Let Me Kiss Your Woes Away Darling - MaAn Ficlets ~31~ p108 Jul18 - Page 39

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Very nicely done! Do you think we will get to see makers touch upon subjects like period? Has any TV show done that? I would like to see this being normalized and not make it look like a taboo.


Kudos to you for thinking of this subject👏


Uh no they won't show this😆


Thank u❤️🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

I read a ff on wattpad on periods only n i have been hoping if someone will actually take care of me on those days😒 and then this ff reminds me of that, it is beautifully potrayed Tiana👏

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

A series of MaAn Ficlets based on how Anuj helps Anu overcome the trauma from her previous marriage.


Let Me Kiss Your Woes Away Darling


~1~


The house was all lit up and sparkling. She peeked through the gap of her door and saw that the guests had already arrived. In a few minutes he would be there too, to make her his forever. Her heart raced at the thought of belonging to him. Shutting the door she sat before her dressing table adjusting her pallu. Kinjal and Pakhi had dolled her up and Samar had declared that she was the prettiest bride in the world.


Her mind raced back to the day her brother had said those same words to her. She remembered being excited for her to be husband's reaction when he would first see her. Her excitement had turned sour when he had refused to notice her and had instead asked her mother whether the gold she wore was real or fake.


Snapping back to reality her anxious overthinking brain started questioning her heart.


'Anuj may have loved you as a bride 26 years back. You were young and pretty then. Now you have nothing. Look at those wrinkles on your face, those dark circles under your eyes. Even Kinjal's expert makeup couldn't cover everything. At least then your parents did give a huge dowry but what do you have to offer Anuj now? It is better you run away somewhere now. '


The voice sounded eerily like Baa's taunts. Her eyes misted. She placed her head on her hands taking deep breaths trying to pick up courage and fight herself.


"You know I am not that scary a person that you are so afraid to meet me."


Startled at the sound, she turned around to see him. His adoring gaze scanned her from top to bottom. She felt warmth spread her as his gaze consumed her like fire. Shaking herself to get her bearings, she said


"Anuj... what are you doing here.. you are supposed to be outside waiting for me... and how did you come in?"


"Oh, I have my ways you know..."


Moving closer to her, he slowly took her hand in his.


"I wanted to see you alone. You know I won't be able to check you out in the crowd."


"Hush..."


She pushed him playfully. He pulled her close to him. Tilting his head slightly he grazed his lips ever so lightly on her cheeks. He smiled as he saw a warm blush spreading on her cheeks. Moving closer to her ears he whispered


"You know of all the ornaments that you are wearing right now this blush is the prettiest."


Tipping her chin so that her eyes would meet his he said


"This is the second time I am seeing you as a bride, Anu and to tell you the truth, you look more beautiful today than you did 26 years back"


Her eyes widened as if questioning him.


"Because that day you were just a bride. Today you are MY bride. Mine.... Only Mine..."


Leaning to the left he kissed her other cheek kissing all her doubts away. She knew now why she had to go to that alter.


She might be old and ugly to the world but to him she was HIS Bride.


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Dear, I have read only the first page of your writing and I fell in love with your writing.🧡💛

I wish I could write anything close to it.

Really great talent 👌

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nyccc part dear Tiana short part but best thanks....for writing part for this topic....plz continue...and sorry for late reply

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ChirpyKiya10


Dear, I have read only the first page of your writing and I fell in love with your writing.🧡💛

I wish I could write anything close to it.

Really great talent 👌


Thank you 🤗do read the rest and let me know if you enjoy it too🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: SAMEERA008

Nyccc part dear Tiana short part but best thanks....for writing part for this topic....plz continue...and sorry for late reply


Thank u Thank u🤗No issues ya❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Flashback in blue


~22~


As the clock struck 1 she swiftly fished out her mobile and texted him


'It's 1... Don't forget lunch...'


She smiled thinking of this new routine they shared and remembered the day she started it. Her flushed cheeks indicated she remembered that night even better. Her cellphone pinged bringing her back to reality.


'Will have in 15 minutes... I promise'


She smiled and sat herself down to have her lunch. She opened the lunch bag to take out her dabba when her eyes fell on it.... the spoon... to be more specific... his spoon. She had packed his spoon in her bag by mistake.


"How do you expect me to eat in front of important clients without a spoon? You were planning to starve me right? Didn't I marry you to take care of my things? How did you forget? Shouldn't I be your priority? If you keep day dreaming about something else, this is what happens, you careless woman."


She felt her breathing become irregular as her heart became a captive of fear, one more time. She quickly looked at the phone. His reply had come 7 minutes ago. If she was quick enough she would reach his office in 10 minutes. Grabbing the spoon and some money, she rushed out to get an auto. All through the way her lips kept mumbling prayers for the auto driver yo drive faster. As soon as she reached the office, she rushed to the lift pressing the buttons multiple times. To her dismay, she found from the display that both the lifts were nowhere close to the ground floor. One was on the 15th, another on 21st.... His cabin was on the fourth floor. Her watch showed that it was already 13 minutes since she had left the academy. Clicking her tongue, she rushed to the steps, running up skipping some steps in her hurry to reach him before he opened the dabba. As she pushed open the cabin door, she found a sight which she was sure to remember for life.... Anuj Kapadia licking his fingers as he ate her food with utmost pleasure. He seemed to have completed the entire dabba.


Satisfied at having such a good meal and mentally patting his head for earning such a good wife, he wiped his hands with tissues and turned around to get some water when he spotted her. She was holding the door trying to catch her breaths. Blinking his eyes twice to make sure she was really there or it was just a figment of his imagination, he stood up.


"Anu...?"


"Sorry.... sorry... sorry..."


She gasped out taking in deep breaths her hand clutching the spoon tightly. Now that the adrenaline rush was gone, the after effects of the escapade she had just pulled out set in. His eyes widened in shock as he realized she was really there. Her disheveled state shook him. He rushed to her side and ushered her to the couch. Pouring some water in a glass he gave it to her to drink. As she drank, her cheeks that had gone pale slowly regained color and she felt her breathing become more controlled and normal.


"Why....??"


"I forgot to keep the spoon... I am... uh..."


He looked dumbly at her. Seeing her state, his mind had conjured up images of the kids in danger, Bapuji, GK on deathbed and what not... But she had actually come running because she had to give him a spoon


"You came running because you forgot a.... a spoon?"


"I wanted to come before you started lunch..."


She looked up to see him standing with folded arms and jaws clenched. His piercing gaze made her shiver a little. He looked angry.


"Sorry.... sorry... sorry.... I... really..."


She got up and placed her hands on his arms rubbing them in an attempt to soothe him.


"I was in a hurry today morning.... and I forgot the spoon...."


"The spoon..?"


He pushed her away and held her shoulders.


"Do you really think I am angry because of the spoon, Anupama?"


She nodded earnestly. He pulled back and looked away, his eyes tearing up as it sunk in what 26 years without him had turned her into.


"Sorry... I.... Is it something else...?"


He shut his eyes as her nervous voice continued.


"Did I forget something else?"


"Yes."


He turned around and made her sit. Kneeling in front of her, he took her hand in his and looked into her eyes.


"You forgot that I can definitely live a lifetime without a spoon but never a moment without you. You forgot that if I lose the spoon, I can replace it a million times but I can never replace you. You forgot that you are the most important part of my life.... not... this spoon.... why Anupama? Why did you forget, Anupama....?"


Her eyes filled with tears and she pulled him into a hug.


"Sorry... sorry... sorry...."


He put his arms around her holding her tight making her understand his love for her. She pulled back and cupped his face. Placing small kisses all over his face, she said


"I love you.... so much... so so much..."


He nodded through his tears.


"I know... I know you do..."


She wiped the tears off his face.


"Sorry for scaring you... I won't do that again... I promise..."


He reached up and placed a kiss on her cheek.


"Thank you, Anupama.... you didn't eat na? I knew it... come I will get something for you...."


He was about to stand up when she grabbed his hand. He raised his eyebrow and she lowered her eyes, her cheeks coloring up.


"What....?"


"Uh... uh..."


He tipped up her chin.


"Tell me..."


"Uh... can you call me Anu once... the way you usually call when we.... uh... you know..."


He grinned at her request and placed his lips on her eyelids.


"My darling Anu..."


His lips moved to her cheeks.


"My baby Anu..."


He moved to her ear and gently sucked her earlobe.


"My wifey Anu...."


He then placed kisses on her jaw.


"My Anu..."


Moving to the other ear he kissed it whispering


"Anu.... Anu... Anu..."


With that he claimed her lips.


****


A/N: it's long but kind of emotional na? Hope you like it

Edited by ...Tiana... - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Mujhe ye wala ak dekhna hai yaar..and long nah I can read n read n read..but ik it takes a lot of time in thinking scenarios and writing.. but as usual it was a fantastic update..❤️..and the names anuj gave ☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Beautifully written as always Tiana❤️

The way he expresses his love to her is something I would love to see even on the show🥺❤

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Posted: 3 years ago

It is very very beautiful...

I love reading your OS, Just a feedback with whatever little understanding of stories I have (considering you as a part of gang and always take our inputs positively hence sharing honest opinion)..

The character graph of Anupama since she has married AK in this story seems progressing at the end of each ficlet but she reacts the same old way in next one, trembling, scared and ready to cry for smallest of her mistakes...

We all understand that she has seen that pathetic life for 25 years.. and that has scarred her soul but Anuj is trying to heal her wounds and give her a new life so she should stop reacting at these small things and be little strong now...


If each ficlet is to be read independently and not related to previous one.. then it's perfectly fine...


Love you yaar... please keep writing...

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