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Posted: 16 years ago
Heya Nisha Di..πŸ€—...I Read Ur full FF right now...πŸ˜›....and Found It really Good...😊

I Loved the plot - Dharam and his sister Ananya...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...Great , Owesum !!!

Awww VEER and Dharam are BessHt frens from such a l'll age and not brothers, and Dharam's sis Ananya...shO cute !!! What a story πŸ‘ Hatts Off !!! ⭐️
Lolz...🀣...This VEER is so Naughty...πŸ˜†...He's realli chweeet...😳...!!!


veer : "kuch nahiiii..." he starts critisizing the girl with a cunning face "humto bas ye sonchrahe tha ki ye dekne main kitni ajeeb hai!!, iski naak to deko! patahi nahi chalta ke hai ya nahi? Aur iski ankhen to gotiyoon ki tarah gol gol hain"

^^^^ 🀣

4-yr Old boy..πŸ˜† and starting cricizing his fren's sis...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Oh God koi samjhao Isko, feel lyk to cuddle Him, 😳 cutie Pie! And if Ananya wud be able to speak then surely der wud be a gr8 nok- jhok session btwn em...πŸ˜† Ohh God Dis VEER ab started making faces even...πŸ˜†...Aww poor l'll gal, dara diya VEER ne! πŸ˜†

WoO dats so Cute Nivriti saying, VEER can live widout her but nt widout Dharam...πŸ˜ƒ

Lolz....VEER neva lsitens to anyone....tried to ride on the horse and hwn fell dwn put the blame on Sainiks...'' tum hamara dhyaan bhi nahi rakh sakte..?''🀣
The journey to Gurukul was Hillarious....πŸ˜†....Brilliantly Written ! πŸ‘

VEER is strong and brave but is very Sensitive at heart...😊...Loved the way he started crying seeing Dharam unconscious....Great Scene! πŸ‘

How chwweeettttt....πŸ˜ƒ....Dharam buys a doll for Ananya and smiling thinking Ananya wud be five yrs old by Now...😳

Btw dV wud be 9 or 10 yrs Old na?πŸ˜•How is Jaivardhan and Aryavardhan related ?

Wowowowo....A Great hand of applause for the scene when Ananya comes in front of Dharam..*πŸ‘* Dis Gurl Ananya is such a Sweet heart...😳....Lolz kahin VEER saari kheer na khaa le...🀣

Awww VEER missing His mum so Much...😭...Bt its not even Nivriti's fault na, Hmmm listening to all that surely VEER will becum much more responsible !

Oh man ! This part is so Gud, The first half was so hillarious...πŸ˜†....Ananya ki chaal uspar hi bhaari padhi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†....Lolz ! Everyone playing with Mud...πŸ˜† And then such a lovely scene, VEER woke up cutely rubbing his eyes and saw Nivriti, awww how excited was he..πŸ˜†πŸ˜›...Started speaking continuously !

Wow Rakhi scene was fab...Lolz VEER loves eating and had suchhh a long list to eat..πŸ˜†
Awww Ananya always thinks bout her frens...and this Jv is cruel ova here olso..😑 How can he beat a small gal Like that...and even shouted at Ananya..😑 Awww poor Ananya felt so bad 😭, she was nt able to help her fren even !

Wow...😳....VEER neva knew how t talk wida gal and always disliked Ananya bt is here today jus t make her laugh....owesum scene!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Wow VEER is relli gud at heart, owesum Nisha di, kya scene tha ! For sure when Ananya will grow up she'll start liking VEER more remembering this thing..πŸ˜›

Ohh these shramiks are so irritating...😑😑😑.....attacked two l'll princes...!!! 😑 Phew finally everything fynπŸ˜•

WoO Huh so finally dV are young kya? wOwO VEER won bt such a senti senti scene...πŸ‘...Dharam let VEER win...awww that was so Good!
Huh...Ananya coming ova der....wow it wud be so much fun bt Ananya shud hv been atleast 13 and VEER 15 then it wud hav suited em so much...😊
Wo its tym for agni's marriage......Hailaa....ab toh bahot mazaa aayega ! πŸ˜ƒ Lolz Ananya is a complete Chatterbox...Owesum, truly Matches wid VEER bt dunno y VEER still dislikes her......atleast thoda toh pasand karta..πŸ˜‰


Veer: "wo tumhe hi don raha hoga…" and mermered "lekin milna to tumhe mujhe hi tha…"
😳

Haiilllaaa....😲😲😲 why did VEER said that ? is this starting of something new..? Huh πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Awww dharam finally saw his gal...ahha...RKi siya...whuhoo...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Lolz....VEER was lost in Ananya's performance so Muchhh....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† that even pulled the man whu came in front of Him...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
wO wO VEER saved Ananya... and Dharam saved Siya......wO Agni made a superb entry Huh ! πŸ˜‰πŸ‘

Nisha di I just loved Ur FF...Its seriously Superb....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...I MussHt say the way u write it is owesum Huh ! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

Moreover update the Next part soon, I cant Wait to read Agni's weddig part...πŸ˜ƒ Dharam Siya and VEER Ananya , all of em wud b der ! 😍


RT_vinisha....!πŸ€—
living for...😳😳😳
❀️RAJAT❀️forever😍😍😍

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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely dear...pls. update the next part soon...Will be waiting........Really liked the part where veer mouth is left open seeing Ananya dance
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieA

awesome update Nishi...its was jst too kuul! dis is a silly question but who is opposite Veer? it cant b Ananya as she will b a cousin to him... hmmm prcap: Agni's wedding...i cant wait! mwah


muwahhh ams for appreciating...but sory for replying late...i was quite busy yaar...
its ananya....ya she is cousin ....in india most of cousins get married by either arrange or love marraige...
will update soon dear
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetest girl

hiiiii

it wass a greatt parttt
i reallly likeedd
plzz update sooonnn

thanks iram...
will update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

Lovely dear...pls. update the next part soon...Will be waiting........Really liked the part where veer mouth is left open seeing Ananya dance

awww thanks for reading n commenting megha
will update it soon....sorry for keeping u waiting 4 long
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: silverlinesky

gud job....pls update soonn

thanks for reading it....will update it soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vinisha_RAJAT

Heya Nisha Di..πŸ€—...hi vini πŸ€—πŸ€— I Read Ur full FF right now...πŸ˜› wowww i hop u were not bored....and Found It really Good...😊 aww thanks yaar😳

I Loved the plot - Dharam and his sister Ananya...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...Great , Owesum !!! thanks again....
πŸ€—πŸ€—

Awww VEER and Dharam are BessHt frens from such a l'll age yeahhhhπŸ˜› and not brothers they r cousins as in dv , and Dharam's sis Ananya...shO cute !!! yup very cute...What a story πŸ‘ Hatts Off !!! ⭐️ aww thanks 4 appreciating my work...😳
Lolz...🀣...This VEER is so Naughty...πŸ˜† yes.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..He's realli chweeet...😳...!!!
ya😳

veer : "kuch nahiiii..." he starts critisizing the girl with a cunning face "humto bas ye sonchrahe tha ki ye dekne main kitni ajeeb hai!!, iski naak to deko! patahi nahi chalta ke hai ya nahi? Aur iski ankhen to gotiyoon ki tarah gol gol hain"

^^^^ 🀣 <<<<πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

4-yr Old boy..πŸ˜† and starting cricizing his fren's sis...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† [shaitani se baaz nahi ayega...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†]Oh God koi samjhao Isko ye to kisi ki bhi nahi sunta...πŸ˜†, feel lyk to cuddle Him, 😳 cutie Pie! And if Ananya wud be able to speak then surely der wud be a gr8 nok- jhok session btwn em...πŸ˜† Ohh God Dis VEER ab started making faces even...πŸ˜† natkat ladka..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...Aww poor l'll gal, dara diya VEER ne! πŸ˜† haanπŸ˜†

WoO dats so Cute Nivriti saying, VEER can live widout her but nt widout Dharam...πŸ˜ƒ yup

Lolz....VEER neva lsitens to anyone....tried to ride on the horse and hwn fell dwn put the blame on Sainiks...'' tum hamara dhyaan bhi nahi rakh sakte..?''🀣 ye baaz nahi ayega apni shaitani harkaton seπŸ˜†
The journey to Gurukul was Hillarious....πŸ˜†....Brilliantly Written ! πŸ‘ im glad u likd it....😳😳

VEER is strong and brave but is very Sensitive at heart...😊 yup 😳...Loved the way he started crying seeing Dharam unconscious he is very much attached to dharam....Great Scene! πŸ‘thanksπŸ˜ƒ

How chwweeettttt....πŸ˜ƒ....Dharam buys a doll for Ananya and smiling thinking Ananya wud be five yrs old by Now...😳 ya he is very loving n caring bro😊

Btw dV wud be 9 or 10 yrs Old na? s πŸ˜•How is Jaivardhan and Aryavardhan related ? same as in dv

Wowowowo....A Great hand of applause for the scene when Ananya comes in front of Dharam..*πŸ‘* thaku thanku....im glad tat u likd it
πŸ€—πŸ€— Dis Gurl Ananya is such a Sweet heart...😳yes....Lolz kahin VEER saari kheer na khaa le...🀣<<<πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Awww VEER missing His mum so Much...😭...Bt its not even Nivriti's fault na, Hmmm listening to all that surely VEER will becum much more responsible ! s he will....

Oh man ! This part is so Gud,thanku The first half was so hillarious...πŸ˜†.thanku...im glad tat i maked u laugh...Ananya ki chaal uspar hi bhaari padhi...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†[πŸ˜†πŸ˜†]....Lolz ! Everyone playing with Mud...πŸ˜† haan abhi bhi bache hainπŸ˜†πŸ˜† And then such a lovely scene, VEER woke up cutely rubbing his eyes and saw Nivriti, awww how excited was he..πŸ˜†πŸ˜›...Started speaking continuously ! haan he was just firing...

Wow Rakhi scene was fab...Lolz VEER loves eating and had suchhh a long list to eat..πŸ˜† haan wo ye mauka kaise chod sakta haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Awww Ananya always thinks bout her frens...yup and this Jv is cruel ova here olso..😑 haan😑😑How can he beat a small gal Like that...and even shouted at Ananya..😑 Awww poor Ananya felt so bad 😭, she was nt able to help her fren even ! ya she was very sad

Wow...😳....VEER neva knew how t talk wida gal and always disliked Ananya bt is here today jus t make her laugh....owesum scene!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ im glad tat u liked it vini Wow VEER is relli gud at heart, yes he has golden heart owesum Nisha di, kya scene tha ! thaku For sure when Ananya will grow up she'll start liking VEER more remembering this thing..πŸ˜› hmmm u got me😊

Ohh these shramiks are so irritating...😑😑😑.....attacked two l'll princes...!!! 😑 ya thy r vry cruel Phew finally everything fynπŸ˜• hmmm

WoO Huh so finally dV are young kya? ya they r teens but u w will c one more leep aftr agni's marrige thn u will c young dv...wOwO VEER won bt such a senti senti scene...πŸ‘haan ...Dharam let VEER win...awww that was so Good! yup akhir best frnd hai....
Huh...Ananya coming ova der....wow it wud be so much fun bt Ananya shud hv been atleast 13 and VEER 15 then it wud hav suited em so much...😊 ya but anaya is dharam's sis so i hav to keep some gap between them....
Wo its tym for agni's marriage......Hailaa.yessssssss...ab toh bahot mazaa aayega ! πŸ˜ƒ wo to hai....Lolz Ananya is a complete Chatterbox...yup Owesum, truly Matches wid VEER bt dunno y VEER still dislikes her......atleast thoda toh pasand karta..πŸ˜‰
thodapasand karta hai par jata ta nahi u will c veer caring ananya in next comming parts

Veer: "wo tumhe hi don raha hoga'" and mermered "lekin milna to tumhe mujhe hi tha'"
😳

Haiilllaaa....😲😲😲 why did VEER said that ? is this starting of something new..? Huh πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
no yaar veer was iritatingly said tat.....
Awww dharam finally saw his gal...ahha...RKi siya...whuhoo...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ haan at last...😳😳
Lolz....VEER was lost in Ananya's performance so Muchhh....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† that even pulled the man whu came in front of Him...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† yes....he was totally involved....
wO wO VEER saved Ananya... and Dharam saved Siya......wO Agni made a superb entry Huh ! πŸ˜‰πŸ‘ yes

Nisha di I just loved Ur FF...Its seriously Superb....πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ im glad tat u liked it vini ...I MussHt say the way u write it is owesum Huh ! πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘ awww thanks 4 such a wonderfull comment....πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Moreover update the Next part soon,ok boss I cant Wait to read Agni's weddig part...πŸ˜ƒ will do it asap Dharam Siya and VEER Ananya , all of em wud b der ! 😍 yes,...


RT_vinisha....!πŸ€—
living for...😳😳😳
❀️RAJAT❀️forever😍😍😍

thanks vini for reading n commenting ...
im glad tat u likd it

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Posted: 16 years ago
dude where r u????????plzzzzzzzzzz update soon............its good FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey sweetie still waiting for the next part..pls. update soon!

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