#4 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai?????(AR)note:149 - Page 95

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again words banged in her ears…."ji ye dr. armaan malikka ghar hai, mai glitters flower world ke pass se bol raha hun, ji dr. armaan malik ka bahuttt bada accident ho gaya hai, hum unhe sanjeevani hospital le jaa rahe hai, unki bahut critical state hai, saasein bhi ruk ruk kar aa rahi hai, shayad hi survive kar payein, kissi riddhima ka naam unke hotton par tha, ho sake to unhe jaldi se jaldi hospital bhej dijiye…" and he cut the call…..

riddhima shouted "armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn" and fell on ground as a lifeless doll….And after a minute got up when again heard "riddhima" in painful voice, first she didn't realize where she's going, she turned in many directions to find her way, her mind as if stopped working, she forgot everything, in between feeling black outs, from her eyes tears were flowing like water's running out from tap with speed, somehow aarish sobs brought her lil back to world, she's able to find the door..

she took hold of aarish and rushed outside without even knowing that she's nothing in her feets, that means she's running bare feet, she tried to insert key in keyhole with shivering hands but was not able to, but after 8-10 trials she's able to open cars door and finally settled in car, she placed aarish on front seat and tied seat belt around him and started car in a rush, her breathes were totally struck in her throat, she's breathing but very very lil as if her lungs stopped working, in her mind only those words were banging and her heart… only one wish's coming out…

meri dua mai ho asar, unko lage meri umar

wo pass hai ya dur hai, iss maang ka sindoor hai

saanson ka ye naata kabhi toda nahi jaaye…

hain meri saanson mai mere piya………

She kept on crying badly, her car's also not balanced, she's feeling as if she's driving since ages yet didn't reach her destination, she kept on driving fast, even broke traffic signal as she didn't see it, thankfully there's no police around, finally in 10 minutes she'sin front of hospital, she quickly opened her car door without parking it and took aarish from other side and while closing door her dupatta struck in car's door and she didn't realize, she just rushed,

her body's so week literally shivering, her heart's banging too inside her, yet she ran on ground with bare feet, in between 2-3 thorns entered in her feet but she kept on running as if nothing happened may be coz her heart pain's far far big than the pain given by thorn, aarish's crying too, she quickly entered in hospital and looked here and there and rushed at reception..

She mumbled with tears "armaan kaha hai" but sister lovely who's searching some file was not able to hear this… riddhima again mumbled "armaan kaha hai???" but again she didn't notice coz of a very slow tone of riddhima…

Finally riddhima screamed "armaaannn kaha haiii????????" sister lovely and everyone around looked at her with horror, aarish cried more loudly, all were shocked when saw the condition of riddhima, her hair were a mess, her duppatta too's missing, she's shivering badly and eyes're continuously flowing….

S.l: dr Riddhima ji aap iss haalat mai…

R: armaann kaha haaaiiiiiiiiiiii????????????

S.L: aap shaant ho jaiye.. dekhiye aapne paer se kitna khoon nikal raha hai.. (in a worried tone)

R: (she banged on reception and shouted) armaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..

S.L: (horrified) OT2….

And before she could complete riddhima's already running and banged on lift tightly when found it close and finally moved up from stairs, everyone who so ever's looking at her for once stopped seeing her condition, she reached in front of one corridor, her heart sank, she with slow steps proceeded forward….

After 2-3 steps she's shocked when saw armaan standing in front of her with a dimpled smile and opened arms, and was asking her to come and hide herself in him, far from the world, she'd tears and felt a lil life coming back in her body and moved forward fastly, thinking to hide…. She soon reached near him and caressed his face, and hugged him, then cried loudly, armaan just kept on caressing her and mumbled "kya hua jaan????" but she remained quiet and kissing him, her nails almost digged in her…..

After few seconds someone shaked riddhima very tightly who's standing still, riddhima looked at nurse quizzically and then tried to find out armaan...

Si: aap theek hai dr. riddhima???

R: dr. armaan kaha hai, abhi to wo yahin the…

Si: dr. armaan to. (she stopped when heard vedic voice)

Ve: sister aap jaldi se blood bank se 5-6 packets O+ blood ke le aayiye… (then looked at riddhima who's trying to find someone…) bhabhi…

R: vedic armaan kaha hai, wo to abhi yahi tha…(vedic panicked seeing her condition)

Ve: bhabhi wo… (sonal came in between and took aarish from riddhima as he's crying very much) bhabhi wo…

R: vedic unhe bolo na ye hide and seek ka game khatam kare, unhe bolo na mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai… (by now riddhima had understood that she's visualizing armaan a few minutes back, she's just trying to run away from reality deeply wishing if someone would wake her up, rather armaan wake her up and hug her, then ask "if you're seeing a bad dream???" and soothe her… she shaked vedic's labcoat tightly)

bolo na vedic apne bhai se, tum to apni bhabi ko pareshan nahi dekh sakte na, to apne bhai ko daant lagao ki wo tumhari bhabhi ko itna kyu pareshan kar rahe hai…. (saying so she fell down on ground and crying hard, rishab, vivek, srishti came running and holds riddhima and made her stand…) armaaan kahan hai???? (she asked politely, all kept mum and looked each other, when she again asked)

Ve: (with lowered eyes) operation theatre mai..

Sr: bhai ki condition bahut jayda serious hai bhabhi, bahut khoon beh chukka hai, bahut damage hua hai.. (riddhima without uttering a word moved forward with heavy steps and entered in observation room, trying to see armaan but he's surrounded by 8-10 doctors so she's not able to see him, dr. kirti all of sudden looked up and found riddhima,

first felt bad for riddhima's condition, then judging her anxious gaze she moved a bit and riddhima looked armaan , at first she screamed seeing armaan's condition, all holds her, riddhima closed her eyes tightly, hardly in her wild dreams she'd thought that she'll face armaan in this condition when all his body's opened in front of her and he's lying on blood sheet..

Someone placed hand on her shoulder and mumbled "bhai flower shop par gaye the, jab waapis mudde to dekha kissi ka 2 years ka baby ro raha tha aur har cheez se anjaan mummy kehte hue road cross karne ki koshish kar raha tha, jab dono side se car aur truck aamne saamne se aa rahe the, bhai bhaage aur bache ko utha liya but iss se pehle ki wo bhaag paate car se unki taange(legs) takrai aur jab tak wo bachte truck unhe takkar maar gaya, uss bache ke parents ne armaan bhai ka id check kiya aur unhe yaha admit karwa gaye…

2 hours passed and riddhima kept on visualizing armaan without blinking her eyes, slowly slowly more time passed, when doctors started bandaging him, she looked at doctors to read their expressions, suddenly one doctor shouted "his heart beat's fluctuating", riddhima gets mad when looked at monitor and saw his heart beat going down, she quickly rushed in OT and sided every doctor, before anyone could understand, she placed her upper torso on armaan's chest and holding him from his arms, she screamed..

Armaan tum aisa nahi kar sakte, tumhe jeena padega, tum itni jaldi duniya chodke nahi jaa sakte, hamare rishu ke baare mai socho, wo nanha sa bacha jo abhi 1 saal ka bhi nahi hua wo bina maa-baap ke kaise palega, baaki sabke bachon ki fikar rehti hai tumhe,par hamare pyar ke baare mai to socha hota, wo hamare bina nahi reh payega…. Suna tumne..she shouted… tumhe ladna hoga apni dhadkano ke liye, apni saanson ke liye kyunki hum abhi rishu ko chodke nahi jaa sakte kahi, sunaa… she shaked him tightly… and her tears're continuously falling on his face…

All the doctors were literally surprised seeing the behavior of riddhima as she's also a doctor and she should know how to behave, shashank, anjali, rahul, rohit, atul felt bad, they'd moist eyes seeing her mad like this, when she shaked armaan again, rahul moved forward..

Ra: holding her, riddhima leave him..

R: kabhi nahi, agar chodna hi hota to hum ek dusre ko thaamte hi kyu… jab tak armaan ko hosh nahi aata, jab tak usse realize nahi hota ki wo galat kar raha hai, wo muh mod raha hai apni responsibilities se tab tak mai usse nahi chodungi… (she hides her face in his chest that's full of blood, her clothes too stained with his blood…)

Rahul pulled riddhima, when she didn't get up 2-3 doctors dragged her, she kept on screaming "mujhe mere armaan se dur mat karo, apni aatma se dur hokar ek pal na jee paungi", all were really shocked hearing her words, she's not in her senses for sure, not leaving armaan's finger, finally doctors dragged her out of OT, some felt strange "how can she behave like this in OT", she's thrown outside the OT, interns came to held her, but she stopped them, her face's having traces of armaan's blood, all were scared, she got up and took aarish and moved somewhere, 3-4 interns followed her quietly, after few seconds she entered in one room and closed the door before anyone else could enter, she moved forward while looking at the idol of god in front ofher… when she reached near the idol…

R: (placing aarish in god's feet) aapne hi diya tha na isse apne aashirwaad ke roop mai, jiss waqt aapke janam ki sab log besabri se intejar kar rahe the mandiro mai, uss waqt aapne aarish ko hamari iss chotti si duniya se joda, kyu aapne apna janam ka waqt hi chuna iss bache ko duniya mai laane ka,jiss waqt aapke janam ki badhayian sab baant rahe the uss waqt iss bache ko bheja tha,

jo paalna aapke liye sajaya gaya tha uss paalne mai aarish ko litaya gaya, aapne hume yakeen dilwaya ki ye bacha aapka aashirwaad, par ye kaisa aashirwaad diya bhagwaan aapne??? Kaise iss bache ki kismat likhi?? Kyu bheja isse agar sirf 6 mahino ke liye hi iski kismat mai maa-baap ka pyar likha tha, kyu bheja isse jab 6 mahine ke baad isse anaath banana hi tha..

mai armaan ke bina 1 minute to kya 1 pal bhi saans nahi le sakti, uski aakhri saans meri saasein khud hi le jayegi..apne aashirwaad ko kaise pura karna hai ab ye aapko sochna hai, aap apne aashirwaad ki jindagi kaise likhna chahte hai , ye ab aapke uppar choda….. bas aapse itna hi puchna tha ki jab ye din itni jaldi dikhana hi tha to too….(she cried badly and hugged aarish tightly, he too holds her tightly)

she kisses on his face and mumbled"sorry aarish, par kya bina aatma ke shareer iss duniya mai reh sakta hai, meri aatma mere armaan mai hai, ab tum hi batao na ki mai kaise…." She dropped tears on his head and again mumbled "kabhi apni mumma ke pyar par shak na karna aarish mai tumse bahut pyar karti hun.. bahut jayda, tum to 9 mahine mere andar rahe ho na, tumhe to koi explanation dene ki jarurat nahi hai na, sab jaante ho na…" aarish hitted his head tightly on riddhima….

Riddhima caressed him, suddenly she felt as if someone holded her neck and her life's going away, she again felt week and from her mouth foam started coming out, she tried to shift aarish on floor but he's holding her tightly, she holds her neck, her breathes stopped and her body started weakening and she fell down on floor sweating badly, she reminded armaan's body covered with blood, his falling heart beats, then their phone convo where armaan said that he's deeply missing them..Riddhima smiled a bit and mumbled "I love you armaan, can't live without you" and closed her eyes..

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Aarish took a turn and holds her neckline and first placed his head on her chest then started biting her suit, she slightly moved her head with closed eyes, when he got no proper,he climbed on her arm then slowly slowly moved his lil body on her, such that he's partially lying over her mother and tapped on her face with his hands as if tapping on table, and started singing "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaa" and again and again bending down and caressing her face withhis tongue… and licking her face…

She moved a bit, aarish's on the verge of falling but she placed her hand on him, aarish chuckled and again tapped on her face, she slowly slowly opened her eyes and smiled a bit when saw aarish, he too passed angelic smile then bends down and kisses on her cheeks with opened lips mumbling "aaaaa aaaa" and again on the verge of falling when holds her hair tightly, she too holds him tightly and when aarish hides his face in her,

she for the first time looked around and found herself in unknown yet known place, she tried to memorize and slowly slowly flashback started coming in her mind, she's in temple, started feeling suffocated and goes umconsious, then she looked around thoroughly and realized she's on hospital bed, she looked at saline, then her own hand that'd some pins covered with bandages, she jerked her Body up in an instant and mumbled armaannn…. On couch ritu's sleeping, she quickly got up and rushed to riddhima….

Ri: riddhima..

R: ritu mujhe armaan ke paas jaana hai abhi..

Ri: riddhima abhi tu rest kar, tera B.P bahut jaydaa low hai..

R: pata nahi armaan kaisa hoga, mujhe abhi uske pass jaana hai..

Ri: (hugging her) relax riddhima, uska operation ho gaya hai, uski saasein chal rahi hai… (with tears in eyes)

R: kya matlab??? Saasein chal rahi hai…

Ri: riddhima… (unable to speak further, Riddhima got down from bed) tumhari tabiyat riddhima… (she stopped when riddhima glared her with pain, she moved out, ritu followed her, praying in heart)

Niki, rohit, anjali, atul, rahul, muskaan all looked at riddhima when she entered in corridor, they're sitting outside the I.C.U.. riddhima looked at them and before niki could stop her from entering…

R: mujhe armaan ko dekhna hai abhi, rokna mat… (she entered in I.C.U)

Ni: ritu tu paagal hai, riddhima ko yahan kyu layi, tune uski condition dekhi thi na, mandir mai kiss hiss haalat mai mili thi.. agar ab wo sambhal na payi to….

Pr: ritu niki theek keh rahi hai, tujhe riddhima ko yaha nahi laana chahiye tha, wo abhi iss condition mai nahi hai ki armaan ki sachai face kar paye, usse kuch ho gaya to aarish ko kaun sambhalega???Wo to AR ke bina kissi ke paas nahi jaata, kitna ro- ro kar bura haal kar diya tha isne jab humne mandir mai liya tha, riddhima ki ungli hi nahi chod raha tha, kitna sambhalne ki koshish ki par nahi sambhla, aur jaise hi riddhima ke pass litaya ek dum chup ho gaya, kuch kha bhi nahi raha aur iss condition mai usse kaun sambhaal sakta hai… ab riddhima pata nahi kaise react karegi, kahi kuch..

Ri: mai jaan bujh kar thodi na layi hun usse, wo ruki hi nahi, bas ek hi rat lagaye thi ki mujhe armaan ke paas jaana hai, kaise rokti mai usse???

Ro: andar chalkar dekhein kya??

Ni: hmm….

An: I think tum logo ko thodi daer baad jaana chahiye…

At: anjali theek keh rahi hai, riddhima itni kamjor nahi hai aur naahi situation se dur bhaagne ki koshish karegi, thoda sa wait karte hai… (all first made lil faces with their interruption but nodded)

On other side, riddhima as soon as entered in I.C.U looked at armaan who's still unconscious , then looked at monitor that's showing his heart beats, that's lil slow, she with filled eyes move to him and kept on looking him constantly, his body that's covered with bandages totally and on his mouth oxygen pipe's there,

she felt ached everywhere in her body and settled near him, slightly caressed his head and took his hand in her hand that had lot of injections for blood and glucose and many other machines were attatched, she looked him constantly, her tears started getting dry, "tum jaanti ho na mai tumse kitna pyar karta hun, jaanti ho na riidhima???" these words echoed in her mind which he asked that afternoon…

riddhima brought his hand on her face and mumbled " haan armaan mai jaanti hun, tum mujhse bahut pyar karte ho, itna pyar karte ho ki tumhari har muskurahat aur har dard mujhe ache se mehsus hota hai, riddhima slightly kisses on his head and then placed her head near his heart, side by side caressing his hand with her both hands as aarish's in cot,

her heart's still aching badly seeing his condition, but she thought she can't break this time, for her love she's to be strong, she can heal all his wounds with love and care, she tried to stop her tears but seeing his condition her tears again rolled down, her inner side tried to console him by saying "itna shukar kar ki tum log abhi ho, waqt ke saath sab ghaav bhar jayenge par wo na bhar paata jo hum dono ki saasein jaane se aarish ko jhelna padta, dard hoga jarur, par theek ho jayega sab kuch" riddhima cleared her tears and again caressed armaan then closed her eyes..

Outside the I.C.U, when everyone got no reaction from riddhima, all got worried and entered in I.C.U and seeing riddhima lying unconscious on armaan's chest all looked each other with horror, then moved to them and shaked riddhima tightly and rohit's on the verge of picking her up, when she got up and mumbled "armaan" and looked him, and then looked at everyone with questionable eyes… everyone took little relaxing breathe, riddhima then looked at rahul, who's standing near door…

R: armaan kaisa hai rahul???? Wo jaldi recover to ho jayega na??? koi inner injury to nahi hai na?? I mean har organ proper functioning kar raha hai na???? (rahul first lowered his eyes) bolo rahul, tum armaan ke incharge ho???

Ra: abhi jab tak hosh nahi aa jaata armaan ko, tab tak kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta.. (he tried to avoid convo for the time being, riddhima looked back at armaan and caressed his head)

Ri: riddhima ab tum challo apne room mai, rest karo, hum sab yaha hai armaan kr paas…

R: nahi ritu, tum sab jao, mai armaan ke paas hun, hospital mai jayda rush theek baat nahi hai, dr. shashank ne dekha to bahut gussa honge…

Ni: riddhima jidd mat kar, tujhe pata haina ki teri tabiyat..

R: (cutting her) bilkul theek hai, mai yaha se nahi jaungi, iss waqt armaan ko sabse jayda meri jarurat hai, mai nahi jaungi….

Ri: par..

R: kyu tum log jidd kar rahe ho, tumne socha bhi kaise ki mai apne husband ko iss haalat mai chodkar mai rest kar paungi, tum sab jao…. (all exchanged looks, and slightly felt irritated on riddhima's stubbornness but moved out and all left from hospital instructing rahul to inform them if there's emergency…)

Rahul, atul, anjali were sitting outside the I.C.U..

Ra: pata nahi wo kaise react karegi sachai jaankar..

At: aur armaan ke baare mai socha hai??? Jiss insaan ne kabhi apni life mai aaram karna nahi seekha wo kaise iss sachai ko face karega..

An: itni kam umar mai itni badi mushkil wo kaise face karienge, ek minute mai life kaisa mod le leti hai, aaj kuch ghanto pehle hi to kitni khushi se hospital se gaya tha…

Ra: aaj valentines day hai....

An: (slightly shocked) ohhhh…

At: (looking above) acha tohfa diya dono ko aapne, itna acha tohfa jisse wo saari jindagi nahi bhul paayenge, saaya bhi saath chod dega ek pal ko par aapka tohfa nahi....

Ra: (patting him) atul don't worry sab theek ho jayega, itna shukar kar ki armaan jinda hai, beech mai to humne hope hi chod di thi, par ab atleast..

Suddenly riddhima came out rushing and shouting dr. rahul.. dr. rahul….

Ra: kya hua riddhima????

R: (with slight happiness) armaan ko hosh aa raha hai, check karo na.. jaldi challo….(she again rushed inside and all exchanged worry looks and followed her) armaannn…. Armaaaannnn aankhein kholo… (she stood in front of armaan and said this, armaan made a very painful face, riddhima saddenedand holds his hand) armaan.. (riddhima looked at rahul)

Ra: injuries bahut jayda hai riddhima, bahut jayda (he stressed, with in a moment riddhima's eyes started flowing, then nodded and hold his hand with affirmness,armaan too held her hand though very weak grip and his lips mumbled "riddhimaa..", she settled next to him)

R: haan armaan mai yahin hun, tumhare paas… (armaan's mumbling "aaaaahhh… uuu", riddhima lightly caressed him, rahul checked him with sthetoscope and asked armaan to opened his eyes slightly, but he's as if not listening, he's in pain and kept on mumbling riddhima's name, he's moving but not much, riddhima again looked at rahul, then armaan and all of a sudden..)

rahul armaan…. (rahul looked her and judging her expressions which was on armaan's whole body, he got horrified) rahul armaan ka upper half to movements kar raha hai, par lower half kyu jayda movements nahi kar raha??? Kahi kuch jayda injury to nahi hui hai na??? (trio looked her with horror) bolo na… tum sab aise kyu dekh rahe ho??? Rahul sab theek hai na??

At: ha…. Haaan. Ridzie sab theek hai.

R: (looking at rahul as if she'd judged that something's wrong) rahul kya hua hai, tum sab itna dare hue kyu ho???

Ra: kuch nahi riddhima, sab theek.

R: (cutting him) doctors ko apne patients se jhoot nahi bolna chahiye, mujhe armaan ke baare mai sab kuch jaan ne ka pura hak hai..

An: armaan ko kuch nahi hua hai ridzi..

R: (in stern voice) sirf sach.. (as if she's sure, rahul looked at armaan and moved out with guilt…)

Riddhima again caressed armaan and placing his arm down on bed she moved out… rahul's standing with his face towards wall and hearing riddhima's payal she looked him then again towards wall…

R: dr. rahul….

Ra: (closed his eyes tightly) riddhima armaan ab kabhi chal nahi paayega..

R: kya??? (as rahul's too slow in voice so she didn't heard, suddenly they heard armaan's loud voice, riddhima rushed in and looked at armaan, he's getting very impatient..) armaan…

A: (opening his eyes, he's still under the effect of anaesthesia) riddhima.. riddhima kya hua hai mujhe???? Meri legs kyu move nahi ho rahi???

R: armaan calm down… sab theek hai jaan… (she looked at rahul who lowered his eyes, riddhima caressed his head and he closed his eyes) rahul… (rahul asked her to come outside, she came out..)

Ra: riddhima armaan ab kabhi chal nahi payega…

R: dr. rahuulllll… (she shouted) are you mad??? Tum hosh mai to ho, kya bole jaa rahe ho tum??? Armaan aur… (she's slightly lost) kahi armaan ki jagah khud ko to anaesthesia nahi de diya tha na…

Ra: riddhima (slightly shaking her)

R: rahul bolo ki tum jo bhi keh rahe ho jhoot keh rahe ho..

Ra: humne bahut koshish ki riddhima, but uski legs buri tarah crush ho chukki thi, humne rod to fit ki hai uski left leg mai par…. Uska upper half thode time baad proper working mai aa jayega par jindagi bhar wheel chair. (he stopped and looked at riddhima whose eyes were wide opened and was lost)

R: aisa nahi ho sakta…

Ra: sambhalo khud ko riddhima, abhi armaan ko sambhalna hai tumhe…

R: (reminded armaan's face,she screamed) nahi aisa nahi ho sakta.. (saying so she break down on floor, in between everyone came from their homes as atul texted them, she cried, ritu came and holds her but she jerked her and cried holding her hair) kaise bataungi usse….

Ri: riddhima ssshhhhhhh…. Sambhalo khud ko…

R: kaise sambhalu???? Kaise kahungi ki wo jiss pal ki besabri se wait kar raha tha wo pal ab kabhi nahi aayega, wo kabhi apne bache ko chalna nahi sikha payega, wo kabhi uske liye ghoda nahi ban payega, wo kabhi usse chinni ki bori ki tarah nahi ghuma sakega…. (tears rolled down from her cheeks when she reminded armaan's dream, everyday he used to make plans..)

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R: armaan kya kar rahe ho??? (seeing inch tape in his hand she asked)

A: check kar raha tha ardhaan kitna bada hua..

R: armaan abhi parso ko hi to measure kiya tha, itni jaldi thodi na bada ho jayega….

A: tumse kissi ne pucha, tum jao kitchen mai aur ardhaan ke liye khaana banao, tab tak hum apni P.T. (personal talks) karte hai.. (riddhima shaked her head)

R: kyu mai kyu jaun… mai to yehi baithungi…. (while armaan take measurements)waise tum inn measurements ka kya karoge???

A: hmmm, dekhna hai ki mai kab aarish ko chalna sikha sakta hun…

R: to isme height measure karne ki kya jarurat hai???

A: pata kaise challega aarish bada ho raha hai??? (riddhima hit her head)

R: tum aur tumhari so called philosophies….

A: budhu logo ki samajh mai nahi aayegi…. (riddhima widened her eyes, armaan giggled and kisses on her cheeks, making her smile) hmmm.. aarish bada kab hoga, aur mai usse chalna kab sikhaunga….

R: armaan thoda sa aur wait karo, dheere dheere hi to seekhega..

A: hmmmm… par dekhna mai hi aarish ko chalna sikhaunga, wo sabse pehle meri ungli pakad ke chalna sikhega, aur mai usse apne paero par khada karke bhi chalwaunga, wo jab naaraj ho jaya karega to mai ghoda bankar usse ride diya karunga, aur cheeni ki bori banakar pura Mumbai ghumaunga, aur jab tumhari daant se bachne ke liye wo mere pass aaya karega to mai usse utha kar bhaag jaaya karunga, uske first birthday par tricycle gift karunga jisme hum dono baithke ride liya karienge… (riddhima's expressions kept on changing, she's giggling in between..)

R: aur mai kaha baithungi?????

A: par tumhare liye to jagah nahi hogi na tricycle par, thodi si moti jo ho gayi ho..(riddhima smacked him) challo theek hai mai usse directly car hi sikha dunga, phir hum sab challa karienge… (like this he kept on planning all the time, making riddhima giggle sometimes and sometimes she makes weird faces but for sure armaan's eagerly waiting for aarish to grow-up, he's very excited…)

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Riddhima hitted her head in wall and shouted "kyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu????? Kyuuuuuuuuuuuuu???? Kyu hua mere armaan ke saath aisa, usne kiska kya bigada, hamesha har ek ki khushi chahi aur end mai usse hamesha dukh mila, kabhi relations se to kabhi kismat se, aur kabhi uske sapno se… kaise bataungi usse ki wo jin sapno ke saath har roj jaagta aur sota tha wo ab pure nahi ho paayenge, kaise?????she cried and pulled her hair, ritu, niki holds her, she said "sab khatam ho gaya", jiss insaan ko kabhi kissi par bhoj nahi ban na aaya uski apni jindagi ne hi usse bhoj bana diya…

Everyone had tears, they tried to console her, but she kept on jerking everyone, rahul words banged in her mind, then armaan's face, then his dreams, their life all started roaming in her mind, tears flowing continuously, her eyes started swelling, she wants some secluded where she can scream loudly….. and then she got up, ritu asked her where she's going.. she didn't reply and entered in I.C.U, ritu tried to follow her but chirag holds her and shaked his head…

Ch: abhi unn dono ko ek dusre ki jarurat hai, unke alawa aur koi unka dukh kam nahi kar payega, unhe words ki nahi jarurat nahi hai saath ki jarurat hai, aur ek dusre se badhkar unke liye kissi aur ka saath nahi ho sakta… (ritu nodded)

Ri: aage life kaise challayenge dono??? Abhi age hi kya hai dono ki.. (chirag hugged her sideways)

Riddhima entered in I.C.U and with tears caressed armaan, he opened his eyes slightly and tried to remove oxygen mask but riddhima holds his hand and shaked her head, she feared if she'll utter a word she'll loose her control, but armaan removed his mask…

A: hey basket… kya hua, tum ro kyu rahi ho, mai jinda hun abhi, chaho to chukar dekhlo….(riddhima didn't stop him, armaan raised his hand and placed his hand on her cheeks, riddhima dropped tears final and turned her face) tumne bhi muh mod liya… jindagi ne to mod hi liya hai…

R: (turned back) armaannnn… ye kya..

A: mai kabhi chal nahi paunga, meri legs paralysed hogayi hai… (riddhima looked him with shock, he tried to struggle with words)1 minute left, Happy Valentines Day, ye gift maine plan nahi kiya tha tumhare liye sachi… (riddhima dropped tears) Can I get a hug please…. (finally he said with teary eyes, riddhima settled on bed and took him in her arms, armaan tried to control his tears but was not able to hold them) riddhima sab khatam ho gaya…

R: kuch khatam nahi hoga armaan, mai hun na tumhare saath, I promise sab theek ho jayega, ye dard hum dono ka hai, hum dono milkar aaram se seh lenge, jaise acha time khushi se ek dusre ke saath nikala hai to ab ye time bhi nikal jayega..

A: ye 1 saal ya 2 saal ki baat nahi hai saari jindagi ki baat hai…

R: tumhare saath saari jindagi bhi chotti hai armaan, aur yaha ki reports ke basis par hum abhi kuch nahi keh sakte, hum tumhari reports sabse ache doctor ko dikhayenge aur dekhna sab theek ho jayega…

A: ye jhoota sapne mai mei nahi jeena chahta…(riddhima didn't say anything just caressed him, he cried, riddhima just kept on caressing him, after sometime when armaan didn't left her, she lightly got up and cupped armaan's face)

R: (with confidence) armaan we'll face it, itna kamjor nahi haina hamara pyar ki iss mod p ar aakar tut jaye, we'll face it armaan aur dekhna koi mushkil nahi hoga, trust me… (armaan slightly nodded and hugged her)

That's it for today

Next update :may be on coming Saturday or after 15 days i.e on 5th april, I'll try to update in this week…

just can say stay tunned..


will pm you with next update, if anyones name's missing from Pm list kindly tell me...


please do hit like tab or add your views..


Lots of Love

Ankita


P.s: do check your replies after 1 hour

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Part-160

Rucha: sorry yaara mujhe nahi pata tha tujhe haathi se darr lagta hai, warna mai adrishye roop mai aati tera saath dene ke liye, par pata hi nahi tha, mai tum logo ko warning dena bhul gayi ki ye sab ek aankh se panda aur dusri aankh se bahar nikal dena, haathi waise to cute hote hai par dangerous bhi ho sakte hai, to dil tak na pahunchne dena apne adventurous part ko, jaisi hai waisi hi bahut achi hai' hee hee

Nidha Di: thanks for your wonderful gifts and sweet bribe, maja aa gaya chocolates khaa kar, I hope aap khush hongi aapka chotta sa prince bilkul safe hai, thankuuu

Love_ks: oe please yaar abhi se mat maar mujhe, agar maar diya to pata kaise challega ki AR alag honge ya nahi.. hee heee, to na best solution ye hai kipehle mujhe unhe alag karne do, uske baad tum mujhe maar dena'

Ritu di, kshu, nehu: lovely comments, waoo ritu di you rock, itna confidence hai AR ke pyar par, par aage kya hoga ye to ram hi jaane, kshu good tu means prepare hai dekhne ke liye sab kuch, great..

K_anjali12, kshma, Sanyoprithviraj, Kweetrockstar, Hannah, Amruta04, Jiyaa, Ambrynn, Suvarna,Farwa, Heavens: to tum sabko new track se darr lag raha hai ki kahi AR alag na ho jaye, to bas itna hi kahungi ki abhi updates padte rahi, agar wo alag honge to kissi solid reason ke kaaran hi alag honge, par abhi wo alag nahi ho rahe islliye wayarth ki chinta chodo aur story pado, sab questions ka answer dheere dheere mil jayega, filhaal kuch mat sochna'.

Bilash: thanks for your comments and hope I'll be able to live upto your expectations..

Nisha: hmmm' acha lagta hai ye jaankar ki mai tumhari life mai iss story ke through kuch change chahe wo 0.1% ka hi kyu na ho par laa paati hun, shayad tum sahi ho, may be ye ff mai kissi reason ke kaaran likh rahi hun, par wo reason exactly mujhe bhi nahi pata abhi' hee hee

Nruti: tumne koi parts miss nahi kiye the, actually ankit ka saaman jab guest house se fenk diya tha to wo Mumbai mai shift ho gaya, aur shashank, padma, old intern gang inka sabka aage role hai, but before flower valley wo log Mumbai aa gaye the kyunki unka time over ho gaya tha, sorry mai ye include karna bhul gayi thi, but I hope ab tumhe koi confusion na ho..

Anupama: my dear anu, deko tu mujhe dhamkiyan mat diya kar yaar, pata hai kitna darr lagta hai, musibat aayi AR par hai aur dhamkiyan mujhe mil rahi hai, not fair, mai katti ho jaungi teri... Hee heee. oe dekh abhi AR alag nahi ho rahe, pehle parts to pad, aise to wo bhi paagal nahi hai jo seedha divorce denge. issliye bas parts padti jaa, aur jab actual dhamki dene ka time aayega tab dena, phir mai kuch nahi kahungi pucka.

Mithila Di,Ridds, Ankita.M, Simi2,Bueaty, Pari_044, Sam19_2009,Dhruvika, Kajenfanpari, Zoya_01, Sammy4U, Shininggal2008: thanks for your lovely comments, loved them and for future just can say stay tunned'

Merinrani5: hello dear, yupp you're right, 3rd time aisa hua tha jab armaan without breathes raha tha, sorry for the mistake..

Sonialvskajen: first of all thanks for your comments, glad that you liked KP this much and about future, abhi se tension mat lo, abhi AR alag nahi ho rahe, abhi wo saath saath problem face karienge, aage kya situation hogi ye tum aage hi panda, abhi to kuch nahi keh sakti iske alawa ki padte raho.. hee hee

Bhoomika_manu : hi bhoomika, first of all welcome on KP forum, thanks for your lovely comments, acha laga tumhe yaha dekh kar, iss track mai AR ke relation ka kya anjaam hoga ye to aapko padkar hi pata challega aur rahi tumhari ishanki di to wo mai hi hun, maine apna user's name change kar liya hai, mera actual naam ankita hi hai, ishanki is just another name jo mere dosto ne mujhe diya tha'

Nakssh/Maheen: hii dear, thanks for taking initiative and commenting on KP forum, I'd added you as my friend, hope started receiving pms, if not then kindly tell me, thanks for comments

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Rucha,Neha,Ritu Di, Kshu, Mithila Di: meri pyari pyari nikammi aivem nalayak KP ki Naujawaniyon (naujawano ka istriling hai, confuse mat hona) tum logo ne ye kya kiya inn pages par, sharam ni aati chit chat karte hue KP ke thread mai, last warning dekar iss baar chod rahi hun, agli baar se strict action lungi' neha ko deewar par feviquick se chipkaungi, ruche ko haathi ke uppar bithaungi, kshu ko pankhein ki jagah use karungi, mithila di aur ritu di ke liye koi action nahi kyunki mujhe pata hai ye inn teen paaglo ki baton mai aa gayi hongi warna wo aisa kabhi na karti, iss liye no punishment..

Part-161

Mvllvmmvl: thanks for your comments dear, hope this story keep on entertaining you in future also..

K_anjali12: meri pyari hima, abhi story ni khatam ho rahi chinta mat karo..

Anu:mai kaha kissi ko pareshan kar rahi hun, sab kismat ka khel hai aaj daer to kal sawer hai, hee heee.. dekhoji twist to tumhe pata hi chal gaya hoga ki kya hai, ab tum aage aage pado aur dekho ki story kaise, kab aur kaha naya turn leti hai'.daantiyo mat, dhamki bhi mat diyo, maine already security rakh li hai'. Hee hee

Sanna_k: hi sanna, thanks for your comments dear, hmm lagta hai tum bahut excited ho new track ke liye and I hope end mai tumhe koi disappointment mat ho..

Pari076: sorry pari, armaan to hai par problems bhi bahut hai,, can't help yaara..

Nruti: thanks for your comments and I'm sorry for tears in your eyes par story ko issi way mai proceed hona hai, aage kya hoga bhaago maalik hai, hee hee

Nishu: maarungi mai tumhe agar apni jaan ki baat ki to, yess new twist yahi hai, aarish ka bhagwan ne soch liya tabhi to AR hai' jayda mat darr, filhaal darne ki koi baat nahi hai'.

Kweetrockstar: I don't know dear when's the track is ending, but I'll try to keep your words'

Ardhana: don't be sorry dear, jab bhi time mile comment kar diya karo..

Yachna:kaha rehti ho yaar aajkal??? Life theek chal rahi hai na??? koi problem to nahi haina??? Agar nahi to itna time kyu lagati ho comment karne mai???

Angelina_2005: hi dear, hope your exams are Going good, all the very best for the rest of your exams and don't worry about comments, whenever you'll get time then post Your viewsm okk..

Shinseen:aadab, aapka naam itne dino baad dekhkar bahut khushi hui, I's missing you too, hope apki life achi chal rahi ho, thanks for comments, and keep in touch di'love you di'

Shivi17: oe sorry yaar, par story aise hi proceed honi hai, aur please jayda mat ro, dekh mujhe theek se swimming bhi nahi aati, itna flood aa gaya to mai to dun hi jaungi aur saath mai KP bhi jayega, aur tum kya chahti ho ki ye suspense suspense hi reh jaye ki AR Kpabhsh mai alag hote hai ki nahi??? Agar nahi to rona nahi'. Hee hee

Prinnia: hi dear, acha laga tumhe itne time baad dekhkar, hope tumhare exams ache hue ho, infact bahut ache hue ho, and welcome back dear' take care

Priya(flower.flowers): firstly, thanks for sharing your inner feelings, secondly mai kabhi bore nahi hoti, issliyesorry ki kahi bhi jarurat nahi hai hai, tumharri feelings ki mai kadar karti hun priya aur samajhti bhi hun, acha lagta hai ye padkar ki kissi ki life mai jara sa bhi change aa raha hai iss FF ke kaaran, and don't worry mai tumse tumhari duniya nahi cheen rahi, filhaal aisa koi plan nahi hai, abhi 15-16 updates karne mai 4-5 months lag jayenge, to means abhi koi plan nahi hai iss ff ke off hone ka, aur agar uske baad kuch aisa hota hai to I promise, ya to mai KP ka second season continue karungi chahe wo jayda bada na ho, 20-30 parts ka hi ho, ya phir new FF 20-30 parts ki, to abhi mai tum logo ka peecha nahi chod rahi, issliye no worries, filhaal to tum KP pado bina kissi chinta ke' love you and thanks once again for sharing your views

Aditi: thanks for your comments dear, I'll add you in pm list.. okkk..

Finally maine reply kar diya, hope mai kissi ka bhi name include karna nahi bhuli hun, love you all, take care and good night

Lots of love

Ankita..

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 15 years ago
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Likhne wali ye bhi bata jaati ki kya prtikriya 😆 chahiye thi iss par detail mein???? Kyuki main to bas yehi kar sakti hun-
🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Not one, Not Two, Not three... but a whole gamut of Brilliantttttttttt dialogues.
👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Riddhima's situation was written with utmosttttttttttttt uniqueness and perfection. ⭐️
(I want to share something here. I know a couple who are enjoying d bliss of a love marriage...Like AR, they didnt get support from one side and live on their own. They have a baby girl. And a few days ago, the husband was unconscious and somehow dialed his wife's no and just mumbled her name and said- dont know whats happening to me....They too are doctors guys and very close to me. The wife got s panic and she described later to me- she didnt know if she would ever be able to reach to her husband's hospital. She even forgot to inform us.....and said- she nearly lost her breaths. The good part was her husband was safe and it was a black out...but the true love was- even being unconscious, his wife was d fst person whom he remembered and called. SO HAAN SACH MEIN PYAAR AISA BHI HO SAKTA HAI)

Aarish and Atul were commendable. 😃
And the last part where Armaan smiled and said- hey basket, i thought- cant i get him?😆 Riddhima surpassed all levels of emotions in this update. Lets see what future holds for them..

Thanks for d pm.
Waiting for d next epi!!



Edited by kshanikaa - 15 years ago
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DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII .. HOW CAN U .. HOW CAN U DO THAT!!!!!!!

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😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

PLEASEEE diii .. pleasee dont make suffer ARMAAN n RIDDHIMA MUCH !!!

Whats that little baby fault in that .. how can he live without his parents!!

ARMAAN .. CANT ABLE TO WALK FURTHER😡😲😲😲😭😭😭😭

HOW CAN HE FACE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DII ITS THE SADDIEST PART TILL NOW IN THIS FF!!

😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Update the next part sooon di .. pleaseee!!!

Takecare .. lots Of Love ❤️








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Edited by k_anjali12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kitne bhi tu karle sitam...has has ke sahenge hum
yeh pyar na hoga kam...ammi teri kasam😳
Main hasti hui kisi ko achi ni lagti kya...😭 jo aur rulane pe lage huye ho...
soch rahi hun ki mujhe rona kyun aa raha hai
AR k liye...ya jo itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa unnda likha hai uske liye
Words seem inadequate to express the sadness which m feeling rite now...
Sorry to say but I just didnt likeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee all this wht happened
maana mujhe Chandni bohat pasand hai...but uss movie mein jo part main skip karti hun waisa kuch hi KP....mein aisi hi kisi wajah se i avoid to watch Dil deewana na jane kab kho gaya song😕🤢...........Nooooooooooooooooo pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee noooooooooooo
I know ab woh kameena Ankit koi cheap harkat karega....Ouch
My AR😭😭😭😭😭😭
May the love of those help them through the days ahead.....
maanti hun yeh sirf ek fanfic hai but I M DEEPLY SADDENED😔
Buttttttttt i really love it even if its sad .....you potrayed the everyyyyyyyyyyyythinggggggggg PERFECTLY
AR's .......SO much gr8 bonding nd LOVE during such a tragic moment.
I love how you wrote Ridhima's reaction, heartbreakingly emotional
Stillllllllllllllllllllllll mujhe aap par bharosa hai maa...
aap jo pyar AR mein phoonkte ho woh pyar hi sab thik kar dega.....
I totally adore you, your love, our AR nd KP......😊
Love you!!!!!!!!!
Edited by Neha_luvPRB - 15 years ago
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NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!😲😲😲

OMGGGGGGG😲 ANKITA
ye kya kar diya??????????😕
plzzzzzzzz Armaan ko wapas thik kar do
u won't believe
I was actually crying😭😭😭😭 while reading the part
it's soooooooooooo sadddddddddddddddd
hope AR will overcome their suffering quiekly😳
thanks for the pm
keep continue

lots of love
prinz
😳


Edited by Prinnia - 15 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
i actually cried!!!!!!!!
nahinn!!!! this is sooooo intense!!!
loved the epi! it was amazing!!
omg... they r never goin to have a peaceful life!! it's crazy!!!
sooooo damn excited for the next!!!
LOVE IT!!
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OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG nahiiiiiiii please make armaan alright poor guy
i m thinking AA and RM will get close to AR and now even Shash will realise something
Great update
-Pari
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the part was fantastic n emotional it made me cried n u have written it wonderfully well the emotions r superb i hope armaan theek ho jaye n i know now ridzs will take care of everything she is a strong women thank u so much the part u deserve this👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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