| ShiVi DRABBLE : Mera Kuch Samaan | | Her POV | - Page 3

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Ritu 🤗 this drabble was heart wrenching but in the end all is well that ends well❤️ Very beautifully written Raavi’s thoughts and her inner turmoil. We needed this after Raavi and we were put through in the form of torture.

First of all, Ijaazat is a special movie in mine and my husband’s life, our favorite movie of Gulzar. We have watched it together many number of times. This song is special too. I am glad you wrote the drabble keeping the song in mind.

Raavi indeed went through so much and for her to take this decision was the right thing to do. He has done it in the past and did it again, abandoned her, I am glad she decided to go away especially if his love was true, he would search for her in any nook and corner of the world, which he did. What Raavi went through is unfathomable, no other girl in her place would have stayed as long as she did to expect another chance. I hope Shiva learnt his lesson and the damage he caused by leaving her.

P.S: Is it too much to ask you to write Shiva’s thoughts when Raavi was gone for those 3 months until he found her? Just a drabble would suffice😆

Amazing OS dear.

This was really beautiful 😍. I wanted Raavi to leave PS so many times during the last few months. I liked that you didn't show either of them in the wrong.

Acha I edited the note later on but phir se bata rahi hoon this is a TWO-WAY drabble mtlb Shiva ka POV bhi hoyega.

With a different song entirely 😳

Thank you so much for the lovely comments you guyssss are kind asf 😭❤️

Beautiful, definitely waiting for the Shiva version.

Rituuuu yaar ❤️❤️

This is sooo beautiful

Always been a "puraane gaane lover" ! And this one is such a wonderful song and the lyrics, uff! ❤️

The way you connected the story with the music is just amazing!

This one is such an endearing piece of art, I love it ❤️

Loved your portrayal of Raavi's pain and end mein Shiva ki entry 🤗

read it...

will leave a lamba comment as soon as i get the time cos this piece deserves one❤️❤️

till then.........

AW MAN THAT WAS GOOD AS!!!

First of all, this is one of my favourite songs and you have used it magnificently in this piece! I loved how you matched the lyrics with Raavi's situation!!! It was just so beautiful ☺️ And of course, your descriptions are always so detailed and rich with beautiful words that always hit the right chords!

Coming to the plot, I am so happy that you made Raavi walk away from that clown fest 👍🏼 It was the best decision for her! The way you narrated her attachment to her mangalsutra being far greater than her attachment to Shiva (in some senses) was very interesting! For me, her mangalsutra symbolises her relationship with Shiva and in some ways, it guarantees her a sense of belonging! I think that’s why she was unable to let go of her mangalsutra because she wants that feeling of belonging so bad.

Oh no I started rambling 🤡 idk if this is what you wanted to communicate through your writing, but this is what I interpreted 😛

Shiva comes to find his Raavi Sabka saaman sahi jaga pahoch gaya ❤️