Two-shots: Prize and Punishment [Last Part:Page 9] - Page 4

You won't believe but I have been thinking about the cvs exploring this track in the show as they keep showing shashi praising priya so much 😂.

It can be good that shashi after Priya and Ram fighting him for the first time for his love. Last time he just gave it up so easily, he won't this time. And priya is also not a abhala nari so it can be a good plot. Keep exploring further. Or make it a short story by adding a chapter from both ram and priya's perspective too. Even maybe one from vedika's perspective. But it kind of makes sense for shashi to be attracted to Priya as she is different from women they all are used too.

I really liked the flow of your os. I felt like I'm shashi and I'm obsessing over someone else's wife😆

Keep up the good work 👌

You wrote something mind-blowing and close to the series. From the slightest contact between Shashi and Priya, it is clear that she hurts him, given the opportunity and time, he would be stuck on her. Because Priya is different from him, from other women, from everyone. Her spirit attracts, and her appearance lures with a mystery: how can one be a queen in such a simple image? It's about the content inside. Shashi is not exceptional, he is interested in someone who can interest anyone. Especially in contrast to Vedika, who only plays the opposite. Behind the facade is a helpless adaptation to other people's money. And Priya is a person, she fights back, which makes Shashi attracted, I don’t blame him for that at all. And within the framework of the series, I understand that such development is possible, there is simply no time for it. Your story complements what is hidden in this person in relation to Priya.

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Omg, I'm hella excited for this. Looking forward on what Shashi is gonna do😆 This was so beautifully written.❤️ Can't wait to read more

Even I wanna know what Shashi does next, coz this was just based on a whim🤣

I usually don't like reading on other actors but this was actually good.

I loved this. And also this was unique

Originally posted by: RitikaS99

You won't believe but I have been thinking about the cvs exploring this track in the show as they keep showing shashi praising priya so much 😂.

It can be good that shashi after Priya and Ram fighting him for the first time for his love. Last time he just gave it up so easily, he won't this time. And priya is also not a abhala nari so it can be a good plot. Keep exploring further. Or make it a short story by adding a chapter from both ram and priya's perspective too. Even maybe one from vedika's perspective. But it kind of makes sense for shashi to be attracted to Priya as she is different from women they all are used too.

I really liked the flow of your os. I felt like I'm shashi and I'm obsessing over someone else's wife😆

Keep up the good work 👌

You guys need to look away from Mrs Sood Kapoor, she won't like it🙈 Thanks so much😍

Originally posted by: SEA05

You wrote something mind-blowing and close to the series. From the slightest contact between Shashi and Priya, it is clear that she hurts him, given the opportunity and time, he would be stuck on her. Because Priya is different from him, from other women, from everyone. Her spirit attracts, and her appearance lures with a mystery: how can one be a queen in such a simple image? It's about the content inside. Shashi is not exceptional, he is interested in someone who can interest anyone. Especially in contrast to Vedika, who only plays the opposite. Behind the facade is a helpless adaptation to other people's money. And Priya is a person, she fights back, which makes Shashi attracted, I don’t blame him for that at all. And within the framework of the series, I understand that such development is possible, there is simply no time for it. Your story complements what is hidden in this person in relation to Priya.

You summarized Priya and Shashi so well😍🤯

Thank you, your story gave me ground for analysis beyond what was already in my head.

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

You guys need to look away from Mrs Sood Kapoor, she won't like it🙈 Thanks so much😍

Nope not happening already smitten😉

I really loved this one! I'm a sucker for dark characters and shashi x priya in a parallel universe would be intriguing to read! ☺️

Damnn damn❤️

Please do continue this from priya's prespective and if possible let vedika see her worth losing in shashi's eyes when he goes obsessive mode for priya!

And also unleash a strong and determined Ram trying to protect his wife from shashi.

Though intrigued… something didn’t sit right with me in this… raya is raya is raya😍…

Neg male and pos female is one of the worst of toxic paths that get explored.. there is drama and drag, it is passive yet passionate…but no true meaning, that it exhausts emotions of the people involved!

it was like dramione..which I used to squirm to even listen that ship’s name… but man, those ff’s and their sub plots and the amazing writers! After I while, I decided that this Draco malfoy is a long lost better version of judwa bête of belles🤪 … and sometimes, I used to read it replacing his name with Ron, if they are oses 🤣