AR FF: Yu Me Aur Hum

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guyys.....
after readng sooo many ffs...ui thought of writing one myself...based on dmg itself....n weelll....the characters r as follows:
Dr Armaan Mallik...played by Karan Singh Grover
Dr. Ridhima Gupta...Mallik...played by Shilpa Anand or Sukirti Khandpal...or Jennifer Winget now..yu choose!
So...here it goes:
PART 1
His arm lay on her waist. Her head was on his chest and her hand held his other hand. It was around 4:30 early in the morning and both were sleeping in the bedroom. He sneezed and she at once pulled up the blanket towards him. He smiled....very sleepily n lightly caressed her hair. She held his hand more tightly...lightly squeezing it.
Two hrs later Ridhima switched off the alarm clock which had been ringing. She mumbled to her husband:
R: Armaan ...subah ho gayi .....uth jao'
As she startd to get up frm her bed...Armaan took hold of her armn said...
A: Mat jao na....
R: Armaan 6:30 hone wale hain....jaldi utho!!
Armaan let go off her arm n says:
A: Tum bohot gandi ho.......
She smiled....kissed him on his cheek n says.....
R: Aur tum bohot ache ho......
A; caressing her hair:: Oye hoye....aaj bohot pyaar aa raha hai...
Ridhima blushed n lukd away....
A:: oye hoye....aap ki yeh sharam....ek din meri jaan le le gi...he sighed..
Just then...a crying sound was heardn Armaan lukd towards the cot....Ridhima went towards it...n picked up a tiny little baby....who was crying out tears..that were definetely bigger thann herself.....The cot was placed ion one corner of their bedroom...
Ridhima kissd her hair n says
R; Bas...bas jaana....chalo doodoo (milk)peeyenge....bas jaanu..rona band karo...she wiped her tears
The baby soon quiten down...n Ridhima put her on their bed n says....
R; Aap papa ke paas baitho...maama abhi mlik lekar aati hain....
Then turning towards Armaan she says...
R: Armaan...pls Arima ko dekhna...main iske liye doodh lati hun...hmmm??
Armaan nodded...
Ridhima left....n Armaan took his baby girl..in his strong big arms...
A talking to the baby: Ole Ole...meri baby subah subah itni zor se royi.....Then kissing her chin
A; Aaha!! Aapki smile to bilkul papa ki jaisi hai.......meri choti si ridhima.....he kissed her forehead...
So....guyss....do yu want me to cont..?? I hv relly intrstng ideas in my mind...n basically dis ff is abt Armaan Ridhima.marriage..their daughter... n other thngs....romance being the basic....i cudnt include much romance as I .....just wantd to gv a basic idea,....
so....pls dooo reply....wud be waitng........
INDEX
PART 1 - PAGE 1
PART 2 - PAGE 2
PART 3 - PAGE 3
PART 4 - PAGE 4
PART 5 - PAGE 4
PART 6 - PAGE 6
PART 7 - PAGE 9
PART 8 - PAGE 11
PART 9- PAGE 14
PART 10 - PAGE 15
PART 11- PAGE 17
PART 12 - PAGE 18
PART 13 - PAGE 20
PART 14 - PAGE 22
PART 15 - PAGE 24
PART 16 - PAGE 25
PART 17 - PAGE 26
PART 18 - PAGE 29
PART 19 - PAGE 31
PART 20 - PAGE 34
PART 21 - PAGE 42
PART 22 - PAGE 45
PART 23 - PAGE 50
PART 24 - PAGE 59
PART 25 - PAGE 68
PART 26 - PAGE 69
PART 27 - PAGE 78 (Armaan Riddhima's shaadi)
PART 28 - PAGE 88
PART 29 - PAGE 95
PART 30 - PAGE 100
PART 31 - PAGE 106
PART 32 - PAGE 110
PART 33 - PAGE 127
PART 34 - PAGE 136
PART 35 - PAGE 145
PART 36 - PAGE 151
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Edited by KaranShilpa:) - 16 years ago

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Iqbal Neha1 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing start it was really sweet and the scene between armaan and his daughter was really cute
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wowwwww yaar realy intrestng yaar lv 2 read mre wow thy are married nd litt baby arima wowwwwwwwww cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr88 start.. n waitngg 2 read more.. do update soonn. n pm me nxt tym u update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 yaar plzzz cont....... soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 part
it is very cute
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😳hey guyss......am ssooooo sad coz i had written a wunnerful romantic part...relly long one...n just as i was abt to post it....it got dle away...i dunno how

bt now i'll write again for yu guyss....sooo sry for the delay....chhhhhhoooooooo chhhhhoorrrrrrrryyyyyyy!!!!

PART 2

Armaan is getting ready to go to Sanjivani...Ridhima has given up her job a yr bak....coz of Arima...Arima is now 4 months old...

Armaan gttng ready in his room...Ridhima wrkng in the kitchen

A:: Ridhima!! (he shouts) Ridhima!! meri shirt kahan hai..???

R: Armaan wahi par to rakhi hai....cupboard mein check karo...

A: are..nai hai na..pls aa kar dedo...

R mumbles to herself.....uff!! Armaan bhi na...ek shirt nai khud dhoond sakta....AA rahi hun( she shouts)

Armaan smiles...a naughty smile...😉

Ridhima cmz in wid Arima in her arms...she was making her sleep...

R: Armaan...cupboard mein hi to shirt hogi...tumne pakka theek se nai dekha hoga...

A: tum dekhlo na..pls...pls....

R: sssshhh!! So rahi hai..pointng towards Arima...dheere bolo!
She keeps Arima in the cot..n walks towards the wardrobe...Ridhima puts one hand...n takes out the shirt....

R: huh.....main jaanti thi tumne theek se nai dekha hoga.....Armaan tum koi cheez theek se nai kar sakte ho...sivayye mujhe tang karne ke....she frowns..😡

she is headng towards the door...bt Armaan wyudnt let her go soo easily....in fact that was the reason..y he cudnt find his shirt...he wanted her to come....naughty Armaan!!😉
He took hold of her arm...n pulled her towards him...Ridhima bumped into his chest...

R: aah!! Armaan chodo mujhe...mujhe jaana hai...bohot kaam hai....Tumhare liye brkfast banana hai...kapde press karne hai....Arima...

A: sshhh....kitna bolti ho tum..!!
he slowly moves her hair away...from her neck...

R: Armaan....kk..kkkyya kar rah ho...😳

A ignores her..n says...shirt nai pehnaogi..??

R: Armaan tum...tum bohot shaitan ho gaye ho..kam se kam ab to sudhar jao...ek beti ke baap ban gaye ho.....aur jald hi...

A: aur jald hi..........doosri beti ka baap banne wala hun....?? he asks her wid a naughty smile..

R: Ji nai....she blushed…😳..jald hi senior doctor banne wale ho...

She knw Armaan wud do his ';subah ki usual zidd' if she doesnt do wot he says...so..she picks up the shirt....lying on the bed.....n helps him wear it..Armaan smiles..😊while Ridhima is slightly blushing..😳.She is buttoning his shirt....wen Armaan gently kisses her hair...he is moving down to her neck...as Ridhima closes her eyes...the feeling of his warm breath on her neck..sent shiverrs down her spin...n leaving the buttonss...her hand took a tight hold at his hand...As Armaan kissed her ear...he gently enveloped her in his arms... Ridhima put her arms around his bak...n Armaanz grip on her got tighter....He again kissed her neck…n then her cheek..n again went to the other side of her neck..n was abt to go to her shoulder...wen suddenly Ridhima relaise wot they were doing...n let go off him..she blushed a deep red...😳😳n proceeded towards the door...

As she walked...Armaan said..

A: Ridhima...mere shirt ke buttons to band kardo....he pointed towards a lipstick mark on his chest....Ridhima saw it...bit her lower lip....n blushed again..😳😳😳.She turnd around...wen Armaan took her arm n said..

A: uh huh...itni aasani se nai....buttons aapne khole hain......

His words embarassed Ridhima even more...😳😳😳

A: ab..band bhi aap hi karengi....

R: Armaan pls chodo na...she tried to free her hand...

A: uh huh.....pehle buttons....

Ridhima knw Armaan wudnt agree...soo...she turnd towards him..n strtd buttong her shirt,....wondrng wen she had unbuttoned his shirt..n kissed him.....

As her lil fingers buttoned his shirt.. Armaan was lukin at her wid all the luv in the world..😛.He was smiling at her...knwng how embarased she wud be...even though she dint say..bt he knw she must be wndrng wen she had kissed him on his chest.....

So Armaan spoke....: btw...yeh aapne tab kiya.. pointing to the lipstick mark...jab aap apne hosh kho baithi thi.......ptanai...jaane anjaane main tum kya kar deti ho...acha hua tum ne zyada kuch nai kiya...

Ridhima was now blushng sooooooo badly....😳.Armaan saw it..n smiled at hw pretty she lukd wen she did soo....

once she finishd the buttong...she startd walkng towards the door,,,,,but then came bak.....n hugged him bak...

A: Oye hoye...ab aap mujhe chodengi....nai to phir se iraada badal gaya...to mushkil ho jaayegi....he winked😉

Ridhima smiled....Armaan tum bhi na...'

Armaan kissed her hair....I luv yu Bakset...

Ridhima....put her arms across him n says.. luv yu too...

huh.....finished writing it again...tooo bad i deletd it..ptanai kaise...anyways,,,,,enjoy dis part....maybe the next part in the aftrnoon sumtime....hope yu guyss like it....dooo comment on it.....wud be waiting for yur replies....😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey spriha rght yaar ohh so saddddddd yaar ur prt got deleted nd u write it again fr us how sweeeeeet of u bt it ws choooooooooooo romantic yaar seriously ridz kitna sharmati hai yaar how cute or ar usi ka faida uthata hai heeeeeee pareshan karta rehta hai hw naughty of him bt i jst lvd it sooooooooooooooo mch cnt wait fr d nxt prt
cont soooooooooooon
thnks fr d pm
luv yachna

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great start
loved the whole conept aswell
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
and PM me tooo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i luvd it.. it was brilliant.. thnxx, 4 d pm.. update soon

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