HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#381

😭 hey yeh toh achi baaat nahi hai

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Shahida

@Inshira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#382

Hey I just read ur ff it is fantabulous plz don't mke Sujal that sad n do somethin that he becums happy plz 😭

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nikita

@beauty_niki

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Posted: 17 years ago

#383

kya yaar sujal bechara aise hi rehe gaya 😭 .hmmmmmmmmm................kashish is no more and that really pisses me off 😡 .u know peheli baar maine aisa ending pada hai. aik dard bhara ending 😭 . but whatever it is it really makes me feel and think that yeah!!!this is a true story saying hamari adhuri kahani .i loved to read this story very much and it was fantastic just like your other stories 👏 .everything was just great form starting till the end .great job neelu 👍🏼 !!!bye takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 16 years ago

#384

hey neelu me here with my comments on this story.. hope you like reading my comment.. sorry main itne time baad comment kar rahi hoon..😊 well is kahani ne meri aankhon mein aasun le diya.. but the time i read all the parts you have posted i was crying...this story of your's is so emotional , very heart touching.. you have written the whole story very damn well.. har ek emotion is very well shown.. ek dum perfect.. you know tumhari yeh story padke any person will eat tears in his or her eyes.. is kahani mein aisa kuch hai joh pattar ko bhi pigla sakthi hai.. your fanfic rocks... tumne bohat achcha likha hai.. indeed very very very well written.. yeh kahani of your's is totally different from other fanfics of your's.. it is absolutely brilliant , lovely , awesome , amazing , coolll , superb , marvelous , excellent , par-excellence , fantastic , ek dum rapchik , bindass , jhakaas , dhassu... bole tho just too good..... yeh story sachchi mere dil ko choo gayi... everything in this story is so heart touching , echari kashish yeh kis duldul mein phas gayi..sujal ,kashish ke rishtha is so beautiful.. joh bond un dono ke beech hai kahiin nazar na lage un logon ko... unka pyaar... sujal ka protective bartaav towards kashish.. unka rishtha itna sachcha hai.. and i completely love it.. their rishtha is just too wonderful..bina kahe bhi woh dono ek dusare se woh ghehra bond mehsoos karthe hai... this is just beautiful.... sujal kashish ke baare mein tumne bohat achche se likha hai yaar..you have done a commendable job... really very damn good........ 👏 lekin ab yeh kya hogaya yahaan sujal , kashish ko apna ne ke liye aa raha tha...aur jab woh wapas aaya tho he is told kii kashish zinda nahii hai.. he gets to know that kashish ne aatmahatya kar liya aur woh isliye kii woh bikh gayi..she could not save herself jab thak sujal na aaye... mera dil toot gaya.. bechara sujal , uski baatein shows his helplessness... bechara abhi bas jeene ke liye jee raha hai.. maano jaise sujal ek zinda laash ban gaya hai.. ek robot..joh kaam thi lekin jaan nahii hai us mein... me crying reading about sujal's haal...😭yaar abhi coming to my guess for the next part.. well aise tho koi guess nahii hai.. par mere pass ek idea hai yeh story ke liye... jab hum ym par chat karenge tho i'll tell you.. nahii tho i'll pm u the idea... 😉 dear please jaldi se continue karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly...😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago