Shivi drabble- angan scenes

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Raavi and shiva gave up their room to gombi and dhara bhabi.even though the construction had started after suman sold her Kangans, but still shiva insisted that they stay in his room till the construction is complete.he thought it would be easier to stay away from her this way.

It was night, raavi set up the cots for both her and shiva.shiva's cot was in the middle and Krish and raavi slept on either side.

Raavi settled herself on the cot, but she was unable to sleep.she had a habit of locking her room door when she slept, this was an open space.the incident of the break in previous night just heightened her fear.

She was tossing and turning on the cot when she looked at shiva.

" Shiva, tu so gaya hai kya"? She asked

"Hmm " he replied facing the other side.

" Idhar muh karke so na " she said.

"Kyu"? He asked.

" Kyu kiya? Tujhe pata hai na kal ghar mai chor ghus aaya tha.aise mai koi aake teri biwi ko uthakar le jayega aur tu gadhede ki tarah sote rehna." She huffed .

Shiva sighed and turned towards her.raavi closed her eyes.he shifted the cot a bit towards her.she could hear it and smiled in her sleep.

It was cold that night, the angan was usually cool compared to the rooms.the big skylights did not help.

Raavi was shivering in her sleep.it was dawn and Shiva's sleep broke.he saw her and put a blanket over her.

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they had to get ready for a puja.Raavi was holding her saree and wandering around the house looking for a place to change.there were many people, including some neighbours who were chatting away with suman kaki in the angan. Dhara di and Rishita were getting ready in the rooms.

She ran into her bhootnath and her saree and jewellery fell on the floor.

She pouted and picked them up.

" Dekh ke nahi chal sakti? Aur yeh PT Usha ki tarah kahaan bhaag rahi hai? " Shiva asked

" Mujhe saree pehenni hai " she said

" To pehen. Announcement kyu kar rahi hai? " He said

"Kahaan pehnu? " She asked confused

" Gadhedi, tera top floor sach mai khali hai.bathroom mai.aur kahaan? " He said.

" Wow.kitna briliant idea hai shiva.yeh to maine socha hi nahi . Top floor mera nahi tera khali hai.Bathroom ka floor gila hota hai ,meri saree kharab ho jayegi " she said sarcastically

Shiva sighed and looked around.there were a lot of guests in the house.

" Jab dhara bhabi ready ho jayee, tab unke kamre mai taiyar ho jaana." He said.

" Par tab tak bahut late ho jayega..." She said as an idea crossed her mind.

She held Shiva's hand and led him to the kitchen.

" Mai andar change kar rahi hu.tu yahaan bahar khada reh, kitchen Mai kundi nahi hai " she said

" Ae maamikibehenkibeti, mujhe bahut kaam hai.tu yeh sab mujhe kyu keh rahi hai?" he said

" Tujhse nahi kahu to kisse kahu? Patni hu mai teri shiva.chahe tu iss baat ko mane ya na mane, mujhse kitna bhi door bhaag le.par yeh sach kabhi nahi badlega ki main teri zindagi ka hissa ban chuki hu" she said looking into his eyes.

He looked down to avoid her intense gaze.

Raavi went inside and shiva stood outside waiting for her to come out.

" Tu ladka po po po, mai ladki po po po..." Krish came to him

Shiva stopped him.

" Kahaan jaa raha hai? " He asked.

" Paani peene " he replied

" Abhi nahi... Woh raavi andar change kar rahi hai "

Shiva said

" Ohhhoooo...kya baat hai shiva.tu to raavi bhabi ka pehredaar ban gaya" Krish teased him

" Shivaa...andar aanna.mujhe teri help Chahiye " raavi shouted

" Jaa shiva jaa.bhabi bula rahi hai."krish said giving him a teasing smile.

He gave a tapli to Krish on his head and went inside.

Raavi was looking beautiful in a green saree with a golden blouse.

" Idhar aa" she called out to him.

Shiva was lost in her.he didn't hear her.

"Shivaa " she called again to gain his attention.

Shiva came out of his trance and went near her.

" Apna phone nikal aur front camera on kar.mujhe dikha." She ordered him

He obliged like an obedient kid.

Raavi put on her bindi, her earrings, maang tika while looking at the front camera which shiva held out for her .

She even gave him some things to hold while she got ready.

Shiva was lost in her all this while.was she always this pretty?

She finally took out her pink lipstick and applied it while looking at the phone.she smeared a bit on the corner of her lips.she pouted.

Shiva's hands automatically went to her lips and he wiped the lipstick from the corner of her lips.raavi froze feeling his hands on her lips.shiva traced his finger on her lips.she closed her eyes, she was feeling ticklish in her stomach.

" Raavi beta kahaan reh gayi tu? " Suman kakis voice brought them both back to reality.shiva closed his eyes annoyed at himself for losing control like this.

Raavi hastily moved out to join the family.

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Raavi was tired after a lot of work.it was also really hot today. She thought of taking a quick afternoon nap.

She laid on the cot and fell asleep.

Shiva came home for some slips which kaka needed.he saw raavi sleeping on the cot, her dupatta carelessly laid on the side.her cleavage was visible with the sleeveless pink dress that she was wearing.

Dev and some of his friends were talking near the jhoola, one of Devs friend was continuosly eyeing raavi.shivas eyes burned in rage seeing him creepily staring at his wife.

He went near the cot and covered raavi with the dupatta.

"DEV" shiva shouted.

Dev immediately Turned and came to shiva.

" Are shiva, tu kab aaya? Aur aise chilla kyu Raha hai? " Dev asked

" Apne dosto ko ghar ke andar bulane se pehle thoda dhyan diya kar , yahaan raavi so rahi hai Aur tum sab .." shiva glared at Dev's friend who looked away emabarrased.

Raavi woke up due to the commotion.she looked at everyone confused.

" Woh, sryy raavi.hamari wajah se tumhari neend khul gayi, tum ek kaam karo.jaake humare room mai rest karlo.rishita bhi wohi hogi. " dev apologized and suggested.

Raavi just nodded, still confuses why shiva was so angry.dev got back to his friends.

" Yeh tere naak par itna gussa kyu chadha hai? " She asked shiva pinching his nose.

" Tujhe kuch andaaza nahi na tere aas paas kya chal raha hota hai? Bas apne hi duniya mai rehti hai .gadhedi " shiva huffed.he so wanted to punch that guy for staring at raavi .

" Ab mere sone se bhi tujhe problem hai?tu kya iss tarah dukaan se sirf mujhpe gussa karne aaya hai? " She asked.

Shiva calmed down a bit.it was not her fault.she just wanted to rest.

Raavi went away from there to rishita's room.

She found it empty .she wondered where she is.

She rested on the bed and was scrolling through her phone when Rishita entered.

" Tum? Tum mere bed pe kya kar rahi ho? " Rishita asked

"Woh Rishita, dev ne..." Raavi was interrupted rudely by rishita.

"Ab tum Dev se milne uske kamre tak aa pahunchi.sharam nahi ati tumhe? " Rishita said

Raavi felt tears stinging her eyes.

Shiva and dev rushed inside hearing her voice.

" Dekho na Dev, yeh hamare bed par leti thi.i can't tolerate this.tameez naam ki koi cheez..." Rishita was interrupted by shiva.

" Bas bhabhi " shiva shouted

" Raavi aapke bed pe baith gayi to kaun si badi baat ho gayi ? Aap tab se kuch bhi bole jaa rahi hai." Shiva glared at rishita

" Raavi ko maine hi bola tha yahan aakar aram karne ke liye kyuki bahar mere dost baithe huye hai.tum bolne se pehle kuch sochti bhi ho? Tumhe pata hai na ghar ke halaat kaise hai? " Dev said angry at her.

Rishita just huffed annoyed.

Raavi went away from there.

" Shiva, I am so ..." Dev was interrupted by shiva

" Rehne de dev. Kab tak kisi aur ki galtiyon ke liye maafi maangta rahega" Shiva said glaring at rishita and left the room.

He went in search of raavi and found her sitting on the kitchen floor and sobbing.

He filled a glass of water and brought it to her,. while sitting in front of her.

She drank it slowly.

He wiped her tears with his hands.

" Sorry " he murmured

Raavi's eyes shot up to look at him.

" Tu kyu sorry bol raha hai? " She asked confused.

" Kyuki tune Mera saath dene ke liye apna kamra chod diya, par maine tere baare mai nahi socha." He said.

" Tujhe raat ko thand lagti hai.macchar katte hai.din mai chain se aram nahi kar sakti.yeh sab sirf meri wajah se " he continued

" Yeh kya keh raha hai shiva? Bas kuch hi dino ki hi to baat hai.phir jab dhara di ka Naya kamra ban jayega tab sab thk ho jayega.aur tujhe kya lagta hai, mai dhara di se pyar nahi karti?" raavi assured him.

Shiva held her hands.

"Jaanta hu ki tu iss parivaar se bahut pyar karti hai.sabka khayal rakhti hai . par tera khayal kaun rakhta hai? Yeh to meri zimmedari hai na. Mujhe dhara bhabi aur gombi ko aangan mai sote huye dekh kar bura laga, par maine yeh nahi socha ki meri patni ko bhi to pareshaani hogi " he said sincerely.

Did he just address her as his wife? A small smile crept in her face.

" Mai sab thk kar dunga.vaada karta hu " he said.

Raavi just nodded and threw herself in his arms.shiva was surprised at her sudden hug, but he reciprocated and hugged her back.

Krish entered to see them like that, he really wanted to tease them but he just let them be not wanting to disturb their moment.he prayed a silent prayer to lord somnath to keep his bhai and bhabi happy .

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"Gombi,mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi " shiva said.

" Hann, bol na shiva " he replied.

" Woh raavi ko anngan mai takleef ho rahi hai.ab woh to kuch kahegi nahi.mai soch raha tha kamra banne tak raavi aur dhara bhabi ek kamre mai so jaye aur aap aur mai aangan mai reh lenge " he said

Gombi just smiled looking at his brother.

" Yeh bahut acchi baat kahi tune.yehi sahi rahega.ladkiyon ko andar hi sona chahiy, mujhe dekhkar accha laga shiva ki tujhe raavi ki fikr hai " gombi said putting a hand on shiva's shoulder.

Shiva looked down.

" Aisa nahi hai... woh.." shiva stuttered.

" Dekh shiva.maine kabhi tujhse kuch kaha nahi tere rishte ke baare mai kyuki mujhe laga tum dono apne hisab se apna rishta nibhaoge , par mai dekh raha hu tu kuch dino se use ignore kar raha hai." Gombii said

" Jab tune Shaadi wale din uska haath thaama, tab woh tooti hui thi.us din wale raavi mai aur aaj ki raavi mai bahut farq hai.aur yeh farq teri wajah se hai.tune jaane anjaane mai use sawara hai.ab phirse use tootne mat dena kabhi." Gombi continued.

"Pata nahi gombi, kabhi kabhi samajh nahi ata ki uske dimag mai kya chal raha hai." Shiva admitted

" aur ise dur bhagkar tu use samajh jayega?Woh bahut Masoom hai shiva.mai uski taraf dari nahi kar raha hu.bas itna keh raha hu ki use logo ki samajh nahi hai.thodi si dobi hai.tujhe apna pyar aur fikr use jatana hoga.shayad tere ishare na samajh paye woh." Gombi continued.

" Par uske layak to mai nahi hu na gombii" shiva said.

" Ab mai tujhe kahunga ki tu heera hai to tu to manega nahi.agar mai bhi teri tarah sochta ki mujh jaisa insaan jiske paas ek phuti kaudi nahi hai, jiske upar itni saari zimmedariyon hai woh dhara ke layak nahi hai to kya hota?. Ladkiyan bahut shiddat se rishte nibhati hai shiva.raavi ne iss rishte ko apna liya hai, ab tu usse jitna bhi dur bhaage woh tera saath nahi chodegi.ab yeh tujhpar hai ki iss saath se use dukh milega ya khusi " gombi explained.

Shiva just nodded and gave him a hug.









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Posted: 3 years ago
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Beautiful❤️

This was so real

The best part was Raavi sleeping on cot and Shiva covered her dupata and scolded Dev for his friends. That was so real

Also I wanted that you should complete this so please try to.

All in all i love this OS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Beautiful❤️

This was so real

The best part was Raavi sleeping on cot and Shiva covered her dupata and scolded Dev for his friends. That was so real

Also I wanted that you should complete this so please try to.

All in all i love this OS

Thank you ❤️

I wanted the real issues of the ladies being explored.i am glad you liked it .

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Pixie I love this ❤️

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Beautiful 😍😍 lovely update 😍😍

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omg pixu this was so cute I absolutely loved it

angry shiva was a treat to read as always 😉🤣

but I love how slowly he understood the importance of raavi and her needs

so so so adorable

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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Thank you ❤️

I wanted the real issues of the ladies being explored.i am glad you liked it .

Actually.

They show too much of fictions.

I am glad you showed these scenes🤗

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Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

omg pixu this was so cute I absolutely loved it

angry shiva was a treat to read as always 😉🤣

but I love how slowly he understood the importance of raavi and her needs

so so so adorable

Thank you ashuuu❤️❤️

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This is so beautiful!

The way you showed the difficulties Raavi faced sleeping outside and Shiva realising ❤️

The kitchen scene has my heart❤️ Krish I’m so happy you didn’t disturb! That’s why is the favourite of every ShiVi fan😆

Shiva Gombi moment was much needed ❤️

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Wow😍.....No words...it wss sooo gooddd

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