ViDev SS - She fell first but He fell hardest- last part, pg#12 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Dimagkidahi

🔥🔥cant wait for next

thank you so much... but it was the last part if this ine Short Story.. i hav one OS in mind.. that ill try to write soon

thanks again🤗

Plz 🙏 write some fanfiction about ViDev❤️❤️

Originally posted by: maddy124

Plz 🙏 write some fanfiction about ViDev❤️❤️

jarur jarur.. ye wala padh liya pura? kaisa laga ?

That was amazing..❤️❤️

Plz do write some thing romantic next time 😉❤️

Originally posted by: maddy124

That was amazing..❤️❤️

Plz do write some thing romantic next time 😉❤️

thank you.😃

sure ill try...

Omg this was soooo beautiful I wish we could see some real time issues between such couples. Like the hesitation you have depicted. The fear of the younger partner moving in with their contemporaries, the fear of immaturity and so much more. You captured it all so well. Loved it. So peaceful and romantic. I hope that the show also moves on from all this cringeworthy drama and take inspiration from your write up. It was superb.

I want to read it from the beginning yaar. Can you send the links

Originally posted by: Revutty

I want to read it from the beginning yaar. Can you send the links

read from the page 1 of this post.. then youll hv link of next post at the end of each post

Originally posted by: Saumya19

Omg this was soooo beautiful I wish we could see some real time issues between such couples. Like the hesitation you have depicted. The fear of the younger partner moving in with their contemporaries, the fear of immaturity and so much more. You captured it all so well. Loved it. So peaceful and romantic. I hope that the show also moves on from all this cringeworthy drama and take inspiration from your write up. It was superb.

thank you so much... and so glad you liked it...i really wanted to write the real dilemma of such age gap romances cause it had enough drama to fight with but the show is taking all the turns n twists but not thale actual issues that should be dealt with...

hope show gets on track sooner before we stop feeling what we are now feeling for it.

thanks once again.

Originally posted by: Revutty

I want to read it from the beginning yaar. Can you send the links

here are the links

Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/161873020

Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5305476?pn=6#161920263

part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5305476?pn=12#161964311