Two-shots: Prize and Punishment [Last Part:Page 9]

Actually this can be an interesting plot🤔.

Beautifully articulated. I hope Shashi doesnt go on this path. More like a Ravan figure in Ramayan.

This is an amazing plot!! Would you continue this rather than make it a one-shot?

Beautiful writing…much better than seeing the Akki and Shivina plot unfold…hopefully resolve…and better than worrying about how Priya will be after the accident…

loved your story…I wish Ram could be more like Priya…they seemed like equals when they were getting married…then both characters have become weak after getting married 😔

please do write more soon

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Beautifully articulated. I hope Shashi doesnt go on this path. More like a Ravan figure in Ramayan.

thanks, and me neither, but it was fun😆

Originally posted by: ajacob31

This is an amazing plot!! Would you continue this rather than make it a one-shot?

Thanks⭐️ I haven't really thought this through, but if I can come up with something, maybe I will😳

Originally posted by: Armansara

Beautiful writing…much better than seeing the Akki and Shivina plot unfold…hopefully resolve…and better than worrying about how Priya will be after the accident…

loved your story…I wish Ram could be more like Priya…they seemed like equals when they were getting married…then both characters have become weak after getting married 😔

please do write more soon

Thanks, and yeah, Shashi would make far more interesting plot points than everything that's going on, given that his existence in the show is to create chaos. Its tough luck that the actor isnt available😭

Hey loved it ... The dark interiors of every character is very important. And Shashi feeling and analysing about Priya is not surprising me. In the show also he doesn't take her lightly. So this was an interesting angle and beautifully written as always.. Please continue writing on the Ram prompt. Will love to read it.. take care .. eagerly waiting for next one. :)

Originally posted by: aisha_ranbir8

Hey loved it ... The dark interiors of every character is very important. And Shashi feeling and analysing about Priya is not surprising me. In the show also he doesn't take her lightly. So this was an interesting angle and beautifully written as always.. Please continue writing on the Ram prompt. Will love to read it.. take care .. eagerly waiting for next one. :)

M actually happy to see that unlike Vedika, Shashi considers Pri to a smart person, and given their connection with Sood senior, it would Shashi look stupid had he consider Pri to be weak.

Thanks so much for supporting the new idea😳