ViDev SS - She fell first but He fell hardest- last part, pg#12 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

you have fever.. i am so sorry for that. take rest and get well soon.

and hope you wont troll me on this.. mujhe sabse jyada dar tha aapke troll ka.. abhi hope jitna hype create kiya tha main its okay now ?☺️☺️

Darne ka nhi kabhi bhi challenge ko head on lene ka........its sweet,soothing tadap bechaini😆.....I like mental turmoil of dev🤣bechara such mein mahanta ke chakkar mein apni Lanka lutwa raha tha🤣like vidhi who hired her face in his chest☺️

Originally posted by: Scissor

Darne ka nhi kabhi bhi challenge ko head on lene ka........its sweet,soothing tadap bechaini😆.....I like mental turmoil of dev🤣bechara such mein mahanta ke chakkar mein apni Lanka lutwa raha tha🤣like vidhi who hired her face in his chest☺️

aww thank you so much..🤗

mujhe aur tadap daalna tha.. aur angsty banana tha but nere paas time ki kami thi to end karna pada.. i love angsty tadap wali stories... to majah aata hai aur likhne me...

Thanks dear for tagging me its soooooooo beautiful and very cuteeeee. Waiting for your update and here it's super cute romantic update. Great start today. ❤️

Originally posted by: sumaishu

Thanks dear for tagging me its soooooooo beautiful and very cuteeeee. Waiting for your update and here it's super cute romantic update. Great start today. ❤️

thank you so much dear for such kind words.. this one was the last part.. i am impatient person so taking story more than 2 parts is hard for me to be consistent with characters... aur mere dimag me agli story chalne lagti hai...

abhi if ill write new one ill tag you too.. but isme bas itna hi tha.. and glad you loved n enjoyed❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Telly_Addict

thank you so much dear for such kind words.. this one was the last part.. i am impatient person so taking story more than 2 parts is hard for me to be consistent with characters... aur mere dimag me agli story chalne lagti hai...

abhi if ill write new one ill tag you too.. but isme bas itna hi tha.. and glad you loved n enjoyed❤️❤️❤️

No problem. Actually i was waiting for this update only. Whenever you write U tag me.. thanks again dear 😘 😊 ❤️

So beautifully written 💖🥳😳

Originally posted by: SanchiIndu

So beautifully written 💖🥳😳

thank you so much🤗

Ohhhhh please kuch bhi over nhn hua hai I mean agar age gap hai toh kya romance nhn hoga kiya they are a couple and yess the kiss was very sweet jis tarah in dono nai react kya dono ki personality per suit kr raha tha kuch bhi extra ya over nhn tha ek dum natural or perfect tha jesa hota hai couples mai ab age gap ki wajah sai hum stereotype krain toh yeh galat hai.....

Originally posted by: Agastia

Ohhhhh please kuch bhi over nhn hua hai I mean agar age gap hai toh kya romance nhn hoga kiya they are a couple and yess the kiss was very sweet jis tarah in dono nai react kya dono ki personality per suit kr raha tha kuch bhi extra ya over nhn tha ek dum natural or perfect tha jesa hota hai couples mai ab age gap ki wajah sai hum stereotype krain toh yeh galat hai.....

thank you so so much... reading ur reply made me so happy ke it was a good one .. and yes the post kiss reaction is always the best thing when i watch in my fav shows and i crave for such genuine and heart melting reaction.. so i wrote keeping Vidhi n Devs character in mind.. so so glad it reached ur heart in same way as i thought n wrote..

thank you once again...🤗❤️

hey Parud.. update kiya part 3rd.. padhke batana kaisa laga.. acha nahi hoga i know cause i was in hurry to jyada nahi likhe payi in detail..