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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

WOW!!! So glad you wrote this despite the 100 other things you should have been doing 💃

Your writing is as beautiful and soulful as always 👍👌

This is absolutely relatable as far as Vir’s character goes, unlike the show 🙄 Him raising a hand to a woman, however much jealous, hurt or “being human” is utter nonsense as far as I’m concerned!

Can’t thank you enough for keeping the dialogues in English 🙏🙏🙏

PLEASE give us part 2 sooooon! Hope you are convinced by all comments to do so fast 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zunari

WOW!!! So glad you wrote this despite the 100 other things you should have been doing 💃

Your writing is as beautiful and soulful as always 👍👌

This is absolutely relatable as far as Vir’s character goes, unlike the show 🙄 Him raising a hand to a woman, however much jealous, hurt or “being human” is utter nonsense as far as I’m concerned!

Can’t thank you enough for keeping the dialogues in English 🙏🙏🙏

PLEASE give us part 2 sooooon! Hope you are convinced by all comments to do so fast 😃

😂😂😂 Thank you so much.

I swear! His actions are unjustifiable, especially because of the position he holds. He is supposed to be a judge of people's fates. It is therefore baffling that he'd lose his control like that. They played it for TRP. And although I'm loathe to see this track get viewers, I also hope that it does generate some TRP otherwise Vir's character would've been sacrificed for nothing.

I'll try to give Part 2 as soon as I am able 😂

Once again, thanks so much for reading this. And leaving me a comment. It really made my day.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: aryapdane

Manasi ❤❤❤

I'm just a little busy rn so I'm not able to come to the forum or watch the show. But I couldn't have missed this episode for anything. And once I watched it, I had to write this 😂

You are too kind yaar but I'm glad you liked this. I think you have written something for this episode too. I've just not had the time to read anything at the moment. Please forgive me for that.

As for Vir's reaction, I think I have a rant that's building up in me since Wednesday. Let's see what Monday has to offer.

Again, thank you so much ❤❤


Of course yaar...real life does have to take precedence sometimes, unfortunately 😳

So read whenever you get time, anyway ir is nowhere near your level...and I would prefer that of you have limited time, you focus on updating this one 🙈


Rant...I will wait for that...coz you bring out points which have not occurred to me😆


Waiting for the next update ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Manasi_16


Of course yaar...real life does have to take precedence sometimes, unfortunately 😳

So read whenever you get time, anyway ir is nowhere near your level...and I would prefer that of you have limited time, you focus on updating this one 🙈


Rant...I will wait for that...coz you bring out points which have not occurred to me😆


Waiting for the next update ❤️

Again, you are entirely too kind.

And yeh kya humility display kar rahi ho.. I know you are fabulous. I'll try to update the fic as soon as I can.

I am trying to avoid the rant 😂😂😂 ab toh meri reputation hi ban jayegi of being a complainer in the forum. But the slap needs to be addressed I think.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: aryapdane

😂😂😂 Thank you so much.

I swear! His actions are unjustifiable, especially because of the position he holds. He is supposed to be a judge of people's fates. It is therefore baffling that he'd lose his control like that. They played it for TRP. And although I'm loathe to see this track get viewers, I also hope that it does generate some TRP otherwise Vir's character would've been sacrificed for nothing.

I'll try to give Part 2 as soon as I am able 😂

Once again, thanks so much for reading this. And leaving me a comment. It really made my day.


Awwww 🥰 It’s you who made my day with the wonderful FF after 2 days of Molkki deprivation 😃

Always a big fan of your writing! You have such a way with words!!! 👌

Couldn’t agree more with you on the absurdity of Vir character portrayal on the show. Yeah, let’s hope his character assassin wasn’t a total loss! I hope they do some serious damage control and restore Vir’s image & give us some beautiful & heartfelt PurVir scenes while doing so!
Looking forward for your update & take on PurVir reconciliation ❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh sh*t how did. I missed this

Arya Di u r phenomenal as always🥳

Always wanted an alternative version of vir's breakdown even thought of writing one but this is just perfect👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

I actually didn't miss it...i read and thought comment aaram se karungi...then forgot


First...you are a magician...idk uk that or not but you are...my Hermione!

Its soooo beautiful...just what we all wanted... instead of that stupid slap...

Second...how do you do this... Whenever i read yr work i totally get lost in it, wonderful as it is!

Jab bhi you post a story na...me be like...yeh jaldi toh online nhi aayegi, aayegi toh kuch nahi batayegi, kuch nhi bata ke bomb phod ke jayegi😂lame af ik...

But no kidding, honestly i haven't decided who for me is the best writer in this forum, but you are my favorite! Aap frequently update nahi dete...but jab dete ho it's just wow and amazing and completely WONDERFUL!

Love love love love love❤️❤️😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Arya...🤗


Missed ur writing....this is so awesome....I wish we could have seen something like this..

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