Pledge of love - PurVir SS part-7 on page 8 - Page 3

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Part - 3 : The Ghat

There was a time when Vir dint give any regards to Purvi, but now the situations have changed. Never in his wildest dreams he could imagine breaking her heart but he has done it, however unwillingly. It wasn't that grieving her dint affect him, he wept too - because of her, for her.

"The fire of compunction brings out the candid gold." This fire in Vir was to bring out his suppressed emotions - his love and concern for Purvi.

Throughout his journey, he kept cursing his tongue for uttering such derogatory statements against his wife; his hand for hitting her soft plumpy cheeks; his mind for nurturing doubts about her character; and mostly, his heart for not believing in her purity.

At The Ghat

After reaching there, Vir kept staring at her silently from a distance while trying to compose himself, assess his words as he dint want to take any further chance with his tongue.

V - "Tu chahe kitna bhi naraj ho bawri ib mai tujhe khud se durr na jaane duga". Saying this he stepped towards Purvi and took a seat next to her.

She had sensed him the moment he stepped his foot on the ghat.

Much to Vir's surprise Purvi gave no visible reactions as if his presence dint affect her. Only she and her Kanha ji knew how badly her heart swayed in his shade.

"Bawri ...!!! " Vir called out. She dint respond.

V - "mai janta hu tu mere ta bhut naraj hai." He folded his hands in front of her and continued "mujhse bhot badi galti ho gyi jo tujhpe bharosa naa kia, mujhe maaf kar de"

{BG Music : Darmiyaan}

{ Lafzon se jo tha pare

Khaalipan ko jo bhare

Kuchh tto tha tere mere darmiyaan}

Purvi dint give even a single look to him. She wasn't crying. She was still and emotionless like a stone. (In mind) "Apne hme bhut chot pahuchai hai Mukhi ji. Hmare charitra par sawal khade karne se pehle ek bar nhi socha apne. Hm apko kabhi maaf nhi krege."

{Rishte ko kya mod doon

Naata yeh abb tod doo

Ya phir yun hi chhod doon, darmiyaan}

V - Tu chahe to manne daant le sherni ki tarah jaise pehle krti thi par kuch to bol. Tu jo saja degi mai sur jhuka ke maan luga.

P - "Ek MOLKKI jo khud bina kisi galti ke saza bhugat rhi ho, wo kisi ko kya saza degi. Aur kis baat ki maafi maag rhe hai ap ? Kahi us galti ki to nhi jo apne humse shaadi karke ki hai (remembering his words)" she uttered, with no tints of sentiments.

V - (confused) "Nahi bawri. Gusse me manne bhut kuch keh dia tanne par mhara vishwas kar wo sach naa tha." He said softly. He was hurt by the way she used the word MOLKKI for herself.

P - (this time her eyes blazed with rage) Hme 'bazaaru' aur 'charitraheen' kehte hue ek bar bhi apki zabaan nhi ladkhadai thi naa

{Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo

Ho naa.. sake jo bayaan, darmiyaan×4}

Vir was someone who had absolute command over his outburst of emotions but right now he wanted to blurt out everything, all his insecurities, fear and pain.

V - Tujhe us Karan ke haatho kho na dun is asuraksha ne manne andha kar dia tha. Wo video dekh ke mera kaabu na rha khud pe. Mai janta hu manne galat kia hai isi lie.......

He wanted to say more, confess that how much he craved for her companionship, how much he missed their togetherness; But something in him stopped him and he lost the chance to speak....!

Purvi stood abruptly giving no chance to Vir to speak "isi lie kya ? (Shouting ) humse rishta todne ke baad kis haq se aye hai ap yha? Humne hmesha apka sath diya, apke sath khade rhe aur jab hme apki zarurat thi to ap hme thokar maar kar chale gye. Apne kabhi hme apni patni nhi mana fir bhi hme usse koi shikayat nhi thi, par ap to hmari izzat bhi nhi kar sakte. Hm par haath uthaya tab bhi kuch nhi socha apne." Her tears of rage were evident of the pain she was going through. 😭

{Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan}

Vir clenched his fist with so much force that his nails hurt his palm which had slapped her once. He was devastated to see her like this - once a sweet, easy-going girl turned into a cold and rough one. He requested again "Tanne itna sab kuch mhare karan sehna pada. Aj ke baad kabhi tujhpe shak na kruga, tera bharosa kruga. Ek akhri mauka de de mujhe bawri, mai sab thik kar duga vaada karta hun tujhse." There was immense hope in his eyes that she'll listen to her pleadings. But NO

P - Kya thik krege ap ? Hmara choor hua abhiman hme lauta payge ? Ya fir hmare man pe jo ghaw die hai apne wo bhar payge ? Agni ko sakshi maan kar 7 vachan lie the apne, wo to nibha nhi paye ap ab ye vaada pura krege iski to umeed bhi nhi hai hme!!

Her words were like thunderbolts on him. He wanted to shout with equal force "haa... Teri har chot ka marham banuga mai, bas mujhse durr mat jaaa....!! ". He again couldn't speak for he felt to drained of energy.

{Chalte thay jinpe hum-tum

Raaste woh saare hain gum

Ab kaise dhoondein manzilein }

She was screaming in frustration, her voice heavy due to excessive crying. She thundered in anger, so did the sky - witnessing SITA once again put in a jeopardy for her character.

She turned to leave when Vir got hold of her hand and instinctively pulled her towards himself and this time he spoke - "Ruk jaa..... na mai is rishte ko tootne duga naa hi tujhe khud se durr jaan duga. Tujhse mai aur mera pariwar pura howe hai aur fir se mai use adhura na kar sakta. " His eyes carried resolution and ebullience of winning her back.

Purvi jerked his hand away and countered "teri jaisi badchalan auraton ki jagah kothe me hoti hai" yhi kaha tha naa apne us din" her eyes seemed lost as if she was recalling the bitter experience. She walked away without laying even the slightest glance at Vir.

{Raatein hain jaise maatham

Ab toh hain din bhi gumsum

Roothi hain saari mehfilein}

Vir stared at her miserably. His own words hitting him like whips. He cried, once again for her. Seeing her go was painful but letting her go was deadly. A sudden realisation dawned upon him -"Mai tere bina naa jee pauga bawri." Vir decided to love once again, live once again and win his Bawri back at any cost.smiley27

{Itna sataao naa yun yaad aao naa

Bann jaaye aansoon bhi zubaan}

Two broken hearts wept both in love but none was ready to confess.

However, Vir was now a step closer, his desires clearer. He vowed - "jitna rona hai aj ro le bawri, aainda teri ankho me sirf khushi ke aansu hoge. Mhare rehte koi takleef tujhe chhu bhi na pawegi ye vachan hai mera." He realised how much protective he had become for his Bawri.

*Sometimes distances are necessary to bring people closer.* Proved right by our PurVir.

To be continued....

Keep reading !! 😊

Can't tag u but u r phenomenal Supriya n our thought process is soooo much similar 🤩🤩🤩🤩

It's unbelievable 💖

This is just amazing Supriya...❤️

Amazing Supriya..This is phenomenal..Beyond words❤️

Read all the 3 parts in one go.Carry on the good work.Ab bas inka hi sahara hain.😆

Waiting for ur next update.

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

Can't tag u but u r phenomenal Supriya n our thought process is soooo much similar 🤩🤩🤩🤩

It's unbelievable 💖

Thanks for your appreciation Piyu. Credit of this post goes to you as well 😊

Yeah.. we have a lot in common (a part of our name too😉)

❤️

Originally posted by: sargamif

Amazing Supriya..This is phenomenal..Beyond words❤️

Read all the 3 parts in one go.Carry on the good work.Ab bas inka hi sahara hain.😆

Waiting for ur next update.

Thanks Sargam💖. Will update the 4th part tomorrow morning.

Weekends are too painful. 😖

It was just superb 😍😍loved your writing....

Waiting for your update ☺☺

Here I am back with the next sequence.

Happy reading 😊

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Part - 4 : Pain of Love

Purvi dint wish to return to haweli but then she had to, for the people whom she loved the most, who have trusted her and wiped her tears off when no one else did - her children. She took steps towards haweli. Her feet knew where to walk but her mind was lost. Indulged in a tug-of-war between her thoughts she didn't notice she was standing just outside the entrance to haweli.

Meanwhile Vir, who was still at the ghat, staring at the river, was reminiscing the time he had spent with Purvi. Maybe thinking of the spring would give him enough courage to stand against the cold wild winds.

"Manne pata hi naa chala bawri ki kab tu mhare lie ek majburi se badhkar mhari zarurat ban gyi. Aj jab tu mhare sath na hai to manne ehsaas ho raa se ki mai zinda to hun par jeeta sirf tere saath hun."

Inside the Haweli

Purvi wiped off her tears because she dint want her Genda and khargosh to see her like this. She called out "Gendaa... Khargoshhh..." And they came running on hearing her. Accept it or not, she was their mother in every way. They caressed her and this in turn made her forget all her miseries for a while. She felt light.

Manas - "Haathi, tm kaha thi itni derr se. Mai kab se tmhara intezar kar rha tha."

Juhi - "Haa btao naa. Apko pta hai hmne subah se khana bhi nhi khaya ☹️"

Purvi got worried. "Arree.. tm logo ne khana kyo nhi khaya ?"

Manas - "Kyoki hme tmhari bhut yad aa rhi thi" he hugged his mum.

These cuties meant the world to Purvi. She picked Manas in her arms and planted a kiss on his cheek "Tum log bas thodi der ruko hm abhi tmhare lie khana leke aate hai😊"

Later

It was dinner time and Mukhiya of the house hasn't returned. Everyone was seated on the dining table ---

MS - "ye Viren kaha reh gya? Ib tak aaya kyo na?

Prakashi - "Pta naa bhai ji. Phone bhi naa utha rha hai"

Who knew that Vir was caught up in the sweet memories of his bawri.

P - (concerned) ye Mukhi ji kya kar rhe hai itni derr se ghaat pe baith ke.

Just then Vir entered. His eyes were red and swollen, and he wore a dejected look. Purvi knew at once that he had been crying hard just as she did. Pained to see this she thought "hum apke ansoo pochna chahte the Mukhi ji, par apne to hme wo adhikar kabhi dia hi nhi". She feared that the tear she was trying to conceal might escape so she went away - without having dinner.

On seeing her go Vir lost his remaining appetite. He came back by dinner time only because he hoped she would serve him food as usual and he'll get to see her without tears at least for a while. He too went away - overhearing the continuous calls of MS and Maa.

He went to his room which was pitch dark, not even a flicker of light was present. Mama Sarkar came like saviour to a drowning Vir and knocked on the door.

Vir, a bit reluctantly opened the door and immediately turned back. It was too dark for MS to see his expressions but he knew Vir was in grave pain.

MS - "aj se pehle tujhe is haalat me tab dekha tha jab Sakshi is duniya se gyi thi. Par yun chup rehna samasya ka hal naa se Viren. Tanne baat krni hogi, manana hoga Purvi ne. Tanne bhot dil dukhaya hai uska, wakht to lagega na zakhm bharne me par jo tu aise himmat harega to tu aur tera pariwar fir bikhar jawege."

His words acted like antidote to Vir. He immediately hugged MS and cried his heart out. He narrated all his past misconceptions.

V - "MS ek baar Sakshi ko kho chuka hu, ab PURVI ne khona naa chahta. Ap thik keh rhe hai, mai himmat naa haruga, tu kitni bhi koshish kar le bawri tera dil jeet ke rahuga ib mai."

MS smiled - " To akhir tune use apni patni ke roop me sweekar kar hi lia. Mai bhot khush hun ye jaanke. Tu chinta na kar jyada din naaraj na reh pawegi wo thare se akhir wo......"

V - key MS ? Arre bolo na Purvi key? (He was thrilled to hear the complete sentence)

MS - wo bhi to tere ta pyaar kre hai Viren, kab tak gussa rawegi. Uski ankho me saaf dikhe hai yo. Tu use uska darja de, uska samman lauta use, vishwas dila ki tu fir kade uska sath na chodega; wo maan jawegi.

As Vir heard these magical words, a smile crept over his face and he hugged MS again - bhot bhot dhanyawad MS apne manne raah dikhai.

MS blessed him and was about to leave when he saw Vir switching on the light. He turned back to find Vir standing with his hands on waist, an eyebrow lifted and a smile of hope on his lips. They both rejoiced - PurVir ke beech ki durri jyada din ki naa hai !!!

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Purvi was with kids - trying to console them about the past incidents and washing away any repulsion they had for their Baba for mistreating her. After this, they started playing Ludo for a change of mood.

Vir came into kid's room after waiting for long for bawri to come in their room. He found bawri laughing and playing with the kids. He admired the beautiful view - his complete family in one frame. "Tum sab babber sher ke bina hi Khel rhe ho?" Vir said jokingly.

Juhi - nhi baba hm to apka hi wait kr rhe the.

Manas - haa baba aiye naa sath me khelte hai.

Pur and Vir recalled their promise of never letting the children being affected by any bitter situation between them. Thus, Purvi gave in. Vir came and sat very close to Purvi.

After days of darkness, the four played and laughed together. That was a holy scene to witness. Although there was some bitterness inside Purvi but the ambience in the room was too gayly to allow her even a fraction of it to ruin her mood.

Vir became too opportunistic - he dint miss any chance to touch Purvi for he knew how vulnerable it made her.

P (in mind) - Mukhi ji jaan bujh kar baar baar hme chhu rhe hai. Abhi btate hai inhe.

She pinched him secretly the next time Vir tried to reach out his hand to her waist. 😆

Vir - " oouuchhhh"

P - "kya hua apko ? Kahi sherni ka panja zor se to nhi laga na" she said with a teasing frown.

At this kids started laughing and Mukhi got hold of Manas and started tickling him - "mhare pe hanss rhe the tm log". Later Juhi too was under the clutches of babber sher. In an attempt to save her friends Purvi started tickling Vir. Much to everyone's surprise, Mukhi was too vulnerable to tickles. He started running here and there in the room to save himself from the team of 3.

Purvi had forgot all her sadness by this time and was enjoying in the moment. Vir was the one who enjoyed the most - seeing her laugh heartily after so long and their kids playing jovially. Vir held Purvi with both arms and made her stand in front of him as a shield against J n M. Purvi tried to move away but Vir was way too stronger than her. Vir swayed her in front of him so that J n M can't reach upto him.

Vir winked at Juhi and Manas (the naughties have always proved to be a blessing in bringing PurVir together). J n M suddenly began tickling Purvi which made her lose her balance and fall on Vir. Even Vir couldn't manage to stand and they both fell on ground - with Purvi on top. Vir couldn't help but stare at her like an insane adorer of her beauty. Purvi's attempt of getting free failed for Vir's grip on her hasn't loosened even a bit. The lioness in Purvi came at power and she roared "Mukhi ji jaane dijiye hme".

Kids clapped seeing this. Finally Vir set her free. Purvi stood up and stared pointedly at kids (bachho ki vjah se Mukhi ji ko mauka mil gya hmare paas aane ka, par inme in masumo ki kya galti).

The way her body pressed against his, made him restless. Vir craved for her more than ever. He wanted to hug her for longer, for ever, for a lifetime. But much to his luck, he couldn't at this moment bcz her queen was still mad at him.

V - "Saari raat kya yhi karte rawege sab? Sona naa hai tm sab ne? Chalo sab apne apne bistar pe" he ordered politely. Ahhh, finally bawri and I would be alone, he thought. 🤩

But his bawri was smarter. She couldn't let him win so easily. "My dear friend Genda and khargosh, kya hum tum logo ke sath so sakte hai?" She said in her cute animal like voice.

Juhi - "par kyo haathi? Tm to babber sher ke sath unke kamre me soti ho na?

P - "haa, par tmhare babber sher na raat ko bhot zor zor se kharrate lete hai to hume neend nhi aati hai."

Manas cane and hugged her "haa tum mere saath so jana😊".

"Yo key keh rhi hai bawri? Manne kab kharrate lie?" Vir thought. He noticed the evilish look of Purvi - she had successfully failed him.

"Achha to yo sab natak mere ta durr rehne ke lie kia hai tanne. Iska matlab to yo hai ki mere saath se tanne farak pade hai, waise hi jaise manne. Mai bhi kam ziddi na hu Bawri. Tujhe apna banaye bina mujhe bhi chain na awega" cherishing this thought he left the room. Although he had lost a chance but then a whole game was pending and no matter how hard it became, he was sure he'll be the ultimate winner 💖.

Purvi knew Vir was doing all this to get closer to her, she was relishing the thought that she does matters to him. She rejoiced the efforts Vir was making to woo her. "Nhi Mukhi ji, itni asaani se maafi nhi milegi apko. Apko hmara vishwas fir se jeetna hoga aur ye itna aasan nhi hoga."

They slept in different rooms but on the same side - the side of love. Both were ready to fight for their relation, their love and for themselves. This wind of distance was to enlarge the flame burning inside two hearts. Their love will win, as it is bound to❤️.

To be continued...

Wow!! Read part 3 n 4 together!!

The ghat scene was so good...amazing dialogues 👏

And the scene with Juhi Manas ticklish Vir🤣kaash we get to see this in the show

Superb updates, Supriya ❤️

Beautifully captured emotions 💖 Eagerly waiting for the continuation 😃

Please do keep English dialogues as well if possible 🙏