressive, but still something is missing...

excellent: nothing can be added in that part, it's complete in itself, you enjoyed it while reading and wish to read once again

ab aap sab hi iss list ke according na chalna shuru kar dena, ye sirf unke liye hai jo mujh jaise bechare words ke maare hai😆, jo apni feelings theek se express nahi kar sakte, unki help ke liye sirf ye option hai, taaki jaise hi part reading khatam ho to confusion na ho ki ab unhe kya likhna hai, simply type one word or 1 digit😆😆... and no cheating kahi ab sab hi sochne lag jayein ki hum bhi sirf 1 word aur 1 digit post kar dein.. aapke comments se hi mujhe apni performance pata chalti hai, to kanjusi na kiya karo comment karne mai...😊😊😊

index

address

1st thread(parts:1-80)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1056448/kya-pyar-aisa-b-ho-sakta-hai-part-80-note-175

2nd thread(parts:81-117)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1127130/2kya-pyar-aisa-b-ho-sakta-hai-ar-part-117-153

3rd thread(parts:118-143)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1191385/3-kya-pyar-aisa-bhi-ho-skta-hai-ar-note-151

this thread

parts - link address

144 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/24817975

145 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25032647

146 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25140564

147-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25200503

148-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25295952

149-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25456621

150- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25596682

151- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/25817043

152- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/26173916

153 -https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/26372787

154-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/26719556

155-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/26812715

156-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/26915310

157--https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/27039015

158-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/27816446

159-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/28004513

160-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/28237408

161(A)-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/28693105

161(B)-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/28473012

162-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/28693105

163-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/29230021


Address of 5th thread

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1376146/5kya-pyar-aisa-bi-ho-skta-hai-ar-note-153


thanks a lot guys for your wonderful support, finally we're started with 4th thread...thanks, love you all😊😊😊

lots of luv

ankita



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Riddhima entered in O.T where as sister savita made her way towards neuro section, she crossed kids room busy in showering affection on aarish'. And finally entered in lift'. Still talking babishly with aarish, suddenly she felt a tug as if someone is pulling her trouser, she looked down and was shocked to see harsh' first she's shocked coz he's reacting and secondly how come he entered in lift' she knelt down to settle herself upto his level'

S.S: harsh aap???? Aap theek'. Kaise' (actually she didn't understanding how to react)(harsh didn't reacted just kept on looking baby) aur aap yaha par kaise aaye beta??? Aapko to apne room mai hona chahiye tha'.(harsh slightly bends and caressed baby's head' aarish slightly acted as if "wo kehte haina machal raha tha" coz he's loud awake that time, harsh slightly smiled for the first time in last 1 and a half months) aapki mummy ne aapko akele kaise aane de diya, abhi to aap theek bhi nahi ho aur itne bade hospital mai akele ghum ho gaye to'

challo apni mummy ke pass' (she tried to hold his hand which he pulled with a jerk and then bends down kisses on baby cheeks, aarish passed a sweet smile, then harsh holds his lil hand and mumbled bady'bady'.(baby) Then opened his little arms as he himself's 2 years old, and asked with eyes to sister please give baby to me, sister shaked her head) nahi beta aap abhi bahut chotte ho, aap baby ko nahi sambhal paoge,

Harsh: peas,mai bayeee shath thelunda'(hee hee hee) (please mai baby ke saath khelunga)

S.S: nahi beta baby ko uske papa ke pass lekar jaana hai' (harsh again pleaded with watery eyes, atlast sister melted, they moved out from lift and then she asked harsh to sit properly in room next to lift and placed baby in his lap.. harsh started playing with him and was giggling when saw aarish little antics' sister was feeling great coz she's seeing harsh smiling after a long time'

On other side muskaan, atul, rahul were worried coz harsh's missing from room, as soon as harsh saw that baby again he quietly got down from and started following sister savita without telling his parents, where as rahul-muskaan was busy in sharing happiness and atul's out' when finally rahul turned towards harsh's bed they came to know that he's missing and they started searching him'.

Where as harsh kept on playing with him enjoying, laughing and clapping as if he's got the worlds best toy, aarish was busy in doing yoga (hee hee) (sometimes holding his leg, sometimes holding his hands and very lightly mumbling aaaaa' eeee'., sometimes sucking his fingure, then blushing himself and smiling' many were gathered in that room looking at the 2 child, suddenly sister savita realizes that it's late she should go now, so she took aarish carefully, ahrsh holds aarish hands and shakes his head..

S.S: beta ab mujhe jaane do, aapki mumy bhi aapko dhund rahi hongi, challo aap apni mummy ke paas' (he almost started crying) okk sirf 5 minutes aur.. (he nodded, rahul-muskaan after searching for harsh on 7th floor came down with worried faces, suddenly heard some known gigglings as soon as came out from lift and peeped inside the room and found harsh, they entered in room quickly and hugged harsh tightly'.

Mu: harsh tum kaha challe gaye the beta, aapke mummy papa kitne pareshan ho gaye the, aur aap yaha niche aaye kaise, mummy ko kyu nahi bataya, pata hai mumy kitna darr gayi thi' (again kissing on his cheeks' but harsh again didn't reacted as if he didn't heard'. And for the first time muskaan-rahul gaze now fell on baby, they too were kept on looking him for sometime and unknowingly mumbled waooo kitna pyara bacha hai' they caressed baby's head, tried to take him but harsh hold her hand and shaked his head, again started playing with him and laughing, muskaan-rahul felt blissful after seeing their child happy after so long, they wished "iski hassi ko kissi ki najar na lage, hamesha aisa hi khush rahe" they kept on looking their laughing child feeling deeply happy, after so many days they too smiled with their baby, harsh was playing when sister savita again tried to take baby'

Mu: kya hua sister savita???

S.S: mujhe ardhaan ko lekar jaana hai.. iske papa ke pass' (muskaan didn't said anything coz she knew that she'd no right to stop anyone's child, but harsh started crying badly'. Now how can anyone see their child crying)

Mu: sister aap thodi daer aur rehne dijiye isse yaha'

S.S: par meri duty khatam ho chukki hai aur mujhe ghar jaana hai, uss se pehle mujhe ardhaan ko..

Mu: hum khud dekar aayenge aarish ko uske papa ke pass..

S.S: par..

Ra: (cutting her) hum de aayenge aarish ko, aap befikar hokar ghar jaiye..

S.S: par dr. riddhi..

Ra: (again cutting her, and this time with slight irritation) humne kaha na hum de aayenge, aapki duty khatam ho gayi hai, aap jaa sakti hai'

S.S: par dr. riddhi (rahul threw an angry look, that scared sister savita, she's not getting what to do now, she can't leave aarish here.. she's lost in thoughts when)

Ra: ab aap yaha kyu khaddi hai, jaiye ya to koi kaam kijiye ya phir ghar jaiye'.(sister savita atlast came out from room thinking ab mai kya karun'. In between muskaan asked harsh to move in canteen and we'll have lot of meals there, so they moved towards canteen with muskaan holding aarish'.)

On other side riddhima came out from O.T with excitement as she's able to save mother and her daughter without any difficulty, now she's excited to meet her own baby, she quickly washed her hands and rushed towards 4th floor, it has been 2 hours since she looked aarish and now was very impatient, she found lift busy and being impatient she's finding difficult to stand and wait for lift so she rushed down from stairs, her heartbeats were very high when she reached on 4th floor, but still she ran in armaan's room' his room was filled with patients, yet when he saw riddhima on door with that much high beats, he immediately came to her, holds her hand, she slightly rests her head on his chest, he rubbed her back and moved his one arm around her so as to comfort her properly and then asked sister to bring 1 glass of water, after having water she felt relaxed'

A: riddhima tum iss haalat mai..

R: wo lift busy thi to stairs par se' (she's looking around as if searching something)

A: kya hua, kya dhund rahi ho, aur tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayi ya phir se aayi ho mujhse surprise dene' and by the way hamara chotta sa prince kaha hai????

R: armaan majak mat karo, mujhe pehle aarish se milna hai, batao kaha hai???

A: (with surprise) majak to tum kar rahi ho, aarish yaha kaise aayega, usse to tum lekar gayi thi'

R: sister savita ke saath bheja to tha aarish ko tumhare pass coz mai to O.T mai challi gayi thi'

A: (now tense) par wo to mere pass aayi hi nahi ek baar bhi, aarish kaha hai riddhima' (from her hand glass dropped)

R: (with nervousness) kyaa??? Par maine to unhe kaha tha ki tumhare paas lekar jayein'(armaan seeing her nervous and scared)

A: (placing his hand on her shoulder) it's ok riddhima yahi par hoga aur kaha jayega, koi khelne lag gaya hoga uske saath, challo dekhte hai' (she almost rushed, and armaan followed her, both were panic and their heart was literally coming out from their body)

On other side, after collecting meals from cafeteria, they came in rahul's cabin, harsh's happy now but aarish started getting irritated, in between sobbing also....

Riddhima and armaan was looking for aarish in each and every room, when they're on 2nd floor, riddhima finally break into tears, was very scared in heart and mumbling aarish aap kaha ho betu'.

A: riddhima aise thodi na rote hai, hum dhund rahein hai na....(clearing her tears)

R: armaan mujhe darr lag raha hai, aarish ko bhuk bhi lagi hogi, 3 hours ho gaye usne kuch nahi liya'.. humara bacha bhuka hoga armaan'. (crying)

A: bass riddhima'. (he hardly was able to speak this, he's also feeling as if someone is drawing his breathes away from his body but somehow he's controlling himself.. they moved towards ground floor)

Rahul cabin'

Mu: harsh baad mai khelna beta pehle kuch kha lo.. (harsh shaked his head, suddenly he stood up from his seat) kya hua??? Kuch chahiye?? (he shaked his head) bathroom jaana hai??? (seeing his face expressions, he nodded, muskaan took him in her arms) oe khotte(pointing to rahul) tu yaha par bache ke pass hi rahiyo aur khabardaar jo uske saath chedkhaani ki ya rulaane ki koshish ki to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga, mai abhi aati hun'.

Ra: acha meri maa, ab jaa bhi'

muskaan left, rahul started caressing baby, he took in his arms and was talking to him babishly, feeling happy thinking iske parents ko kitna proud hota hoga apne bache ko dekhkar,kitna ajeeb sa khichaav hai iss bache mai, aur kitna alag hai, koi chidchidahat nahi, har waqt hasta rehta hai, aajtak aisa bacha kabhi nahi dekha, pata nahi kyu aur kya alag hai' he kept on wondering' and playing with him, again and again loosing himself on his innocent face, which's slightly having a dimpled smile'.

Though aarish was irritated in heart and he's sobbing in between yet he look pretty, rahul took hi tiny palms and kissed it, then on the verge of kissing him on head, his phone started ringing, he took the call but unable to hear may be due to signals, so he came out with baby in his arms and looked worried when heard about his patient's condition' he looked around and searched for muskaan so that he could handle baby to her and rush to his patient but she was nowhere to be seen, he asked one nurse to take care of baby and himself rushed to OT without listening her'

nurse started played with aarish when there's strict announcement made for her which scared her as she was supposed to be in OT with the required drugs,she placed aarish on bench and rushed towards OT' aarish for few minutes kept on trying punching and kicking in air, in between making crying faces but himself calmed down, again started playing, on other side muskaan with harsh entered in cafeteria again as she wanted to order coffee and chips for harsh'. And from other door dr. shashank and anjali took leave from caferteria, shashank was looking quiet angry'

Sh: tum itni jiddi kyu ho anjali??? (while walking in corridor)

An: papa maine keh diya na mujhe divorce chahiye to bas chahiye'

Sh: (with irritation and anger) shaadi kya gudde gudiyon ka khel hai, jab man kiya kar li jab man kiya divorce le liya, anjali tumne khud hi decision liya tha atul se shaadi karne ka, aur ab khud hi uss se divorce lena chahti ho'.

An: haan mai chahti hun uss se divorce lena, kyunki wo mujhe koi khushi nahi de sakta..

Sh: kya khushi nahi di usne tumhe, tumhari khushi ke liye usne apna ghar choda aur hamare ghar aakar rehne laga itna khuddar hone ke bawjood, jo tumne kaha hamesha tumhare decision ko sir aankhon par rakha, hamesha koshish kari ki tumhe kissi cheez ki complain na ho, kaunsi khushi nahi di usne tumhe??? (he tried to make her understand as his heart was sinking with the thought that his daughter's taking wrong decision that might destroy her life, his reputation too')

An: papa mujhe husband chahiye naukar nahi, ye kaam to koi naukar bhi kar sakta hai'

Sh: (almost shouted) anjaliii' he's your husband, have some respect'

An: aise husband ki respect nahi ki jaati jiski khud ki koi self-respect na ho' I hate him, mai uske saath 1 minute bhi tolerate nahi kar sakti'

Sh: to tumne shaadi kyu ki thi anjali' tumne to ghar se bhagne tak ka faisla kar liya tha wo kya tha'

An: I's mad that time but not now' it's just a stupid attraction..(she makes a face)

Sh: anjali atul tumse bahut pyar.

An: (cutting him and with anger) papa aap atul ki itni side kyu le rahe ho, aapko to khush hona chahiye ki aapki beti ki aankhein jaldi khul gayi'.

suddenly both stopped when heard baby chuckles.."eeeeee" "eeeee", shashank first tried to ignore and wanna resume his conversation, but as soon as he's on the verge of crossing child, his foot itself stopped as if someone's holding his foot tightly' he looked at child and for a moment his heart beat skipped seeing the glow on baby's face'. For a moment his mind stopped working only his heart's working, baby's lost on his own and dr shashank was lost with baby'. As if all his frustration, anger, irritation, nervousness was taken away with baby chuckles, so as anjali'

both remained still like everyone who so ever looks aarish for the first time' aarish was sucking his own lips and in between put one fingure in his mouth, then his hand out immediately from mouth, may be didn't like his hand taste'.he's looking with his tiny eyes here and there as if searching for someone and was becoming impatient again and again when found that someone missing'. Dr. shashank slightly moved forward and bend down a little wants to caress baby but before he could his tiny hands that was in air grabbed his fingure'.

Dr. shashank felt his heart's thumping inside his body'. For the first time he's feeling something new that he never felt in his life, baby passed a lil smile to which shashank unknowingly gave him blessings from the core of his heart, and anjali's also going through the same pool of emotions, like everyone she thought he's so different, thinking kyu man nahi bhar raha isse dekhne se' kya itna pyara bacha bhi ho sakta hai' iske chehre se ek ajeeb sa noor kaise chalak raha hai, iss se dekhkar itna sukoon kyu mil raha hai, jaise iske baad aur kuch bhi duniya mai dekhne ke kaabil na raha ho,

aaj tak itni satisfaction nahi mili' she kept on looking him, where as aarish who first hold shashank's fingure, then anjali.. after exploring their fingures he again became impatient may be he'd discovered that he doesn't know this touch' and he started crying a bit, feeling hungry and sleepy too'. Anjali and dr. shashank felt where is his parents??? Kitne careless hai wo log jo apne bache ko iss tarah bench par akela chod kar challe gaye, kya unhe apne bache ki koi parwah nahi, kaise maa baap hai..

like this many questions were arising in their heart, along with this aarish started crying a bit louder as now he's very irritated and impatient too, surprisingly dr. shashank who never bothered about baby's crying and never ever tried to comfort baby in last 25 years bends down quickly as his heart was likely crushing inside the body when he saw baby with tears and so as anjali, she wanna help her dad to take baby carefully as she doesn't want baby get hurt,

hardly both had placed their hands under baby so as to lift him up but was surprised when some unknown hands interfered in between and took the baby away' both anjali, shashank felt as if someone's stolen their precious thing' they got up to find who'd tried to interfere in between, and was surprised to see one lady in red saree with her back was standing, soon their surprised expressions changed into shock when they'd a side view of riddhima who's showering kisses like maniacs on baby's head' by now aarish'd almost emerged in her collar bone completely, holding her tightly with his tiny palms, and was crying badly'.

R: (while caressing baby) bass meri jaan..bass nannu' (trying to comfort him, trying to make him feel secure, she knew in heart he's feeling very insecure, she cursed herself for being so careless about their child, she too's crying) betu mujhe pata hai aapki mumma bahut gandi hai, apne betu ka jara bhi dhyan nahi rakhti'(aarish's still crying, now holding her hair')

A: (caressing both riddhima and baby) aapki mumma bahut bahut achi hai, jitna dhyan rakhna chahiye uss se bhi kahi jayda dhyan rakhti hai'(riddhima looked at armaan with teary eyes, armaan cleared her tears, then took aarish from her arms) aapko pata hai apki mumma abhi abhi aapki tarah ek nanhi si aur pyari si angel ko duniya mai lekar aayi hai, batao aisi pyari si mumma aur kahi milengi jo apne baby ke saath saath auro ke baby ki bhi chinta karti ho, aapko to proud feel hona chahiye aur aap ro rahe ho..

(while caressing his back with all the love, his heart beat was still very loud as he's equally feared like riddhima but as usual tried to hide his emotions as he knew riddhima and aarish need to be handled first'. Riddhima cleared her tears on armaan's statement and placed her head on his chest while moving her arms around armaan and one hand caressing aarish')

R: jaan nikal di thi isne meri'(she kisses on his tiny palms, then hides her face in armaan's chest, still trying to comfort and balance herself, where as aarish was quietened for a moment as now feeling secured and also got mode to stop his hunger' riddhima cuddled against his chest..)

A: riddhima kya kar rahi ho, sab dekh rahe hai'(trying to cheer her)

R: dekhte rahein'

A: tumhe sharam nahi aati, khulle aam romance karte hue'

R: apne husband ke saath hi romance kar rahi hun, isme sharam kaisi'

A: oe hoyeee'. Bilkul sharam nahi aati' (he moved his arms around her waist that was bare and did little tickly and then slightly pinched her, to which riddhima jumped and raised her head)

R: armaan kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega'

A: to apni biwi ke saath romance karne mai kaisi sharam'.(imitating her,riddhima slightly smacked him and smiled, armaan kissed her on forehead) hasti hui jayda sundar lagti ho'. (riddhima blushed a bit with wider smile)

R: aur tum bhi pranks khelte hue jayda ache lagte ho, darte hue nahi'.

A: darr aur mujhe'(riddhima nodded) ohhh pulleeassss'. Armaan mallik kissi se nahi darta'.

R: tumhari bahaduri to ussi din najar aa gayi thi Jis din aarish ko pehli baar booster (vaccination)laga tha, abhi tak tumhare nail ka mark nahi gaya'.( as he's feeling itna chotta sa baby aur itni badi syringe kaise sambhalega, and as soon as niki tried to inject aarish, armaan started sweating and hides his face in riddhima's neck and hold her wrist tightly, his nails was almost digging inside her skin as he heard his baby crying)

A: ssshhhhh'.(armaan showed her eyes to which riddhima giggled..) abe yaar aaj to mera labcoat gaya kaam se'

R: kyu kya hua???

A: tumhara bete ke paet mai jo jaane waala hai, naya lab coat laana padega'(riddhima looked him with confused eyes) ab isse jab aur kuch khaane ko nahi milega to bechara lab coat khakar hi to apna paet bharega na'..(riddhima was like ohh mai bhul kaise gayi, usse bhuk lag hogi, she quickly took aarish from his arms, he again sobbed and then started sucking her shoulder as hard as he can, riddhima looked here and there.. seeing her confused) cafeteria chalte hai'

(riddhima nodded while caressing aarish, both settled in cafeteria with armaan covering riddhima from one side and his arm from other side, riddhima opened her palla and expanded it fully around her and arish, started feeding him, then closed her eyes as usual, armaan kept on looking her face, her face again started glowing, he always wonder why her face starts glowing whenever she feeds their child, he wished if he could feel the same emotions with which riddhima's going through,

he wished he could feel the same satisfaction and enjoyment like riddhima, he looked at aarish who's impatiently moving and pausing his chin, his tiny hands on her collar bone, fully engrossed in riddhima, and soon his impatient expressions started changing into patient expressions, he again looked at riddhima, from her eyes tears of satisfaction rolled down, he moved his face closer to her face first wanted to clear it but then thinking may be these tears could help me, may be I could be able to understand her and her satisfaction, he sucked her tears, then moved apart, may be that really worked, for a moment he felt an unknown goosieness in his heart and tummy too, he looked riddhima with surprise'. )

on other side seeing baby missing from cabin harsh again became sad and didn't eat a single thing, muskaan's surprised when saw this sudden change'. She holds harsh and asked what happened, but he didn't reply' where as anjali and dr shashank still standing like statue, firstly because riddhima ignored them as if they don't exist at all, that hurted shashank's ego and made anjali sad, secondly, that child who stole their heart beat with his innocence and with his cuteness was none other than AR child, dr. shashank when again reminded baby's face deeply wished in heart to have a glimpse of baby once again, then shook his head' tried to act normal and proceded towards his cabin, where as tears rolled down from anjali's eyes as she's deeply hurt with riddhima's attitude'. With heavy steps she moved out of the hospital'.

Armaan, riddhima too got up from cafeteria and turned to leave, as they passed from corridor, riddhima felt a tug at her saree, she looked at armaan'

R: armaan kya kar rahe ho??

A: maine kya kiya???

R: meri saree chodo'(armaan first gave her confused look, then asked her to look back, she twisted back and found little kid standing, riddhima's surprised and tried to remind where she'd seen this child, he again tugged her saree, riddhima settled on knees, child caressed baby, riddhima smiled and slightly kisses on child cheeks) kya hua baby aapko kya chahiye??? (child caress aarish head) acha batao aapka naam kya hai??? (he somehow mumbled) hash.."harsh"'(riddhima tried to understand, when armaan mumbled harsh'while settling next to riddhima, harsh nodded') aapki mumma kaha hai??? (harsh kept on looking at baby, and caressing his fingures, in between atul came)

At: harsh challo aapki dawai ka time ho gaya hai??? (AR looked at atul, then harsh who didn't responded,..)

A: (caressing harsh's head) baby aapki dawai ka time ho gaya hai, jao dr. atul ke saath'(atul holds his arm but he again detangled his arm and mumbled bayee' riddhima suddenly looked at atul with surprise)

R: dr. atul ye to wohi bacha hai jis se aaj dopahar..

At: haan ye wohi bacha hai..

R: ye to theek hai'

At: aaj achanak hi isse hosh aaya, jaise hi tumne room cross kiya.. (then suddenly reminded all harsh's activities, when riddhima left room harsh started with movements, pointing to door, harsh behaving normal with baby, and again stop responding when baby's not with him and now again, he looked at aarish, then riddhima) ye aarish ki wajah se theek hua hai' (AR's shocked)

A,R: kyaa????? (atul nodded and started telling them when did he started responding)

A: ye kaise possible hai????

At: kyu nahi, miracles do happen, ridzi ko operate karna tumhare liye possible nahi tha phir bhi tumne kiya, to phir ye to bahut chotti si baat hai' (armaan riddhima exchanged glances, then looked at harsh' again looked each other, as if understand each other eyes..)

R: (looking at harsh) aapne khana khaya harsh??? (he didn't responded, atul shaked his head') aapko aarish ke saath khelna hai??? (harsh quickly nodded)

A: to phir aapko pehle khaana khana padega'.(harsh didn't responded) aap ardhaan ko goddi mai lena chahte hona,(he nodded) to usse lene ke liye aapko strong aur big boy ban na padega meri tarah, warna baby aapke haatho se gir jayega aur phir usse chot lag jayegi, aap kya ye chahte ho???? (harsh shaked his head) to phir aap khana khaoge na???? (harsh nodded, AR smiled and got up, armaan took harsh in his arms and both moved towards cafeteria' where as atul'd moist eyes, thinking maine kitni badi galti ki, itne pyare doston ko chod diya, jo bina jaane ki ye bacha kiska hai usse theek karne ke liye le gaye, unse acha aur nek dil insaan kaise ho sakta hai, aur maine unn jaise doston ka saath chod diya ek jhoote sapne ke liye'. In between muskaan came and asked about harsh..)

At: usse uski dawai mil gayi hai muskaan, don't worry wo theek ho jayega'

Mu: par wo hai kaha???

At: (with slight hesitation) cafeteria mai' (then both proceeded towards cafeteria, muskaan was shocked when saw harsh with AR, then looked at atul questionably) muskaan yehi harsh ki sabse badi dawa hai, tumhara bacha kissi dawai ke kaaran theek nahi hua, jiske kaaran wo theek hua hai wo aur koi nahi armaan riddhima ka bacha hai, jiske saath harsh subah se khel raha hai, jisske jaate hi tumhara harsh phir se ghumsum ho gaya tha'.wo armaan riddhima ka bacha hai' aur jab AR ko pata challa iss baare mai to wo ghar janae ki jagah harsh ke saath cafeteria aa gaye taaki wo kuch khaa le'

Mu: par atul aise kaise ho sakta hai, ye sab tumhara vahem hai'

At: vahem hota agar harsh normal react karta aarish ke jaane ke baad, par tumhe pata hi hai ki kya hua tha'.

Mu: par..

At: (understanding her) bhagwan ka faisla hi samajh lo, shayad hume batana chahte ho ki humne kitni badi galti ki jo armaan riddhima jaise pyare pyare doston ka dil dukhaya'

Mu: kya unhe pata hai ki harsh hamara..(atul shaked his head in no' muskaan again looked at harsh who's laughing with armaan making funny faces, while riddhima was busy in feeding him that too with paalak paneer, muskaan was surprised as harsh doesn't like palak paneer at all, but he's so busy in playing with armaan that he even didn't realized what he swallowed' muskaan has teary eyes, then looked at aarish who too was sleeping on table near harsh' she hides herself behind pillar as didn't wanna reveal them that she's harsh's mom with the fear that they might not give aarish to harsh and again she'll loose her child'.)

A: harsh chocolate khayega ya ice-cream..

Ha: (jumped) isshceam'.

A: to pehle wo apni dawai lega uar meethi meethi si kissi karega apne buddy ki cheeks par'.(harsh again jumped and rushed in his arms, then kissed him tightly on his cheeks, then pulled his hair) aahhhh'. Buddy that's not fair. Buddy ko pain hua..(harsh quickly kissed on his head)

Ha: sholly'(armaan smiled and kisses him)

A: you know mujhe aap jaisa pyara buddy pehle kbhi nahi mila' aap bahut shweet ho'(harsh moved his arms around his neck)

Ha: aul alich(aarish) bhi.. (riddhima got up and asked harsh to open his mouth, he sweetly did and she feeded him with medicines, then kisses hischeeks, armaan naughtily forwards his cheeks too, riddhima with love slapped him, them gave a quick peck on his cheeks..) meli isshceam..

A: haan haan buddy mujhe yaad hai, abhi lekar aata hun aapke liye isshceam'(he chuckled again, riddhima took harsh from him and settled on chair' soon armaan came back with ice-cream)

Ha: aul alich ki??? (looking at aarish)

A: buddy abhi to wo bahut chotta hai aur uske daant bhi nahi hai to wo kaise khayega ice cream'(harsh makes a face slightly, then started eating his own ice cream' muskaan on other side was sometimes crying with happiness as she saw her baby speaking that much for the first time after accident and sometimes crying out of guilty, in between thinking to go to AR and say sorry to them but again her love for harsh was stopping her to do this, she mumbled mai jaanti hun ki mai selfish ho rahi hun, par kya karun ek maa hun, apne bache se bhadkar kuch nahi ho sakta mere liye'. She turned to leave thinking her child is in safe hands and doesn't want that AR even see her face in cafeteria but stopped when heard.. mummyyyy'.. she's shocked, her feet turned into ice as if clenched by earth tightly, neither she'd capacity to move forward nor she could turn back' she remained standing still, when harsh again called mummyyy'

And that's it for today..

sorry aaj jayda AR moments nahi daal payi, aur last precap bhi complete nahi kar payi, jitna likh saki utna hi update kar rahi hun pata nahi light kab bhaag jaye😊, next part mai jaldi update karne ki koshish karungi..



Precap:

Pa: maa riddhima kitna badal gayi hai, mujhe dekh kar bhi undekha kar diya...

Na: kya pata beta tujhe koi galat fehmi hui ho, riddhu aisa nahi kar sakti...

Pa: maa mai maan leti agar ek baar aisa hota, par wo 4 baar mere aage se nikli hai aur ek baar aankh bhi mili par wo to mujhe aise dekh rahi thi jaise jaanti hi na ho...(naani was quiet shocked and kept on walking in corridor, when heard some chuckles, they looked up and found riddhima and armaan was coming from front, riddhima holding baby and armaan was again and again rubbing his head in baby's tummy to which he's giggling and riddhima too was laughing... then suddenly her smile disappeared when she looked above, and armaan smiled when saw naani and padma standing, he greeted them and when they're only one arm apart, armaan bends down nad touched their feet and got up, and to his surprise riddhima was not standing with him, she crossed them and kept on moving)

A:(from back) riddhima...

R: (without turning) armaan mai bahar milti hun....


I'll pm you with next update

If anyone's name is missing from pm list please tell me, I'll add that name in pm list...

okkji ab hum chalte hai, milte hai next update mai ,raam raam ji....😊

with lots of luv

urs ankita/anki/anku or whatever u like

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 15 years ago
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haiiiii diii

Congrats For The New Thread
Just Wishes This FF Will Never End
Its Just Became A Part Of My Life
Upto Now As Directly or Indirectly U Really Helped Me In Many Issues dii
Thank U Sooo Much For All This
Love U Forever
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oyeeeeeeeeee mummaaaaaaaaa.......... hum 4th thread mein aa gaye......

LOVE U so much for giving us ur time, love nd this wonderful ff....

I know thanku word bahut chota hai par mere paas iske ilawa kuch hai ni aur dene ko..





awwwwwwwww mera sweetu shonu
abhi se hi Dr ban gaya.DR.AARISH MALLIK..Harsh ko thik kar diya😆
oye yeh toh Baba Ramdev ji ka shishya nikla...yoga kar raha hai🤣
jaldi hi apne papa ki tarah aisa bhi karega😆
oh maaaaa shy bhi kar raha hai....yeh aadat uski maa se milti hai
yaaaar......mujhe naa sachi mein royi royi aa rahi thi jabhi shonu mil nahi raha tha nd ridzi was mumbling betu aap kahan ho
yeh khota rahul..kaise nazar lagaying mere shonu ko...😡
aur woh batmeej nurse..aise kaise bench pe rakh k chali gayi...hadh hai
yaar yeh sare Raahu-Ketu mere shonu k aas paas kyun mandra rahe hai...
yeh anjali aur shashank😡

kya itna pyara bacha bhi ho sakta hai' iske chehre se ek ajeeb sa noor kaise chalak raha hai, iss se dekhkar itna sukoon kyu mil raha hai, jaise iske baad aur kuch bhi duniya mai dekhne ke kaabil na raha ho... dekh aise mere shonu ko nazar lagti hai... koi bachao mere shonu ko dusht aatmao se
awwwwwwwww this line touched my heart "
aisi pyari si mumma aur kahi milengi jo apne baby ke saath saath auro ke baby ki bhi chinta karti ho, aapko to proud feel hona chahiye aur aap ro rahe ho.."
oh ji yeh romance shuru ho gaya lol....u know dis is d purity of love... baaton baaton mein pyar se sab dukh door kar dena......par yaaar mere shonu ko bhookhi lagi hai...😆😆
hmmmm feeding scene...quite impressive ...editing pic yaad aa gayi again ...(including
candy's comment on dat pic)😆
loved dat scene..... no one can beat armaan for his this loving nd......nature..exact words nahi mil rahe..😛
awwwwwwwwww harsh bhi bahut cutie bacha hai..par phir bhi mera shonu toh bas shonu hai...
hmmmm interesting precap
maza aa gaya.......as usual wonderful update

so continueeeee soon...
Love you so much
urs Nehu


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Wow!!!! We crossed three threads!!! Hurrayyyyyyyyy!!!!!!! 🥳 🥳
Congrats on the fourth one..................................😃 😃 😃





Kya itna pyaara bacchha bhi ho sakta hai???

From now onwards this ff will be named by this. Kyu galat hai??? Now Aru is d main hero here......😆 😆
It was a Haarish part. 😆

Yaar this rahul is so selfish. AR were so worried. Though armaan wanted to display his concern or not. Armaan's little naughty talk made riddhima relax.
aapko to proud feel hona chahiye aur aap ro rahe ho..
Seriously armaan looks the things from totally different perspective. If any other father/husband would have been in his place.......he has shouted at the top of his voice upon his wife's mistake.
But armaan is armaan.....😊
Awww!!!! Aru was so hungry. Armaan-Riddhima's cafeteria scene was nice.
Harsh is also sweet. 😊
But not more than Aru.....🤗
Anjali, i feel has become a total nut case.
Precap looks interesting. And highlight of whole part was----
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aarish was busy in doing yoga........
🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Thanks for d pm.
Waiting for d next epi!!

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anku congrats on the 4th thread

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Ishu party time.

congrats

love u.

oyye kitna sona hai na mera

ANGEL

yaar ye kyun uske picche pad gayen hain .unko ek baar b khayal nahin aaya itna chhota baby itni der tak apne mumma se alag kaise rahega ,aur vo nurse mere Angel ko us dayan k pass chhod ke bhaag gayi jabki usko kaha tha Ammy k pass le jaane k liye.😡

Harsh theek ho gaya that is nice.mera Angel special gift hai God ka.

God ne usko banaya hi itne pure love se hai.Yaar AR ka pyaar to khud hi be-misaal hai to un dono ka ikattha pyaar kitna pure ,kitna serene,pious hoga .words b nahin mil rahe likhne k liye ki kya mehsoos ho raha hai----------------------

Shshank aur Anjie b bandh gaye na usse.Par ye ego bahut buri cheez hai phir be no repent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Muskaan ko to dhoob k mar jana chahiye .abhi b ek baar b sach ka samna karne se pichhe hut rahi hai.

maan kyun nahi leti ki Harsh Ridz ka tohfa hai,uski dua hai aur usko dukha ke vo kabhi khush nahin reh sakti.

Yaar main ro padi thi jab Ridz ko Angel nahin mil raha tha .tu yakin nahin karegi i skip all the part or sidha wahan ruki jahan vo AArish se milti hai .meri jaan gale mein hi atak gayi thi .mujhe aisa lag raha tha bas ab shonu ko in logon se kaise bacchaun.jab vo bench par leta tha meri saans b wahan ruk gayi thi.

Armaan oyye uska pyaar to hamesha hi lajawaab hai .kitni inteha hai .hats off to him.

what a make over .wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but the best part was when Ridz feed her Angel nd to taste that satisfaction nd knew the reason behind this glow,

HE SUCK HER TEARS ND GOT HIS ANSWER.

Jis dil de ander vasdi tu
Usde tukkade kinjh hon diyan
Jina akhian ch vasdi hai tu
Das ohna nu kiddan main ron diyan.

jalim hai tu sachhi itna dhuba deti hai chah k b nikal nahin patti us se.i love u .

Recap is wonderful as before .yaar plz twice a week kar de na .sirf ek baar se dil nahin bharta .

thank u.

love.

ritu

Edited by janu1610 - 15 years ago
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Hey the update was fabulous......pls continue soon and thanks for the pm
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congrats for new thread
thanks for pm
nice update
atul and muskaan will relaize now
anjali wants to give divorse oh god
wht is this
update soon
if u can pls update once more this weekend
maybe sunday if u can
ok
cya

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Nice part dear
Continue soon
Take Care
Zoya

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