Pledge of love - PurVir SS part-7 on page 8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Zunari

Beautifully captured emotions 💖 Eagerly waiting for the continuation 😃

Please do keep English dialogues as well if possible 🙏

Thank you for the appreciation and suggestion too.💖 I'll try translating dialogues into English😊

Originally posted by: Manasi_16

Wow!! Read part 3 n 4 together!!

The ghat scene was so good...amazing dialogues 👏

And the scene with Juhi Manas ticklish Vir🤣kaash we get to see this in the show

Superb updates, Supriya ❤️

Thanksss💖

This week might bring some soft moments of PurVir - waiting to watch 🤩

Post on behalf of Supriya

Part - 5 : A Step Closer

Until now, Vir had never realised how accustomed he had become of seeing her sleeping close to him, listening to her TAU CHALISAA, and her non stop engaging chatters that their absence took his sleep miles away. "Tu mhara sukoon hai bawri, mhari zarurat hi nahi aadat bhi hai tu". Saying this he sat upright because his restlessness was growing beyond control. "Tere bina ek raat na beet rhi mhari, saari zindagi bitaane ka to mai soch bhi naa sakta".

He went to the cupboard where Purvi used to keep her clothes. Vir opened it and took a green coloured, embroidered duppatta of hers. He behaved like a teenager who had lost his sensibility in the dreary absence of his beloved. This piece of cloth had something unusual about it - this was the same duppatta she wore on her birthday. Vir held it tight in his hands and brought it near to his face. He could feel how many tears she might have shed wearing it. He smelled it, it still carried her scent with which he was too familiar. He went back to bed holding the dupatta in his hand and lied down. He held it near this chest as if it was her and reminiscing all their proximity he went to the lap of sleep.

Purvi performed no well in the attempt of trying to sleep. Vir wasn't out of her thoughts even for a second. "Kashh Mukhi ji, apne hm par thoda sa vishwas kia hota to aj humare bich itni dooriyan nhi hoti. Kashh apne hme apni patni sirf kaha nhi balki mana bhi hota" she cried. What else could she do? She was missing his warmth. Although they were never too close, but they have never been this apart. Soon sleep engulfed her teary, heavy eyes.

Morning

Purvi was willing to start her college again, maybe a change of environment might help her mood. She decided to get ready but then her clothes were in "Mukhi Ji's room". She went to the door unwillingly and knocked but found the door to be unlocked. She stepped in to find Vir still sleeping. "Sote hue kitne masoom lagte...." And suddenly reality striked her. She kept the thought aside and started moving towards her wardrobe when she noticed her dupatta. It was wrapped around Vir's hand and he was still holding it tightly near his chest. Purvi embraced the sight. What was he doing with her dupatta after all? Was he missing her? Did he wanted to be close to her or ......?? "Nahi Purvi ye kya soch rhi hai. Tu fir jhuthi umeed rakhegi aur Mukhi ji fir unhe tod dege. Apne kaam pe dhyan de." She shrugged off all the instigating thoughts and got ready for college.

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"Maa, aj se hum college dobara join kar rhe hai to ap please humare lautne tak bachho ka dhyan rakhna. Hum jaldi aa jayge."

P - "haa tu chinta mat kar aur mann laga ke padhna" she kissed Purvi's forehead and bid her goodbye.

Outside

"Chalo bachho jaldi se baitho warna tumhare sath sath hme bhi derr ho jaygi."

Vir - "Koi derr na hogi tanne....."

Purvi was shocked to hear him. She turned around to find Vir with.......

Vir - "Aj se tanne college roz mai choduga, wo bhi meri cycle se.... Chal aa ja." Vir said smiling. He was overjoyed at the thought of his bawri sitting behind him and giving him a back hug throughout the way.

Purvi walked to him "ek molkki ke lie ap itni takleef kyo utha rhe hai. Chale jayge hm jaise roz jate hai." She said scornfully.

Vir - "isme kaisi takleef? Patni hai tu meri aur teri dekhbhal karna farz hai mera....."

Purvi interrupted "....aur hum par vishwas karna?? Khair jaane dijiye. Hm bachhon ke sath chale jayge" saying this she headed towards the car and sat with the kids and left.

Vir was disheartened at this. For a moment he thought that she dint long for his company as much as he did but immediately shew away the thought "Teri nishtha aur samarpan pe koi shaq na hai manne. Mai janta hu tu bhi mere ta pyaar kare hai tabhi tujhe meri baat se itna dukh hua hai. Ib jo dukh maine dia hai to khushiyan bhi mai hi duga."

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In college

Purvi and Vir had only one subject in common - Literature. She had taken her usual seat in the class, unaware that Vir has also resumed to join classes. Soon Vir entered the class and sat beside Purvi. She was lost and staring the table blankly and hence dint notice Vir until he called "aise tukur tukur kyaa dekh rhi hai?". Purvi was surprised, why is he following her to every damn place? She was about to leave the seat but right then their teacher entered and with it her chances to move away ceased.

Vir - "ib to tanne yha mhare bagal me hi baithna howega. Baith ib warna daant khawegi." He said with a smirk of being victorious.

Purvi had no other choice, she gave in. She placed her hand inside the bag to fetch the book but...... "Hey bhagwan !! Jaldi jaldi me hm to book lana hi bhul gye. Ab hm kaise padhege😞" Purvi exclaimed.

Vir smirked. "Aee chakkarganni.. yha vha ghumti rave hai par kaam ki chij rakhna bhul jati hai. Chal ib mhare sath padh le" he offered.

Purvi denied "nhi hum apke sath nhi padhege😤😤😤"

Vir - "dekh, thara gussa apni jagah hai par apni padhai to kharab mat kar. Mhare sath padhna hai to padh varna class ke bahar khadi reh". He sidelonged at her, wearing a mischievous look on his face.

Purvi hesitantly shifted her chair towards him. They were sharing the table (which wasn't too spacious). Vir once again triumphed.

[Flashback]

Purvi was busy in packing tiffins for the kids when Vir took help of Juhi and Manas to find where Purvi has kept her bag for college. He then furtively took out the literature book from her back. After completing his task he stood with hands on waist and smiled "kam se kam ek kadam to paas awegi tu mhare".

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Vir had accomplished what he wanted. He kept on looking at her during the whole lecture. He got this opportunity after days, he dint want to miss even a single moment.

P - "Mukhi ji, ap padhai kar rhe hai ya hume dekh rhe hai" she enquired with frustration.

Vir - "Tanne dekh rha..... Mera matlab padhai hi kruga naa." He immediately looked away because of the embarrassment of being caught red handed🙄.

Purvi smiled a little upon hearing the initial words but her melting heart froze again on the thought - "Mukhi ji hume kabhi apni patni nhi manege".

She looked away, her face grieved.

Vir was hurt. He had sensed, that for a moment her heart had melted and then stoned again. By now he had understood one thing very well --- "there is only one way left to win yu and your trust back i.e.CONFESSION. maybe then you'll be able to believe me again and love me for who I am."

To be continued.....

Upcoming : the most anticipated part of the SS. Keep reading 😉😉

Read 4 and 5 in one go...this is so awesome...

Ohho what a write up😍😍😍

So lovely written, waiting for the update☺☺

Wow Supriya..An amazing piece of writing.👏

I loved this idea of both studying in the same class😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part😉.

Wonderful writing suppi diii! Beautiful!

When are we getting the next part?

Originally posted by: sargamif

Wow Supriya..An amazing piece of writing.👏

I loved this idea of both studying in the same class😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part😉.

Thanksss 💖💖

Next part would be out soon.. most probably by today 😉 keep reading

Originally posted by: Potterhead_05

Wonderful writing suppi diii! Beautiful!

When are we getting the next part?

Thank you..❤️

I'll update as soon as possible.

What's your name btw ?

Originally posted by: Sxshh

Thank you..❤️

I'll update as soon as possible.

What's your name btw ?

🤗

My name is Jiya! Official baby of the forum...😆