KarMi TS: Revelation (Part 2-Pg.2)

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Monami looked at the clock. There was still an hour left for training to start. This was one of those times when she wasn’t looking forward to train. Ever since Karan had left, things had changed around here. The new trainer, Rawat ran things differently. While Karan started his training at 7 AM, Rawat started his at 8:30 AM. He was more lenient and some of the recruits loved him. It had only been two days, and Monami missed Karan already. Karan’s training, of course. Not him.

Karan had a different way of doing things. He was harsher but Monami could see her progress with his way of training. She had climbed a rope for god’s sake. Rawat didn’t even get people started on the rope yet. He was making them do some lightweight training and some running. Who knew she would prefer Karan’s method of training?


She could also see that Rawat, Faizi and Sanjana didn’t get along. Sanjana didn’t approve of his training method. It was clear. There was tension between them, and that really affected their training. Monami wanted to talk to Batra sir and get Karan reinstated but it wasn’t in her hands anymore. She wished she hadn’t complained like that. But he kind of deserved it too. Sid almost died because of Karan. But again, she wasn’t sure if what she did was right.

“Kya hua Monami tsunami? Sad lag rahi ho.” Faizi came upto her and sat beside her.


“No nothing.”


“Come on! Batao mujhe. Ya phir wapas ped hugging karna hai?” Faizi laughed.

“Karan.” Monami said. “I mean Rawat sir is nice… but Karan was better. Woh jitna bhi harsh tha, but when he spoke, dil mein motivation ki aag lag jati thi. Aur Rawat sir ki practice toh hardly 3-4 ghante chalti hai.”


“I thought tum recruits khush the ki Karan chala gaya. Training regimen bhi relax ho gayi.”

“Main yaha training karne aayi hu, relax karne nahi.” Monami said. “Karan jaisa bhi tha, he was a good trainer.”


Faizi wished Monami knew that Karan was a good person too, not just a good trainer. He would be facing an enquiry tomorrow and Monami and Sid could help save him. Suddenly an idea came to his mind. He could at least clear the misunderstandings between them.

“Mujhe laga tum mujhse naraaz hoge Karan ke liye.” Monami said.


“Naraaz toh hu but I understand tumne jo kiya apne best friend ke liye kiya.” Faizi said. “But you have to admit ki itna jhamela sirf Sid ki wajah se hua.”


“I know. But Sid achha hai. Uske Sanjana ke liye feelings genuine the. Bas tareeka galat tha.”


“Exactly! Karan bhi dil ka achha hai. Usne jo bhi kiya Sanju ke liye kiya. Bas tareeka galat tha.” Faizi said. “Tumhe lag raha hoga main aisa keh raha hu because Karan mera friend hai. Tumhe lagta hai woh galat insaan hai because tum use nahi jaanti. Hume bhi Sid galat laga because hum use nahi jaante.”


Monami was surprised to hear it. What Faizi said made sense, but she knew Karan was a cheat and a two-timer. On top of that, he let Sid starve and remain parched for three days. It was inhumane. Monami didn’t want to think of him as a good person. But she was too confused!


“Karan bohot protective hai apno ko leke.” Faizi said. “Sanju inn sab cheezo ko leke bohot inexperienced hai. Pehli baar shayad kisi date pe gayi aur aisa experience mila. Waise toh Sanju sab sambhal leti hai. Par iss situation se bohot upset ho gayi thi woh. Karan aa gaya apne protective mode mein. Kar baitha yeh galti.”


“Par use yeh galti nahi lagti.” Monami said. “Use abhi lagta hai usne jo kiya thik kiya.”


“Sid ka zid zid, aur Karan ki zid galti?” Faizi asked. “Main Karan ke actions justify nahi kar raha. Main bas yeh kehna chahta hu ki dono ki galti hai. Tumne Sid ki galti ko justify kar diya because woh tumhara dost hai. And honestly, I feel agar Sid ko ek mauka mil raha hai toh Karan ko bhi ek mauka milna chahiye.”


Monami thought for a while. Faizi was right in his own way. Did Karan deserve another chance? She was utterly confused. More so, when she first found out that she had to speak in front of a committee against Karan. She didn’t know if she wanted to do that. He could be suspended and she really didn’t want that. She just wanted make the right decision.

“Tum abhi tak confused ho?” Faizi asked. “Ek suggestion du?”


“Kya?”


“Ho sake toh ek baar Karan se mil lo.” Faizi said. “I think ek baar usse baat karogi toh tumhe closure mil jayega. Woh apne ghar pe hai.”


“Main usse nahi mil sakti… mujhe nahi lagta woh mujhse milna bhi chahta hai.” Monami said.

“Tumhari marzi. Par agar milna ho toh I can give you special permission to leave. Koi emergency ka bahana bana dunga.” Monami was in deep thought so he added. “Karan ke liye yeh academy bohot maine rakhta hai. For personal reasons too. Use yaha se nikal diya toh he’ll lose his life purpose.”


Monami was further conflicted after hearing Faizi. He took a piece of paper, wrote Karan’s address on it and handed it to Monami. She didn’t want to be unfair with Karan. But it would be unfair to Sid if she didn’t complain about Karan. Monami thought she’d meet Sid before the training started so she made her way to the infirmary. He was all well again. In fact, he was having a gala time with Bala and the nurse.

“Monu bro! What’s up?” He asked.


“Sid tu ab kaisa feel kar raha hai?” Monami asked.

“Main bilkul thik hu bro.” Sid said.


“Aap dono sachhi Karan bhaiyya ke against complain karoge?” Bala asked sadly. “Matlab woh thode ulti khopdi hai par itne bhi bure nahi hai.”


“Main koi complain nahi kar raha hu.” Sid said. “I’ll just tell the committee ko maine khud khana peena refuse kiya.”


“What?” Monami was shocked. “But why?”


“I have nothing against dole shole. And I know how much Sanju likes him, respects him. Toh uske against toh main nahi jaane wala.”


Bala smiled and high-fived Sid. Monami glared at him. So after fighting so much for him, he was going to back out for Sanjana’s sake and make her look like the bad guy. Monami stormed off in anger. Yeah Faizi was right, if Sid deserved another chance so did Karan. She was going to talk to him and sort this out.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waiting for part 2 like

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Ananya dear what a wonderful os

I think we are ought to see this in series as well

Bit logical thinking from Monu side & bit mature & sensible from Sid side too👍

Continue soon

Keep writing ✍️

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👏Wow!👏Ananya 🤗

Wish to see something similar in Serial ..

That would be nice+ logical

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Well that was amazing!!! Loved it to the core Ananya! Even I feel she will miss him once he will be gone! Can't wait to read more of it!!

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Hope they sort out every misunderstanding

Amazing update

Pls tag me or pm me so I can read ur story🙁

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Good one....plz pm me and update soon...

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Originally posted by: Golden_Ginni

Ananya dear what a wonderful os

I think we are ought to see this in series as well

Bit logical thinking from Monu side & bit mature & sensible from Sid side too👍

Continue soon

Keep writing ✍️


Thank you!! I agree. Monu needs to be more logical to assess the situation.


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Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Well that was amazing!!! Loved it to the core Ananya! Even I feel she will miss him once he will be gone! Can't wait to read more of it!!


Yes, I’m sure she’ll miss him, and bring him back

Can’t wait for that.


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Part 2


Monami told Faizi that she had decided to go and meet Khadoos Shergill after all. Faizi was really happy. He went and spoke to Mrs. Batra who convinced Mr. Batra to give her a day off. The excuse was that her dad had come to town for a few hours and she had to meet him. It was important, something about one of her patients and an emergency. Monami was really getting tired of lying but she promised herself that it would be her last lie.

She took a cab to Karan’s place and was now standing outside the door. Honestly she didn’t have the courage to go inside. Who knew how Khadoos Shergill would treat her? She was pretty sure he didn’t want to see her after what happened. They had been on really bad terms when he left. The baby thing really pricked him. Even though he was a cheat, he was a good trainer. She was nervous on one hand, but she was also really curious to see his house.


She rang the bell with her heart thudding loudly. The door opened and she expected to see Karan but she came face to face with a woman. It was the same woman she’d seen Karan with in the market. The realisation made her even more nervous. She just stepped in his personal territory even though she didn’t want to.

“Yes?” She asked.


“Ummm, Karan?” Monami asked.

“Karan?” She was surprised to get a female visitor for Karan. “Woh andar hai. Main bulake laati hu. Come in.”


She led Monami to the sofa and Monami began to wonder who she was. She was pretty. How did Khadoos Shergill do so well with women? Poor girl didn’t know Karan was two-timing her. But she decided to just talk about the Sid situation and leave.

“Hands up!”


Monami’s hand shot up in surprise. She found a little girl pointing a gun towards her. Now what was a child doing here? Her heart constricted in fear. Was Khadoos Shergill married? That would complicate things so much. How did no one know he was married?

“Name and identity.” The girl asked.


“Dr. Monami Mahajan. Civilian recruit, SAF.”


“Aur aapko chachu ke saath kya kaam hai?”

“Chachu?” Monami realised she was talking about Karan and she sighed in relief. So he wasn’t married. “Karan… Main toh baat karne aayi thi bas. Aapka naam kya hai?”


“Trisha Shergill.”


“Hi Trisha! Aap toh bohot cute ho. Can I put my hands down?” She asked.

Trisha nodded. “Aap chachu ke friend ho?”


Monami didn’t know how to answer that, but she found Karan descending from the stairs. He looked mad seeing her but he smiled seeing Trisha. Monami felt her heart racing with nervousness.

“Aapse koi milne aayi hai chachu!” Trisha said. “Dr. Monami Mahajan.”


“I know yeh kaun hai baby.” Karan said, rather crossly.


“Baby?” Monami asked. Then suddenly everything got clear to her. “Yeh hai tumhari baby? Jisse uss din tum market mein baat kar rahe the?”


“What do you mean? Of course yahi baby hai.” Karan said.

“Oh I thought-“


Monami was frozen for a second as she realised the truth. Then she wanted to cry for making such a huge mistake. She misunderstood Karan’s character. Everything she thought about him was a lie. Suddenly she remembered Faizi’s words. She didn’t know everything about Karan and that’s why she misunderstood him. The same way Karan misunderstood Sid. Faizi had been right! Coming to his house gave her all the clarification she needed.


“Dekhiye Raani Sahiba. Mujhe aapse iss waqt koi baat nahi karni. You can-“


“I’m sorry.” Monami blurt out. “I’m really sorry.”


Karan looked at her. She really looked as if she were about to cry. Trisha and his bhabhi were looking at the scene before them as if it were a blockbuster movie. Karan blushed noticed their gaze. Right then Monami burst into tears, embarrassing him further.

“Rani sahiba. Please control yourself.” He whispered. “Andar chalo. Andar baat karte hai.”


He grabbed her by the arm and took her inside to the study room. Monami sat on the couch, still crying and Karan shut the door.

“Maine tumhe apni personal life se dur rehne kaha tha aur tum direct mere ghar pohoch gayi.” Karan said angrily but watching Monami cry, he softened his tone a little bit. “Ab tum ro kyu rahi ho?”


“I thought…. Baby tumhari koi girlfriend hogi aur tum uske saath two timing kar rahe the but I was so stupid.” Monami sobbed. “Sab galat ho gaya.”


“Maine kaha tha tumse tum bewakoof ho.”


Karan opened the door and went out. After a minute, he returned with a glass of water for Monami. She took a sip and wiped her tears away. Then she looked at Karan and waited for him to say something. Karan put the glass away and sat beside her.

“Tum neuroendocrine cancer nahi ho.” Monami said.


“Thank you yeh kehne ke liye Rani sahiba.” Karan rolled his eyes. “Tum aise weekday pe yaha kya kar rahi ho? Rawat na kya tum civilians ko chutti de di hai?”


“No woh Faizi ne mujhe chutti dilayi taki main tumse aake mil saku..”


“Toh tum apna training chodke yaha chill marne aayi ho? Woh Academy hai. Koi college nahi hai jo tum aise hi bunk maar sakti ho. Aur uss Faizi ki toh main…”


“Jo ho raha hai tumhari wajah se ho raha hai. Na tum uska khana paani bandh karate, na woh behosh hota aur na tumhe academy se nikalte.” Monami said.

“Aur Sid apni manmaani kar sakta hai?”


“I’m so done with both of you. Tum dono ka alag hi zid chalta rehta hai aur beech mein fas main jaati hu. Kisiko meri fikr nahi hai.”


“Tum yeh kehne yaha aayi thi?” Karan asked.

“No main yeh kehne aayi thi ki… academy ko tumhari zaroorat hai.” Monami said. “Tumhare bina training thik se nahi hoti. Sanjana and Faizi miss you. Sab kuch thoda badal sa gaya hai…”


“Aap mujhe miss kar rahi thi Raani sahiba?” Karan asked.

Monami shook her head. “No I mean-“


The door opened and Trisha came in, followed by her mother. “Tum chai ya coffee logi Monami?” She asked.

“Chocolate shake. Chai coffee kitni boring hai.” Trisha said


“Okay chocolate shake then.” Monami smiled.

“Chalo main aapko apna room dikhati hu.” Saying that Trisha dragged Monami to her room.




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