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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ooooh!!! that was something new....I never thought I will like something from this angle but I think aj kal Ram ki harkaton ke wajah se ab har koi acha lagne laga he...🤣Just kidding your writing is so good that it makes u get sucked into the story....By the way this shashi sounds so sexy☺️Keep going...hope u write more for this🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Wow!

The chemistry u managed to create in that conference room🔥


Shashi is the negative character i actually look forward to more than self obsessed Neeraj

Loved the shot

Do keep writing😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Winteriscoming

Ooooh!!! that was something new....I never thought I will like something from this angle but I think aj kal Ram ki harkaton ke wajah se ab har koi acha lagne laga he...🤣Just kidding your writing is so good that it makes u get sucked into the story....By the way this shashi sounds so sexy☺️Keep going...hope u write more for this🤪

M exploiting people's decreasing love for Ram🤣but when I read that I made Shashi sound sexy, I lost it🤣 glad it was worth your time🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28

Wow!

The chemistry u managed to create in that conference room🔥


Shashi is the negative character i actually look forward to more than self obsessed Neeraj

Loved the shot

Do keep writing😊

Thanks so much🙈 M a fan of enemies turning lovers, but this will be toxic, so just made it one sided🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Amazing, this was something new and fresh. If possible do cont the story.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: oye_nakhrewaali

Thanks so much🙈 M a fan of enemies turning lovers, but this will be toxic, so just made it one sided🙈

Acha kiya nahi toh sab chappal utthate aajate tere pichhe😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Winter_Falls

Amazing, this was something new and fresh. If possible do cont the story.

Thank you so much😍

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh My God, this is mind blowing. We all love a dark character, ngl. Especially one as well written as yours is right now.

You should definitely try to continue this..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It was just beautiful. Like Shashi even we would love to see vedika ego crushed but along that I would love to read priya tear shadhi to bits for even thinking of snatching her away from her mr kapoor or even trying to hurt him.loved loved loved loved it. Can we have next part too.pls pls pls.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Oh My God, this is mind blowing. We all love a dark character, ngl. Especially one as well written as yours is right now.

You should definitely try to continue this..

Thanks so much... I haven't really thought this through, but if you can come up with a prompt, lemme know🙈

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