#4 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai?????(AR)note:149 - Page 64

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi ankita........

i knew it that ankit wud be the one rejected by ridzi...

very good update......

what a way to manaofy ridzi......

ohhhh waiting for the slap eagarly.....

do continue soon......

thanks for the pm

bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
nice update
and waiting for the punch
but di 1 punch se to machar bhi nahi marta toh yeh Ankit ko kuch khas chot nahi lagagi
so thoda sa fight aur pls pls
pata hai di kaal mujhe ek sapna aya ki Ammy Ankit ko marra hota hai aur ekdum se Ammy ke college friends usse bi ki death ke baare mai batane aa jate hai
un mai se ek Ammy ko rokta hai aur dusra Ankit ko bachata hai,uske muh se blood saf kar ta hai aur puchta hai ki ankit tum yaha kya kar rahe ho
vo Ankit geeja tha
fir mai uthgae
aaj test tha na
chalo bye
love Urvi
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowwwwww wowwwwww!! i was soo waiting for update....but in fact i was the one late reading it...but anyway!!!!!!!
my God Ankita...as usual...fabulous part!!!!
now i gt 2 knw why Armaan was lost,n his behaviour was akward!!!!!
i wish he could kill tht bas***d Ankit!!!!!!!grrrrrrrr so vulgar wrds...he said abt Riddhima!!
but i soooooo love AR momnts....man its 2 hot yaar!!!!!!!!!!!! was smiling n blushing frm times 2 time....the ruthna manana was fun reading!!!!!!
n OMG i was sooooo guessing this guy was the 1 Ridz refused 2 marry!!!!!! n his hre taking revenge!! but i knw nothing can happn 2 our AR!!!!!! but am impatiently waiting for the update of wht he is going 2 do n the punch thing....wowwwwww am waiting for it!! update soon!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago

Grannnnyyyy...shoooooo sholly for late comment

khaaan pakad ke plssssss...maafi kardooo
I have commented on page 86
Luv u
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
Awsome part
thanks for PM.

love
Riddss
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey, tks for pm... as usual wonderful update!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey anku....sry for late reply...my sys wasbroken down
awesome part dear👏
thank god finally armaan had known abt tat jerk
wonder wts wrong wit him...why is he troubling AR
hope armaan beat shit out of him
thx for the pm
cont soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part-157

A: (while opening door) haan baba maine aarish ki nappy change kar di, aur cover bhi kar diya hai properly, ab tum shower lekar iske kapde change kar dena, mai bahar se room lock karke jaa raha hun, okkk????

R: hmmmm…..(from bathroom)

A: byeeee…

Ankit who'd listened their convo, smiled a bit thinking "so mrs. Riddhima naha rahi hai, kaisa rahega agar bathroom se nikal kar unki direct najar apne ek din ke liye hone waale husband par padein, waoooooo that's a great idea, armaan bhi hospital jaa raha hai" he smiled shamelessly and as soon as heard armaan foot steps, he quickly rushed to his room..

Armaan as soon as stepped down, he heard his cell ringing, after checking his pockets he realized that he forgot his cell in room, he shaked his head and turned back to his room…. Where as riddhima stepped out from bathroom in towel when heard aarish crying, riddhima quickly rushed to aarish and mumbled "bass betu, mumma aapke pass hi hai" aarish calmed down when heard her voice, riddhima bends down and kisses on his face, he holds her hair, riddhima smiled and somehow detangled her hair, then started humming song for aarish and stood in front of mirror, armaan who'd entered in room few seconds back forgot why he'd come in room, he first kept on seeing her when she's massaging her arms, then took steps towards her and moved his arms around her waist, riddhima quickly looked up…

R: tummmm… tum hospital nahi gaye abhi tak????

A: (while nibbling her ear lobes) mann nahi kar raha, bahar jayda hi thand hai, aisi thand mai room band karke, blanket lekar baithna chahiye… what say????(looking her in mirror, she slightly blushed, then)

R: let me change armaan…

A: kya jarurat hai, aise bhi achi lag rahi ho…(riddhima widened her eyes, but soon turned her face to other side when felt his lips touching her back, then he moved his hands from her shoulder to her hands, then knotted them on her tummy and slightly swinged left and right, while nuzzling on her neck, he holds her towel knot and on the verge of opening it, when felt riddhima hands on his hands that were shaking badly,

armaan felt little weird with her shaking, it's not that usual shivering that her body shows on his touch, he looked her from mirror and was surprised to see shocking look in her eyes, he looked where she's looking and for a second his body jammed out of shock when saw ankit standing on door and looking at them… armaan again looked at riddhima whose lips were trembling like anything, she wanna say something but as if her voice's locked in her throat, armaan quickly turned and took out his coat and gave it to riddhima while looking in ankit's eyes with anger…

Ak:sor..

A: (before he could complete) tu jaanwaro se bhi gaya gujra hai, unhe bhi agar kuch samjhao to samajh aa jaata hai, par tu…. (he moved towards him when he's sure that riddhima'd wore his coat… he moved to him with tight fists) suna tha kutte samajhdaar hotein hai unhe ek baar samjhao to samajh aa jaata hai par tujhe to 1 baar nahi 2 baar samjhaya, par tu to kutte se bhi gya gujra nikla, kuttein bhi insulted feel karienge agar tujhe unki category mai rakha to..

Ak: dr. armaan aap apni had…

A: (pushing him such that he banged on door) hadd ki baat karte hue tu bilkul acha nahi lagta, (riddhima's sobs touched his ears, he holds him from his collar and threw him out with force such that he banged on front wall and fell down) riddhima se dur reh warna shakal bhi nahi pehchan payega apni aisa haal ho jayega….(armaan closed the door tightly on his face, he got up and smiled, then thought "riddhima se dur… kya baat kar rahe ho dr. armaan, uss se mujhe nahi tujhe dur hona hai, waise ye to hospital challa gaya tha na, phir andar kaise pahuncha, he entered in his room while thinking this..)

Armaan moved in dressing room where riddhima's lightly sobbing, armaan placed his hand on her shoulder, she quickly turned and hugged him tightly and sobbed more, armaan while caressing her hair…

A: riddhimaa….(she holds his shirt and cried more, armaan caressed her) riddhima aise thodi rote hai…

R: armaan ankit.. mai towel.. mai aise…..usne dekha….(somehow in broken voice she said)

A: usne kuch nahi dekha riddhima, tum mujhse covered thi (riddhima kept on sobbing, armaan thought a bit) riddhima meri taraf dekho…(he raised her face) tum aisa socho ki hum kissi party mai gaye the aur tumne sirf apne armaan ke liye western dress daali thi knees tak aur sirf uske liye aur uske saath dance kar rahi thi, tumhe koi farak nahi padta ki kaun tumhe dekh raha hai, kaun nahi, tumhe to bas apne armaan se farak padta hai, haina…(riddhima looked him, she stopped sobbing) ab dekho parties mai to har type ke log aate hai, kuch ache honge to kuch ki najar buri bhi hogi, jab tum waha unn sabko neglect karke meri aankho mai ghum ho sakti ho, to iss ankit ko kyu nahi (while clearing her tears, again 1 tear rolled down from her eyes, she hugged him)

R: armaan maine kaha tha na ankit theek nahi hai, wo aaj hi nahi pehle bhi kahi baar batmeeji kar chukka hai…

A: kahi baar???(he looked her questionably,riddhima told him everything, starting from elevator to b'day gift) riddhima tumne mujhe ye sab pehle kyu nahi bataya???(with anger)

R: mai darr gayi thi armaan ki kahi kuch…

A: ki kahi mai usse maar na daalun??? (riddhima tightens her hug)aise insaano ka dharti par

Rehna bhi theek nahi hai….(armaan stopped when felt lil shivering in riddhima out of scariness) acha ab tum jao aur proper cover karo khud ko, phir hum log kahi ghumne chalte hai…

R: (rubbing her face on his shirt) hospital???

A: jaana jaruri nahi hai, OT room hi manage karwana tha..(riddhima nodded) acha ab ek pyari si smile do jaldi se…(he slightly pinched her cheeks)

R: par armaan wo room mai aaya kaise????

A: (lil puzzled, then) mai lock karna bhul gaya hoyunga, ab aur koi baat nahi, challo jaldi se taiyar ho jao…

R: par..

A: riddhima no par-var, mai hun na tumhare saath, believe me kuch bhi nahi hua hai… ab jao jaldi se taiyar ho jao, mai tab tak ardhaan ko pack karta hun…(riddhima turned and armaan settled near ardhaan who's trying to take turn towards armaan but too small to do so, armaan took him in his arms and while caressing him thought " ankit room mai aaya kaise, maine to room lock kiya tha, riddhima ko batata to aur jayda pareshan ho jaati, waise hi dari hui hai.. pata karna padega…" armaan kept on thinking then thought "kahi room ki duplicate key" and quickly rushed to door and checked it thoroughly and thought "keys to puri hai, phir wo andar aaya kaise" as soon as riddhima came out from bathroom, armaan made some excuse and rushed down to the care taker of guest house…

A: jagdishji ek baat puchni thi..

Ja: bolo sahib..

A: yaha har room ki kitni duplicate keys hai???

Ja: ji 2…

A: aur agar koi bina keys ke room kholna chahe???

Ja: ji sawaal hi nahi uthta, taale chaabi ke bina nahi khul sakte…

A: pucca 2 hi duplicate keys hai har room ki???

Ja: ji… (arnaan thought " mere pass hi dono keys hai, phir wo andar kaise aaya, riddhima bhi uss din keh rahi thi ki usne lock kiya tha par wo andar aaya aur aaj bhi…. Kaise???" he turned, when) sahib… (armaan stopped and turned) sahib waise to har kamre ki 2 hi chaabi hai, par ek kamre ki 1 hi chaabi hai..(armaan showed lil interest and turned again) wo ankit sahib haina unke kamre ki dono chaabi ghum ho gayi thi..(armaan stopped) to unhone ek chaabi banwayi thi apne kamre ki, bas ussi ki 1 chaabi hai sahabji, baaki sabki 2 chaabiyan hai….

A: unke kamre ka number kya hai???

Ja: ji 105… (armaan's shocked when heard 105 coz it's their room number, armaan mumbled " to iss tarah andar aaya tha, itna giraa hua insaan niklega ankit, ye maine sapne mai bhi nahi socha tha, itna well-educated person itna cheap bhi ho sakta pehli baar dekha hai, ab tu riddhima keaas paas bhi najar aaya to maar daalunga tujhe ankit, bhaad mai jaaye duniyadaari, bhaad mai jaaye trustees aur bhaad mai jaaye dr. shashank, sirfek galti tere liye bahut bhari pad jayegi…" he thought this and left when heard riddhima's voice)

After that armaan-riddhima left, though they asked everyone but due to coldness every1 preferred to stay at home..

A: so madam kahan se shuruwat karna chahengi??? (while looking at riddhima who's very quiet) ice-cream khayein butterscotch with chocolate topping, what say???(riddhima nodded with lost look) mujhe to laga tha apni favorite ice-cream ka naam sunkar aap uchal padengi, par yaha to ek nanhi si smile bhi naseeb na hui…(riddhima smiled a bit, they'd ice-cream, then they did window shopping, when armaan found her mood still down) riddhima tumne kabhi sabse unche pahad se sunset hote dekha hai??? (riddhima shaked her head) aaj try karogi???

R: as u say armaan…

Armaan first took aarish in his arms, then holds riddhima's hands and in next 10 minutes they reached near hill…

A: aa gaye…

R: par suraj to najar nahi aa raha??

A: wo bhi najar aayega, hume bas iss hill ke uppar chadna hai…

R: (at first) okk..(then looking at hill and widening her eyes) kyaaaa?????

A: haaaannnn…

R: armaan tum theek to hona, itni badi hill hum kaise cross karienge???

A: ofcourse riddhima paeron se, ab haathon se to chal nahi sakti na…

R: armaan tumhara dimag kharab ho gaya hai, hum kahi nahi jaa rahe, aur aarish ke baare mai to socho, itne chotte bache ke saath tum trekking karne ko keh rahe ho…

A: dekho mere baby ko to koi problem nahi hai trekking karne mai, usne mujhe khud kaha hai ki daeda mujhe trekking karni hai, please aap meri photos le lena, ladkiyo ko impress karne mai kaam aayegi ki itni kam umar se hi itne bade bade kaam karne shuru kar diye the… haina baby..(pressing his chin to which he smiled) ab sochlo tumne chalna hai ki nahi,kyunki hum dono to jayenge…

R: par armaan..

A: sshh. Tumhare par-var ke chakkar mai kahi suraj chachu doob na jaye… challo ab..(he holds her hand and stepped on hill, riddhima first kept on shaking her head and tried to pull her hand but soon hold armaan tightly when slightly loosened her balance, armaan moved his arm around her shoulder and asked her to walk properly, riddhima made a lil face and started walking, in a little while she smiled widely and closed her eyes when cold breeze touched her face, armaan smiled when felt her speed increased, now she's looking willing to go up, she laughed loudly when one butterfly settled on her hair, and flew away, riddhima lightly rushed to catch that butterfly) riddhima aaram se, kahi paer na slip ho jaye…(but riddhima kept on rushing with excitement, armaan shaked his head and smiled too)

R: (from lil above) armaan kyun budhon ki tarah chal rahe ho, jaldi aao na… (armaan mumbled "budha… ????" then fastened his speed and crossed her and kept on walking till) mujhe laga hum log saath saath aayein hai, par tum to aise chal rahe ho jaise koi race chal rahi ho hamare beech mai… (armaan stopped and looked her, asked her to come, she smiled and again rushed to him, first holds him from his chest and then holds his hands and started walking, both were walking, enjoying atmosphere, kept on shifting aarish, in next 30 minutes they finally reached at the topmost hill…)

Riddhima mumbleddd waaaooooo when looked around, kind of different experience, hills're partially covered with fog, on other side sun's setting leaving orange and golden lines in sky, she looked down and felt as if they're in clouds, armaan's holding her hand tightly as it's a kind of slippery area, breeze's like dancing around them, that too's chilled, riddhima quickly wrappedaarish with her shawl and kissed him on head, armaan forwarded his face, to which riddhima smiled and smacked him playfully, then kisses him…. They placed aarish on chair shaped rock, then looked around, riddhima first moved at the end of hill and inhaled deeply, then looked at armaan who's thinking that they'll shift to hotel today itself and came out of thoughts when felt her arms wrapped around him from back, she asked him what happened???

A: (turning to her) mai soch raha tha ki tumse ice-cream to thodi si hai, tumse share karun ya akele khaa jaun…

R: (widening her eyes with excitement) ice-creammmm.. waoooo..(then coming down) par yaha ice-cream kaha se aayegi…(armaan opened his jacket and took out one big packet full of ice-cubes, then took out 1 small cup of ice-cream from it, riddhima first smiled widely then) armaan tumhe agar thand lag jaati to????jacket mai koi ice-cubes rakhta hai kya???

A: lo ek to inke liye ice-cream laao, uppar se mujhe hi daant pad rahi hai..

R: armaan mai daant thodi rahi hun….bas..

A: (before letting her complete, he showed her cup) tumhari fav. Ice-cream, mai khillaun please.. (he forwarded one spoon full of ice-cream to her, to which she took partial bite then forwarded to armaan, armaan again offered her ice-cream, but she shaked her head, before he could ask anything, she moved her arms around him and kissed him on lips till they left breathless, then she hides her face in his neck and mumbled I love you armaan) oee hoye ye mood ke mausam mai sudden change kaisa…

R: tum hi to chahte ho mera mood acha ho jaye, khud se mera sad mood bardash nahi hota, mujhe hasane ke liye ke liye kuch bhi karte ho, aur jab mood acha ho gaya to khud hi questions puchte ho…(with a baby face, armaan smiled and hugged her, then took her in his arms and settled on one rock near aarish, both had ice-cream, they enjoyed sun-set and after some-time got-up to come down, while coming down both did lot of masti, and ched khaani, armaan's telling her his college time and tricks he used to play, their giggles were like echoing, armaan told her that they'll be shifting to restaurant today itself, riddhima nodded without saying anything, they entered in house, armaan thought to share his decision but stopped when saw everyone getting ready…)

A: tum log kahi jaa rahe ho???

Ri: haan jahnnum mai, chalna hai kya???

A: chipkali tera temperature itna kyu bhada hua hai???

Ri: tumhare kaaran kitna late ho gaye, hum logon ko fun valley jaana tha, par tum dono ko apni masti se fursat mile to to hum logo ka khyal karo na…

A: oeeee ritu, faaltu ka ilzaam lene waale logo mai se hum nahi hai, tumse pucha thana ki hamare saath chalna hai ya nahi tan khud hi to nakhre dikha rahe the..

Ri: rehne de hume pata hai ki tu kitna chahta tha hume saath lekar chalna, formality ke liye pucha tha..

A: to kya charan pakadke kehta ki nahi chipkalliji aap hamare saath challo, aapke saath ke bina to hum chal bhi nahi payenge, challiye naaa please..itni dramebaaji ni hoti, hum to ek hi baar puchte hai jise chalna ho to chal pade..

Ri: haan haan teri najro mai yehi to value hai hamari, agar riddhima mana karti to to pata nahi kya kya karta, uske charno mai…

A: (cutting her) agar wo mana karti to mai use uske charno samet utha kar le jaata, uski haan or naa ki parwah kisse hai… (riddhima's like hawwwwww, how dare you)

Ri: dekhlo nanadji aapke muh par aapki insult ki jaa rahi hai…

A: abee ohhh aag lagane waali putli ye insult nahi hak ki baat hai, mujhe pata hai kab wo exactly kya chahti hai, waise ab tujhe daer nahi ho rahi??? Jaana nahi hai kya???

Ri: to mai akele thodi na jaungi, tum log bhi to saath hi jaoga na…

A: to chal na, hume teri tarah waise bhi nakhre maarne ki adat nahi hai…(ritu looked him as if

she'll fry him in next minute) ab kya khaa hi jayegi kya mujhe…(ritu showed him nails to which armaan moved his face near her with speed and mumbled) bhoww wow…(ritu got scared for once and rushed at his back, somehow chirag stopped ritu and pleaded armaan "are mere baap baksh de") apni kaali billi ko samjha..(ritu again tried to run but chirag gave him warning if she wants to go or not, to which ritu started behaving like innocent child who follows each and every word of parents…)

they all settled in bus and in next few minutes they reached in fun valley, first they took lot of swings, and photos, then they entered in water park that's fully covered with lights, waterfall that's coming from hills was adding more beauty to park…

Ch: challo….

Ri: kahan???

A: paani mai aur kahan???

R: armaan itni thand ho rahi hai aur iss time itne thande paani mai nahaoge to bimaar ho jaoge, kahin nahi jaana…

A: pehli baat hum nahane nahi khelne jaa rahein hai, aur dusri baat itni thand mai hi to water park ka asli maja aata hai, challo jaldi se utho…

R: armaan mai nahi jaungi, tum bimaar ho gaye to challega, par agar mujhe thandi lag gayi to aarish ko bhi thand lag jayegi, isliye mai to nahi jaungi…

A: kyu agar mai bimar ho gaya to rishu ko pappiyan kaise dunga, par mai bhi to risk lekar jaa raha hun na, challo na.

R: no armaan…

A: theek hai to rishu ko bhi saath le challo, phir na tumhe feed dene mai problem hogi, na mujhe pappiyan dene mai, aaha kya family hogi, jeeyegi to saath, bimar hoyegi to saath…

R: haa haa, waah kya idea hai..

A: haina, mujhe pata tha, to phir challo costume change karne…(he forwarded his hand to which riddhima smacked him tightly and asked him to go alone, armaan made a face and mumbled "tumhare bina kya maja aayega" but abhi, rohit pulled him in water, all guys're having fun in water and all gals're chatting, armaan from water again asked riddhima to accompany him but she refused and turned to ritu,niki and prachi, all were chatting, suddenly riddhima's heart beat stopped when heard loud scream of armaan "ridddhimaaaa", she quickly turned and found him missing in water, she handled aarish to niki and quickly rushed towards pool..

R: armaannn… armaaann… kaha ho…(armaan slightly came out from water) kya hua armaan?

A: (with shivering voice) paani bahut thanda hai….

R: armaan phir bahar aao na, andar kya kar rahe ho??? (armaan forwarded his hand, riddhima shaked her head then very slowly slowly stepped forward as it's a kind of slippery area, she bends down a little and forwarded her hand, armaan holds her hand and tried to come out)

A: riddhima tumne proper lunch kiya tha to aise chuho ki tarah kyu khinch rahi ho, thoda josh ke saath khincho….(riddhima bends down lil more and tried to pull him, armaan pressed his lips and moved back a lil, riddhima came lil forward and bends down lil more, armaan holds her hand tightly and pulled her with slight force and in next second she's in water with loud scream "aahhhhh", then shivered badly in that chilled water, first she hugged armaan, then when heard his smile, she jerked him) areeee ye kya???

R: tumhe sachi meri haan or naa se koi farak nahi padta na…

A: (think a bit) ummm naaaa…. (riddhima turned to go, armaan holds her hand)

R: maine kaha tha na ki mai nahi aana chahti, par tumhe kya, tumhe to koi farak hi nahi padta…(she said in shivering voice)

A: (holding her from her arms) farak padta hai, lekin sirf tab jab actually tumhare haan ya naa ka reason pata ho, thand lag jayegi and bla bla ye sab just faaltu ke reasons hotein hai riddhima, mai sirf ye chahta hun ki tum har cheez ko dekhkar, khud feel karke phir apni choices set karo ki tumhe kya pasand hai kya nahi, tum har cheez ko dekhe bina, feel kare bina hi uss se darr ke baith jaati ho aur iss kaaran bahut baar tum kuch aisi cheezein bhi miss kar deti ho jise feel karke tumhe actually gud-gud si feeling aaye,

mai just ye chahta hun ki tum ek baar har cheez ka maja lo, aur uske baad agar tum mana karogi wo cheez karne se to I swear mai tumhe kabhi force nahi karunga, uss moment par tumhari haan ya na se farak padega coz uss waqt actually tumhare paas reason hoga haan ya na ka, par abhi to koi reason hi nahi hai tumhare pass except ye ki paani thanda hai ya bimar ho jaoge jo bahut silly reasons hai, phir bhi agar tumhe lagta hai ki maine galat kiya to tum jaa sakti ho..(riddhima looked him) I swear mai bura nahi manuga..

(riddhima turned to go, armaan felt lil bad but then mumbled "its ok, galti teri bhi to thi aise thodi na bulate hai jaise tune bulaya tha" he's surprised when felt her arm-shoulder joint's locked by someone's arms, he smiled widely and turned as an instant)

A: mujhe laga tum challi gayi..

R: heels ke saath khelna thoda mushkil ho jaata isliye unhe uttarne gayi thi…(with a sweet smile, armaan pinched her nose then hugged her and mumbled "I love you riddhima" and kisses her on forehead, then both got alert when heard some whistle, and found one watchman's standing and looking at AR..)

WM: madamji aap iss pool mai nahi naha sakti..

R: (looking at armaan) par kyu???

WM: ji aapne nahane waala costume nahi daala issliye…(riddhima looked at armaan as if saying mai nahi swim suit daalungi, yaha sab males hai… armaan goes out from water and mumbled something in watchman's ear, to which he gave a wide smile and goes without saying anything, then he jumped back in water and did tickly in riddhima's tummy, both laughed loudly when armaan twirled riddhima in water and riddhima's ruffling his hair, then riddhima looked at ritu,niki……… and asked them to come in but they refused, All guys came to AR)

Ve: are waah bhabhi aap bhi aa gayi, maja to ab aayega..

Rishab: yessss, to ab bolo armaan bhai kya khelna hai, ab to aapka mann kar raha hoga na..

Vivek: haan haan ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai, bhai ka mann unke saath hi to khada hai..(riddhima blushed a bit) to bolo ab kya khelnge..(armaan while placing his arm on riddhima's shoulder)

A: aankh-milcholi khelte hai..

Vedic:paani mai???

A: kitna maja aayega.. (finally all agreed, riddhima's asked to give turn, there's 1 heart which's not liking the presence of riddhima in between them and that's "abhi", he's thinking "riddhima ko aise sabke beech mai nahi aana chahiye tha, itne ladko ke beech mai.. usse khud sochna chahiye aur armaan bhi kaisa hai usse bhi apni biwi ki ijjat ki koi fikar nahi hai, aise ladko ke beech mai pata nahi kaise aane diya usko, thodi si to sharam hoti haina, aur bhi to haina, par sab aaram se baithi hai, pata nahi phir riddhima ko kya hua,

soon they started playing, riddhima's eyes was covered, all were calling her name, but she's not able to catch anyone, and while running in one direction she shouted "armaann aauchh", her forehead's tightened, armaan quickly rushed to her when felt there's some trouble and as soon as he reached near her and asked what happened, riddhima caught his hand and mumbled "out" and removed strip from her eyes,

armaan said this's cheating, to which she pinched his cheeks and mumbled everything's fair in love baby and patted his cheeks then knotted strip around his eyes tightly and rushed quickly, armaan soon caught rishab and now it's his turn, when all were rushing here and there armaan goes near riddhima who's shouting "rishab idhar" suddenly stopped and shivered deeply when felt her tummy clutched tightly, she gasped and mumbled armaann, armaan pulled her more closer such that her back was crushing his chest, he rubbed her tummy…

R: (somehow) armaan kya kar rahe ho???

A: tumhe thandi se bachane ki koshish kar raha hun, agar bimar ho gayi to aarish aur mera kya hoga???? (riddhima hit him playfully and rushed after doing lil tickly in his tummy.. after sometime armaan kidnapped riddhima silently, though riddhima kept on hitting him but he didn't left her till they're in between hills and waterfall, far from everyone, armaan removed his hand from her mouth..

R: armaan tum paagal ho, waha sab….(armaan placed his finger on her lips)

A: ssshhhhh….sabki fikar hai par iss bande par bhi kabhi apni daya drishti daal diya karo jo sirf aapki fikar karta hai…(armaan moved closed to her, riddhima knew what's going on in his mind)

R: armaan sudhar jao, aur challo…

A: na humne sudharna hai na chalna hai…(pinning her against hill and entwining his fingers with her)

R: (when he came closer to her)armaan no…(with closed eyes, her heart's racing)

A:(leaving her, she opened her eyes and looked him) jabardasti pyar kiya to kya pyar kiya, tumhe to pata hi nahi hai ki itni pyari si places par sirf aur sirf pyar hota hai, very unromantic… (riddhima looked him with widened eyes) ab challo, kahi tumhari wo aankh michoni ki game khatam na ho jaye…(he moved a bit when riddhima pulled him back) oeeeee.. ye kya…(before he could say anything, she took his hands and placed on her own waist) riddhima???

R: (looked in his eyes in which big questionmark's there) mere romantic hone par shak kiya jaa raha hai, mai unromantic hun itna bada iljaam lag raha hai mujhpar, iss iljaam ko jab tak aap waapis nahi le lete mr. supercool malik tab tak…..(she stopped)

A: tab tak kyaa????(in a lil teasing voice)

R: hmmm… tab tak.. hmmm… (she pulled him closer) tab tak….(more closer, while looking in his eyes, she first nibbled his lips and finally they kissed each other with passion with armaan hands following her curvelines and riddhima's caressing his back, after few minutes when armaan's face's hidden in her neckline, riddhima looked at the waterfall that's coming from top hill, they're standing under the shade of hill so water's not touching them, riddhima got one naughty idea, she smiled,

and moved her hand in between waterfall, first shivered with the touch of chilled water, though that shivering was less than the gitters she's getting at present with armaan's sensuous moves, and his love bites, she took lil water in her palm and quickly emptied her hand in armaan's vest, armaan trembled at first and looked at riddhima, who laughed loudly to which armaan holds her hair lil tightly, riddhima mumbled "aahhhh", armaan first moved his finger on her face, then took water and emptied it in her suit,

she trembled and slightly hit on his chest, he holds her hands tightly, then first sucked her collar bone, then nuzzled on her and in next minute he lifted her up and first moved her legs in waterfall, she giggled and threw her legs with the touch of water, armaan slowly slowly moved down and now both were in waterfall, riddhima though's shivering yet laughing too, enjoying very much, she hides her face in his chest, armaan settled on rock with her in his lap, both spilled water on each other, then did tickly and came down, so that they're in water, both kept on teasing each other with love..

almost 45 minutes passed, in between, ritu, niki, prachi, and all intern gals too entered in water, they all were playing when all realized that AR's missing, they thought to find them thinking may be they're in problem, water park's quiet big, they searched almost all places finally they found them at the other side of park, they thought to call them infact vedic called "armaan bhai" loudly but both didn't react, all moved more close to them and were surprised when saw them doing couple dance in waterfall, both were looking so lost,

then armaan lifted riddhima and twirled around slowly slowly, then placed her down, they played lil more like doing chapak-chapak in water with hands, then armaan raising her partially from her back then took round and riddhima moving her legs up and down such that splashes of water's rising very high and both were laughing, then as soon as armaan placed her down, she made a lock around his neck from back and lifted her legs and made a lock of it on his lower tummy,

armaan asked "ye kya kar rahi ho", riddhima in a babish tone said "chini ki bori ko aise paani mai nahi chodte oh ghodde waale, paani mai mil gayi to dhundte reh jaoge" both laughed, riddhima kisses on his cheeks, then caressed his cheeks with her cheeks, and pinched his nose… both again jumped in water…

then they settled on rock with riddhima on his legs and his arms around her, suddenly both came back to world when heard lot of clappings, AR looked at back side and both got up with surprise when saw everyone standing in front of them, riddhima quickly hides imself at the back of armaan and pulled her dupatta that's partially sticked on armaan due to water..

A: tum log yaha kya…

Ch: bas ritu ne kaha ki uska koi performance ko dekhne ka mann kar raha hai issliye yaha le aaya

Ri: tumhe sharam nahi aati, mai tumhe yaha lekar aayi aur tum dono sabko chodke ek-dusre ke saath guttar-gu guttar-gu kar rahe ho, mann nahi bharta ek dusre se, abhi saara din ek dusre ke saath bitakar aaye the aur yaha aakar phir lag gaye, kabhi to bore ho jaya karo ek-dusre se, hum waha tum logo ko dhund rahe the ki kahi kuch.. aur yaha tum log raas leela racha rahe ho…

Ab: aur waise yaha rooms bhi available hai, agar tumhe feelings control karne mai dikkat ho rahi ho to..(with a smile, riddhima felt slight taunt in his voice)

A: wah abhi mera sabse acha dost hai, ye jhat se meri feelings ko samajh jaata hai, great hai yaar tu, par mai soch raha tha room ki kya jarurat hai, pyar kiya to daarna kya aur tum sab to apne hi ho, to tumhare saamne kaisi sharam ek aadh jhappi( moving his arm around riddhima) aur 2-4 pappi(kissing on her cheeks) lene mai, tu chahe to tu bhi apni biwi ke saath try kar sakta hai…

Ab: thanks for the idea, par hume apni feelings ko control karna aata hai..

A: (thought in heart control karna nahi usse bandhna kehte hai) are wah yaar phir to tu aur bhi great hai, hume bhi tuitions de de ki pyar par kab aur kaise aur kyu control karna chahiye, bas iss feeling ko control karne mai dikkat aati hai, baaki sab kuch under control hai…(with a sweet smile, riddhima holds his hand and asked him to stop)

Ri: tum logo ki agar ye ajeeb si baatein khatam ho gayi ho to challein??? Aur iss baar tum dono ko (pointing to AR) to na mai alag karke rakhungi…

A: dost dost na raha, dost ko humse pyar na raha, ae jindagi hume tera aitbaar na raha…

Ri: gaana bhi theek se nahi aata, pyar pyar na raha hai naaki..

A:(cutting her) par mera pyar to pyar hai abhi, wo to dosti ka pyar nahi hai, ab dosti ke beech mai bechari riddhima ke pyar kokyu blame dun, wo to tum bewafa ho gaye… pyar ke dushman haaaye haaye…(in a very comical way)

Ri: ab tu chal raha hai ya mai aaun…

A: to aa rahein hai na, dhamki kyu de rahi hai???(both came down)

R: (suddenly)ritu aarish kaha hai???

Ri: don't worry, sonal, rucha hai uske pass, so raha hai aaram se…(riddhima nodded, then slightly pulled armaan's hand in water, armaan looked her and slowed down his speed)

A:(when everyone left) kya hua???

R: so mr. malik aapka ab kya decision hai, aap apna iljaam waapis lete hai ya nahi???

A: kaunsa, ohh unromantic waala..(riddhima looked him with attitude) hmmmm… abhi aapke proofs mujhe jayda convince nahi kar paye, aapko thodi si aur mehnat karni padegi ilzaam ko modne ke liye…(he moved forward with naughty smile in his eyes and riddhima's like haw, she rushed and holds his hand)

R: to aap kaha jaa rahe hai mr. malik, mujhe prove to karne dijiye, challiye…

Ri: oee tum dono phir se piche reh gaye, challo mere saath..(riddhima smiled and holds his hand
)

A: riddhima challo, nahi to ritu humare pyar ka kuchumbar nikal degi aur abhi paagal ho jayega, tum apne romantic hone ka proof hotel mai aaram se de sakti ho..(with a wink)

R: ji nahi, mujhe to abhi prove karna hai, maine kaha tha na jab tak aap nahi kahenge ki mai romantic hun tab tak aapko nahi chodungi, challiye na…(armaan looked at ritu who again called them, on one side riddhima's pulling him..)

A: okk baba, I agree ki tum bahut romantic ho, kissi proof ki jarurat nahi hai ab…(riddhima smiled thinking mujhe pata tha ab to tum iss baat par agree karoge hi..)

R: sochlo abhi bhi..

A: nahi mujhe koi doubt nahi hai, ab challein..

R: (suppressing her giggle) okk as you say…(then) armaan maine uss waqt pool mai akele aake kuch galti to nahi ki thina??? I mean pata nahi mujhe kyu uss waqt abhi ka behavior kuch weird sa laga, may be ye mera doubt ho..

A: tumne koi galti nahi ki, aur akeli kaha thi apne husband ke saath ho,koi kuch sochta hai to sochta rahe, jab tumhare husband ko koi problem nahi hai to kissi ke kuch bhi sochne se tumhe koi farak nahi padna chahiye aur abhi to waise hi bechara beemar hai dil se, uske dil ko jung lag gayi hai, ab jo cheez kabhi use hi nahi karega, khalli pade-2 usme kuch na kuch defect to aayega hi na, isliye uski baton pe dhyan na diya karo, infact kissi ki baat pe dhyan mat diya karo except meri baton ke..(riddhima smacked him, he giggled and gave her side hug)

Now all decided to play hide and seek in water..

Ri: sirf paani mai hi 1/2 minute ke liye saans rok kar chupna hai, aur seeker ke pass half hi minute hoga kissi ko bhi out karne ka, agar half min mai wo kissi ko out nahi kar paata to uski phir se turn aayegi, (all nodded, its niki's turn all hides in water, armaan did lil swimming and again reached near riddhima, she's sitting on ground with her breathes locked, armaan smiled and hugged her, then did lil tickly on her foot, to which riddhima jumped and came above on water, niki said "riddhima's out", all came above on water)

R: mai out nahi hun, mai to aaram se baithi thi ye armaan ne mujhe gud gudi ki isliye mai uchli thi..(all giggled)

Ri: armaan tu phir waha pahunch gaya, tujhe maine yaha rehne ko kaha than a..(pointing to place)

A: to theek hai chilla kyu rahi hai, jaa raha hu na..(armaan gave riddhima as if "tumhe to baad mai dekh lunga" look)

Niki again give turn, like this game's going on, now it's rohit turn, riddhima's sitting on floor with closed eyes, when felt someone's pulling her feet, she shaked her head thinking ye armaan bhi na, then that hands caressed her thighs, riddhima felt something weird and quickly opened her eyes, she almost jerked that person when felt his lips coming to her, though his face's not clear but she knew he's not armaan, with in a second she got up with fear and shouted armaaannnn… armaan felt weird and came above on water, riddhima rushed to him and hugged him tightly with fear, armaan realized that she's crying when felt hotness at some points of his chest, armaan raised her face…

A: kya hua riddhima????

R: armaan wo… wo armaan waha…(pointing to place) waha koi… kissi ne…. yahann(pointing to her thighs) armaan mujhe darr lag raha hai, mujhe yaha se le challo, armaaan mujhe bahar jaana hai…(somehow in broken voice she completed her words, armaan didn't understand what she's saying but kept on caressing her as she's crying badly, he's looking here and there, if he could find a clue, what's bothering her)

A: jaan kya hua, kuch to batao…

R: mujhe laga ankit… waha paani mai….. wo mujhe…. Kiss….. usne mujhe touch..(she cried badly, armaan wanna say ki yaha ankit nahi hai but before he could, he saw one male running out from pool, his face's covered properly, armaan tightens his fist and quickly rushed to him and roughly pulled his feet that's on ground such that he's again back in water)

Man: ye kya batmeeji hai???

A: chehra chupane se bach nahi jayega ankit…(he pulled his face mask and tightly slapped him such that he fell in pool, armaan bring him up and smacked tightly on ankit's face..)besharmi ki bhi hadd hoti hai ek, par tune to har hadd hi paar kar di, (while hitting him in tummy) hamara picha karte karte yaha tak pahunch gaya,(again slapping him hard) kaha tha na riddhima se dur rahiyo warna acha nahi hoga, (again hitting him tightly, he's fainting a bit)

R: (from back) armaann…(armaan again hitted him) armaan…(armaan finally looked her, she shaked her head with pleading eyes and joined hands that're trembling badly, she begged him, armaan knew she's hell scared so he left ankit saying)

A: don't you dare to look at my wife again, usse to hawa bhi meri marji ke bina nahi chu sakti to tu kaun hai… aaj ke baad agar riddhima ke aas pass bhi najar aaya to acha nahi hoga… challo riddhima.. (engulfing her in his arms, they moved out from river where as everyone kept on looking them with open mouth)

Ankit cleared the blood that's coming from his lips and thought "tera ye bhram bahut jaldi dur ho jayega armaan malik, usse tere saamne chuunga aur tu kuch nahi kar payega, tere saamne teri biwi ki jindagi barbaad kar dunga, na wo teri rahegi na kissi aur ki,just wait and watch"

Armaan took riddhima back to guest house, she's still scared, armaan packed bags and on the verge of leaving when everyone in their gang said "hum bhi challeinge" care taker of house asked reason, armaan said "we can't live with ankit", jagdishji thought "itne saare log gaye to mera bahut nuksaan ho jayega, iss se badiya mai ankit ko nikal deta hun yaha se"

Ja: aapko kahi jaane ki jarurat nahi hai, ab ke baad ankit aapko yaha kabhi najar nahi aayega, aap jaiye aaram kijiye bahut raat ho gayi hai, mai ankit ka saaman bahar phenk deta hun…

Armaan first thought to say no but then thought "iski bhi kya gurantte hai ki wo hotel nahi aayega, wo waha bhi to aa sakta hai, yaha guest house mai to hume us kamine se chutkara mil hi jayega, agar koi dikkat hui to ruche, neha, princess to hai hi, wo hamari help kar dengi, ye guest house unhi ki to company ke under hai, waise bhi hum 3 days baad waapis ja hi rahein hai" finally he said ok..

That's it for today..

Precap: ni:oe tum dono ek hi ghodde par baithoge to tight nahi ho jaoge????(riddhima smiled..)

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R: thanks rucha,neha,princess tum logo ka ehsaan hum jindagi bhar nahi uttar payenge…

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Ankita…

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Posted: 15 years ago
Humko Hami se Chura Lo
Dil Mein kahin Tum Chupa Lo
Hum akele Ho na Jayen..Door tumse ho naa Jayen
Paas Aao Gale Se Laga lo
🤗
Mamma......Again a beautiful piece of ur writing nd thinking😊😊😊
i am like spellbounded after reading but have to comment🤔
ok bohat ho gaya mera emotional drama😆
ANKIT...wowwwwwww i just love him🤣...fulltuss kameena insaan...doggies ko bhi sharam aaye iske saamne...fir bhi I like him😆..woh isliye kyunki AR ek dusre k liye kya hain woh dikhane k liye kitni mehnat kar raha hai🤣🤣 carry on bhaiya ji...bhaiya hi hua naa..meri KP..ish mamma ne paida kiya hai ise🤣
tum aisa socho ki hum kissi party mai gaye the aur tumne sirf apne armaan ke liye western dress daali thi knees tak aur sirf uske liye aur uske saath dance kar rahi thi, tumhe koi farak nahi padta ki kaun tumhe dekh raha hai, kaun nahi, tumhe to bas apne armaan se farak padta hai, haina...point toh hai😳😳😳 par dress or towel mein farak hota hai🤣

R: (rubbing her face on his shirt)😲😲😲hadh hai..hanky do bhai ise koi🤣

mai tab tak ardhaan ko pack karta hun..pack kar ke mujhe gift kar do...werna main pack hoke aa jaungi🤣
Jagdish ji😆acha naam hai🤣..Om ji aur Jai ji kahan hai🤣🤣🤣
ice-cream butterscotch with chocolate topping..☺️shonu ke pappa ko meri choice pata hai😆☺️
mujhe to laga tha apni favorite ice-cream ka naam sunkar aap uchal padengi...main uchal rahi hun😆..
Mela shonuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😍
both were walking, enjoying atmosphere..chalo chale mitwa inn unchi neechi rahon mein..teri pyari pyaro baahon mein kahin hum kho jaayen😍
SUNSET, Butterfly, cold breez, Clouds, Ice cream woh bhi thandi mein 🤗love you maa..I love you forever.. ever.. and ever.. Happily ever after 🤗🤗🤗
A: (cutting her) agar wo mana karti to mai use uske charno samet utha kar le jaata, uski haan or naa ki parwah kisse hai…👏 bechari baahein jinhe itna bojha uthana padta🤣
tum har cheez ko dekhe bina, feel kare bina hi uss se darr ke baith jaati ho aur iss kaaran bahut baar tum kuch aisi cheezein bhi miss kar deti ho jise feel karke tumhe actually gud-gud si feeling aaye👏👏Lesson of d day👏
R: heels ke saath khelna thoda mushkil ho jaata isliye unhe uttarne gayi thi😳HEELS😆
ABHI🤔chaddo😆 aage badho😉
WATER ROMANCEEEEEEEEEEEEE☺️ I M OUT OF WORDS...
he lifted her up and first moved her legs in waterfall, she giggled and threw her legs with the touch of water..JHARNA SUHANA AISA PREM GEET GAAYE...AANE WALE KAL KE JAISE SAPNE DIKHAYE..YEH EHSAAS PEHLI BAAR DIL KO GUDGUDAYE☺️
couple dance in waterfall☺️ahem ahem...ek din chanda mama pe salsa bhi hoga🤣..
*sigh* I love you so much maa and loveeeeeeeeeeeeee your visualizations😳😳😳
"chini ki bori ko aise paani mai nahi chodte oh ghodde waale, paani mai mil gayi to dhundte reh jaoge👏pehli baar chini ki bori jaisi cheez pe bhi pyar aa raha hai...meri maa aur kya kya karvaogi humse...🤗
yeaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh dhishum dhishum..tha tha dhishhhhhhhhhhhhhh ...yuhuuuuuuuuuuuu😆prashaad mil raha tha ankit bhaiya ko😆
"tera ye bhram bahut jaldi dur ho jayega armaan malik, usse tere saamne chuunga aur tu kuch nahi kar payega, tere saamne teri biwi ki jindagi barbaad kar dunga, na wo teri rahegi na kissi aur ki,just wait and watch🤬
agar koi dikkat hui to rucha, neha, princess to hai hi, wo hamari help kar dengi, ye guest house unhi ki to company ke under hai.Kis ka hai tumko intezar MAIN HOON NAA🤣🤣🤣 or i should say kiss ka hai mujhko intezar aao na🤣
Ok...thats all...meri bak bak finish..😛 agar main serious hoke comment karun toh woh sirf ek line ka hoga aur woh yeh ki I M SPEECHLESS..isliye mujhe joker banna padta hai🤣🤣🤣
I LOVE YOU SO MUCHHHHHHHHHHHH MAMMA😊😳
Yours,
Nehu😊
Edited by Neha_luvPRB - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yiiipppppeeeeeeee 😃 **Edited**

Part-157 Bole to KPABHSH mein historical part tha je vala.. 😃

Inna acha shuru hoke aur inna perfectly likha tha end tak.. vaise to har part hi aisa hota hai.. par iss bar saare emotions kut kut ke bhare thhe..

Uss Ankit ki himmat ki vo room mein ghus gaya.. BEEP BEEP BEEP kahin ka.. saraa LOMANSH kharaab kar diya..kabaab mein haddi nai pura bada vala hadda hai.. 🤣.. par Armaan ne achi sunayi.. wah wah.. mazaaaaaa ayaaaa.. lol..
R: let me change armaan…

A: kya jarurat hai, aise bhi achi lag rahi ho…

Lmao.. too good vala romance the ji.. 😉
R: armaan maine kaha tha na ankit theek nahi hai, wo aaj hi nahi pehle bhi kahi baar batmeeji kar chukka hai…

A: kahi baar???(he looked her questionably,riddhima told him everything, starting from elevator to b'day gift) riddhima tumne mujhe ye sab pehle kyu nahi bataya???(with anger)

R: mai darr gayi thi armaan ki kahi kuch…

A: ki kahi mai usse maar na daalun??? (riddhima tightens her hug)aise insaano ka dharti par Rehna bhi theek nahi hai….

Very good.. Dr. bhi Samajhdaar hote hain.. mele ko bhi lagging ki jis speed se ja rahe hain, ab Ankit uncle ka antt nikat hai.. 🤣
Oyee Hoyee yaraa..!
AR ka adventure was like a dream..
Ice Cream.. Mountain.. Sun Set.. thinking of Crazy Ideas nd following them.. hats off anku.. I loved Ridhima's expressions when Armaan asked her for trekking.. 🤣
Riddhima mumbleddd waaaooooo when looked around, kind of different experience, hills're partially covered with fog, on other side sun's setting leaving orange and golden lines in sky, she looked down and felt as if they're in clouds, armaan's holding her hand tightly as it's a kind of slippery area, breeze's like dancing around them, that too's chilled..
😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍
**SIGH**
Lol.. Armaan nd Ritu's Banter was hilarious as always.. 😆 😆.. yar yeh Water park wala part na mujhe, Actually mein, Humesha yaad rahega.. yeh sahi hai.. thand mein hi paani mein khelne ka aur ice-cream khaane ka asli mazaa aata hai.. 😉 🤗..
Nd then finally the lil Dancing scene under the waterfall was MESMERISING..
A:(leaving her, she opened her eyes and looked him) jabardasti pyar kiya to kya pyar kiya, tumhe to pata hi nahi hai ki itni pyari si places par sirf aur sirf pyar hota hai, very unromantic… Iska baad ka Lomansh to.. ahem.. ab kya hi bolun main.. lol.. aur yeh Abhi kyun Shanky ka shishye bann raha hai.. AR kahin bhi romance karein iska kya ja raha hai.. huh..!
"ye kya kar rahi ho", riddhima in a babish tone said "chini ki bori ko aise paani mai nahi chodte oh ghodde waale, paani mai mil gayi to dhundte reh jaoge" both laughed, riddhima kisses on his cheeks, then caressed his cheeks with her cheeks, and pinched his nose… both again jumped in water… I Just Loved IT..
I AM REALLY GLAD KI ANKIT KO ACHI VAALI PADI ARMAAN SE.. GOSH KITNA CHEAP SA HAI VO.. BUT M SURE ZYADA DER YEH NAI SUDHRA TO HAI SE THAA HO JAYEGA.. 😆
Shoorrryyyyyy late comment ke liye..
Par yeh part BOHOT hi acha tha..
Thanku for the update nd PM..
Luv you
Rucha

Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 15 years ago

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⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

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