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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: raaz19

Hi as always thank you for the tag in the update.

Wow finally have caught up with part 15 of the update I loved the friendship development between imlie and Aditya and finally you have shared the mystery of the bangles and connect between chapter two today. That’s how he knew it was imlie for he recognised the tune of his own soul without wanting too. It’s such a simple moment but it really connected them as people and the gesture showed how much one can care even without having to spend a lot of time and money.


for me it was magical that he was able to have that moment and allow her to feel special and make a new friend and he just seen as imlie and nothing more. I am pretty sure nani will be watching to strike for the moment seems to lead to a bigger twist.



As for the mystery in the city it reminds me of anu and Maline for some reason. Just feels one of the things she may have been through when Maline wa growing up.

Just wonder how the bangles and Aditya will connect in the future. Will he miss there sound when she had left and are they are tune calling to his heart. I see she has a made space without wanting too and him realising. So cute.

So soulful ❤️


love raaz


True.

About Anu and Malini's part let's see. I'm giving her a more appropriate reason to become bitter here unlike the show. Her character will be different from the show.

Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: raaz19

Part 17: oh wow 😯 didn’t see that coming but I love the twist at the Mandir and the whole worry and concern between the two. The fear and realising that there may be more ahead just made the read so much more intense.

It was a nice insight into imlie fear and her whole change within her emotions one could feel the weight of her feelings and the test of her faith. It’s so hard to see when she knows what the sindoor has meant or her mother and what it could do to her and her dreams.

It was like her nightmare was coming in front of her even if it was a blessing. One that he may never understand and one we know he will deny in the start .

But I still loved the way he went looking for her when he knew he didn’t have to. It showed a bond of trust even when the friendship was new he still cared and she never really had somebody to care expect her dadda and her mother.


Him looking out for her and she for him in the end showed no matter how big her fears she cannot see anyone in pain and maybe this is why the journey she will have she will have to learn to fight for her life and self worth because so far I feel she hides her pain so well. I wish Aditya gets to see the vunarable side of her too.

The storm has set and I see this will play the path for the wedding and the trap ahead. I just hope that the storm doesn’t end all her dreams for I feel Aditya love is going to be tested while imlie faith. I just hope one day they can look back on this day and talk off it.

Wonder how he will react to her running away. Will he question it?

The poem at the end is sad but it reminds me of any and her pain and sometimes makes me connect with Rupi too. It sad to see people suffer because of society deems correct rather then focus on what would have been right for them. I like this twist and looks forward to knowing whom they are?


Lovely post 😊



Yes I changed it a lot here actually. It wasn't a planned twist. It came around spontaneously while I was penning down and I liked the prospect.

Thank you ☺️

Here it isn't Rupi. The poem isn't addressed to her or about her. Let's see who it is then.

Thanks for the lovely comment

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: raaz19

Part 17 and 18 are amazing too loved how they cared for each other when they knew how it was effecting them both. My heart went out to imlie how much she wants to know what it feels like to belong as part of a complete family it’s say nicely put that no matter how strong you are one always wonders about the what ifs?


It’s like she is still searching for answers and acceptance and may be this journey so far has given her a friend but I see that her Nani doesn’t want her to fly and it’s sad to see she will be punished for another’s mistake as shall he.


I wonder how he will forgive and and let go and how they will find there way to each other to accept what they felt when they showed care and concern. The little talk and massage was such a adorable moment that shows why they connect so well even though they are strangers. They often say faith test us when we least expect it and this is what will happen with them.

Will she be able to love him when she learns Maline is her sister and will she accept him as he has off her. I wonder how long this hate will carryon.


hope to read of there journey after there wedding and what they felt but most importantly I wonder what he feels of her today.


Beautiful update.

Love raaz



That's a long journey. Let's see what's in store for them ahead. Yes Nani is like that. But she as a catalyst was needed for this bond to be formed. True they have to go through a lot ahead. But then that's the beauty of it. Their relationship after all of it shall emerge strong enough because it has sustained enough storms.


Thank you ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#64

Part 19: Parinaam?? (2)


"Stop it!!" Imlie screamed unable to tolerate the horrendous accusations being put on her character.

"I swear on Sita Maiyya that nothing has happened between us" she announced in grave seriousness. All of the villagers halted at this. They knew Imlie was a firm believer of Goddess Sita and that she wouldn't falsely swear, being well aware of the consequences.

Dulari cursed under her breath. No! She couldn't let such a wonderful opportunity go waste!

"Oh is it? Then what about these bangles on your wrist?" she slyly pointed out.

"Ay Meethi. See and tell if it's hers or gifted by this Shehri Babu"

Meethi looked at the bangles and then at her daughter. She cast a glance at an agitated Aditya as well but all she could see in their eyes was confidence and honesty. If there had been a wrong motive behind that gift, their eyes would have bowed down or the guilt in them would have shown. But all she could see was honesty shining in their eyes and purity emanating from their bond. Satyakam had informed her about Aditya that day. And so she knew, her daughter and her guest weren't at all guilty. Nothing had happened! They had just got stuck in a storm, thats it. She hadn't needed all of this to affirm her faith because she knew her daughter very well. She needed it to prove it to the villagers because she knew the end result of this otherwise would destroy two lives!

"Are you dreaming or what? Answer my question!" Dulari yelled pulling Meethi by her hair.

"The bangles aren't hers Amma but....."

"No ifs and buts. So it proves they are guilty" Dulari announced, cutting Meethi in the middle.

"No! It doesn't prove anything! We are innocent" Imlie shouted.

"What do you intend to say Respected Old Lady that just because I have gifted a set of bangles to her, it makes me a person who has spent the night with her?" Aditya spoke up, thundering in anger. He was hurt and angry and why wouldn't he be? Aditya Kumar Tripathi was a man of morals and the open slaughter of his character when he hasn't done anything wasn't something he would tolerate.

Imlie could understand his state. She knew he was a respectable man, a decent man who did not deserve this insult. She would take all insults thrown at her but she wouldn't let anybody malign his character anymore.

"You heard him Nakli Nani. This pair of bangles have been given as a token of Thank you. I took him around the village. He is my guest. And so he wanted to thank me for all the help. Nothing else!"

Seeing the villagers slowly believing Imlie and Aditya's words, Dulari felt herself tasting defeat which she couldn't afford at any cost!

"Fine agreed you might be innocent. But you have spent the entire night in the same place so you'll follow the rules set in the village. Either he'll be killed or you both should get married! And for your kind information O Villagers, this pair has been blessed by Sita Maiyya herself. You can ask the Village Priest. Dint he tell the same to you Imlie when this Babu accidentally spilt Sindoor on you, filling your parting?" she said slyly.

All of them stood shocked. Meethi was the most shocked. She just couldn't believe it at all! Meanwhile Imlie and Aditya shared horrified looks at each other.

What the hell was happening??

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Sitting in his room, he looked at the vast stretch of luxury and development as far as he could see through the window. The skyscrapers seemed to be kissing the sky with development and technological process evident all around.

5 years back when he had come here, he had come with dreams and aspirations. He had come to achieve great heights so that he could make his family proud.
His career had taken off well and he had soon started gaining a lot of success. He had everything planned out. After a few more years, he planned to fly down to India to be with his family. He would then get married to his love of 9 years and then return here. At the birth of his first kid, he would fly down to India forever. Life seemed set.

But little did he know fate had something entirely different written for him. When he initially found out, he had felt as if his world had shattered. But then trying to take things optimistically, he decided to go in for the necessary treatment and see if he could come out of it. But unfortunately, it increased more instead of decreasing. And that's when he took the most difficult decision of his life!

Picking up the phone, clutching his heart in his hand, he called her up. Her enthusiastic, love filled hello made his heart clench in agony. Oh why was God so cruel! How could he break her heart like that? How could he crush the person whom he loved so much? But he had to because he knew, it'd break her to learn about him and that she deserved a much better life than this. And so he had, steeling himself uttered those four words which broke everything in him

"It's over between us!"

The silence from other side told him what she had felt. He had hung the phone almost immediately knowing he wouldn't be able to take either her hurt or her questions.
The next call had been to his family. The family he loved more than his life. His entire body trembled even as he uttered words of disrespect and arrogance, just to cut off from them. To save them from the bigger hurt, he had to give them this pain and so he did. But after that, he was just a living corpse. Waiting for his end and praying for the wellbeing of his family. And of courses, remembering her - the love of his life for whom he yearned. If only life hadn't done this to him. If only!


Love,

PSR

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Ps143


True.

About Anu and Malini's part let's see. I'm giving her a more appropriate reason to become bitter here unlike the show. Her character will be different from the show.

Thank you ☺️

I would love to see the twits in her character would be a nice read for a change seems to me she has more of a layer to her relationship then just the need of money that will make it more interesting to see why her and dev went on separate paths too.


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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Ps143


Yes I changed it a lot here actually. It wasn't a planned twist. It came around spontaneously while I was penning down and I liked the prospect.

Thank you ☺️

Here it isn't Rupi. The poem isn't addressed to her or about her. Let's see who it is then.

Thanks for the lovely comment


Your welcome well it makes me think of anu then but you can feel Rupi pain too even if it’s not here one can relate. Loved it 😍


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Posted: 4 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: Ps143


That's a long journey. Let's see what's in store for them ahead. Yes Nani is like that. But she as a catalyst was needed for this bond to be formed. True they have to go through a lot ahead. But then that's the beauty of it. Their relationship after all of it shall emerge strong enough because it has sustained enough storms.


Thank you ☺️

I cannot agree more the storms is what will make there bond and journey but with it I see they will have to challenge so many fears and let so many people down. I just wonder how they will handle all this pain. It’s a long way away but the anger we have seen in the opening is there like a knife in two planks and the past is showing how it came about but still this makes one more curious to see how they will bridge the gap and whom shall take the first step. Even if it is of friendship how this happens is the twist I am keen on.

Just how you covered the twist or the sound tune of the bangles and the connect he feels with them.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

I would love to see the twits in her character would be a nice read for a change seems to me she has more of a layer to her relationship then just the need of money that will make it more interesting to see why her and dev went on separate paths too.


True. Me too actually. I dint get it in the show so thought to put it here.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: raaz19


Your welcome well it makes me think of anu then but you can feel Rupi pain too even if it’s not here one can relate. Loved it 😍



Thank you ☺️

Let's see who it is. All of it will be revealed as the story proceeds.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raaz19

I cannot agree more the storms is what will make there bond and journey but with it I see they will have to challenge so many fears and let so many people down. I just wonder how they will handle all this pain. It’s a long way away but the anger we have seen in the opening is there like a knife in two planks and the past is showing how it came about but still this makes one more curious to see how they will bridge the gap and whom shall take the first step. Even if it is of friendship how this happens is the twist I am keen on.

Just how you covered the twist or the sound tune of the bangles and the connect he feels with them.


True.

And I hope I do enough justice to all the characters.

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