Undefined...old AY one shot! - Page 2

O M GGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! this is soooooooooooo sooooooooooooooooo coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool... 👏 man i jus luved it... ahh relly got deeper n deeper in2 this.. really 2 good!!!!!!!!!!! want some more....... 😳

r fic is out of the world... i mean it so well written... keep it up yaar...

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thats all i can doooo nowwwww!!!!!!!!!!

so welll written my godddddddd!!!

this is one of the best fics i have ever read!!!!!!!!!

soooo veryyyyy veryyyy awesumly written!!!!!!!!1 😆 😆

how cum i did not read it before?

neways i luv ittttt !!!!
its just like................ lovelyyyyyy especially the last part !! 😳

i was just going on reading it like anything!!!!!

i want more of it!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
please can u write more??please???????

Hey--
that was really good--
its actually the first ONE SHOT i've ever read-- dint even knw wat a one shot was before today--
really liked this one tho !! it was gr8 how u managed to get a whole story line in just that one part --
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I dunno how i never replied in this particular one shot because if you consider, this has been one of my most fav. ones because i always wanted something like this to happen during elections!!☺️☺️☺️ I have been laughing and also having same feeling as AY while reading it...that feeling of anger on each other...i could soo feel it...in fact more than anger it was like feeling of losing the person they loved...ashi was scared of losing yuvi and him turning into yuckwant dev part 2 and yuvi...he was scared of losing ashi's friendship!!

But i simplyyyy loved how the kiss took place!! OMG harshu...i am losing words...i was grinning and blushing at the same time while reading it (read it after 1 year or something)... i can seriously say that ki you portray Ashi-Yuvi's love-hate relationship the best through your shots😳😳😳 I have been reading all your shots/fics these days like loquacious, moments, irresistible, undefined...and in all of them...you have just rocked and rocked ashi-yuvi!😳😳😳

I think you wrote this in moments that your endings are mostly cliched...but i don't agree...they are THE BEST and soo unique...just AY/RD-ish types!😳😳 I mean the way you ended undefined...seriously harshu, you make us greedy!! I tempt for moreee and now i'm going to read Taciturn Romance!☺️☺️ But shit man harshu...you seriously rock!🤗🤗 "guess!!" BEST ENDING MAN!!! OMG! I soo wish you were the writer of season 2!! You would have rocked remix...or well atleast some scenes yaar!😳☺️😍 I just can't stop saying... OMG! Because it is like one of the bestestestestest one shot i read and it had mixture of emotions! Hey bhaggu harshu... I LOVE YOU!😳🤗🤗 I'm just crazy about your writings (more than smriti)

I just can't stop thinking about how the kiss took place and the whole "guess" part!🤣☺️☺️ haha...when i visualize it, the scene is soo freaking hottttt and naughty at the same time!☺️☺️ I love the flirty yuvi and blushing ashi who is pretending not to blush at all!😆😳😳 YOU ROCK HARSHU!!🤗🤗🤗

your biggest fan ever,
Finally one year old,
Nappy

PS: Still finding the verb form of rock in french for you☺️
PPS: Sorry for bringing back this long lost, 2007 topic...but i just couldn't resist it!☺️😳