Two-shots: Prize and Punishment [Last Part:Page 9] - Page 5

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6

It is an awesome read - thank you so so much for giving us this. It was just the other day i was thinking what if in trying to help Priya, Shashi genuinely falls for her and doesn’t hide it from Ram, what will Ram do? As it is he is so jealous of the gelled baal wala guy. And now he will be jealous of Shashi too. You writing something similar was just what i wanted to read. Would love to read more on this story. You have written it so well. . Please consider writing more on this. Thank you:)

Thank you so much🙈

Originally posted by: TheCoolDocSid

Though intrigued… something didn’t sit right with me in this… raya is raya is raya😍…

Neg male and pos female is one of the worst of toxic paths that get explored.. there is drama and drag, it is passive yet passionate…but no true meaning, that it exhausts emotions of the people involved!

it was like dramione..which I used to squirm to even listen that ship’s name… but man, those ff’s and their sub plots and the amazing writers! After I while, I decided that this Draco malfoy is a long lost better version of judwa bête of belles🤪 … and sometimes, I used to read it replacing his name with Ron, if they are oses 🤣

Originally posted by: Yush001

I really loved this one! I'm a sucker for dark characters and shashi x priya in a parallel universe would be intriguing to read! ☺️

Damnn damn❤️

Please do continue this from priya's prespective and if possible let vedika see her worth losing in shashi's eyes when he goes obsessive mode for priya!

And also unleash a strong and determined Ram trying to protect his wife from shashi.

Thank you so much 🙈 dark Priya is intriguing, ngl😝

Super awesome shot

Originally posted by: Shivpriya6

It is an awesome read - thank you so so much for giving us this. It was just the other day i was thinking what if in trying to help Priya, Shashi genuinely falls for her and doesn’t hide it from Ram, what will Ram do? As it is he is so jealous of the gelled baal wala guy. And now he will be jealous of Shashi too. You writing something similar was just what i wanted to read. Would love to read more on this story. You have written it so well. . Please consider writing more on this. Thank you:)

🤣 exactly! Ram kya karega vahi to sabko Janna hai. Neeraj ko to Priya chord ke aai thy shashi ke sath to iski GFS khud bhag jaty hai. Ram ko kitna complex aa jayga if shashi decides to chase priya🤣

JANTA WANTS TO KNOW!!😆

Okay Shibani!

Back after the Baked with Love series & how-so 👏

I loved loved how you portrayed Shashi's mind's ongoings regarding Priya. It's something that I feel can actually happen & honestly it would be such an interesting take in this drama. What with Priya trying to resist his plans yet if Ram doesn't understand how to handle this, he would lose her 🤓

This was Phenomenal & I would love to read more takes on this if possible. I'm hungry like that 😆

This was fantastic exploration of a mind. I would love it if the show actually pursued such tracks rather than the ridiculous villain plots they have now. Conflict is so much more interesting when the opposition is strong and it’s a battle of wits and minds (as opposed to how many twists can anjalis head and script take).

Loved it!

Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Even I wanna know what Shashi does next, coz this was just based on a whim🤣

😆 I hope you do continue this. This is too damn good. I'll patiently wait.

Originally posted by: bones123

This was fantastic exploration of a mind. I would love it if the show actually pursued such tracks rather than the ridiculous villain plots they have now. Conflict is so much more interesting when the opposition is strong and it’s a battle of wits and minds (as opposed to how many twists can anjalis head and script take).

Loved it!

Thanks so much🙈 I actually thought Shashi was supposed to be the villian, tunes out, unlocked phones are🤦‍♀️