Let Me Kiss Your Woes Away Darling - MaAn Ficlets ~31~ p108 Jul18 - Page 4

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Posted: 3 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: grace2021

Another lovely piece of writing Tiana. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Please write something for

1when Anu went out with Devika before devorce

2 got her first paycheck of 5k

3 V forgot anu birthday

4 she signed fraudulent papers for loan

5 loser taunt


Thanks a lot for these ideas. Will surely work on them and post it🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the comments and likes guys🤗 Means a lot.


This piece of ficlet is very close to my heart. I enjoyed writing it. Hope you enjoy it.


Flashback in blue.


~5~


The past two days had been hard for her. She had been anxious and irritated feeling extremely tired. The reason of course she understood when dear Aunt Flo came knocking today morning. She had avoided him the whole day citing work and had returned home alone earlier than him. 15 minutes ago he had returned and tried to strike a conversation with her. She had snapped at him. He hadn't said much, just shook his head slightly and she had retreated to their bedroom. Now she was feeling guilty that he hadn't yet come to their room. Somehow the drama brought back a painful memory she badly wanted to forget


Ever since she gave birth to Pakhi, her monthly cycles had been more difficult. More than the pain, her mood swings had been terrible. Today was no different and she had badly wanted to scream. Last night's sleeplessness didn't help her either. She had completed all the household chores and the children were already at school. Badly wanting to lie down for a while and rest, she had gone inside bedroom. In two minutes the door flung open and in came her husband. He had forgotten a file and as usual ordered her to get it. Tired out, she had asked him to just get it from the cupboard. All hell had broken lose and he had screamed at the top of his voice taunting her of being lazy and how impossible it was getting by the day to live with her.


'What if one day Anuj finds it impossible to live with me? Maybe that's why he didn't come in yet.'


As the nagging doubt made it's way into her brain, she brought her knees to her chest and started weeping. So engrossed was she in her thoughts that she didn't hear him coming.


"Anu?"


He moved towards her and slightly shook her to get her attention.


"Anu... what's wrong? Are you ok?"


"Sorry... sorry I snapped... I... I..."


She mumbled trying to control her erratic breaths.


"Come here..."


He pulled her towards him and engulfed her in a hug. As soon as she calmed down a little he pushed her back and looked at her questioningly.


"Is it that time of the month?"


Anu looked surprised


"Uh... How did you..."


"Did you forget I was both mother and father to Mukku? She usually behaved erratically during those times. So when you snapped at me I understood that you were going through the monthly cycle. Ok enough explanation... Here..."


He handed her a cup.


"What is this?"


"Hot Chocolate"


"But I don't drink.."


" I know, I know... But Mukku used to love hot chocolate during this time. She said it calmed her nerves so I thought you would also like it. Just try na... I made it with so much love.."


He pouted. She smiled at him and got the cup from his hand. One sip was enough to make her understand Mukku's feelings. She moaned as the hot liquid washed over her.


"Mmmmm... this is heaven..."


"Really?"


She looked at him gazing at her, his eyes dark with passion. She gave him a loving smile, took another sip and let out another moan.


"Mmmmm.... Amazing.... I am keeping you forever, Anuj."


Her lips were brown with the chocolate and unable to resist temptation, he leant in and whispered


"You are a messy eater. Let me help you clean up"


Rolling his tongue over her lips, he mimicked her moaning.


"Mmmmm... Truly Amazing.... I am definitely keeping you forever, Anu."

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Posted: 3 years ago
#33

Atleast now all memories will be rewritten in Anu's life. I wish a time comes, she does not even need to think about those past memories to question her behavior 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Once again it was magical ❤❤❤

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Lovely Tiana.

Ff and OS are such a blessing ..You can dream whatever you want with your fav char. ❤️😛😛😛🤔🤔

Thanks for sharing . I loved it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was another lovely story. So good tiana, plz keep them coming. I love ur imagination

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Hello tiana

Read all parts in one go... what an amazing writer you are...

You have written everything so beautifully.... I can feel every trauma, every insult Anu had gone through in past and the effect it had left her on her life...

I can also feel the efforts Anuj is making effortlessly to make Anu comfortable and erasing those past bitter memories and rewrite lovely memories for both of them to cherish for years to come...

I love this Anuj who knows how to claim his love and these subtle romantic gestures are taking my heart....

I m so in love with your writing... keep writing and please do tag me

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All parts are very nycccc......sorry for late reply...plz update next part soon

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Beautiful and lovely, i didnt knew when the 3rd,4th n 5th part was posted but read now, its amazing 😍😍❤ and so subtle enhances it💕

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Thanks a lot for the likes and comments people. Means a lot🤗


Flashback in blue


~6~


"I hope everyone likes it..."


She mumbled to herself as she set her hair. He had called her 10 minutes back to let her know they were on their way. He had invited his new clients home and she had volunteered to cook for them. Everything had gone per plan and Kaaka had declared that the dishes tasted amazing. As the bell rang announcing their arrival she got up excited when a strange thought struck her mind courtesy Mr. Shah's behavior the time she had cooked for his clients.


Anu had cooked and cleaned with all her might. She had even borrowed a recipe book from their neighbor to cook Italian for his high profile clients. Her son Samar had taught her a few words in English which she planned to use while serving them food. In a few minutes, they would be home. Feeling excited she arranged all the serving vessals when she heard the bell ring. She saw Mr. Shah hurrying inside the kitchen. As he saw her all dressed up, he looked at her surprised


"Where are you going? Why have you dressed up?"


"Well you have guests right? I should be dressed up to serve them right?"


He burst out laughing.


"You...? You thought I would let you come in front of your clients and make me look like a fool? Have you ever looked at yourself in the mirror?"


Anu had felt her self respect shatter that day. Today as the memory struck her heart, she turned to look at herself in the mirror. She looked more or less the same she had looked on that day only a little older. Slowly she sat on their bed failing to gather some courage to go out and welcome him and his guests.


"Anu... aren't you ready yet?"


She looked up to see him enter the room. Seeing her sitting on the bed, he raised an eyebrow questioningly.


"Anuj... I... uh... why don't you serve the dinner with Kaaka?"


"Why? What's wrong? Are you sick? Anything wrong?"


He felt her forehead and neck to see if she was alright.


"No no... I am fine..."


"Then?"


"Those are high profile clients right? What will I do amongst them... look at me... uh... I mean... I don't want to embarrass you... I..."


He pulled her up from the bed and tipped her chin so that she was looking at him.


"My dearest Anu... You are the hostess, tonight. Everyone outside is waiting to see you. Did you really think that you were just here to cook and clean? You are my wife not some stranger whom I hired to help me with the food. "


She looked down trying hard to check her tears.


"But..."


He placed his palms on her cheeks and slowly wiped away the stray tears.


"Anu... look at me... you are my wife.... I am proud of you. Trust me, you would never ever embarrass me."


She looked gratefully at him.


"Thank you..."


He leant forward, kissed her eyes and whispered


"You know... You are looking dazzling today. Honestly I would rather stay and compliment you with actions that you so love but those guests are waiting. I promise once they leave, you are all mine."


She pushed him back playfully. He smiled and held her hand taking her out of their room to the living room where his clients were waiting. Once there, he grabbed her close to him slipping his hands on her waist and with a proud smile he said


"Hey everyone, meet your host for the evening, my amazing and beautiful wife, Anupama."

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