FF prompts for talented writers - Page 2

Originally posted by: sadiltl

I have one prompt from a friend where virat will feel insecure of his age again. 😜

I can make it a comic episode but then I got into thinking, will sai be ever insecure again post confession except when there is another zimmedari of virat which I don’t intend to show in my series 😜

So if they are in normal relationship, expressing love and have good time in bed, will sai be ever insecure of him? I need some view points here.

You can use the age difference other way around.

Sai may hear comment/ or V may tell her ki tumne Kam duniya dekhi hai... World doesn't work like this etc. In a completely unrelated context but this thing is at the back of her mind.

Then a new female colleague of V pops up... Keep her platonic but V admires her for her knowledge, outlook, maturity (🤣) etc. Praises about it to Sai generally.

And unnecessarily Sai compares herself to that woman. Whereas V loves Sai's innocent and slightly younger perspective.

It can be some serious case that they are discussing which brings out this difference of opinion. A generation gap kind of thing.

I am assuming atleast 10 year age difference between V-Sai for this.

Originally posted by: Moor278

You can use the age difference other way around.

Sai may hear comment/ or V may tell her ki tumne Kam duniya dekhi hai... World doesn't work like this etc. In a completely unrelated context but this thing is at the back of her mind.

Then a new female colleague of V pops up... Keep her platonic but V admires her for her knowledge, outlook, maturity (🤣) etc. Praises about it to Sai generally.

And unnecessarily Sai compares herself to that woman. Whereas V loves Sai's innocent and slightly younger perspective.

It can be some serious case that they are discussing which brings out this difference of opinion. A generation gap kind of thing.

I am assuming atleast 10 year age difference between V-Sai for this.

Alternatively, a new acquaintance can be a male with a gender neutral name like Kiran, Suhaas etc .

Sai assumes it to be a female 🤣 and blasts V for praising that person so much.

V enjoys it, teases her more, enjoying her insecurity.. and in the end clarifies everything.

Yeah i think there is 9-10 years of age gap. Sai is very confident girl when she is secure. Her only insecurities are around pakhi. If she is taken care of , then what else? But yeah he can praise some colleague and she might get irritated. Can make it comic

Why don’t you write this one(The first prompt)? You will do complete justice with the details. Would love to read it. It’s been a while. Good for it!

Sorry for ramming in.

Since you intend to keep a comical touch to it, just a few thoughts if you want to consider.

1. V can never be secure, atleast not where Sai is concerned. So if it is picking up from a happy space between them, then you may put this in the backdrop that Sai is allowed/encouraged to live her age. So she indulges in things that girls her age would rationally. So though V trust her he is insecure how she turns to her male friends for certain things where V would have wanted her to choose him as her only and obvious option. While she may innocently give her reasoning, but it only makes V insecure about their age difference. He thinks of her as naive in certain matters and worries if someone may take advantage. While also feeling left out from not being able to enjoy certain engagements or fun things with Sai due to their age gap. This can be comical, more on the lines of Aniket and initial Ajinkya episodes. Also the fact that his family also expects him to act mature considering his age, and him trying to match up to Sai’s friends he ends up doing random stuff out of character that lands him in an embarrassing situation by turning him into a laughing stock. It can be balanced with either Sai supporting, playing along or understanding and acknowledging his efforts.

2. Sai on the other hand can be insecure of some old friend or a colleague of V, who is similar to him in character. He may praise her for something without intending a comparison, but Sai feels insecure or jealous considering it a comparison. Seeing him have long chats with her, Sai would want to have that kind of conversation assuming that they are more intense, meaningful and confiding ones that she has with him. Sai may also try to comically ape her, by wearing a saree, opening her hair, copying her body language to appear more mature to V or impress him and prove that she matches his liking and mental wavelength despite the age gap.

Sorry for that long comment😉

New prompt

Pakhi does fake pregnancy kaand. BK supports/encourages her actions from the sides.

This irks Sonali and Omkar especially because BK has been dismissive of Karishma even though she has not done anything. Sonkar and Mohrishma then decide to support Sai openly.

Can someone take this up?

I want to see Karishma as Sai's friend... Since both of them are disliked by the family especially BK. And they bond ove their shared frustration with the family dynamics.

Also the way Sonali agreed with Sai yesterday makes me wonder if she can ever be Sai supporter against BK.

I always wanted sai and karishma to bond!

Sai and Karishma could bond on many aspects. They are of the same age, I think Sai is younger.

Sai can encourage Karishma to work from home. They can go shopping together, fitness classes, talk about college life..Sai can encourage Karishma to talk about how she met Mohit and their love life together. Right now Karishma has been subdued by Sonali and in turn by BK.

Or Sai can rescue Karishma from a tricky situation. Which BK shouldnt come to know..Something like a pregnancy? which they dont want right now..

Mer dimaag nahi chal raha..

Itna acchha to chal gaya hai... Write it na please 😃

Originally posted by: Moor278

Itna acchha to chal gaya hai... Write it na please 😃

Let me finish my FF first. Its turning out to be most tricky one so far.

Then I have to write for another serial. Just got the mail today. Thoda cooling off period bhi nahi milega.

PS: Watch Lagnachi bedi. Sanket pathak...Ohhh La La..his height, the way he looks at Sindhu..BTW, Sindhu tried suicide by sleeping pills. And this fellow kidnaps a Dr and gets her treated. I am still confused. Medical doctors can please enlighten. About barbiturate overdose. The dr says, no need of hospital admission. Mee injection dilaya, shuddhiwar yetilach hya...