HAMARI ADHURI KAHAANI-sk fanfic { updated - Page 36

abb they sit inside the car

s is drivin

k is lookin at s

k-sujal!

s-hmm

k-ek baar..apne mooh se mera nam lo naa!

s-tumhara naam?paar kyun!

k-bass lo naa! mera naam!lo naa plz!

s looks at k

aur saara pyara bharke,in a romantic whisper says

s-kashish!

k closes her eyes,while he is sayin her name

then opens her eyes

she has sense of immense happiness & satisfaction on her face

s-ye naam bulvane ka kya chakkar hai?

k-pata hai jab tum mere naam apne mooh se bolte ho,to ..to pata nahi kyun..azaad hone ka ehsaas hota hai mujhe..achcha lagta hai

k smiles bilkul thoda sa

k-chalo wo saab chodo! mumma kya kar rahi hongi?

s-pata nahi! khud hi baat karke puch lo!

s no. milake gives it 2 k

s-lo baat karo!

k-hello mumma kashish bol rahi hoon!

mom-haan beta bol! kaisi hai?

k-thik hon mumma,aap kaisi ho? aap kya kar rahi thi?

m-bus beta abhi khana khaya hai! tumne khana kha lia?

k-haan mumma sujal aur main aaj dinner par gae the! bohot mazza kia!

m-bohot achchi baat hai!khush raho!

k-mumma khane ke baat se yaad aaya! sujal ko khane mein kya pasand hai?

m-sujal ko waise khane mein zyada ruchi nahi hai! paar usse halwa bohot pasand hai!

k-sach..main...

m-arre sujal ke papa aa gae! beta main baad mein baat karti hoon bye!

k-bye mumma! good night!

k cuts the ph

k-sujal tumhe halwa pasand hai tumne kabhi bataya nahi!

s-tumhe pata chal gaya naa!

k-hmm,tum halwa khaoge!

s-haan

k-tum mere haath ka halwa khaoge?

s-HAAN

k-kal khaoge?

s looks at k

& strts drivin at full speed

k is surprised ki achanak kya hua

aur s k ke sawalon ka ek bhi jawab nhai de raha hai

hey neelu welcome back dear. first of all happy dashera!!! i wish ki bhagwan tumhari haar manokamna puri kare 😉 . anyway the part was wowwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏 !!!! just amazinggggg......it was soooooo romantic 😳 . see tum kitne ache parts likhti ho and taht too in detail. this is a really wonderful quality and skill in you 🤗 . hmmmm....sujal ne joh bhi kashish se kaha sahi kaha .baar baar woh khud ko kyun neecha dikhati hai . she shouldn't do like this na 😭 . lekin sujal ne bohot ache se sunaya usse 👏 .tabhi baat samaj aayi 😉 .hey but why does he behave like this when she says 'halwa kal khaoge' . is he angry or what 😭 . iska toh kuch samaj hi nahi atta . mausam ki tarah mood badalte reheta hai sujal ke 😭 . he is so unpredictable na . lekin jaisa bhi hai i loved him in this story and in this part 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzz......can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

they reach the brothel

s goes in

k follows him

k ke andaar ghuste hi s shuts the door

& b4 k cld say or ask anythin

s-main jaa raha hoon!

k-??????

s-main kal jaa raha hoon! business tour pe canada,2 hafton ke lie!

k doesnt say or react 2 anythin,she is jst blankly lookin at s

& tears r flowin on her cheeks

wow amazing parts i like it sujal bhi na khabhi bhi us ka mood badal jata hai or kashish ko bhi rula diya kashish kitnay aram sa ka rahi thi kal halwa khao gay ab zaroor kashish sujal ka liye halwa banaie gi sujal 2 weeks ka liye ja raha hai kashish ko bhi sath la jae bachare akali bor ho jae gi &nbs p; amazing part continue soon

neeelu dear awesome parts loved them tooo tooo gooood yeh sujal kah koi thekana nahin kehta kuch aur hai aur usseh badalne meh ek mint bi nahin lagti...and kashish bechari esse hi uskeh harkaton ko tolarate kar rahi hai its like when sujal loves some1 he is crazy about that person lekin jab pyar meh thodi bi problem aati hai yah koi baat ko lekar behesss woh sab kuch bhul keh duniyah sarrh peh utha leta hai...too goood neeelu cont...sooon

ps...sorrry ma yahoo has probs or else i would send u the vidzzz...

k-tum..tum..kyun jaa rahe ho!...

s-kaam hai baba! main aa jaunga!

k-do hafte! do haafte ..kaise rahungi main?

s-tuumhare bina jeena to mere lie bhi mushkil hai!

k-kya koi aur nahi jaa sakta!main jaanti hoon kaam imp hai! paar..main..tum..tum samajhte nahi ho!...tum..tum chale gae to....main tumhari hoon sujal!..bass tumhari!...main...

s-haan! kashish tum meri ho! aur main tumhara! [holds her farmly frm her arms

k-paar wo..tum chale gae to..wo..do hafte..tumhe kya lagta hai..mujhe bithake rakhenge..eo...tumhe pata hai naa uss din dopahar ko kya hua jaab tum nahi the...tum do hafton ke lie nahi rahoge to kya hoga!..mujhe bohot darr lagta hai!...main marr jaungi sujal!

s holds her face

s-kuch nahi hoga! kuch bhi nahi hoga!

k-mujhe saath nahi le jaa sakte!

s-nahi! nahi le jaa sakta![s thinks-tumhe saath le jaunga to surprise kisse dunga,tumhari khushi ke lie bandobast kaise karunga,kaam to hai paar wahan tumhare lie kuch khaas intezaam aur khaas shoppin bhi karni hai,tumhe propose officially karne ki duniya ka sabse nayab hira wahan auction ho raha hai,tumhare lie kharidna chahta hoon main!]

k is silent,lookin at the grd,tears r flowin

s-ro matt!

k-mea gham hai,main kisi bhi tarah bahaun ! tumhe kya?

s-tumhara ye gham,tumse zyaada mera hai! aur sujal garewal ki cheez koi barbaad nahi karta!

k smiles a bit,aur slaps him pyaar se on arm

s-main tumhe roz ph karunga!

k-koi faidaa nahi! yahan ph nahi! hai bhi to bi ke paas! bi kabhi baat nahi karne degi!

s-hmm!tumhari bi ki to main..! khair! tum dekhna ye do hafte chand lamhon mein beet jaenge!

k-kaash..!

i think readers ye hak ka last 2nd part hai

great part sujal kyun ja raha kashish ko chor kar aik mobile hi da jata kashish ko kam sa kam baat to ho jati na zaroor wahan per kashish ka liye koi khas cheez lani hogi sujal na i am shocked ya 2nd last part hai itni jaldi end kyun kar rahi ho 😭 😭 😭 anyways me waiting for next part continue soon

hmmmmm............ so he going to canada . lekin kyun!!!canada maat jao sujal u won't like it trust me 😡 . yahan kashish ka kya hoga yaar 😭 .uss bii ne kuch problem khadi nahi karni chahiye 😡 .i just wish kuch bura na ho 😭 .aur iss sujal ne kashish ko mobile kyun nahi de rakha just for emergency 😔 .budhu kahin ka, ya phir kashish ke liye kuch aur intezaam karna tha wahi kyun rakha kashish ko 😭 . uss gande jagah mein 😡 . yaar plzzzzzzz............kashish ko kuch nahi hona chahiye .the part was really emotional and sad but was wowwwwwwww..... 👏 [=D>}continue soon yaar plzzzzzz.........can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊