Two-shots: Prize and Punishment [Last Part:Page 9] - Page 3

Originally posted by: lourel24

It was just beautiful. Like Shashi even we would love to see vedika ego crushed but along that I would love to read priya tear shadhi to bits for even thinking of snatching her away from her mr kapoor or even trying to hurt him.loved loved loved loved it. Can we have next part too.pls pls pls.

Thank you so much😍 I am in the mood of continuing this, so if you have any idea, bring it my way🙈

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Thanks so much... I haven't really thought this through, but if you can come up with a prompt, lemme know🙈

Abhi k liye toh nahi since Shashi is still in the background...

Let him come to the forefront phir kya ideas phoot phoot k ayenge😆

Omg, I'm hella excited for this. Looking forward on what Shashi is gonna do😆 This was so beautifully written.❤️ Can't wait to read more

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Thank you so much😍 I am in the mood of continuing this, so if you have any idea, bring it my way🙈

Anything on the line where shashi tries to woo Priya just like he would have done with vedika or any other because he has said he doesn't want to ask or snatch but win her.jab usse dal nai gali then again back to snatching but but Mrs kapoor to Mr Kapoor ke liyehi bani hai.On other side vedika trying her underhand method to get close to ram but ram is in full possessive mode n insecure too as he had already faced how shashi snatched vedika from him .But now he would get possessive, defensive , protective n threatening too to anyone who even thinks of taking priya from him, the avatar shashi amd vedika has never seen though he had taken his so called love from him n rubbed on ram face time and again.Insecurity and vulnerability is just for priya to see n assure that past won't ever repeat n sooth him of their togetherness.

I hope it gave idea of what I wana read.😍😘update soon.

Awesome plot

Beautiful writing

If possible continue this story

This was really good! I would totally read this if you continued it further!

Oh my! This was such a different read! But so awesome!

Honestly i know the fandom doesn't like Shashi but for now i don't have any problems with him.

Ofcourse on screen i want only Raya but in fanfiction I can most certainly appreciate the power couple that would be Shashi and a dark Priya!

They would honestly win the World together and that chemistry would be sizzling!

Love it and would love to see it continued!😍

Originally posted by: AubodroKhargosh

Oh my! This was such a different read! But so awesome!

Honestly i know the fandom doesn't like Shashi but for now i don't have any problems with him.

Ofcourse on screen i want only Raya but in fanfiction I can most certainly appreciate the power couple that would be Shashi and a dark Priya!

They would honestly win the World together and that chemistry would be sizzling!

Love it and would love to see it continued!😍

Dark priya...man that idea is tempting😍😍😍

Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995

Awesome plot

Beautiful writing

If possible continue this story

Thanks so much😳

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Dark priya...man that idea is tempting😍😍😍

Right? Like it's very different from the Priya we know but at the same time it's just an interesting character!

It's like if she was Maitri but with the brains of Priya!

If this is inspiring you please do write more on this!!😂😍