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Posted: 16 years ago
oooh kuuul...hmmm...interestin lol...update soon huni xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieA

oooh kuuul...hmmm...interestin lol...update soon huni xxx


ok i will update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
im late😭
chalo superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr why dont u contact sagar's to write DV story han
greatttttttt its getting more exciting yaar👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: abira

im late😭

chalo superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr why dont u contact sagar's to write DV story han
greatttttttt its getting more exciting yaar👏


im glad that u liked it😳😳
😳hehehe sagars ke paas mujhse bhi kai zyada talented writers hai😉😆😆
hugs 4 u🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part14

dharam entered the room and heared veer saying 'ab maza ayega'

dharam: "kya hua veer tum kiski baat karrahe ho??"

veer: "wo …wo…kuch nahi dharam ….main …main…."

Dharam: "ye kya main main keh rahe ho….teek hai mat bato …..waise tumhe pata hai ke kal kaun araha hai?"

Veer predending as if he doest now any thing: "kaun dharam?"

Dharam: "kal ananya arahi hai" and dharam turned to otherside

Veer controlling his laugh :" acha….par wo yahan??"

Dharam : "haan wo yahan ek mela hai jahan par nritya ka mukabla hone wala hai ,ananya ne usi mukable main hissa liya hai"

Veer mermerd: "lagta hai ke ye musibat mera picha nahi chodne wali"

Dharam: "kya kaha tumne??"

Veer: "nahi nahi kuch nahi"

Dharam: "veer hum bohot khush hai aaj …..kitni badi hogayi hogi wo shayad 11 saal ki hogayi hogi….kuch saalon baad uski shadi ho jayegi aur wo humse door chali jayegi….hum uski shadi kuch istah se karengi ki sara aryanagar dekta rahjaye ga… "

Veer got bored of this and bet on dharam's sholder twice so as to wake up him from his dream land and said : "dharam ye baat tum mujhe kai baar bata chuke ho ….ab bas karo main aur nahi sun sakta …..hume is waqt agni bhayya ke bare mai baat karni chahiye aur tum ho ki ananya ke baten kar rahe ho……ab chalo, hume sona bhi hai…phir subha wo tumhari ananya bhi ajayi gi"

Dharam smiled and said: "teek hai baba chalo"


-----------In the palace of aryanagar-------------

Every one was busy decorating the palace ….

Maharaj aryawardan was discussing with his mantries
Jaiwardan was intructing siniks about the security of the mehal
On the other side maharani swathi was instructing her dasis how to decorate the palace with flowers…
A group of girls were running here and there….and one of them shouted "nivriti buaaa" and near her

M.Nivriti : "are ananya kaise ho?"

Ananya: "main teek hon…par aap se bohot naraz hoon"

Nivi: "kyun??"

Ananya: "kyun kya?ek to aap itne dino baad ayi hai aur wo bhi itni deer se??"

Nivi smiled and said: "acha baba ab hume maaph kardo ….age se hum aysa nahi karenge…"

Ananya smiled :"bua wo…" but she was interrupted by m.swathi

M.swathi: "are nivriti kaisi ho tum??"

M.nivi: "main teek hoon …..pehle ye batao humare dulah raja kahan hai??"

Ananya: "agni bhayya to shayad rajkumari di.." agni comes from behind of ananya and closes her mouth with his hand…and says.."are bua aap kab ayi"

m.nivi smiles and says: " hum abhi aye…..ananya bata rahi thi ke tum…"and she looks at swathi smiling…

agni starts blushing :"kya bua aap bhi!!!"

swathi: "acha baba teek hai ab ye ladki yon ki tarah sharmana band karo…..nivriti tum mere saat chalo mujhe tumhe kuch dekha na hai…."

And both queens leave from there…

Ananya siganaled to leave her mouth: "mmmmmm"

Agni removes his hand from ananya's mouth and says: "to tum kya kehrahi thi??"

Ananya: "wo chodo bhayya ye batao aap aaj humari bhabi mera matlab rajkumari disha se milne wale the na….to aap ko jana nahi hai"

Agni: "haan mujhe jana hai…par ye tumhe kaise pata??..."

Ananya slowly walkes backward and says" wo kya hai na aap jab bhabi ko khat likhrahe the wo humne padliya tha"

Agni :" kyaa??...ananya ki bachi main tumhe!!!!!"

And then ananya runs to save her life and agni chases her they reach agni's room and ananya running around the bed and also agni ...

Ananya: "bhayya ab to mere piche chodo…bechari bhabi tumhara intezaar kar rahi hogi…"

Agni: "teek hai bacho main tumhe baad main dekhlonga!!"

Agni looked in the mirror to check whether he was looking perfect

Ananya comes from back and says: "ek baat kahen bhayya"

Agni: "haan kaho"

Ananya: "aaj bhabi gayi kaam se"

Agni: "chalo ab bohot mazak ho gaya…waise ye batao ke tumhari tayyari puri hogayi??"

Ananya:"haan ,par agar aap mere saat calte to mujhe aur bhi khushi hoti"

Agni: "pagli tumhe kya lagta hai ke main tumhare saat aana nahi chahta wo chachaji ne mujhe ek kaam diya hai ,aur tum to jaan ti ho na ke main unki baat nahi taal ta….aur waise bhi , wahan par dharamveer honge na…"

Ananya: "haan wo dono to hai par aap ki aap ke jane ki wajah sirf kaam hai kya"

Agni : "haan baba sirf kaam hai…aur sirf 2 din ki to baat hai main wapas akar tumse dar sari baatan karonga…aur tumhare leye ek tohoha bhi laonga…"

Ananya: "to phir teek hai…kuch deer baad main apna safar shuru kardoon gi"

Agni: "waise veer se bach ke rehna…yaad hai na pichli baar kya kya hua tha"

Ananya:" is baar agar usne humse panga liya to main us aysa sabak seekhaongi ke wo zindagi bhar nahi bhool payega…"

Agni: "acha baaba teek hai sekhaaadena…...par ab main chalta hoon…chachaji mera intezaar karrahe honge…"

Both ananya and agni left the room..

Ananya went to her room and started packing when swathi entered saying:" ananya.."

Ananya: "ji maa"

Swathi: "to tumhari tayyari hogayi"

Ananya: "haan maa.."

Swathi: "teek hai to phir jaldi chalo tumri palki tayyar hai…"

Then both of them walked to the gate of rajmehal

Swathi:" apna khayal rakhna…aur haan dharamveer ko humara pyar dena aur sabse zaruri jaldi wapas ana akhir agni ki shadi hai … aur haan jeet na zarur.."

ananya: "maa ye baat aap hume suba se kehrahe ho aab hum chalet hai…"

and ananya sat in palki and started her journey…

precap: dharam veer ananya meet

sory frnds for the delay...and also becoz i was not able to add agni and disha scene here u will find it in nxt update which will be in next 2/3 days....

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Posted: 16 years ago
it was mind blowing i liked ananya and agni's bro sis chemistry it was cool plz do cont...
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Posted: 16 years ago
awsome update huni! i simply love Agni-ananya relationship its so adorable! hmmm did Veer do sumfing lol...y did he say dt in the begining lol...or is dt he found out Ananya is comin...hmmmm xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the lovely update dear...Hmmm DV & Ananya meeting in the next part...I m sure it will be a roler coster ride
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice update yaar...
Waw agni is getting married cool.... can't wait for the next part
Update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
mind blowing awsome cool superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr wah very cool updates yaar 👏 aur yeh bhi tumhary liya sweety🤗Agni-ananya relationship its so adorable very nice veer is soooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet😍

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