#4 Kya Pyar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai?????(AR)note:149 - Page 82

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Posted: 15 years ago

heyya ankita.........

lovely part..........

armaan surely is an ideal husband............... and ridzi is no less.. wifey...

during the precap i thought that it wud be ankit........ but an elephant....

i scare what is armaan gonna do to save their token of love.........

but i m sure nothings onna happen.........

do continue soon........

these speed breakers really intriguing..........

thanks for the pm

bye

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Ankita
I read the last two parts and they were amazing I love the immense amount of love AR have for each other and the bond between them and Aarish...!!
I hope Aarish is saved I am sure he will..!
Thanks a lot for the pm and update soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey thats a nice update sorry for late and smally reply! just been busy with uni and all..cant wiat to read the next part! loving the romance between AR..
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ankita loved d update,........... waitin for d next one as want to know desparately wht ll elephant do to aarish..........do update soon...thnx for d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part-160

A: riddhimaaa, riddhimaaa…

R: (mumbled) hamare aarish ko bacha lo armaannnn and she goes unconsciousness…

That moment's really intolerable for both of them, armaan was how much wishing if all this would end up as a bad dream but that's not true, aarish cryings started falling on his ear drums, he came out from shock and mumbled aarish mai aa raha hun, he placed riddhima on ground her lips was still mumbling aarish..

And without thinking twice he rushed towards elephant who's screaming, people were gathered around with their hands onmouth and shocked expressions, armaan mind was still not working, just he kept on moving towards his child as soon as he reached near elephant,he mumbled rishuu…

but soon fell on ground when hurted by his teeth on his shoulder and then his trunk attacked him, he got scratches on his forehead, for a moment he felt as if everything blacked out in front of him, he closed his eyes, and soon opened his eyes when aarish face came in front of him, he tried to get up but his body as if resisted, in between rucha,neha,princess came and their hands reached their faces out of shock.. rucha moved forward..

Pi: (holds her hand) kahan jaa rahi hai rucha???

Ru: (hardly she mumbled) aarishh..

Ne: shut up rucha, aage ek kadam nahi bhadayegi tu..

Ru:hum yun khade rehkar tamasha to nahi dekh sakte na, wo nanhi si jaan kaise dari hui hai, najar nahi aa raha tumhe???

Ne: chirag aur security ko bulane gaye haina..

Ru: neha jab tak security aayegi tab tak pata nahi kya se kya ho jayega..lets save him..

Ne: are you mad rucha???? Its not fun, tum har cheez ko adventure samajh kar kyu le leti ho, ye jindagi aur maut ka sawaal hai,tumne dekha nahi haathi kitna paagal aur bekaabu hai, iss waqt jaldbaaji mai nahi samajhdaari se kaam lena chahiye…

Pi: neha I think rucha is right, hume baby ko bachana chahiye, yaar humne use khillaya hai, agar kuch ulta ho gaya to kya hum kabhi khud ko maaf kar payenge..

Ne: par..

Pi: neha kuch galat nahi hoga, hume to infact nahi darna chahiye, aisi situations handle karne ki hume training mili hui hai..

Ne: jiss training ko humne kabhi attend nahi kiya tha..(she glared at rucha who acted as if heard nothing, coz of her they're not able to attend training as day before she ate 4-5 ice-creams and next day she's shivering badly under the effect of high fever, and neha,princess took care of her for almost a week..)

Pi: par hume kuch points to yaad hai, bas himmat chahiye..

Ne: jab soch hi liya hai to lets go and save him… (trio smiled a bit then took deep breathe too, somewhere their's fear in their heart but seeing aarish they didn't dare to move back)

Rucha and neha're standing little away from elephant where as princess rushed to cafeteria and quickly bring some chains of steel, usually used to tie animals as for safety shopkeepers always keep those chains because at the back of flower valley there's one jungle, whenever any wild animal enters in valley, security used to control them with these chains only…

As soon as Princess came with chains, rucha being adventurous took those chains from her..

Ru: mai uske piche ke dono paer iss chain se baandhti hun, tum log abhi uske saamne mat jaana, nahi to wo move karega aur hume use kissi bhi tarah hilne nahi dena…(rucha turned)

Ne: u sure rucha??? (she looked at her then elephant then its legs, rucha

looked her with confidence)

Pi: ruk rucha, aisa kar ek paer mai bandhti hun aur ek tu bandhna, kahi uss haathi ko pata chal gaya ki hum kya kar rahe hai to mushkil ho jayegi.. aur neha tu gun ka trigger dabaa diyo jaise hi hum uske paer baandh de..

Ne: princess tu gun sambhal, mai aur rucha chain ka kaam karte hai… (princess nodded as she knew neha's worried about rucha and can't let her go alone near elephant..)

Neha and Rucha carefully goes at the back of elephant, niki, ritu, prachi kept on shouting "don't be mad, already arish ki jaan khatre mai hai, ab tum log apni jaan jaanbujh kar khatre mai mat daalo, waapis aa jao", but princess quitened them saying let them do their work…

Rucha, neha first tied chains around 2 trees and after taking gods name they moved towards elephants leg, they're hell scared in heart , their heart was literally thumping against their skin with that huge body of elephant but some memories with aarish helped them to gain confidence back, rucha, neha sat on ground lil away from elephant's leg,

and quietly moved the other end of chain around its leg, and with shivered hands neha locked the chain, as soon as neha locked, elephant screamed loudly and moved a bit, rucha's heart beat raised more almost touching her throat, she locked chain but out of horror didn't move, neha pulled her back and mumbled "paagal ho gayi hai kya rucha, abhi tera haath uss haathi ke paer ke niche aa jaata"..

And hold her hand and came in front, elephant's still screaming but can't move now a single bit, princess gave her dupatta to them and asked them to expand it properly in front of elephant's trunk, so that when she'll trigger the gun, aarish'll fall in that dupatta, both nodded, princess quickly triggered the gun in air

and in next second elephant tried to run out of horror when heard the gun shot, he gets more mad, slowly opening its trunk, neha, rucha, princess were waiting with dupatta, but all got disappointed when aarish rather than falling in front, fell on elephant's back, in square shape basket tied on elephant's back, and mumbled "shittt"..

Ne: ab kya karein???

Pi: kya karein??? Haathi se mujhe darr lag raha hai, gun ki aawaj sunkar aur bhi jayda paagal ho gaya hai, aarish ki jaan ko khatra aur bhi bhad gaya hai..(in a worried tone)

Ne: princess don't worry use kuch nahi hoga, ye shukar karo ki wo hurt hone se to bacha ab wo basket mai hai..

Ru: par neha hume usse jaldi hi waha se nikalna hoga, don't know why par mujhe lag raha hai haathi ko kaabu karna mushkil ho jayega…(she said while looking at trees whose roots started coming out slightly due to the continous try of elephant, trio exchanged looks when)

Princess….(trio turned only to find armaan standing in front of them)

Ru: tum theek to ho??(seeing lil blood on his shoulder)

A: sab baad mai, pehle aarish..(he's looking very worried, all nodded) mere pass aarish ko niche lane ka tareeka hai, agar tumhe koi problem na ho to..(trio exchanged looks questionably, then looked at armaan) tum teeno mai se koi bhi yahan aao, aur mai usse uppar uthaunga , aur tum aarish ko niche uttar lena, yaha koi ladder nahi hai aur hamare pass time nahi hai itna ki hum kissi aur ka wait karein…

Pi: (cutting him) armaan tum itna explain kyu kar rahe ho??? Khud hi to dost kehte ho hume, aur dosto ko explaination nahi bas hukum diya jaata hai..(neha,rucha nodded, armaan smiled a bit with moist eyes and nodded)

A: to tum hi aa jao, wo dono thodi moti hai, uthana mushkil hoga..(rucha, nehalooked him with widened eyes and thought "bachu aarish ko theek thak niche aane de, phir batate hai kitne mote hai hum, mera to princess se 1 kg weight kam hai, phir bhi mujhe bola, neha thought", anyways princess moved to armaan,

armaan picked her up from her knees, rucha, neha placed her hands on her back so that she won't loose her balance, for once she shouted when elephant's skin touched her feet, armaan got worried and was on the verge of bringing her down, when princess stopped him and moved her hands lil above towards basket

but before that elephant moved lil with force causing her loose her balance but due to neha, Rucha's support they didn't fall, they tried again but elephant kept on moving, so princess never reached to basket besides so many trials, armaan's heart started sinking, he's trying hard to make princess reach to basket but remained unsuccessful,

when they'reagain on the verge of falling down, armaan finally placed princess down and with tension passed his hand through his hair wondering what he'll do now…

A: mujhe kissi bhi tarah uss basket tak pahunchna hoga..(he looked at basket from which aarish cryings were coming out, his heart mumbled with pain "my babyyy", armaan then holds one rope that's hangings around elephant, he holds that rope and thought to go up, but fell down with force as elephant kept on moving, he got up again and on the verge of holding rope.. when)

Ru: mere pass ek idea hai iss haathi ko shaant karne ka..( trio looked at her with expressions "then speak out, what are you waiting for???") yaad hai neha, princess, last day jab hamari training thi to sir ne lecture mai ek point ye bhi bataya tha "kissi bhi paagal janwar ko shant karne ke liye uske uppar thanda paani daal do to wo shaant ho jaata hai..

Pi: haan aisa sa kuch suna to tha…( neha's still unsure)

A: to paani mai lekar..

Ne: tum ruko mai lekar aati hun..

princess too goes with neha, where as armaan's getting restless, in between prachi, niki, ritu somehow shifted riddhima in cafeteria, armaan kept on trying to somehow reach to aarish, wants to hug him tightly, wants to secure him but remained unsuccessful, his patience too started leaving him, he's as if dieing in every second, kept on trying his level best to take hold on elephant,

princess, neha came running with bucket and without waiting they emptied whole bucket on elephant's face as if trying to wake elephant's soul, trying to make him/her understand that "what is he/she doing with that lil child", all were surprised when elephant calmed down with in a second,

all took relaxing breathe without knowing that it's the silence before storm, armaan without wasting time picked rucha up without giving her alert and asked her to pick out aarish quickly, rucha balanced herself and holds basket with one hand, then reached aarish, she puts her hand in basket and holds aarish from his arms,

aarish quickly holds her one finger tightly out of scarieness,rucha eyes quickly filled with tears when felt how much that lil child's scared, she slightly caressed her head, aarish tried to take turn on rucha's arm as if scared that she'll leave him, very desperate to come out, rucha's on the verge of taking him out,

when neha, princess shouted "ruchaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa", rucha with scared and confusion looked up and quickly crossed her hands on her face and shouted "maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa", her heart literally came out in her mouth when saw 2 trees coming towards her with speed, she closed her eyes tightly with horror and her eyes flashes the images of her loved ones, and in next moment she screamed loudly "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh"…

and neha, princess voice again touched her ears "ruchaaa", when she again heard "ruchhaaa". She opened her eyes slightly and found armaan, neha, princess looking her with worried eyes, rucha thought that she must be dreaming, "ye log shayad mujhse uppar milne aaye hai… (uppar means bhago ke pass) but when princess slapped her she came back to world and mumbled

"mai jinda hun, par kaise… wo paed…" she stopped when heard aarish screams, all of them quickly got up and saw one tree on ground to the other side of elephant and one tree partially on elephants back or better say on basket, trio mumbled "ohh shit", where as armaannnnn……. His feelings were undescribable,

he's cursing chirag for not bringing security guards on time, he's cursing himself that why he played game and left their son, their jaan in others hand, how he wanted to confort his son that time, how he wanted to hug him tightly and cry, how he wished to tell him how much he loves his child no one can ever define in words, no one can understand, he thought to kill elephant with gun…………

butttt he threw gun far away and cursed himself for having such thought,

"ek jaan ko bachane ke liye dusre ki jaan kaise le saktein hai, kuch aur sochna padega", in between elephant tried to run making tree on its back fell down but along with tree, basket too got detangled on its back, elephant started running,

all people ran away out of scariness, elephant's not seeing anything, kept on crushing whatever was coming in his/her way, armaan ran at the back of elephant followed by neha, princess, rucha's instructed to not to leave her place as her ankle's twisted as armaan quicklydropped her down when saw her life in danger, that's how she's saved though her ankle's slightly twisted but it didn't matter to anyone atleast she's saved….

In between riddhima gained slight consciousness and she mumbled aarish, and without looking here and there she just rushed out with unbalanced steps, ritu kept on stopping her but she didn't listen..

On other side, basket on elephants back got totally distangled and when elephant took another move, basket fell down to its left side and aarish came out from basket, now lying on ground, still crying badly, his cry stopped elephant, he turned to find out that from where that sound's coming and without realizing that their's one child next to his/her feet, elephant raised its feet,

from far away riddhima when saw elephant'll crush her child in next second, she screamed with force "aaarrriiissshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" her sound's almost double than her original sound, armaan looked at her, she again fell down on ground on her stomach, other side elephant screamed with pain and closed his/ her eyes when felt irritation in its eyes as neha quickly took mud from ground and threw it in elephnat's eyes,

elephant screamed with pain and took his step back, armaan quickly jump from back and before elephant could open its eyes, armaan again took jump such that he's lying on ground on his stomach in front of elephant and forwarded his arms and first touched aarish face, wanted to caress him but when heard elephant roar,

he quickly grab aarish in his arms, and rolled himself on ground, raising aarish in his arms, and when he reached in other direction, 9-10 steps away from elephant, he took first breathe from last hour otherwise his breathes's struck as if he didn't know how to breathe, tears escaped from his eyes as he placed aarish on his chest, assuring himself that their love is safe in his arms, he slightly kissed on aarish head, and again hugged him tightly,

dropped few more tears, aarish's still crying hard, his grip around armaan's hard, armaan got up when heard lil screams of neha and princess and found princess dragging neha as she's sitting holding her feet may be coz she hit her feet in stone, armaan rushed badly to them, holding aarish tightly when saw elephant coming towards them,

armaan from far asked princess to leave, he'll save neha, but princess shaked her head, armaan rushed fast, there's almost a one hand distance between elephant and neha-princess when armaan with one hand and princess with other dragged neha, then he handled aarish securely to princess and ask her to follow him as elephant's coming back,

he quickly lifted neha nad both rushed with speed, armaan asked princess to rush towards other side where as he kept on moving in circle and when felt that elephant's lil tired he moved towards cafeteria and placed neha on bench, then again silently moved in ground and holds rucha hand and came in cafeteria and made them settled comfortably,

all took deep breathes still feeling as if they'd seen a bad dream, armaan called niki and asked her to check princess, neha, rucha thoroughly and he himself moved back in a lone place with aarish who's crying badly, he again hugged him tightly and quickly moved out from cafeteria when riddhima's scream travelled in him, he quickly moved to riddhima, ritu and prachi's trying to get her back in world, but…..

ritu got up when saw armaan, she smiled when saw aarish in his arms, she quickly rushed to him, first tried to take aarish from armaan, but both armaan and aarish were holding each other tightly, ritu atlast caressed aarish's head with tears and kissed him, but aarish's feeling very insecured so he hides himself in armaan's chest tightly as if doesn't want anyone to see him, armaan mumbled "riddhima????????"

Ri: (in worried tone) hum usse kab se hosh mai lane ki koshish kar rahein hai par wo…. (armaan nodded and moved to her, seeing him prachi..)

Pr: armaan dekh na riddhima react hi nahi kar rahi… (armaan asked her to

calm down and he himself settled next to her and after kissing aarish he placed him on riddhima's chest, then took riddhima'a hand and placed it on aarish back, aarish calmed down a bit, ritu,prachi asked him what he's doing, he just asked them to wait, on other side aarish with tears moved his hand to riddhima's face and touches her,

waited for her reaction, then impatiently pulled her hair tightly and dug his face in the dimple of her collar bone and cried, in between he kept on raising his head and sucked her cheeks, then moved his lil arms around her neck and this time cried more loudly as if trying to tell her how much he's feeling insecure,

armaan had tears seeing the condition of his wife and child, aarish started getting impatient badly, his eyes kept on dropping tears on her and his one finger was almost digging in her chest and he's hitting his head in her and cried more as if saying "mumma mujhe pyaalll kalo na, mummaaaaa muje dal lag laha hai"

Ri: armaan kya kar raha hai, dekh na aarish kitna jayda ro raha hai, usse chup karwa de…

A: wohi koshish kar raha hun…. (he slightly mumbled, then took riddhima's hand and slightly caressed her, then aarish, aarissh after dragging himself a bit reached upto her face and rested his head on her forehead, his tears from her forehead flowed down to her eyes, in riddhima's heart some words roam as if someone's saying "mummmaaaaa, mummaaaaaa", riddhima's hands moved a bit, armaan lightly smiled seeing her move,

she moved her hands and slightly rubbed the body that's lying on her, then she opened her eyes widely when heard crying, she first didn't believe that he's her child but when while crying aarish slightly sucked the tip of her nose leaving saliva on her nose, she tightened her grip around aarish and showers kisses on him full of love and care,

then slightly raised him in air and looked his face thoroughly, then hugged him tightly and cried, then again showered kisses on him, kept on patting him and mumbled "my babyyy" armaan took a relaxing breathe when heard her voice as he feared that her scream before her unconciousness which's double then her original voice might result in losing her voice,

she looked at armaan, and with tears quickly placed her face in his lap and hides herself in his tummy with her hands caressing aarish, she cried lil more loudly, armaan hugged them and caressed them, riddhima didn't find words, aarish started calming down under the shade of extreme love of his parents,

he with sobs placed his face on her cleavage and placed his lil hand near her heart and feeling her heart beat he started calming down, riddhima's holding riddhima looked at armaan and hugged him tightly once again tightly, armaan cleared her tears and hugged her back, she slightly raised herself from his body and first kisses him near his heart,

then on his cheeks and clears his tears, then caressed his heart as if comforting him too, from his eyes tears rushed out with a gush, riddhima got up from his lap and hugged him tightly and caressed him and mumbled "bass armaan, our love's safe in our arms"

A: what if???? (he visualized his past 2 hours) what ifff????????? (he caressed aarish's head and dug his face in the curve of her neck, he's hell scared in heart, this's the second day in his life when he lived without breathes for 2 hours, first day was when he saw his jaan, his riddhima in van with her hand on bomb and police had asked him to move away from her, away from his soul,

that time he for the first time lived without breathes, and today's the second day when he's struggling to save their child and in heart worried about riddhima too, how he passed that 2 hours he himself don't know, he closed his eyes tightly and hugged riddhima tightly as tight as he can, riddhima's breathe stopped for once but she didn't move a bit, she's trying to feel the depth of his pain, and suddenly moved back with shock..

R: armaaaaannnnnnnnnn……(armaan looked her questionably, she showed her hand on which blood's there, then looked at his shoulder) armaannn ye kya…

(she looked at him horrified, armaan holds her hand and shaked his head, then again hugged her and silently conveyed him "I can bear this pain, this external wound easily but don't detangle me from yourself just hug me as tightly as you can, just love me as you can, I'm paining badly in heart" riddhima cried seeing him in that much pain and hugged him and kissed him, and kept on caressing him,

after sometime she holds his hand and took him inside and took dressing box from niki, then made him settle on chair, tried to move aarish, but he again started sobbing as if she's detangling him from herself, he holds her tightly again, riddhima moved him inside her jacket and jipped her jacket, then wore baby carrying bag on her jacket so that he'll not move even a single bit and started dressing armaan, she felt guilty while dressing him and after dressing him, she holds her ears, armaan looked her questionably)

R: I'm sorry armaan, tumhe akela chod diya na iss dard ko face karne ke liye, kaash uss waqt mai tumhare saath tumhari taakat bankar de paati par mai to itni gehri neend mai challi gayi, ye bhi nahi socha ki tum kaise face karoge, tum bhi aarish ke pita ho, tumhara dard mujhse kaise kam

Ho sakta hai, to tumhari tarah mujhe bhi to situation ko bravely face karna chahiye tha, tumhe ye yakeen dilwana chahiye tha ki mai hum tumhare saath, par mai to….. I'm sorry jaan,

(she holds her ears again wondering "kitna difficult raha hoga armaan ke liye ek taraf mai aur ek taraf aarish", she thought and shiver ran down through her spine, she quickly hugged him and mumbled " I promise armaan mai phir kabhi itna kamzor nahi banungi, hamesha har dard ko tumhare saath khadi hokar face karungi, aaj ki tarah behosh hokar nahi, I'm sorry armaan, armaan didn't utter a word just closed his eyes on her tummy.

After sometime both moved out with armaan hands around riddhima's shoulder, both were quiet, princess told them that elephant's caught by security guards, one of the security guard came to them and asked them if they are alright, they nodded..

S.G: maaf kijiyega aaj ke kasht ke liye, waise aisa kabhi nahi hota ki koi jaanwar iss phullon ki basti mai ghus aaye, yahan par sab bahut chaoukanne rehte hai kyunki iss basti ke piche hi bahut Ghana jungle hai..

Pi: phir aaj kya hua tha??? (with slight anger) kaha gayi apki saari security, aapki laparwahi ki wajah se kissi ki jaan jaa sakti thi, aapko kuch pata bhi hai iss baat ka???

S.G: sorry mam, par sab lunch karne gaye the, aise cases bahut kam hote hai, ye hathni paagal ho gayi hai, kissi ne iske bache ko apni goli ka shikaar bana liya tha, tab se ye paagal ho gayi hai, aaj pata nahi kaha se ye ghus aayi andar, hum phir se maafi chahte hai aapse…

Armaan-Riddhima were shocked when heard this, all of a sudden their heart're filled with love and affection for that elephant, they compared that elephant with themselves, then started understanding the madness of that elephant thinking "situation same thi bas insaan aur jaanwar ka farak tha, maa wo bhi hai, maa-baap hum bhi hai,

jab hum paaglo ki tarah behave kar sakte hai to wo paagal kyu nahi ho sakti," they literally felt bad for elephant and mumbled "log shikaar kyu karte hai??? Kyu bhul jaate hai ki jaanwaro mai bhi to hamari tarah jaan hoti hai, jaise hume hurt hota hai waise unhe bhi hurt hota hai, phir kyuu??????????"

they looked that elephant from far and prayed to god for her comfort, everyone came to them and caressed aarish and thanked god that he's safe, armaan looked at rucha,neha,princess with watery eyes and just blink his eyes greatfully as if saying " just a plain thanks to you", he's still not in a condition to say anything, so he's talking with eyes only..

They decided to leave from flower valley,all settled on their horses, and when AR were settling on horse, riddhima asked armaan to first sit on horse, armaan did that then riddhima holds his hand and climbed on horse but this time she sits such that she's facing armaan as both need each other and aarish needs them,

both didn't look at anyone, just comforting each other, riddhima placed her head on his collar bone, their arms together made cot for aarish, their horse started moving, both remained silent, in next 4 hours they reached down and reached their guest house in next 2 hours,all remained silent though out the way still in a daze though a lil bit…

As soon as they reached house, neha, rucha, princess called their loved ones and talked to them, confessed how much they love their family, their friends, though their loved ones found lil weird with this sudden comfession but felt great too, they thanked god for this life and for having such great people in their lives..

Riddhima somehow changed clothes as aarish's not going in anyone's arms except her and armaan, and armaan's taking out bags from car, so somehow she changed clothes holding him, then feeded him and started changing his clothes, her heart sank when she saw blood oozing out from his arm and tummy,

she with teary eyes touched his tummy but aarish holds her finger and kept on looking her, and moved his hand on her face and slightly pinched her cheeks, riddhima slightly smiled and hugged him, he slightly chuckled for the first time from past 7 hours, in between armaan entered in room and he looked her questionably when saw tears in her eyes,

she pointed to aarish arm, armaan dropped bags and took aarish and caressed his wounds, then they together did dressing and finally settled on bed, riddhima placed aarish next to her, but shifted him on her body when he started crying, he's really very insecure, in between his sleep also, he's again and again getting up and after caressing AR he again goes to sleep on riddhima's chest with both hands holding armaan's fingers..

around 5o'clock armaan got up, totally frightened and almost bathing in sweat, he looked riddhima and aarish and again his heart mumbled "what ifff?????" he remembered the scene when riddhima screamed loudly and goes unconscious, coz the way she screamed and fainted might result in shifting her to coma, as that scene had directly affected her heart and brain, it's only aarish touch which brought her back to world, armaan believed that completely as being a neurologist he can easily identify that what can affect her and how…

He kissed on her face and rested his face on hers, riddhima opened her eyes and pulled him towards her, so that he's partially lying on her, riddhima while caressing him mumbled "armaan lets go to Mumbai, please ab mujhe yahan par secure nahi lag raha, hum apne ghar waapis chalte hai aaj hi…."

A: par parso diwali hai riddhima, sab…

R: (cutting him) armaan hum diwali apne ghar par aaram se celebrate karienge, please armaan rishu ki pehli diwali hai aur hamare ghar par bhi to diya jalna chahiye na, iss saal to hum apne ghar par andhera bilkul bhi nahi rakh sakte jab bhagwaanji ne hume itna pyara sa beta dekar hamari life mai ujala kiya hai, aura b to yaha ki hawa bhi insecure lagne lagi hai, iss maahol mai hum diwali kaise celebrate karienge, please waapis chalte haina, please… (armaan nodded and kissed on her head)

A: jaane se pehle hume kissi aur ko bhi thanks kehna hai riddhima….(riddhima looked him questionably) unn teen logon ko jinki wajah se shayad mujhe, tumhe aur hamare pyar ko nayi jindagi mili, agar unhone himmat na ki hoti to aaj, iss waqt kuch aur hi maahol hota…

To be continued..

Precap: Start of new track…. New life, new stage of AR relation, lets see if they'll be able to face that situation or will breakup in between, they'll die together in each other's love or will die after getting apart, is it possible, can armaan asks riddhima for divorce????? lets see if this story'll end in next 10-15 parts or………………. Just wait for new track, be ready….

Next update: Saturday

Will pm you with next update, if anyone's name is missing from pm list kindly inform me and if anyone's not interested in receiving pms then also inform me…

Lots of love

Ankita.

Edited by GoDsLoVe - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kya Pyaar Aisa Bhi Ho Sakta Hai
(P.s- Changing my style of comment as this update left me wondering, i cant think of many things and also my style might not fit with future track)

You, yes the writer, Ankita deserves a standing ovation for this update.
👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Seriously it belongs to some other level.............trust me if the new track is going to be like this, so intense, so marvellous, am surely in. Update was awesomely beautiful.


Meri maa AL-QAIDA se talukaat rakhti hai.......AK-47 mili iske paas..........

🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

to tum hi aa jao, wo dono thodi moti hai, uthana mushkil hoga..
Oye granny, kahaan moti hain meri maa aur saas........humara to pura khaandan bas GULGULA hai....
🤣🤣🤣

aarish quickly holds her one finger tightly out of scarieness,rucha eyes quickly filled with tears when felt how much that lil child's scared,
Awwwwww.................amazing Rucha... 👍🏼


"ye log shayad mujhse uppar milne aaye hai'
🤣

"ek jaan ko bachane ke liye dusre ki jaan kaise le saktein hai, kuch aur sochna padega"
Pure soul on this earth....its KPABHSH's Armaan!!!! 👏


aarish came out from basket, now lying on ground, still crying badly
If this scene is actually played in front of us na then.............
he quickly lifted neha
🤣

arish's feeling very insecured so he hides himself in armaan's chest tightly
aarish with tears moved his hand to riddhima's face and touches her,

waited for her reaction, then impatiently pulled her hair tightly and dug his face in the dimple of her collar bone and cried, in between he kept on raising his head and sucked her cheeks, then moved his lil arms around her neck and this time cried more loudly as if trying to tell her how much he's feeling insecure,
"mumma mujhe pyaalll kalo na, mummaaaaa muje dal lag laha hai"


👏
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

situation same thi bas insaan aur jaanwar ka farak tha, maa wo bhi hai, maa-baap hum bhi hai,
👏👏

As soon as they reached house, neha, rucha, princess called their loved ones and talked to them, confessed how much they love their family,
Mujhe phone nai aaya inn dono ka......😆

Superbbbbbbbb update............tu leke aa new track.......dhang se,😉 to main patak patak k apne bandon ko leke aaungi....😆

Great work!!!! Love you...!!!
Thanks for d pm.
WAITING for the update!! 😃

Edited by kshanikaa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Pyar Kabhi Marta Nahin HUM TUM marte Hain
Hote Hain Woh Log AMAR Pyar Jo karte Hain
Maa...this update was reallllllllly wonderful...full of emotions..
sorry ispe comment karna thoda nahin bohat mushkil ho raha hai...
bas itna hi kahungi I M TOUCHED😊😊
u know naa I absolutely Adore KPABHSH???
but still can't tell you how much I love it..
I always thought "love" is just another word for a compromise that two individuals make when they marry..
but it's also a dream that every girl sets up for herself.. before it breaks....I know it sounds ironic to say all this, and then say that I love KPABHSH at the same time, but reading it... made me drift into a fantasy for a while as well and it's just so beautifully written that one can't help but fall in love with it....
I so much respect nd love you for all this...nd i know kuch bhi ho jaye usmein jeevan ka bohat bada sach chupa hota hai...ek lesson hota sabke liye...
pichli 2 journeys mein itna PYAR dekh ke shayad kuch jayda bura dekhne ki aadat nahin hai...isliye precap se dar lag raha hai thoda... par thats ok
aap jo karoge jo likhoge usse pakka kuch seekhne ko hi milega I m sure...
Anyways again I wanna say THANK YOU for KPABHSH... I don't think I'll ever forget it.
I m all prepared for NEW TRACK
All d veryyyyyyyyyy bestttttttttt
Love you soooooooo much Maa
Aapki nehu😊
Edited by Neha_luvPRB - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
res.. 😃
**Edited**
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
Ankitaaa.. yeh kya kiya..
Main yeh part padhke khush hui ya emotional muje bhi pata nai chala.. par ek baat hai yeh sab imagine karke na main hasi bohot.. kyunki actual life mein mujhe Elephants aur Camels se BOHOT darr lagta hai.. maine aaj tak kabhi inki rides bhi nai li coz i fear height.. par chal tuney mere se yeh bhi karva diya.. 😳 😳 😳 😳
AWESOME update..
baaki saare updates se hatke tha yeh vala.. pata nahi may be i cannot pinpoint par i guess jaise har update mein humara fav. Romance hota thha iss bar pehli baar iss update mein pyar se bhi zyada Insecurities thhi.. i liked the way you've showed Armaan's character with such confidence nd impulsively decisive.. 🤗 huggie teri hai ARmaan ki nai.. 😆..
AAaaaaaaaaaawwwwwww mela nanha sha baby inna darr gaya tha na aur chot bhi lag gayi.. koi ni shab ek ek kishi karenge toh theek ho jayega aru baby.. 😃..
I really like AR nd Aru moments when they were going back nd in their room aswell..
you pretty well know how to express feelings perfectly.. nd i lub u for that..
i'm waiting to see if you'll be writing more about this incident.. coz sirf AR ki hi feelings aayi hain abhi.. baakiyon pe kya asar hua.. 😉..
New Journeyyyy.. 😃
Chalo ji eh vi dekhenge..
Aap likhe jao bas.. hum padhte rahenge.. par peash humare nanhe nazuk dilon ka dhyaan rakhna.. ☺️
lub u sweetheart..
thanku for the update..
aapka Lucha Singh.. 😆
Edited by frnd.of.frndz - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

the part was as usual fantastic i loved the way rucha princess n neha helped armaan n love the bond between ar i hope they remain together forever n thanxsssssss for the pm 😊

Edited by riddhan - 15 years ago

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