FF: +Kismat Aur Ishq:New More n more romance pg 67

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good day everyone😊.. Most of u might not know me as I wasn't active at first.. After reading ff's , this thought just came up to me.. Why don't I create one? FF writers thanks for coming up with great ideas n u have given me the inspiration to begin with this FF. I can't write in hindi as I don't know hindi.. I'm not good at language.. hehe.. If u have given me a choice between calculus and language.. I'll go for calculus.. I'm sorry if there's any error in my writing (vocab) feel free to PM or comment.. I hope u will like this FF😉..

Characters

Rahul Raichand :

    Sharad Maholtra , 25 Successful business man , he took over Airtel after the death of his father Eldest in the family, has a younger brother (Kishen) Music = him
  • Punctuality isn't in his dictionary

Kishen Raichand

    Rahul's younger bro Schooling ( primary school )
  • a.k.a laddoo ( nick given by Rahul)

Madam Laila Raichand

    Rahul's mom She over- reacts sometime.. ( like Om's mom in Om shanti OM) Very loving n kind
  • Just wants rahul to get married asap


Anjali Sharma

    Divyanka Tripathi, 22 she is doing her Master's in IT Editor of V-MAG Only child in the family Music is her passion, great dancer
  • Punctual n hates it when someone is late

Mr Raj Sharma

    Anjali's dad He is a magistrate Very jovial , loving and caring
  • He has a quick temper but only gets mad at small things except anjali

Mrs Raj Sharma

    Anjali's mom Housewife
  • Active in social service

Tanya

    Age 22 Mr n Mrs Sharma treats her as their own daughter.. there is no difference between Anjali n her Doing masters in business Anjali's bestie More like a sis to her
  • She lives with Anjali as her parents past away when she was young

Shilpa , Sushma :Anjali's working colleagues

Krish Harshan Akshay :Rahul's friends


Part 1

Rahul: Kishen where is my pants!!! I'm late for the ball.. Kishen ' oh man!! I wonder where is this laddoo??

Kishen: Where shall I hide this?? I wanna have some fun with my loving dada.. *giggles*

Rahul has spotted Kishen n his face was fuming with anger as he knows that has to be this laddoo's work..

Rahul: U fat laddoo.. Can't u do any better work?? Instead of eating laddoos why do u have to mess with me.. I'm gonna!!!!!!.

Mdm Laila: Hey u two' Can't u both take a break?? Whats the matter now.

Rahul: Mom.. This fat laddoo hide my pants n I'm running late to the ball.

Mdm Laila : Kishen beta my bujji darling, I have bought for u a set of MCDonalds.. Now can u please give ur brother's pants..

Kishen: Sure Mom. I love you.

Mdm Laila: I love u too beta..

Rahul: *sighs* I can't stand this mother n son thing.. Now can I have my pants

Rahul is all set for the dance..

Rahul: Finally, I'm done.. He drives his sports car

image of his tuxedo n car :





Oh wait.. I don't have a date n besides this is a masked ball.. I'll just try my luck.. Come on Rahul.. I knw u can't stand girls but just don't have that tought today.. Who wouldn't fall for this Pince Charming 😎??

All of a sudden, a girl just came from the entrance and Rahul couldn't take his eyes off from her.. It is as if he is in a different planet and all he can see is that Miss Gorgeous.. I think she's my charming lady for this beautiful evening.. although i can't get the exact image as her face is covered with that mask.. But i knw definitely she is the one 😎

she was wearing this :

Rahul: Hi! I was just thinking if you would wanna dance with me?

Girl: Sure , my friend couldn't come for some personal reason .. So I guess its ur luck.. *smiles*

Valentine's Dance Tango is playing at the background

watch this : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlcG5OXEKHY

* just imagine it was rahul n that mysterious girl in that video 😉 just focus on th dance*

Their feet's were just moving as the song was playing.. It is as if their feet's know the tune of the music.. Rahul lips is just about to the touch the girl's'''''''

Rahul : What the hell..I was having a sweet dream n you Laddooo..

Kishen : Oi dada.. I have been yelling ur name for the past 30 mins.. Looks like as if U don't belong to this world.. So I decided to pour that bucket of cold water.. How was my special treatment * battling eyelashes*

Rahul: You big fat laddooo.. Wait .. wait you.. Don't runaway.. ( Rahul was chasing Kishen all over the house . He looks at the clock , its 9 .45 .. he has an urgent meeting at 10 . )

ps: sorry if the update was short as this is my 1st ff.. i just came up with the title Rahul aur Anjali coz couldn't think of any cool ones.. If u have any idea of the title pls feel free to comment.. pls comment of this update whether u like it.. was it bad or good😉

Part 1 - pg 1
Part 2 - pg 2
Part 3- pg 4
Part 4 - pg 4
Part 5 - pg6
Part6 - pg7
part 7- pg 9

part 8- pg 12
part 9-pg 14
part10-pg 18
part 11-pg 21😃
part 12-pg 26
part 13-pg 31
part14-pg37
part 15a-41
part15b-44
part16-47
part 16b-51
part 17a-57
Edited by shobbybee - 15 years ago

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Vidyaa thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Dear

That was a great start.

Nice to have one more FF.

Hope to have another great FF. Continue soon.

All the best.


Vidya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidyaa

Hi Dear

That was a great start.

Nice to have one more FF.

Hope to have another great FF. Continue soon.

All the best.


Vidya



tq sooo much vidya.. will do my best .. it was the best word of encouragement 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Laddoo seems to be very cuteeee!!!!!

Vidya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidyaa

Laddoo seems to be very cuteeee!!!!!

Vidya



hehe.. it just reminds me of the scene in K3G. srk n hrithik .. lol 😉
i wanted the ff to sound more like a comedy n romance

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobbybee

<br><br>hehe.. it just reminds me of the scene in K3G. srk n hrithik .. lol [IMG=smileys/smiley2.gif]Wink[/IMG]<br>i wanted the ff to sound more like a comedy n romance<br><br>



Exactly!!!!!

I too linked it with K3G.,

Great

Vidya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey shobby! great ff! luved the start! cute! thanks for writing in English! it made my life soooooooo much easier! like your ff, contiue soon plesae! luv, Radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tq sooo much radikha.. thx for loving it.. really appreciate ur comment.. i m working on it nw.. will update later on or 2molo.. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shobbybee

tq sooo much radikha.. thx for loving it.. really appreciate ur comment.. i m working on it nw.. will update later on or 2molo.. 😉

kool, bye!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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This update is specially dedicate for sis vidyaa and radhika.. thanks a lot for reading 😃
PART 2

Next scene is at Anjali's hse

Got my eyes on you,
Cos you bring that back to me,
Got my eyes on you,
You know where i'm gonna be,
Got my eyes on you,
And I see you checkin' me,
Got my eyes on you (oo-woo)
And I like what I see

Finally she is done with her outfit..

Hold on
Uh-oh,uh-oh
Your body's whinin'
Uh-oh,uh-oh,
Bumpin' and grindin',
Uh-oh,uh-oh,
Stoppin', rewindin',
Uh-oh,uh-oh,

Brushes her hair.. For some reason she is still not satisfied with herself as it's been a habit to ask her stylist Tanya for comments.. Almost all the time Anjali comes up with bad style of fashion n obviously Tanya will make her look stunning ..

Anjali : Tanya'. Tanya!!.... * hears a loud sound.. practically the sound came from the balcony *

Tanya : Tada.. * throws something on anjali *

Anjali : ahhhhhhh!!!!! *screams n started crying *

Tanya : *burst out laughing* it's just a rubber lizard.. even if its real.. its billion times smaller than u.. You definitely can't survive without me * winks*

Anjali: You and your nonsense.. Yeah right , I can't live without you * smiles sarcastically* I don't live with animals unlike you . No wonder u get along with them so well..

Tanya : What makes u be in a lost world when I was actually walking back n forth calling u..

Anjali : really ?? all I see was my prince charming Jay Sean.. u know his voice???

Just makes u melt.. n It made me to feel as if'..

Tanya : Enough of ur boring drama with Jay Sean.. I really don't know what u find in him.. I won't blame if blind bats like u go for him * Anjali hits her * wow.. has the world turn into square?? For the 1st time in 22 years'. U dressed so well without my guidance.. I have trained u very well huh?? * winks*

AD : Anjali sweetheart..

Anjali : Jee papa'

AD: What took u so long sweety? U know ur papa will never leave the house without having your sweet coffee..

Anjali: Sorry papa. Just give me 2 mins..

Anjali comes with the coffee . She gets blessing from AD and AM and leave to work.. Its been a habit that Anjali never leaves home without getting their blessing.. Her work starts at 9am n it's just 10 minutes away but our darling anju leaves by 8am.. That's how disciplined she is ..

At V-Mag's office

Shilpa : Anju , u lookin great yaar.. anything special??

Anjali: Tell me something new Shilpa.. *winks* looks like someone is early today.. good.. good .. keep it up..

Nisha (secretary): Ma'am here is the report on our previous meeting and the financial statements.

Anjali: Thank you. Looks like this company has fruitful results.. Please arrange a meeting at 2pm . I want all the board member's to present on time.

Nisha: Sure Ma'am.

Meeting starts

Anjali: First and foremost, I would like to thank all of u here whom had put in ur hardwork in making our Magazine the Number 1 in India.. I have decided to give all of u 3 months bonus.. We have to be co-operative and work together in future projects. I know some of u had sleepless nights.. But it has given a fruitful result .. Most importantly be motivated.. Never give up. So any of you have come up with suggestion of our future projects?

Sushma: Well we have already got another sponsor and he came up with an idea that he will sponsor us if only we come up with some events.

Interviewer : The Airtel company has been doing very well n Mr Raichand, the president has achieved so many awards at such a young age. So , I suggest we should interview him before our competitors make the 1st move.

Anjali: Thanks for your suggestions . We will come up with an idea about the event soon. The most important thing now is the interview.

Anjali asked the interviewer to arrange an appointment with Mr Raichand asap and the meeting ends.😃😃

luv,
shobby

btw, the song from got my eyes on u * jay sean *

hope u liked it.. keep smilling 😉

Edited by shobbybee - 16 years ago

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