TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch 45 on pg 47: The Doors - Page 46

Originally posted by: Aimsha

All the secrets of all the people have been revealed today really loved it will wait eagerly for the next update

Thank you dear😁

Glad you loved it.

Yeah you are absolutely right - every person in that family including the lil ones was holding a secret that may or may not have been an actual secret

Next update either tonight or tomorrow morning

Chap 23....

Every next chapter comes with more content that I would have loved to see in the show as well..

Mitali's vote.. I was sure would be in favour of Virani's but Suchitra came with surprise..

So Noina lost her friend Mihir, her family , virani industry by being in obsessive love with a married man.. but still thinks she can do something..

Mitali rithik being friends be would great ..

Holika night cleared a lot .. why Mihir did not searched for her and why he was this way with Noina .. . .

Confession were written in such a great way.. I had to take pause inbetween . .

Mihir… what I liked about him was that even when Pari was taking all the blame for sabotaging their bond, he still felt that the words he said were wrong. He realised that it was actually him who had taken Tulsi for granted. .

Tulsi's breakdown was justified. Whenever she thought about Mihir, one question always struck her — why didn’t he come to her? But now it got cleared. They both have suffered so much .

Originally posted by: fan_fiction123

First of all thank you so much for updating with big one even you are not well 😇🙏🏻❤️

Most welcome And thank you for this beautiful review!! About length, I don’t have any pre decided length. I have only 1 thing in mind - where I want this chapter to end and what all needs to be covered in it.

As a result, the last 2 chapters turned out to be much longer than my already v v long - a word of caution- don’t expect such long chapters always😉

Chapter 25.. It feels incredibly earned. 😃Nothing dramatically huge happens, and yet emotionally it feels massive because of the way you have described every pause, gesture, and dialog. 🤗 The reconciliation is written with a lot of restraint, no grand speeches or dramatic confessions here 😇

Let me confess something- dramatic writing comes to me easily! As I am sure you must have noticed it in some chapters that required drama. This restrained writing I’m doing here is a challenge to myself as I knew this concept I had in mind when I started writing required exactly this kind of writing.

I’m so glad i am succeeding. At the cost of sounding immodest, I am surprising myself!

Glad the reconciliation (or should I say the first step of reconciliation) came out well🤗

The balcony scene is especially beautiful. The line “Not facing her. Beside her.” quietly captures the entire emotional tone of their relationship now. They are not returning to what they once were. They are carefully finding a new way toward each other like Gayatri chachi requested them to towards the end. I also loved how the story refuses the idea of things becoming “pahle jaisa.” 👏🏻👏🏻

Hey that balcony scenes has many of my fave words/aspects -

1. The one you said - not facing but besides- exactly as you said - it defines TuHir now.

2. She, who has always been very clear about everything- especially her relationships - saying to him - she’s not clear about their relationship now and where she wants to take it .. not because of things that happened but because SHE is not the same now

3. The hand hold - the way it happened!

Pahle jaisa - 2 reasons for it to not be pahle Jaisa-

1.as Mihir tells the family. They are very different people now

2. Pahle jaise - clearly had some fault lines - which gradually made it weak and Noina could take advantage

Tulsi telling Mihir, “Tum hamesha se mera guroor rahe ho,” has my heart ❤️😇

So over the moon that you liked this - she couldn’t honestly say I forgive you or you were not to be blamed! She said the only thing she could truthfully say to make him move forward without the suffocating guilt he has been carrying.

The family discovery sequence is one of the strongest parts of the chapter. Every single child of theirs reacting in their own way. Hats off😍 I have always loved Shobha’s bonding with Tulsi, Mihir and Gautam in the show too. Loved it that here also she is the first one to find out 🤗

Thank you dear. I’m glad it came out well. I too love Shobha on the show and her bond with all the OGs - TuHir, Gautam and Karan Nandini

being upset that Dadu and Baa “started Holi without us” makes it so real 😅 Garima revealing the “secret” that Nanu loves Nani.. and they simply accepting came of so well. The children unknowingly become the emotional truth-tellers of the chapter.

Keeping kids real takes a lot of efforts- Timsy line even I liked - it was a last minute addition while I was finishing/polishing the chapter. Garus secret - kids literally can’t keep secrets, can they?

The most favorite part in this chapter Daksha chachi’s conversation with Tulsi. It added so much depth because she’s the only one asking whether Tulsi is truly choosing this for herself. Her telling Tulsi not to leave the house again if things go wrong is such a powerful moment because it reframes Tulsi’s place in the family and shantiniketan. 😇

yes that’s the spine of this chapter in a way!

Can’t imagine she is the same S1 chugalkhor Daksha chachi 😅😜

Can I be frank? I have based her character in my story on just 1 episode of the show - remember her multiple slaps to Mihir? When tulsi was leaving SN just before the leap, that episode.

The holi celebration, gulal sequence, Mihir’s reaction to Jalebi sent by Suchitra. Everything is so subtle but deep at the same time.

Subtle and deep - thank you so much ❤️

Mihir easily managing to find Gautam’s address cements why he was not able “find” tulsi in 6 years 😊 Overall this chapter makes us understands that for Mihir and Tulsi, love is no longer about dramatic declarations. It’s about choosing each other quietly, every day in every small thing.

Correct! That’s what their new relationship will be like !

he didn’t need to find - he knew it almost certainly! You will know in next chapter how he found Gautam’s address. 😂

Excited for Bangalore trip 😃

It’s still 2 or 3 chapters away!

thank you thank you so much!!🤗❤️😍

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Originally posted by: saloni_306

Chap 23....

Every next chapter comes with more content that I would have loved to see in the show as well..

Thank you so much dear..

Yes mostly I started this story because of my growing dissatisfaction with the way major things were forgotten in the show.. now too I’m noting everyone’s comments on the EDT to see if there’s anything that people are dissatisfied about and if I can add it here.

Mitali's vote.. I was sure would be in favour of Virani's but Suchitra came with surprise..

Yes that day Suchitra came to convince Mitali to vote for Noina but the opposite happened- Mitali drove sense into her mother

So Noina lost her friend Mihir, her family , virani industry by being in obsessive love with a married man.. but still thinks she can do something..

Exactly

Mitali rithik being friends be would great ..

Yeah I am planning something unique between Mitali Ritik and Munni - the real challenge is if I can pull it off successfully

Holika night cleared a lot .. why Mihir did not searched for her and why he was this way with Noina .. . .

Yeah I tried to give reasons for the crap Ekta showed

Confession were written in such a great way.. I had to take pause inbetween . .

Thank you dear!! ❤️❤️

Mihir… what I liked about him was that even when Pari was taking all the blame for sabotaging their bond, he still felt that the words he said were wrong. He realised that it was actually him who had taken Tulsi for granted. .

Yes .. I’m trying to show he has genuinely changed now! He won’t excuse himself in anything now .. will always hold himself accountable

Tulsi’s breakdown was justified. Whenever she thought about Mihir, one question always struck her — why didn’t he come to her? But now it got cleared. They both have suffered so much..

I am glad it came out well n I could justify everything

thank you dear

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I loved the whole scene of Daksha Chachi n Tulsi..

Daksha chachi fears as a woman, a well wisher and a person who loves Tulsi more than Mihir. Her worries, what if Mihir betrays Tulsi again, how Tulsi will survive, why Tulsi should go thru the pain which she doesn't deserve etc. Well written. Her questioning Tulsi, on reconsidering to be with Mihir, accepting him the way he is, also advising Tulsi to not forget herself in this process and pay a heavy price later if circumstances change. All Daksha Chachi wants is to protect Tulsi from heartbreak. Tulsi took this decision to be with Mihir after a lot of contemplation, as Tulsi rightly said kisi cheez ki koi guarantee nhi hai, Tulsi ne hawa me koi decision nhi liya, she has seen a changed Mihir who respects her, let her live as she pleases, not questioning her decisions, admiring her business skills, strategies, above all he realized his life without her has been life less, her absence has taught him lots of things to be a better partner, he accepted his mistakes, faults, all he want is to be a great example for his generations, protect his children,keep the family intact and uphold family values, spouse's importance.

Tulsi cannot punish him for his mistakes separately again, the past 6years his life was nothing less than a torture, he failing all Noina's traps when he realized what is she upto, the stints he fulled out to be away from her just the way he created a story of he is allergic to colour, and he denying Suchitra's Holi sweet shows how much hurt he is, and it's not easy for him to forgive Shuchitra for knitting this conspiracy, being major part of it and using him, trapping him, cheating him, finally watching him live a dead life with guilt, she never his acted with Mihir as a human, never revealed her di's evil plansm so is angry disgusted, still he took the sweet to not disappoint Mitali, then denied eating it, reasoning out, Tulsi did not force him. ❤️

Daksha Chachi and Tulsi's scene were beautifully crafted. ❤️❤️

Song:

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila

Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila

Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya

Ho…

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya

Hmm..dil… Sambhal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Dil yahin ruk jaa zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa

Main janu naa o..o..

Dil sambhal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Dil yahin ruk ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Chap 24 wholesome family chapter..

. I always thought that maybe few people knew about Tuhir's chai routine but stayed silent...

Their private holi celebration was I think one of the significant turning point and was written in beautiful way.. loved it

Balcony conversation was Apt.. and feel good , here it's like a new phase of their relationship without guilt but also one can't say like old times as they both have changed so much .. obviously for good .. Previously their relationship were strongly based on the love they had for each other.. but this time hope it's going to be based on mutual respect and no interference from outside .. .

Family reaction came out great ... Specially the kids who knew.. they asked the questions which even Mihir must be scared to ask from Tulsi .. .

Lol situationship may be they really are in 😂

Daksha Chachi used to be the funniest one but here she is the most sensible one..

. Will love a conversation between daksha Chachi and Mihir also ..about all this .. .

Clearly Mihir is not as forgiving as Tulsi .. so no jalebi .

Bangalore will be fun to read

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Ye kya tha madam. Complete revelation of Tulsi Mihir secrets bechare both are feeling as if newly married bride n groomJinko saara mohalla (aaj k zamane me Virani's ka ghar mohalla hi hua na) tease karrha hai, ohhhh wala expression de rha hai...

Hey dear, as always I was eagerly awaiting your review and as always it was worth waiting for!!

I too literally laughed out aloud on reading your first part 🤣 🤣🤣🤣 gosh the way you put it - mohalla (sach me viranis are a mohalla not a family - this despite my sending so many characters away because I could not handle so many) teasing them as if they were newly weds - iss baat me Bachche expert nikle naa? I wonder why are they not using effectively in the show? I have 4 kids in my story and using them is both fun and a big challenge (so difficult for us adults to think simply and innocently like kids na?)

It is good to see that Tulsi had taken a stand herself, i loved Mihir and Tulsi's initial conversation, their gestures which said lot's of emotions, respect, care and the value they carry for their relationship and endless yearning they share for each other. Tulsi saying she cannot be the old self of herself in many ways, she is no wrong, years passed by ppl, their preferences, lifestyle, wants and needs do change, but her honesty is completely accepted and understood by Mihir, it was beautiful to read. Also, Tulsi saying agar hum dono iss rishte me aage badhna chahte hai to "koi guilt mat rakhna", it is very very important aspect of this relationship, dono barabari me rehna chahiye, mutual respect is more important. One cannot live a life of guilt and hesitation always, other cannot be at upper hand always. Gaadhi ke do pahiye, kabhi ye upar, kabhi wo neeche aate rehna chahiye, in order to reach the destination dono ko samanta se chalna padega, sambhalna padega. This part is put very logically here.

Yes that balcony conversation is my fave too - esp the hand hold! Yeah equality, mutual respect and love - All these are important in a relationship but is also easy to take for granted - they thought they had all of these earlier too - but clearly they took it for granted- now they will be more aware!!

Then comes our whole family, their happiness, smiles, unbelievable expression, inexpressible happiness seeing their parents together, extremely well narrated. Karan sitting at the top stair staring at his parents, Shobha looking at her parents happily, Angad, Ritik Pari, chachi. Ultimate family hug. I can literally visualize and be happy about this picture perfect family moment.

Yeah we have mostly distinctive and well developed characters from season 1 in the form of their kids and other family members- but S2 has only recently started using them I feel. Anyways I am glad I could write this part well na!!

Then comes our chotu chotu, nanhe munne confirming whether they really are together, then resuming their work.

these lil ones have seen their grandparents being far away, aloof and not talking to each other since Tulsi came back - that’s why they were surprised to see them together

Mithali saying one more big revelation of Mihir's last 6years Holi celebration, how he refrained playing Holi and made a story of allergy so that he doesn't play as he always loved to play Holi with Tulsi and never wanted to play with anyone. Tulsi got to know ( atleast she is getting closer every inch towards Mihir slowly, steadily with all her trust back on him).

he didn’t want Noina to get an opportunity to touch him kind of intimately (as it happens at times during holi) under the pretext of playing Holi. Actually, now that I think about it, you are absolutely right - he just dint want to play Holi without the day beginning with Tulsi’s teeka on his forehead.. yes definitely tulsi is slowly but surely getting back closer to him day by day without realizing or may be she’s realizing

Chachi ji revealing Tulsi n Mihir's secret out and surprising them😂, then the whole family surprised Tulsi n Mihir that, they knew their secret meeting hillarious and good.Chachi advising Mihir n Tulsi to live their life as a couple and continue their secret date and family acknowledging, pretty cool. 😃

Gayatri chachi is a hopeless TuHir shipper in my story - half out of guilt and more than anything out of genuine love for them… i felt this was needed else tulsi would say ab kya zaroorat hai now we are openly together during the day too. And Mihir wouldn’t be in a position to insist.

Also did you notice? The balcony meets secret was one where the family could tease them the most - yet there was no teasing there - they only gave them the space and protected that space.

All in all ek khaas din for the whole Virani family, as the heart of the house Tulsi n Mihir coming back to one another brings life back in SN.

Exactly - there’s a line about this in next chapter about exactly this in next chapter

Tulsi and Mihir conversation over Gautam and suddenly Mihir revealing he found tge address, the couple now preparing for visiting him, sensible move.

Gautam visit is a couple of chapters away - Abhi toh baat ho rahi hai - planning chal rahi hai visit ki

Overall, a great stuff to read once again. Thank you writer for this beautiful part. ❤️

So happy to know you enjoyed it..

my pleasure ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you so much again.

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Originally posted by: bpatil3

I loved the whole scene of Daksha Chachi n Tulsi..

Hey again Dear, that part is also my fave.. especially that part when D asks - have you forgiven and T says - I can’t say honestly

Daksha chachi fears as a woman, a well wisher and a person who loves Tulsi more than Mihir. Her worries, what if Mihir betrays Tulsi again, how Tulsi will survive, why Tulsi should go thru the pain which she doesn't deserve etc. Well written. Her questioning Tulsi, on reconsidering to be with Mihir, accepting him the way he is, also advising Tulsi to not forget herself in this process and pay a heavy price later if circumstances change. All Daksha Chachi wants is to protect Tulsi from heartbreak. Tulsi took this decision to be with Mihir after a lot of contemplation, as Tulsi rightly said kisi cheez ki koi guarantee nhi hai, Tulsi ne hawa me koi decision nhi liya, she has seen a changed Mihir who respects her, let her live as she pleases, not questioning her decisions, admiring her business skills, strategies, above all he realized his life without her has been life less, her absence has taught him lots of things to be a better partner, he accepted his mistakes, faults, all he want is to be a great example for his generations, protect his children,keep the family intact and uphold family values, spouse's importance.

Yes exactly, although D too has seen him change - she has seen him since childhood so she knows the kind of man he is., like her fear is valid - ek baar tulsi wapas mil gayi then he can again get complacent and take her for granted and once again start insulting her while at the same time loving her like crazy- it happens with Indian men especially- they love their wives like crazy but still insult them…

But as u rightly said - tulsi has observed those fundamental (and she thinks and hopes permanent) changes in him so she’s like giving him one last chance while consciously protecting her own self - it is another thing that the walls around her heart that she made to protect herself won’t last long 😂

Tulsi cannot punish him for his mistakes separately again, the past 6years his life was nothing less than a torture, he failing all Noina's traps when he realized what is she upto, the stints he fulled out to be away from her just the way he created a story of he is allergic to colour, and he denying Suchitra's Holi sweet shows how much hurt he is, and it's not easy for him to forgive Shuchitra for knitting this conspiracy, being major part of it and using him, trapping him, cheating him, finally watching him live a dead life with guilt, she never his acted with Mihir as a human, never revealed her di's evil plansm so is angry disgusted, still he took the sweet to not disappoint Mitali, then denied eating it, reasoning out, Tulsi did not force him. ❤️

U put it so succinctly - exactly! He has suffered a lot too but he did make mistakes and tulsi too knows that his suffering doesn’t negate his mistakes. But the fact that he knows and acknowledged them means he’s aware and that’s exactly why she’s giving him another chance because awareness of his mistakes can make him not repeat them.

Daksha Chachi and Tulsi's scene were beautifully crafted. ❤️❤️

Thank u dear - glad I could write it well

Song:

Jab jab tere paas main aaya, Ik sukoon mila

Jise main tha bhoolta aaya, Wo wajood mila

Jab aaye mausam gham ke, Tujhe yaad kiya

Ho…

Jab sehme tanhapan se, Tujhe yaad kiya

Hmm..dil… Sambhal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Dil yahin ruk jaa zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Aisa kyun kar hua janu naa

Main janu naa o..o..

Dil sambhal ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Dil yahin ruk ja zara

Phir mohabbat karne chala hai tu

Beautiful song depicting Tulsi’s state of mind

thank u again dear!!🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️

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Originally posted by: saloni_306

Chap 24 wholesome family chapter..

Hey dear, Thank you again for this beautiful review! Was missing your reviews .. but now you have more than compensated😍

. I always thought that maybe few people knew about Tuhir's chai routine but stayed silent...

It is not possible in a large family like theirs naa - that no one knows or finds out.

Their private holi celebration was I think one of the significant turning point and was written in beautiful way.. loved it

yes I wrote it very subtly and yet tried to make it deep without too many words. Glad you think it was beautiful

Balcony conversation was Apt.. and feel good , here it's like a new phase of their relationship without guilt but also one can't say like old times as they both have changed so much .. obviously for good .. Previously their relationship were strongly based on the love they had for each other.. but this time hope it's going to be based on mutual respect and no interference from outside .. .

Yes even I loved that entire balcony scene - esp that hand hold. Also the fact that tulsi admitted she’s not clear about their relationship but wants to give it another chance. And Mihir assuring her that he will not ask for more than she can or wants to give

Yes he already told his family not to interfere or rush them, toh ab bahar wale ka toh sawal hi nahi

Family reaction came out great ... Specially the kids who knew.. they asked the questions which even Mihir must be scared to ask from Tulsi .. .

Glad family scenes came out well. The kiddos ❤️🤣🤣 - the way they ask questions naa .. kids don’t even realize what they are doing by asking or talking about things so innocently .. yes at least tulsi had to say that she too loves Mihir and also that now onwards he will sit next to her🤣😉

Lol situationship may be they really are in 😂

Yeah in a way🤣🤣 but that genZ word is way too casual for the depth of their relationship naa😁

Daksha Chachi used to be the funniest one but here she is the most sensible one..

In my story I have based on character on 1 episode of the show - remember pre-leap when tulsi was leaving SN - how many times Daksha chachi slapped Mihir! To tell you frankly those 3 episodes when T and D sunao Mihir are my absolute favorite ones

. Will love a conversation between daksha Chachi and Mihir also ..about all this .. .

Yes it’s coming in next to next chapter because she’s waiting for a moment when Mihir is home but tulsi isn’t - if you would like me write something specific in that scene, please feel free to pm me

Clearly Mihir is not as forgiving as Tulsi .. so no jalebi .

Yes he can’t forget how suchitra called him numerous times to trap him

Bangalore will be fun to read

Bangalore is a couple of chapters away

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